If I Can't Become a Live-In Son-in-Law, I'll Just Have to Become a Saint Through My Fate

I have read more than 100 chapters. Generally speaking, it is a system selection reward article filled with words. The background is changed to an ancient fantasy. The plug-in is that this event gives you several choices. Different choices have different rewards. What is your destiny is to give you a buff. The unfolding frame is easy to understand, the house fight is too disgusting, the suppression of the protagonist is quite good, but the counterattack is indecisive. The title of son-in-law was chosen inexplicably, which can be called a deus ex machina. I thought that I would have a story with Nan Heyu or find a reasonable reason to break off the engagement. However, more than 100 chapters about Nan Heyu's family have no effect. If you don't write about this family, it will not affect the development of the story at all. He directly said that the auspicious beast of Xie Zhi showed up in a lowly family, and he was exempted from getting married... I am truly a Buddha. Then why don't you just write the protagonist as an orphan born a slave? It's all suppression anyway. It is recommended that the title be changed to "Traveling through the Great Fate and becoming a lowly status, and the starting reward is a golden destiny" "Zhouyi Selector: I can see the good and bad signs" And the content description, many times it says that the eyes are cold, the expression is cold... Do you know what makes me think? The favorite description of urban novels 10 years ago was that the heroine was beautiful and fragrant, and all the men she met had lewd eyes, and only the male protagonist had admiration in his eyes. You use a microscope to look at it, right? I have seen that there are still people who are trying to slander this kind of poisonous point... There are still many new book friends. 😁 It's still the same old-fashioned literary master, and he wants to talk about Meng Xianren, which is cool but pretends to be tactless. The description of the group portrait is to be stunned, thoughtful, etc. It feels like the protagonist's casual words or actions are pretentious, and the writing is very deliberate, with too many meaningless words. Summary: It is a systematic novel with an ancient style. The content is old-fashioned and the vocabulary is obscure, but the story is quite smooth. If you have read too much vernacular and want to change the style, you can try it... It is not a delicacy, but it can satisfy your hunger.

A temple is not like a temple, there are no immortals, no chivalrous people, and no pleasure in the world! I found a father for the protagonist, dug a hole and stopped writing. Everyone has to come out and show off! You have to show off before a fight. Fighting is not a one-on-one fight. It's a turn-based system. I'll take one shot and then put it away. It's your turn! In one chapter, I will write about the power of the sword and the power of the sword. You have an idea, how about a move?

I don't know why, but I've been following this book from the beginning to now. From the initial wow to now, it seems that I no longer have the expectations of the beginning. The author's writing has become increasingly mature and cliche, and the character of the protagonist has become old-fashioned and dull. Without the agility from the beginning, from the beginning, the protagonist's emotions, selfish desires, the humanity reflected in some small tricks, the little conspiracy and cunning without losing the kindness have all made people feel full of the psyche of a young man. On the contrary, now, he behaves like a pedantic old man who preaches to everyone and everything, and like a legal machine that follows the script, which makes people feel more and more dull. The suspense of the early days is gone in the article. Everything must be mentioned in the library. Mr. Fourth seems to be reading the autobiography of Mr. Fourth. If so, why bother calling him Lu Jing, why should he call his son-in-law and son-in-law? I think that when the author chose this name, it was full of teasing, laughter and curses. Although he regretted it in the middle, now it seems that it is the highlight of not writing the book. But now, all that is left in the article is scolding and heaviness, which is a bit regretful.

