The Outsider

This is the pinnacle of Mao Ni's characterization. At the same time, I dare say that it is also the most collectible and most distinctive and beautiful book among the thousands of books I have read in the entire starting point.

The Empire is the host, the Federation is the guest, and the Imperial Army is waiting for work. If it is a war between two countries on the same planet, strategy, tactics, topography, and climate can all affect combat effectiveness. However, in the era of interstellar warfare, air supremacy in space is much simpler and more direct. Over-the-horizon bombardments and lone units are eaten up one by one. As long as there is no absolute air supremacy, ground troops are nothing more than living targets for the main guns of battleships. The Empire still has mines, but the Federation is about to disappear. The empire can drag you to death if it drags you with it. So the Federation wants to swallow up the Empire, and the American dream is not that wet... The author has forced the war in the interstellar era into the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, and a single duel in front of Guan Yu's formation will determine the outcome of the war. Watching "Jian Ke", firstly, it cannot be regarded as science fiction. The science involved here is basically bragging, including many details of engineering technology. Secondly, it cannot be regarded as military. The author is obviously not familiar with interstellar warfare, let alone mixed arms combat. Even individual combat is similar to the cold weapon era. However, the author's various discussions on three views, ideology and even system analysis are unprecedented and unprecedented. They have not been written before and will not be dared to be written in the future. They are mixed with profound descriptions of human nature and delicate depictions of various emotions. Finally, the author's extremely YY chivalrous spirit of drawing a sword and drawing a sword. Although it is impossible to have it in reality, why not just have a wet dream? ! To fully enjoy the fun of this game, you must filter out all strict appeals to science fiction and military affairs and just understand its spirit. If not, get around it…

We really need more works like "Jian Ke" to tell us: you really don't need to compromise for the unreachable "big picture" and the illusory "collective": no matter how ambitious those big guys are, what seemingly legitimate reasons they have, what specious rhetoric they have, as long as they hurt the people you care about, as long as they let people sacrifice without consent at will, you have the absolute, legitimate and noble right to stop them and take revenge on them. This is the simplest and most fundamental moral foundation in the world. Even if they are truly "ambitious" politicians who want to do something they think is great, but they use cruel and wrong means, then they should be knocked down. As a small person, it is your entire mission to uphold your moral code with courage and determination. As for the consequences, little people are never obliged to bear them. When Fu Zhuanzhu stabbed Wang Liao, a comet struck the moon; when Nie Zheng stabbed the Han puppet, a white rainbow penetrated the sun; when Yao Li stabbed Qing Ji, a Cang Ying struck the palace. The Revenge of Stone, from morning to night.

The narrative is complete, has story-telling and literary qualities, can add some points of view, can fill in all the holes, and is also a sufficiently enjoyable online article. I have only read this one so far...

I have read several other books quite early, but I have always ignored this one because of its title and subject matter. Recently, there has been a serious shortage of books. I happened to find this book available for free borrowing in the library, so I thought of picking up an old book to read. It's rare to regain the feeling of staying up late reading a novel. The plot is quite vulgar, but it's beautiful. I can only say that the author's ability to use words is really important.

I've read Chapter 30 and it's so draggy that I can't stand it. Forcibly divide something that can be written in one chapter into several chapters to write. This does not mean that there should be no details, no foreshadowing or foil, but you must have a certain degree of restraint! It has to be detailed and appropriate! In the first three chapters, the main story is about an incident of orphans committing tyranny. I understand that the purpose of these three chapters is probably to bring out the characters in the incident, highlight the background of the orphan mine disaster, reflect the overall look and feel of the federal system, and create a sense of absurdity. Length arrangement: Except for two pages that really introduce Li Wei and Xu Le, and three or four paragraphs that directly describe Donglin's background and the orphan's background, the rest of the text is devoted to the "incident". Three chapters! How many times do you repeat Jian Shuier's slogan? It is understandable to write about the children's black clothes and immature cuteness to contrast the federal incompetence and reveal that the orphans are unemployed, but what is the role of describing the psychological description of the deputy director also loving Jian Shui'er? Can it bring a sense of comedy or the human touch of a deputy director? There are many things that can be written or not written, which have really affected the rhythm. I think these words are neither wonderful nor delicate. Excellence and delicacy cannot be written using wireless expansion. The most common wonderful thing is that the characteristics of the scene are revealed in just a few strokes. Wish you all a happy viewing experience...

