This Novel Is Very Healthy

I was originally very interested in this setting, and I also thought the character of the protagonist was good. But the author is so good at it. Many chapters are just porters, retelling the plots or historical events of the famous novel, and then adding a bunch of his own opinions to occupy the main line of development. It is almost the author's own collection of historical reviews of the famous novel. Does this treat the readers as readers in the novel written by the author himself? Does it need to introduce in such detail a bunch of things that everyone is familiar with and even has some own opinions? I just skipped it, only to find that there isn't much in the main plot... In addition, the author also keeps using the old trick of adding a harem, which really affects the mood. It was outrageous enough to get close to Cai Wenji, but then I reluctantly accepted it to get close to Wang Run. Now it seems that Jin Ling is added, it is too unnatural, and it looks really awkward. I wonder if these problems will be corrected in the future...

I listened to the book recommendations on Douishou, but when I saw the free end, I felt that it was not worth my money. There was too much watery content, but the reduced content I listened to on Douishou made me very irritated. The previous article was written based on the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, so a large section of the content is about the content of the book, and a small section is about the main line of the story. However, the author will also jump out of the story itself and connect with real life to carry out a kind of preaching-like expansion. It is okay to be less, but it does pop up from time to time. Moreover, the part about Cai Wenji that is about to be released is really disgusting, and I don't even want to watch it. The protagonist Liu Xu has always been in a good mood. Even after being hit, he is still in a very good state. However, he is just a copycat, and he does not seem to fit the personality of a doctor of history. There are also a lot of mistakes. Sometimes people get confused, and sometimes people suddenly change their profession.

This is truly the most thoughtful novel I have ever seen! ! ! I am a very mean reader. To put it bluntly, I read novels with my brain in mind. For example, the system novels, time travel novels, fanfics, historical novels, etc. That I have read all have very big logical problems, which makes me uncomfortable when I read them. For example, the adventures and super props in the novels about cultivating immortals. Why don't people who are better than the protagonists take away or destroy these things: the awesome stories of building cannons and gunpowder in historical novels, is it really true for ordinary people to travel back in time? Can it be done? Where do the rewards received in system stories come from? Will the country not control them? Why is there only one person who travels through time travel stories... And the minefield I hate the most is the modification and plundering of touch memories. As long as this thing appears, I really don't know how to realize this kind of thing, unless the story is set in a world where magic is rampant. Even if magic is rampant, I still feel that it is not easy to write such things. It is really insulting to people's IQ! Until I read this novel, there was almost no nonsense in the whole article. Although there is no very cool point, I can really feel that the author is really writing the novel with heart, and the logic of the story is currently running without any problems. I came here from Douyin and read the first ten chapters. , I haven't missed any content in 7 days and I have read it word by word and have caught up to the latest chapter. I was shocked once around chapter 570, when the "predator" appeared, but the AI's words touched my minefield again. I really almost gave up, until it reversed again later, I really cried to death! There are also some commenters who always say that the author plagiarizes his work, saying that he can't even write trashy novels and cool novels. I can only say I'm sorry, but you don't understand the joy of reading novels with your brain. I would like to analyze the writing ideas of this novel without permission: 1. Fan fiction attracts people with the same interest and writes down their own understanding and opinions of the original text in the article (secondary line) 2. The adventures of the useless ordinary protagonist in the "different world" and the lifestyle of ordinary people (main line) 3. From time to time, there are praises and criticisms for the current garbage novels, one routine is changed, another name is changed, and the big one is changed. There are more and more imitators of Lu Wu (complaining) I myself am very interested in history (I have read the Three Kingdoms novel twice and the TV series about 100 times), and I also like to discuss with others my views on some characters and events. So when I read this article, I didn't feel that I was doing "Wen Chao Gong" just for the sake of word count, because when a certain sentence comes out, I will really be emotionally resonated by the ancient people's writing and ink. Finally, I hope the author really doesn't touch the field of memory, please 😭

It's hard to evaluate. I followed dy's tweets. At first I felt that this world view was very innovative and novel, and a few cool points were really enjoyable. However, the content always would rather abandon the main plot and write some that no one wants to read. It's just a waste of words, a waste of money, and a lot of personal opinions and all the time. They are all supplementing the world view, explaining vocabulary, and even contradicting each other. They often spend a lot of pen and ink describing some irrelevant content, such as spending two pages explaining words, etc. To be honest, the science fiction compositions I wrote in elementary school are basically the same as this novel. They are both poor writing, poor layout, indifferent priorities, serious deviations from the topic, and inappropriate details.