I just read Chapter 130 and I really can't help but talk about my feelings. First of all, the author's writing style and the excellence of this book are absolutely beyond doubt and are extremely admirable. But aside from the writing style and content, I think there are actually some problems. I don't know what everyone thinks. I personally feel that I often feel disconnected when watching it, and I feel like "Eh? Has this matter or character been explained before?" Many of the author's plots either have no foreshadowing, or have too little foreshadowing. For example, Firstly, the method of getting rid of a lowly status was basically not laid out in the previous article. This method suddenly appeared. At first glance, I thought it was very novel, but when I thought about it carefully, I felt that it was a method devised to break the situation. Secondly, regarding the relationship between the Crown Princess and the Lu family, the author actually explained before that the Crown Princess is related to the Lu family, but it was only hinted and never explicitly stated that the Crown Princess was the daughter of the Lu family. As a result, after the protagonist got rid of his humble status and said that he was the younger brother of the Crown Princess, I felt a strong sense of separation! I think there is absolutely no need to hide this kind of relationship. It would be nice to write it clearly. It's really painful to watch. Actually, there is a piece of foreshadowing in the plot that I like very much. It is where Duke Nan Guo explains why he wants to recruit the protagonist as his son-in-law. At first, everyone was puzzled. Later, when it was said that it was to avoid participating in party strife, the readers were instantly relieved. This paragraph makes people like to understand it because he really emphasized a lot about Duke Nan Guo's recruitment of a son-in-law, so everyone can think of it immediately when this matter is mentioned. Third, the existence of stone men. This stone man also appeared very suddenly. The explanation given was that the protagonist was Mr. Four. The previous description of the stone man did not exceed three sentences, so I was confused when I watched it. I think a good foreshadowing should be when the reader suddenly realizes after seeing it, and then thinks that the previous plot is for this. Rather than being confused after seeing it, wondering if I didn't look carefully before. Fourth, the appearance of Shantang. Shantang appeared after explaining the relationship between Mr. Xu and the Huai Gang. At that time, it was already explained that these children were brought here on purpose. The same is true for this paragraph. In fact, if the author told Xu about building a charity hall earlier, emphasized his merits, and explained how he did good deeds and accumulated good deeds, and then suddenly later sent someone to assassinate the protagonist and then explained that the children themselves were jointly captured by him and the Sophora Gang, then the impact would not be much greater than that of a charity hall made out of nothing. Moreover, the author has always emphasized that Xu Xiaoren did good deeds, but did not mention Shantang at all. I don't know what kind of good deeds he did. This part of the story feels like the author didn't think about how to deal with Xu Xiaoren at first, but then he suddenly thought of using Shantang as an excuse and wrote Shantang. I read very slowly, and I read it word for word, otherwise I wouldn't have read it for four or five days before I got to Chapter 130. But for me, reading it word for word felt awkward, and I don't know if other people can feel this sense of separation. The author's writing style is so good that it covers up many shortcomings. I didn't realize it at first. It was only after similar situations happened again and again that I felt that the book was really fragmented. I don't know if the author's outline is detailed enough, but if you really want to foreshadow the story, you shouldn't mention it and then bury the story, and integrate it into the normal story, so that the readers don't realize that you are foreshadowing, and when the story is revealed, everyone suddenly understands. Of course I don't think I'm better than the author, but among three people, I must be my teacher. As a reader, I also read the original version and found problems while reading. I hope the author can understand my feelings.

After reading 150+ chapters, I feel that the author is complaining for nothing, which is completely different. He is combining classical Chinese with modern Chinese. The author's literary skills are not weak. He is a liberal arts student. He wants to write something in-depth, but I don't think he can do it. One is lack of time and the other is lack of consideration. The male protagonist in his novel is perfect, too perfect. This is a shortcoming. Too perfect means there is no distinctiveness. In my opinion, this book is a good article, but the exciting points are rarely very small. You can say that everyone has different opinions, but after careful analysis, every time the exciting points and explosive points always burst out in a depressing environment, which made me feel unhappy. Furthermore, I personally feel that the description of people is one-sided: the male protagonist is perfect, the female protagonist is docile, and the villain is hateful. After reading so much, I think there are three problems: the male protagonist is too bland, the female protagonist is too boring (I don't even know who the female protagonist is), and the story is too depressing. This book is not friendly to novices, but it is good food for old bookworms with different requirements. (I don't mean any harm personally, on the contrary, I am quite optimistic about this book.) In view of the bad ending of the author's last book, I have reservations about the ending, but it is good to learn some sentences while reading.

Fully booked, but I'm ready to give up. More than 200 chapters and a million words. The previous book was very good, why did this one become like this? There was such a big chapter in the past about leaving the Lu family and the Nan family, and the last step was to get rid of the lowly status, and directly summon the divine beast without any foreshadowing? ? ? Well, the co-author changed Nan Xuehu's personality. In fact, the absence of the Nangong family will not affect the plot? ? Let's talk about the part about killing a child. Well, I don't remember that the protagonist has the ability to read minds and fortunes. He can see through the second emotion or even the third emotion hidden under the eyes of a person who has a high level of disguise that even a child who has been a child for more than ten years can see through. Later on, if you don't fight, you won't break through. How about breaking through several levels in one big fight? Over and over again, I begged you not to wash it, because I wanted to read cool articles and turn left when I went out. Do you dare to say that this is not a good book? Wouldn't it be a good article if it was just packed with words? The author has typical literary talent, but not enough writing skills!              ，

I have no desire to read any more...

