From Martial Arts School Disciple to Great Qian Martial Sage

Here's a suggestion: if the author doesn't plan to accept other women, it's better not to describe them too much.

Two votes, I want to see more female protagonists, don't flirt with them and refuse to accept them

The writing is good, really good. The relationship between the protagonist and the senior sister is very good, and the process of the protagonist's rise is also very appropriate. In fact, no matter what kind of writing has feeling, it is a good book, and this one has feeling.

The biggest feature of this book is that it is non-toxic and smooth. I hope there are more fighting scenes.

The heroine is so well written, I'm afraid the author will take a stab at her. . . If you don't use the knife, this book is really a masterpiece. As for whether to have a harem or not, in my opinion, it is about whether the protagonist should be an emperor or not. Being an emperor is not a big problem. If not, try not to have too many female protagonists. Two or three will be enough, otherwise it will be boring. The quality of the book will also decline. For now, the emotional lines of Zhao and Wei are acceptable.

It's very heartwarming, but the plot is not very continuous! The protagonist is not a "Madonna", and the heroine (female character) is not brainless! The three-dimensional view is good, and it is not overly written with some embarrassing concepts and plots that cannot be controlled. In other aspects, the plot of Wei Ning, the protagonist is a bit "taking advantage of others". Although there are some supplements, the plot is not particularly perfect in this aspect (the latest plot has changed). And if there are not multiple female protagonists (not female protagonists), the protagonist and the plot in the early stage will become a poisonous point! It is rare, no, it is extremely rare to see such a female character with extremely upright views, who is not brainless or naive (silly and sweet)! I hope there will be a character card later!

My eldest nephew, your quantity is a bit low. Uncle Li is very unhappy.

It is a very classic fantasy novel. It crashes the system, upgrades and fights monsters, and finally uses an alien demon as the BOSS. Personally, there is nothing poisonous about it. It is a relatively bland type. There is no Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi, and there is no Dragon King's son-in-law. Reading the whole book, it feels like it comes naturally. Overall, it's okay as a refreshing article.

I came across it a long time ago, but I never clicked on it. Recently, I was short of books and read it. It's really good. The writing is online, the plot is reasonable, and the most important thing is that there are no obvious poisonous points. This point alone is much better than 99% of the books in the starting point. Let's talk about the advantages. The protagonist is kind to the people at the bottom, but it does not prevent her from being decisive in killing. The senior sister is also well portrayed. I haven't seen such a gentle and virtuous heroine in a long time. She will not steal the limelight from the protagonist. There are also typos. At least the author has corrected most of the ones that were pointed out. In this regard, he can be said to be a conscientious author. Also, Goldfinger is a simulator. I thought it would be very cliché at first, but it is not. The protagonist uses the simulator around the target instead of passively simulating being killed. Moreover, the protagonist also uses his brain and constantly optimizes the use. The descriptions in the back are becoming shorter and more concise, without cramming the word count. It is really praised. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the shortcomings. One is the description of the control of the court, as well as the system, some situations of families, gangs and governance in the city. It is a bit immature, but since it is a small border town, this book is not written about this, so it is harmless. Secondly, I don't quite understand why the protagonist never told the Shen family about the situation. He could have told the situation anonymously in advance. This was not handled well.

This type of protagonist and heroine are quite good 🙂