Now that I have read Chapter 1887, I would like to give some thoughts to those who are still hesitating whether to read this book or not. This book seems to me to be a very strange one. Even if it is said to be a cool novel, it is not that cool. There are very few plots that are pretentious and slap in the face. Basically, there is no foreshadowing to directly jump to the realm, and then jump to a higher level of combat power, etc. There are no other genres that can be used to describe this novel. Overall, it is a work that the author is completely self-indulgent about. The world view and combat power are all broken, and there are also a lot of poisonous points. There are too many to list them all. I will pick a few that impressed me the most (not necessarily the most poisonous, just what I remember). (I don't remember the part that was more uncomfortable at the time). First of all, the first thing in order that I think is particularly poisonous is the inclusion of historical figures like Cai Wenji in the harem (everyone understands it). Regarding the harem, I can't see any effect at all. Every time I appear, it is basically some pornographic stuff. The second poisonous point is that the author is purely self-motivated and writes whatever comes to mind. Some settings are completely inconsistent with what was written earlier. The character of the protagonist also changes frequently, and the settings are often forced. The third point is that the author is purely self-motivated. He often spends dozens of chapters writing things that have nothing to do with the main plot. After skipping dozens of chapters, he can continue to the main plot. In fact, I have tolerated all these. After all, the popularization of the Internet and the lowering of barriers to entry for novels have resulted in the quality of most of the works on the market being worrying, so I did not delve into these problems. The poisonous points are that I am forced to read without thinking, and it is just a waste of time. The reason why I am posting this comment now is because in the chapters I just read, the protagonist's first child was born (in the setting of the work, the protagonist's family is a single generation, basically there is only one son in each generation, and a few who have two or three children also have only one son, and the others are all girls. Son), next is the key point I want to express: The protagonist's first child was with a woman who had no emotional description at all (the woman was only briefly introduced in the plot. The male protagonist went to other worlds to seize other people's bodies, and then found a refugee in his family. , The only description of her in the plot is that she looks exactly like Diao Chan), so she gave birth to the protagonist's only son with a girl whose description was only a few lines. This poisonous point is not as big as other poisonous points. What I am angry about is actually in the later chapter, which is about the protagonist's original self and his clone. The discussion about whether this child is his biological flesh and blood (because it is a body snatching, the body does not belong to the protagonist), made me angry, and it is also the reason why I wrote this long paragraph. The s-nosed author said in the author's remarks at the end of the chapter, "This is his bad taste, hehe.",,,,, What can I ask? ? ? ? ? Do you think it's funny? The biggest problem with this book is that the author does not regard the readers as human beings at all. He often blames the author. The most classic one is "I update as a reward to the readers." . . . . . . Unknowingly, I have written more than 900 words. This paragraph was written when I was relatively angry. There is a big problem with the word order. Many of the poisonous points that I had suppressed and accumulated in the past were directly detonated, which made me want to write a paragraph to vent. Generally speaking, this book has many poisonous points, which are found in every chapter. It is hard to imagine that this author has several books. It is not recommended to read it. If you must read it, please completely abandon your mind.

This book sees the biggest problem of the current period in one word: going off topic. It was originally estimated that many readers were attracted by the setting of the Three Kingdoms + novel world, but now the plot is completely irrelevant. The content of the novel world is written too fast, and there is obviously a lot to expand on.

After more than 140 chapters, I feel like Aoligei, feeling worse than eating a fly.