I like this book, so I think you who also appreciate this book are also lovely people May we always be on the road to pursuing inner happiness

I watched it, but I always felt that the main character was too self-righteous. Such a person cannot survive even one chapter without a halo. Why

Chen Changsheng doesn't fight for anything, he just wants to live forever. Xu Le doesn't want anything, he just wants justice. After reading The Book of Destiny first, I was deeply shocked. In life, don't fight too much, otherwise you will lose a lot. After watching "Jian Ke", it struck a chord in my heart, and I felt that we all have to be like that smelly and hard stone Xu Le in Donglin, fighting for justice (everyone's standards are different), even if we have to face a lot of darkness and a lot of injustice, as long as we are hard and smelly enough, we can always smoke them away. People should maintain a passion for their own morality and justice, and maintain an undisputed indifference towards merit, fame, fortune and salary. I love these two books by Mao Ni very much. I think they can provide some good guidance to teenagers who are still growing up. Some people may say it is too fake and unrealistic, but young people are people who live in dreams. This is the guidance to help us face reality. When we were young, we all had dreams, we were all fragrant, and we were youth; later, the cruelty and turbidity of reality made us lose our fragrance, and even stink. When we lived in the turbidity and slowly got used to it, the fragrance of youth turned into a "stinky" smell in our eyes. (A little insight, expressed from my feelings, while I am still young)

Taking a look at several congressmen in the book in conjunction with the current affairs of a special southern city, I found that Mao Ni was so prescient. The article was written ten years ago, and Mao Da alone could become a god.

I finished reading the novel Qing Yu Nian a few days ago because of the popularity of Qing Yu Nian. I was watching Jian Ke these days, and when I saw Madman Li and Xu Le saying that Jian Shui'er was the uncle's daughter, I suddenly remembered what Xu Le said when Uncle Feng Yu was in the repair shop watching TV series with Xu Le: "I will marry her in the future. Wife!" Thinking about it now, this is a classic scene of telling an old father that he wants to marry his daughter. He couldn't stop laughing when he thought of this. No wonder the uncle asked Xu Le to unblock the channel. It turned out that watching TV was the only way he could see his daughter who was light years away! ! !

I finished catching up on the old version of Qidian. Com when I was in junior high school. After all these years, space opera still appeals to my taste. When I read it for the second time, I thought about some issues. For example, the functions of the seven families seemed to only emphasize the three Taili Zhong families, and the disciples were somewhat dandy; the imperial camp did not focus much. Except for the old general of the previous expeditionary force, there were not many high-profile figures in the leadership. The key point was In terms of creating a kind-hearted bottom image; Bermuda is a land of rivers and lakes, but it is a pity that there is not much development... I am not saying that the detailed arrangement of Maoda is not good. If the war unfolds slowly, Bermuda will definitely be a very exciting place; in addition, the details of the setting cannot be delved into like Qing Yu Nian. After all, it is not a hard science fiction, this is a fantasy novel. I also saw a lot of things that I didn't understand at the time, such as the detailed description of the federal government system, the NTR team, the Patriot Act, and Qingcheng Prison. The final setting was also consistent with Qing Yu Nian Yuan. It was quite interesting and a good story. In addition, the titles of Mao Ni's books are all very good. Take a few days off to prepare to watch Yin Ying Zhuan again. Harm, romantic galaxy, space opera, love and hatred, romance of heroes, do you think this can be cool? So cool!