2022.12.28. Recently, I have become a bit tired. The foreshadowing is not this way. The foreshadowing must be combined with the advancement of the plot to be a complete chapter. Recently, if these rhetorical piles are used to make up the editor's word count task, I think I still don't support it. After all, the author does not rely on novels to make a living, and readers are not the only ones to read. Personal attacks are not recommended. I just leave a message to remind new entrants. Instead of spending money to read a lot of foreshadowing but no actual plot advancement, it's like writing a year-end report and starting to frantically add background to the PPT when you can't get the data. Everyone can see it.

White, red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple and gold 1. Seek good luck and avoid evil (blazing gold) 2. Shenyan (red) - Shenwu (orange) 3. Cave demon (orange) 4. Beautiful man (orange) 5. Divine jade is bone (yellow) 6 . The common man's wrath (yellow) - the gentleman's wrath (green) 7. The dragon-slaying warrior (green) 8. The spiritual wizard (yellow) - the martial genius (green) 9. The light of the fighting star (yellow) - the fate of the fighting star official (green) 10. No distractions (orange) Keep the heart (red) - righteousness like a rainbow (green) 11. Immortal book (orange) Scholar (orange) - Immortal Confucian student (yellow) - Immortal Confucian scholar (?) Diligence and hard work (white-red) - Mindless (orange) [Fusion] 1. The Great Sage Divine Map of the Ming Dynasty Wang Yantian (blue chance) 2. Understand the death of Wu Bei (white chance) 3. Thorny Rose Immortal Wuye Mountain Rebuke Technique (orange chance) 4. Lushan Temple God Jade (wonderful object) 5. (Red chance) two jade stones that may be the princess 6. Peach Blossom Brahma Stone (orange chance) 7. The Great Animal's Nine Spirits [Fusion] 8. Lucky Talisman (wonderful object) 9. (Orange Opportunity) 10. Great rise in the energy of the Sixth Five-Year Plan 11. The energy of Ojing Sixty-four [Fusion] 12. (Yellow Chance) 13. Yunkong Pattern (wonderful object)

At first I was attracted by the good writing and clear narrative, but after reading more than 200 chapters, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. He just keeps cheating and being reckless. He is too naive, too mentally retarded, and too childish. The effect after the end of the game is not worth Mr. Guanqi's commitment and effort as the protagonist.

It's too drawn out and the words are too gorgeous. It feels like it's just gorgeous for the sake of being gorgeous.

I rewarded 100 points just to complain about the author I read Chapter 25. Although the plot is old-fashioned, the configuration of the golden finger still makes this book readable. The one thing I can't stand is that the author's writing style is too literary! ! Author, what you are writing is a web article! Internet literature! This is not serious literature! You write in such a literary style, and your writing style is not very good. Your writing is neither foreign nor earthy, and it makes me so embarrassed that I feel sick! Either you respect online writing and write down-to-earth, so that readers can read it and it will be easier for you to write; or you have very good writing skills, such as the book "The Rebellious Demon King". The author is also young, but his writing style is smooth and his writing style is really good. Studying serious literature is so profound, but you haven't learned it; studying old-time literature is so sophisticated, but you haven't learned it either; when you are writing online articles, you have abandoned the popular and natural style of online articles. Tell readers, what do you want to do? ? ?