People who say there is no discomfort in this plot mostly argue with arguments such as wives and harems, but that is not what we care about at all! If this book is a story about traveling through the Three Kingdoms, as a historical novel, the protagonist can dominate the contemporary era with his talent, strategy, bravery, and general momentum. In this process, there is nothing wrong with accepting historical figures of the time as family members, or even opening a harem. But the way this book is written, it is no wonder that it will cause considerable controversy. Or say "poison". Cai Wenji (date of birth and death unknown), named Yan, courtesy name Wenji (some say Zhaoji). She was a female writer in the late Eastern Han Dynasty and the daughter of the writer Cai Yong. Erudite and talented, he is good at literature, music and calligraphy. She first married Wei Zhongdao and returned home after her husband died. At the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty, there was great chaos in the Central Plains. The Southern Xiongnu who originally surrendered to the Han Dynasty took the opportunity to rebel. Cai Wenji was captured by the Xiongnu King Zuoxian and gave birth to two children. After Cao Cao unified the north, he spent a lot of money to redeem her and marry her to Dong Si. Later, when Cao Cao was about to kill his husband Dong Si, he defended and saved her husband. Cai Wenji's life was tragic and miserable. In history, this is also a scar for the Chinese nation. If you can save her before these sufferings happen, no matter how you possess her, then that's it. However, this is not the setting of this book. When the author accepted Cai Wenji, a "complete historical figure". Have you ever thought about such a complete historical figure. It already has its complete historical status and the evaluation of future generations. Talented woman, Feng Lie, the death of her husband, "Poetry of Grief and Anger"... All these are consistent with the settings in the book. It's all so conflicting. When the character learns about his own life and the development of the future story in the book. No matter beautiful or miserable, no matter what the evaluation of his life, this life has passed. They are no longer an individual, but a history, a symbol, and a three-dimensional expression of each spirit. This is where the discomfort lies. We disdain to humiliate a lonely old woman with such integrity, and we disdain to see such a character climb into the bed of the protagonist in a pretentious manner. Or some people say that the protagonist "creates" the book in the book and is able to evolve various characters in the book, and is the master of the characters. Here I would like to ask: Is the author writing this book for the NPCs in the text or for us in China? Most of the people in the article don't know what's going on. Don't we know that The Romance of the Three Kingdoms was plagiarized? Without the father-son relationship between creation and being created, the relationship between the protagonist and the created character is nothing more than the efforts of the Celestial Dragons and their shackled bombs! The setting is set by the author himself. The moment the setting is set, the story coerces the author into the game. Even the explanation given by the author "I don't want to stay in the endless darkness" is completely unreasonable in the logic of the entire book. To sum up, this plot is not handled properly by the historical emotions of readers in the cultural circle of the Chinese nation. The logic in its own setting is incomplete. This article should be considered a "poisonous point".

Damn it, I barely wrote about the Romance of the Three Kingdoms at the beginning. I didn't write much about the flooding of the seven armies and the shocking China. Later, I just mentioned Zhuge Liang's death, Jiang Wei's plan to harm the three sages, Liu Zhan's preferring death rather than surrender, etc. I didn't write about it. It's really unexpected that so many exciting plots were skipped later. I even wonder if you haven't read it at all. Also, the portrayal of your protagonist is also strange, with ever-changing personalities and IQs, and the writing of the characters that mirror the Three Kingdoms is really boring, and I basically had to skip reading it.

Coming from Douyin, I was originally very interested, but I didn't read much before I noticed the word "kuku". There is not much specific content in a battle, and most of it is written by the two protagonists. It is probably because of the word "water" that the rich second generation has a whole chatty personality. The protagonist has almost no basic common sense, and then comes another wave of water characters. Will there be a harem later? I thought you were really good at writing this, not cliche, but you ended up writing this thing while following other people's cliché plots The protagonist has no bright spots to begin with, and he also looks like a dead nerd (here I mean unmotivated, has no advantages, and is always in heat like Teddy). When he was imagining his own combat power, he suddenly said "Xiao Qiao, are they wearing swimsuits?" Don't lower the quality of the book too much It was actually quite good. The character is an ordinary person, greedy for life, afraid of death, and greedy. More importantly, is he horny? How about playing?

Before the Three Kingdoms, the plot routines were rigorous and the plot was compact and reasonable. It can be seen that the author has a wide range of interests, but after the Three Kingdoms, the plot began to show signs of being cliched and forced, but there were not many outstanding points. The first flashpoint occurred when she was chatting with Cai Wenji in the city. This was the first harem. After the appearance of the Rose World, the plot began to stretch. Not only was it a patriotic plot that deceived feelings, but also the forcibly set protagonist of Destiny Child, the halo Goldfinger, as well as the second harem Princess Nine Heavens, the third harem Wang Ran, etc. To be honest, I liked this book very much, but it was really difficult to read in the middle and later stages, especially the protagonist who likes to pretend to be aloof. However, this situation is understandable. After the Romance of the Three Kingdoms and the Controversy between Chu and Han were updated, the author could no longer rely solely on rigorous history as the backbone to write the plot. Therefore, he was strict in the early stage and vulgar in the later stage. This just proves that the author's writing skills are average.

Can you really stop making vulgar content? Good writing is ruined. What the hell? Can you please stop making excuses? There is no respect at all. While making vulgar content, you also emphasize that the protagonist is not such a person. Who can such content please? If you want to read this kind of content, just read it. If the content is good, don't deliberately buy meat. Can you accept it?

