Qingyuan Fude Zhenxian

Writing about the village being attacked felt too deliberate. It felt like it was just to take in the little girl. It was such an old routine, and it was quite troublesome to take care of a little girl. It still felt like a person cultivating immortality and being free with an old cow.

So far, it's pretty good. I hope you won't travel too frequently in the future. If you write too frequently, the taste of the prehistoric world will change. For example, what do you need at this stage, and then travel back and forth? The main thing is to write about the prehistoric world, and also don't want a female protagonist, don't take people to travel through it, it's too out of the ordinary.

This is the author's voice

So far, I think it's okay overall, but it's a bit awkward. Since I'm writing about an old man, my behavior is not much different from other time-travel novels. I have to be involved in everything, and I have access to all the fairy swords and magic weapons. There is also a shortcoming in the fairy spirit 💀

After reading it in one go, I discussed several points with the author. The first is about accepting a little girl as a disciple. You haven't cultivated anything yourself. How dare you accept a disciple? And the plot is indeed a bit blunt. The second is that time travel is too early. Or it is too early to accept a disciple in time. Let's not talk about your own cultivation. You have nothing to teach yourself and you can't support your "powerful" character. The third is about writing a protagonist who starts at this age. Shouldn't he write about his indifference and open-mindedness towards life? Now he is no different from those young people. I still feel like I have to own everything. Even though I say that I have so many good things, is it because I haven't had anything for half my life, and my mentality suddenly becomes unbalanced? But it is still a good book. I will continue to follow it. The author must also keep writing. Come on! ! !

In fact, I don't think the protagonists in novels about cultivating immortals are as qualified as preachers in anything they do. Every world has a mission of cause and effect, upgrading the world or perfecting the world order. All living beings owe you, the world owes you, and all the heavens and worlds owe you. It's similar to Lao Tzu, whatever. All decent villains preach and preach, and how much you can learn depends on yourself. This is the real awesomeness. Those who are underworld cultivators or those who strive for hegemony and cultivating immortals. If anyone has no brains and wants to attack you, they don't have to do it themselves. The world's heaven will help you. The next thunderstorm will kill him instantly.

I have a time-travel quota in my hand, please leave the world you want to go to + golden finger in the comment area. I will randomly select a lucky person and send him to reincarnation with a dump truck. Anyway, it doesn't cost any money, just trust me 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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It looks pretty good, I hope you can write it well

I hope that this time Shushan World can learn from Taoist scriptures and swordsman skills. The sword box and other things are so handsome~

The little fish who grew up😍😍😍