As can be seen from the title of this book, the author probably just wanted to write an enjoyable article to satisfy everyone and himself. So from the perspective of enjoyable articles, I think this book is definitely qualified, and you can make money after reading it. The biggest advantage of the book is that the author has outstanding literary talent. Of course, many friends in the comment area said that the book is full of rhetoric and literary youth. I personally disagree. After all, many people have also commented on Yu Guangzhong's "Cultural Journey". I personally think that the author has a deep cultural background and has the shadow of a big boss (of course, the author needs to continue to work hard), so it is still very comfortable to watch in the early stage. Although the plot is not too innovative, the characters are quite logical, and the author also tried his best to write the characteristics of each character, so the overall flow is very smooth. When I first read it, I couldn't wait to finish it in one sitting. The shortcomings are actually very big and fatal. The main reason is that the setting of the plot characters is not very innovative. The plug-ins are actually small systems in a shell, and the author may be a little influenced by other big guys. This book can also see the shadow of many works, the most obvious one is Banana's "The Son-in-law", and you can also see the strong traditional Jianghu court fantasy such as "Sword Bone" and "Jiang Ye". As a result, the plot of this book is becoming more and more boring to many old bookworms. Although the author's literary talent is good, his writing power is average. There may be insufficient foreshadowing in Xu Baiyan's section (or maybe I have read too much of this routine). I have no interest in reading it at all, and this is only more than a hundred chapters. So it's a bit disappointing. Of course, there are many friends in the comment area who said that the plot was not interesting, that it was too awkward to watch, and that they couldn't watch it at all. In fact, you don't need to comment. After all, you can't even look at it, so you just come to break the excrement. Isn't it too deliberate? At least the first chapter is free, so new readers can experience it on their own and don't be biased by their subjective opinions. ps: Readers who haven't read too many fantasy stories should actually be able to read it and feel quite comfortable watching it!

Does anyone still remember that I have a fairy tale book?

Some people always control their own destiny and do not leave it to others, even for an era! Lu Jing, Mr. Fourth, and Master are all such people. They are all idealists. The road they choose is tortuous and full of thorns. The right path in the world is subject to vicissitudes of life. Perhaps the tortuous road is the real road. Whether it is reform, revolution, or changing the world, it requires the blood of many people. Brave people, even if they have tears in their hearts and are covered with scars, must seek change under the wounds. The top of the world is extremely prosperous, but behind it are those at the bottom who cannot even provide food and clothing. Xu Baiyan is indeed the most evil person in the world. The deeper meaning behind Shantang is that seeing the misfortune of others will reduce one's own sense of misfortune. He uses the charity hall as a tool to gain a good reputation and meet those children to reduce his own unhappiness and satisfy his morbid needs. The more you understand the darkness, the more you yearn for the light. If there is no bright future, then keep hope in your heart and seek a clear conscience.

The current progress is 113 chapters. The writing is not childish, but the wording is average and there are many coined words. If you can tolerate this shortcoming, you can enter the trap.

Now that I have read this book, the overall feeling is silky and smooth, and the wording is tactful, but it is too leaning towards the softness. The young man is angry at an injustice and draws his sword. The emotional descriptions on the side are too much and too delicate, a bit more soft and soft, and lack the sharpness that it should have. The wording is also too tactful and delicate. The wording in Dream of Red Mansions and some TV series often appears, which often makes me feel that I am reading a romance novel. Many scenes are too soft in terms of wording and can not make people excited.

If you haven't looked at the front, who the hell will look at the back?

I just started watching it yesterday and have almost finished it. Let me share your thoughts. Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The writing style is very delicate and the details are well drawn. Basically, you can see the words as you see the scenery. 2. The characters have distinct personalities, and the joy and hatred are all there. 3. The subject matter is relatively new. 4. There are obvious cool points in the plot setting. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. The pit is too shallow, and you can see it all at a glance. A 15-year-old online bookworm said it is not enough. 2. The protagonist is overly idealized. It would be okay if the author could justify it, but obviously the author has not yet achieved that level of writing power. 3. Some debates are lengthy and boring to watch. 4. There are too few characters in the destiny system. Speaking of personal things, I thought it was a funny farming story at first, but after reading it, I felt that what the author wanted to write seemed to be a kind of universal salvation story. Overall, it is a good book. Although there are many shortcomings, the flaws are not concealed. I only hope that the protagonist can be portrayed more realistically. As a human being, you must be proud of the spring breeze, but also have to be disappointed. The exhaustion of strategies is not always more eye-catching than adapting to circumstances. The world's blessings belong to the virtuous, but they may not all fall on the protagonist. Although the pursuit of truth must be fierce, is it not another kind of paranoia to ignore the advice of friends, relatives and elders around you?

The front is okay, but the back is ugly.

Very good, this book sent

Read, Chapter 127, looks very awkward.

How should I put it? The author's writing is very good, but according to the author's writing method, you have to update it more than once a day to make it look good. If you update it once a day, it feels like there are a lot of unnecessary practice writing methods.

It's pretty good, support it.

I have been pursuing books for 15 years, and this is the only book I have spent money to read. Not enough

Just short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short, short.