Why do I feel that it opens high and goes low The reason I feel is very simple, because there is only one Romance of the Three Kingdoms, and there is only one Luo Guanzhong.

It's really rubbish. The main character is a joke. If you rewrite the Three Kingdoms randomly, it's bad. If you don't know how to write, just copy the text of the Three Kingdoms and then rewrite it randomly. It's really a bad novel.

Let me talk about the conclusion first The creativity is unique, but it is also unique in creativity. The promotion is not small, but it is not worthy of the quality of the promotion It is worth watching if it is free, but paying is a bit deceiving consumers Tell me more carefully First of all, the creativity is very good, with the author as the core, it depicts a world where novels are supreme and it is difficult to survive. A sentence from the novel can sum up the world very well: "If there were no reflections (equivalent to monsters), I would have rebelled long ago, but if there were, I could only be a bastard reading the novel, contributing my strength and drifting with the crowd." But this is basically all the content that can support you to continue reading. This book has quite a few problems. The first and most talked about thing: water, and it is hopeless water. Basically, it is a cycle between reading comments, fighting a chapter, writing novels, accidents, and breakthroughs. This structure itself is no problem because I have also written novels. It is basically impossible for me to live without water at all. It is not a matter of laziness. Writing novels, especially realistic things, is a very tiring process, and many times it is not something you can write if you want to. If you write hard, there is a high probability that it will be boring. But the reason why this is not overdone is just like the structure mentioned above. The author will intersperse reading comments in each link and there is basically no transition. The transition in this book is that the previous person just finished speaking and immediately jumps to the next perspective. Although it does not affect the viewing, the viewing experience is not very good. Second, it has something to do with water, that is, basically everything that makes people think good, such as reviews, analysis, protagonist analysis, etc. Are basically copied, some are copied from book reviews, and some are CCTV sentences. What's ridiculous is that the author himself is always using the protagonist's mouth to look down on the protagonists in other novels who copied the book and refused to acknowledge it. Third, the author does not understand the famous works he copied. The Three Kingdoms directly describes Sun Quan in an unsightly way. Not to mention that the historical Sun Quan is a typical country-defending king who is not suitable for troubled times. In terms of the novel, Sun Quan is also a very accomplished monarch in the way of governing people. If it is really as bad as in the novel, How can it be possible to support one of the Three Kingdoms if it is so unsightly? The Chu-Han War for Hegemony directly described Liu Bang as a waste. All the credit of the Han Dynasty was given to capable ministers such as Han Xin, but whether a waste can make those capable ministers follow him is worthy of quotation marks, needless to say anything else. Fourthly, it is also a matter of judgment and wisdom. The writing style is not very good, and the various transitions and turns are not handled well. This kind of writing style is like an amateur author. However, I have seen that the author's various announcements and the like have not mentioned that he has other jobs. If I count it as a professional author, I think the author's writing style has considerable room for improvement. The fifth and last one is that there are too many typos, so many that they make me read a little more. They are basically every few paragraphs, and they greatly affect the reading experience, because many typos can be read, but the meanings are very different, so I often find that I don't understand it well and then I have to go back and take another look. In addition, it is very confusing, so I often can't find it in time. But I don't know if it's just me, so I will write it here first. If you have any other additions, you are welcome to add.

In fact, the creative direction of the book is really good, but we are here to read the historical novel in the book. Readers responded that you kept creating the world and mapping the monsters there. .

The Romance of the Three Kingdoms at the beginning really made me feel very fresh. It was the first time I saw such a theme in a male novel. It took me two days to read about 600 chapters. At first, I thought Cai Wenji was my daughter and couldn't bear to read it. Later, when it came to the world war with the demon clan, the two of them were about to die. Why did you leave it here to read Cai Wenji? ? ? I looked at other people's book reviews again, starting a harem? I think the author can write about love lines, but can there not be too many, and don't be too outrageous, or just write one. I know that there are many male pornographic novels that have harems, but aren't there also many popular novels that don't have harems? Wouldn't it be better if everything was career-oriented?

