I Am a Sword Immortal in the Great Ming

There are too many contradictions in the first chapter. Either write a fiction and don't add any Ming Dynasty background. If you look at it with your brain, there are many details wrong. Don't say that it is different from cultivating immortals. The social structure of the world background is there, which is generally unchanged. There is also a county that averages more than 50 death sentences a year. Good guy, your county is really simple and simple. Even Gotham City has to bow down and the emperor has to pay attention.

I don't understand that when the protagonist's father dies, something evil immediately comes, and the villain can seek revenge from the protagonist after he is beheaded. This is a bit bloody.

Chapter 26: If someone scolds you, just kill them. And the reasons written later are too far-fetched. The person who was killed was neither a criminal nor a serious crime. It was not legal at all to kill him like this. Isn't it enough to kill a chicken to scare a monkey and put him in jail? Can't we give him some punishment? It feels like the protagonist killed people because of a court eagle dog, and is really narrow-minded.

If it really doesn't work, you can continue writing about The Dead Lord, that one is quite good.

Don't be an eunuch again, I've been short and weak since the end of Uncle Nine 😒

After seeing Forty-Seven, the three views are really incompatible. Let's not say that we need the Holy Mother to save us. At least we are always friendly with the protagonist on the road to the Lu family, but the protagonist ignores him. Didn't I talk about divine consciousness before, but now I'm blind. You were so excited to hear about monsters in the previous chapters, but now you just leave decisively? And forget it if you don't come back. Since you came back to kill monsters, you just happened to appear at the point when the Lu family was destroyed. It doesn't make sense whether it was intentional or not. Regardless of other things, can you live with such a conscience? Don't you feel guilty? That's why I can't read the author's portrait like this!

In the scene between Zhong Kui's sister and the protagonist, the author forced his wits down. I'm really speechless.

More than a thousand people have been killed in twenty years. There is a high probability that all the people in this county are evil. The executioner actually took the imperial examination, which is even more outrageous.

It is enough for a scholar to become an executioner, but who can be brought to death in a different place? The key point of becoming an executioner is to kill for the sake of killing. This mentality is no different from the devil.

I'm going, this king of eunuchs is running away, I can't afford to be hurt.