I feel that there has always been a strange phenomenon in the Qidian comment area, especially in some new books that are not very famous. I think the comments should be based on the content of the book, such as whether you like or dislike a certain character, how you feel about certain behaviors and developments, etc. If you don't like it overall, you can quit. If you don't like it individually, you can complain about the content based on the setting and background. However, there are many readers who probably read a lot of online articles and have a novel routine that they like. They especially like to jump out of the content and want to take the pen from the author's hand and teach the author how to write. Those who have ideas and literary talents can just communicate with each other, but in fact many such readers are just copying the narrow template of cool writing that they themselves have swallowed wholeheartedly. The protagonist's situation is slightly embarrassing in the normal ups and downs of the plot, and some people are shouting that they are unhappy, and they should jump up and give them a big mouth, anyway, there are cheats; the author writes more scenery, environment and atmosphere to set off the character creation, just say that the author is lazy and drags the pacing, saying that these can be omitted and the plot should be pushed forward; the author has given more female characters After a little ink was used to promote the development of the plot, some people began to misogyny, saying that they hoped that the protagonist would not have anything to do with female characters in the future, and would directly kill any women who interfered with the plot. The author wanted to add some complexity and authenticity to the characters, but some people questioned this as whitewashing. Halfway through the plot, some people pointed out that it should end quickly so that the protagonist can achieve his magic, and come back to pretend to be cool. Wait, wait. There is no right or wrong in what they say. It all depends on the author's skill. The author obviously has good writing skills and can write very wonderfully even with twists and turns. However, some comments still only have climaxes and climaxes in their minds, and they rush the author to rush forward. They can't wait to write dozens of chapters a day to show off. In places like Tieba and Zhihu, I always see book friends complaining about the prevalence of low-quality and cool white writing nowadays, and that it is becoming increasingly difficult to find high-quality products with a certain level of quality. However, when I think of those narrow-minded comments that make people have brain hemorrhages, it seems to be excusable. Although online texts require readers to pay for them, so they must be satisfied, but different authors have different ideas and writing methods. Can we be more diversified and tolerant of excellent content? Blindly following what you think is a cookie-cutter cool article template is tantamount to killing the goose that takes the egg. In the end, it is the readership that will be lost. Originally, I read books as a Buddhist, and I ignored those comments, but when I think about the author's writing, I also need feedback. If a satisfied person like me reads the book silently, and those simple and crude comments are hanging in front of the author's eyes all day long, then the author's writing direction and writing state will be difficult not to be affected. However, the replies to the comments one by one will particularly affect the immersive reading experience, so I might as well express my opinions in the book circle.

I've caught up to the latest chapter, it's one of my favorites I've read recently. How can I put it this way, as a social animal, it is very resonant to see the protagonist's growth in adversity. Regardless of whether it is the Lu family or the Nan family, it is currently a mountain that the protagonist cannot contend with. Some say the protagonist is sanctimonious. But if he gets angry in front of the old lady, he might not be able to leave this hall. Although Golden Finger is against the sky, it still requires the protagonist to operate carefully, and the rewards given are also coincidences of fate and are not unexpected. I hope that the subsequent combat power system will not collapse, just smash the data. Finally, there is the emotional line. Really, just throw away that Ponan family baby kiss. Qingyue is so suitable. Even if she ends up being an ordinary person, I don't care at all. The fight depends on the male protagonist, Qing Yue only needs to come back after the fight and make a pot of tea.

About the division of realms Martial arts: 1. Bone casting, 2. Qi and blood, 3. Furnace, 4. Snow mountain, 5. Dayang, 6. Innate 7. Divine phase (first phase to ninth phase) 8. Tianfu 9. Yuanshen: 1. Induction, 2. Out of body, 3. Floating, 4. Sunshine, 5. Transformation of truth (spiritual thoughts, true palace, manifesting the spirit) 6. Divine fire (1-3 levels) Void Realm 4-6th Level Blazing Realm 7-9th Level Extreme Realm 9 coincides with 1 perfect) 7. Shining Star 8. Pure Yang 9. I hope the boss will add more!

Why do I read it with gusto, while others point at it, inexplicably and endlessly, teaching the author how to write a book, but the author is pushed by you, and the more he writes, the more he looks different. It is natural that an author needs fans, and it is too much to hold the author hostage on how to write a book... I came to see the author write the book in his mind, not to see the book in other people's minds. I am really convinced.