I came across the introduction of this book by chance while browsing Douyin. After that, I spent ten days listening to and reading this book day and night! I really like the unrestrained thoughts and creativity of this book. Any judgments about whether it is watery or watery will not affect my love for this book at all! From the beginning to the end, I saw the author describing himself as inferior, but I didn't feel it at all. I like the plot of every chapter very much. I have never read the original Romance of the Three Kingdoms, or even any complete history book. I instinctively put whatever background the author says into it. Although I have been having a rough time these days, I really forget about food and sleep, and never leave the book. This is enough to prove my recognition of this book! I highly recommend this book! This book is indeed a good book in my personal opinion! Like! Like! Very happy! I won't say any more words of approval. Finally, I wish the author good fortune and good health! Keep working hard, keep updating and adding more 😁🤭

It's so poisonous that it's hard to believe that a normal person could write this book.

I came from station B. I haven't used the starting point for a long time and I came back to read it. It's totally OK to just read the first few chapters. But for me, the first bad point is that I don't write comments. Later, I pretend to be a novice and talk about the background with my book friends. It's too low. I'm still angry later, but isn't this the fault you caused by not writing comments? I don't know what I'm angry about. I can only say that the chapter title of Chapter 37 is very correct. The latter part is so watery and poisonous that I drank a lot 😅

You can run away after watching the free one. There is no need to continue watching.

The further you get to the back, the more water there is, all kinds of water🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲

I hope the author can see that In my opinion, the current contradictions are concentrated in: 1. Liu Xu's own world is not the world expected by the same generation group, and it is not a DT world that the author wants to convey, but an FJ world. This runs counter to the author's point of view and is different from the concept of the same generation group in the book. 2. Xu Xu's original intention of resurrecting the prehistoric world is good, so he is not a heinous villain, because he knows that the prehistoric world reflected by the gods is not a prehistoric world composed of tens of millions of ordinary people. Xu Xu is undoubtedly superior to Liu Xu in this regard, and Liu Xu himself has been gifted by the prehistoric world, and he cannot be ungrateful and implement his ideals like Xu Xu. 3. The technological world itself is not an outright villain. The violent methods used in studying the masters of other worlds are also caused by the environment of the jungle and the inhumane characteristics. The world of science and technology only conflicts with Liu Xu, the prehistoric world, and the fleeting world, which only have interests, resources, and means to achieve goals. The world itself is not against the entire void, nor is it against the void itself. In my opinion, the author has determined the ending. The breakthrough for the short-term ending is the Tongshi Group. The Tongshi Group's final integration of the void may be the temporary ending of the void given by the author in the novel. But! Regarding the void in the novel, since the author used "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" as an introduction, he later wrote a lot of Chinese history, allowing readers to feel that even the heroes of an era cannot escape the tide of the times. As for the entire void, Liu Xu, the prehistoric world, the fleeting world, and the world of science and technology are only a history that may be understood by future generations. The romantic figures of the ages still have to look at the present. To sum up, predictions for the ending: Void has no ending, only the struggle between several big worlds in the novel has an ending. No matter what the outcome of the current struggle is, these struggling worlds cannot escape the outcome of being transformed, and the Tongshi Tuan will be the ultimate winner. If the ending can be set in an era after all the current world lords in the void have been replaced, and this struggle can be reviewed from the perspective of an ordinary author or historian of this era, and using this perspective as the end of the entire book, in my opinion, it will make sense. Of course, this ending is just my yy. The whole novel is very good. I am looking forward to how the author will write the ending. Discussions are welcome! ! !

In fact, it was quite good when I saw more than 100 photos of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. I have a strong resistance to poison, so I feel that Cai Wenji and the like did not feel anything when they came out. How can I still endure it after they have been pulled out? 😅, What I can't bear is the plot of White Elephant World after the beauty contest, which is criticized by many. In fact, from the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, it can be seen that the author is not good at writing big battle scenes, but in White Elephant World, he really wanted to describe these things, and then he opened Journey to the West at the same time, so that's it. The most important thing is that I was attracted by the information-difference text + QQ water group praise from the beginning. As a result, after the Chu-Han War, there were fewer and fewer such plots, especially when the White Elephant World was attacked, there was too much water. The ordinary villagers inside only needed to arrange people. Just go and teach a book, and then use a lot of soldiers to push the dungeon to gain experience by hanging up. I just dragged it for a long time and forced a few gods to come to the rescue. I am really speechless😅. Fortunately, there are many chapters and you can jump directly. I can't imagine how painful it will be for readers who are waiting for the update. And the setting at the beginning was very problematic. First, it was said that history should be restored, but this bird world view has the super power of riding a horse. What's the use of mirroring some ordinary people? So the final outcome has to be to write some supernatural novels to enhance the strength, or directly eat the settings or weaken the monster values ​​​​and then the sea is boundless, or special characters such as the Yu Transformation Jialan God can be enhanced through the Conferred God patch, but there are not so many like Guan Yu in history. In the end, after the intensity of the invasion gradually increased in the main plot, the two became completely separated. The author could no longer balance the intensity of the two and could only write whatever came to mind. It is recommended that when you read something about Journey to the West that you are not happy with, you can jump directly to Chapter 488, Sun Wukong. You can look down on it and then taste it again. You really can't run away anymore.

No wonder there are more than 2,000 chapters. The cost of this book seems to be quite high. Looking at the title of the chapter, the protagonist shows signs of character collapse.

The main character in it is very intellectual and has no brains. It gives me the feeling of being a little chicken. I gave up on the Holy Mother and found something else.

The writing is too taken for granted, the author's style is too poor, I can't watch it directly after the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, the world view is extremely confusing, it's like a hazy dream, a lot of content is nutritious, those familiar plots are unnecessary, the world view is endless, I have tried to remove half of my brain to read it But when it came to the end, I simply didn't have the brains to read it. The small details were tied here and there, and the general direction was a mess. I wrote whatever I thought of, and when I got excited, I digressed to no end. I wrote settings while escaping settings, while writing pitfalls, while exploding pitfalls. The result was that all the messy things were not used, and the whole thing was confusing and weak.

Look at one chapter. There is not much of the author's own content in one chapter. They are all copied from the Romance of the Three Kingdoms or the Struggle for Hegemony between Chu and Han. If I want to read these contents, I can read these original books. Why are you reading this? Eighty to ninety percent of a chapter is the Romance of the Three Kingdoms and other content. Water shouldn't be like this, right? And the novels inside are for the people in the novels. How many people do you think have read these books in real life? Even if you haven't watched it, you have watched the TV series. Why not copy all the original texts of these novels and insert a few sentences of your own in the middle to make money?

It made me vomit blood and gave me a headache. What kind of rubbish did you write? Are you writing a primary school composition? You can't stand it in the water. You can't understand a single thing in the chapter. I'll call you the King of Water. I'll write whatever I want.

(This is my first time writing a book review, and some parts may not be particularly expressive.) The world setting of this book is very interesting. After reading Swallowing the Starry Sky before, I found it difficult to find a book with a novel and interesting world view. I read it after reading a certain video and found it very interesting. When I read about 500 chapters, I was still interested in reading it word for word, because I also particularly like this kind of fantasy historical novels. However, when some authors' views on history appeared chapter by chapter, I didn't particularly want to read it. I skipped chapters as soon as I saw it, which felt very boring and annoying after reading too much. On the contrary, it is very interesting that the author mentioned his views on history in the novel. The protagonist is a doctor of history who graduated from Peking University, but in some chapters, I can't feel the author's temperament of a high-IQ character, but instead feel vulgar...? It makes people feel disgusting. Of course, it can be considered that this is male instinct. As a highly intelligent person, shouldn't he control his desires? Moreover, it would be outrageous and laughable to have two wives or mother and daughter in the rose world later on. In the early stage, the author felt that Cai Wenji was his daughter and if she didn't want to do anything to him, she wouldn't do anything. But later... She was like a hypocrite, and later she was with Wang Run... I have read "Swallowing Stars" and "Perfect World" male-channel novels, and I haven't read too many male-channel novels. As with "Perfect World", which is also a harem novel, it is understandable that the male protagonist has a harem, because it is not a modern society and the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonists is also very good, such as childhood sweethearts, life-saving graces, etc., So it does not seem particularly disgusting. Although there are not many girls in "Swallowing the Stars", she has always been a wife before and after the protagonist became powerful... But the author's description in the article is the same as what I said above. It is disgusting to write it like this. If you want to be with Cai Wenji, you should be together. In the beginning, it was described that because of this, so not, but in the end, it was still. The world view of the article is good and can be said to be very innovative, but the character design of the protagonist is not perfect enough, and some parts are very messy. For example, the place where the meat is delivered is ten for a while, and one for a while. I hope it can be improved, and don't be watery. I have read more than 1,100 chapters in four days and read it for 64 hours. I only read it when I was sleeping. Now I only need two seconds to read a page and I can guess what it is. I really like this world view, so I hope the author can revise the details after the completion, or update it once a day to improve the previous plot. The article is not too refined. (I feel like I can catch up with the author's update progress in two or three days. I prefer to keep books. I hope to come back next year to see how the author can improve the book more)