It has been five years since I entered the online literature pit, and I have read all kinds of online articles. From my personal point of view, "Jian Ke" is worthy of being the pinnacle of online articles. The first time I noticed "Jian Ke" was in the 2018 "Selection of 20 Online Literature Works in 20 Years", "Jian Ke" ranked first. At that time, I had only seen a few works on this list, and the main selection unit was China Literature Group, so I couldn't judge the fairness. The first-ranked book "Jian Ke" is undoubtedly an important benchmark for judgment, so I decided to read it. At that time, I had only watched "The Legend of the Destiny" which Mao Ni was currently updating, and the writing was not very good. The most popular completed work among Mao Ni fan reviews was "Jiang Ye", so I also watched "Jiang Ye", and now I also watched "Qing Yu Nian" because of the TV series. "Jiang Ye" gave me a "stunning" feeling, showing Mao Ni's "weird" and "logically rigorous" imagination, and its artistic achievement is the highest. As for "Jian Ke", its literary and ideological qualities are the highest! Every fan of all excellent online articles can list a lot of advantages. You say this book is beautifully written, he says that book is rich in imagination, and I say that a certain book has many cultural elements. It is said that everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. How can we distinguish between high and low? How can we say "Jian Ke" is better? In fact, everyone who has passed the "Literary Appreciation" study in the nine-year compulsory education should know that the most important elements in judging novels should be three major elements: characterization, storyline, and main idea. The first element is "character creation", but this is necessary for a qualified novel, so in this regard, "Jian Ke" is not unique. Similarly, the rationality of the storyline is also the basis of the novel. At this point, "Jianke" is only on the same starting line as most excellent online novels. What makes "Jian Ke" really better than other excellent online novels is that it has a main idea and writes the main idea very profoundly! A novel, with a main idea and a soul, is no longer a "splendid article" that "writes stories for the sake of writing stories"! The reason why Jin Yong's martial arts novels are higher than other martial arts novels (including Gu Long's) is because almost every one of Jin Yong's novels has a theme and profound enough thoughts. Therefore, "character creation" and "story plot" are the key points to determine whether a novel is qualified, while "main idea" is the most important or even the only key point to improve the level of a novel. However, most Internet articles, including those excellent Internet articles, lack the main idea. Among them, the better ones may have some "ideas", such as "Swordsman in the Snow", but there are very few novels that really have a "profound theme". I have read all of Mao Ni's books except "The Legend of Suzaku" and "The Great Way to the Sky". Each one has a main theme, but the only one that is very profound is "Jian Ke"! For example, "Zhe Tian Ji" "portrays real people, real dragons, and real phoenixes". The main topic is too big, and it seems "vapid" when written, giving people the feeling of "fake and empty" and "general talk". The main theme keyword of "Jian Ke" is "morality", which is also a very broad topic. However, the book focuses on "little people insist on morality and justice in their hearts", so this theme will not appear "fake and empty". The author also uses methods such as "putting new wine into old bottles" to write down the author's in-depth thinking on certain issues, showing his profound thoughts. The postscript "Sometimes" of "Jian Ke" (now at the front of the book) is also one of the outstanding manifestations of "Jian Ke". A novel, especially a full-length novel, has a large number of words. Readers may not pay enough attention to the main idea, and the postscript can be a good "topic". At the same time, the postscript can also be used to judge whether the main idea of ​​the novel is written deeply or not. For example, in Jin Yong's "The Legend of Heaven and Sword of the Dragon", the postscript points out that the main theme is "righteousness - the deep friendship between men", but what is more prominent in the book is the emotional entanglement between Zhang Wuji and four women, so the main theme has deviated, and Jin Yong himself is not satisfied. Comparing the postscript and the main text of Jian Ke further reflects the excellence of "Jian Ke". "Jian Ke" is a masterpiece of more than 3 million words, which basically does not deviate from the main point. At the same time, it also thinks about some other issues. The postscript "Sometimes" is one of the best postscripts I have ever read, and it is an unrivaled and excellent postscript among online articles. Generally speaking, the literary and ideological nature of "Jian Ke" has reached the height of Jin Yong's martial arts novels, and is comparable to the top outstanding works in Jin Yong's novels. As the pinnacle work of online literature, it is well deserved. At least I have never read a better online work than "Jianke". Finally, let's talk about the "Selection of 20 Online Literature Works in 20 Years". I have read more than half of the books on the list, and I personally think this list is relatively fair. Some people may have objections to the inclusion of "shuangwen" such as Dou Po, Dou Luo, and Pan Long on the list. In fact, these "shuangwen" are indeed not ideological enough, but they are artistic enough. Rich imagination, wonderful descriptions, and simple storylines are all manifestations of artistry. Art does not have to be pretentious to be called art. Just like the selection of high-scoring essays in the college entrance examination, it is enough to have big highlights but no big mistakes! The fighting is extremely exciting and exciting, which is a big enough highlight. There are no major failures in characterization and storyline, which is enough to be included in the list. Of course, if you want to be ranked at the forefront, you must still have works with high ideological level such as "The Guest" and "The Journey to the East". There are both high-end people and low-income people. This is a truly fair list.

It is still considered to be Mao Ni's pinnacle work.

Compared with the author's other works, "Jian Ke" is more critical in its thinking and more angular in its characterization, although the emotional line is as draggy as ever. Personally, I think this work is worth reading by everyone, especially young people.

Divine book! All inclusive! Unbelievably good! I am extremely afraid that I will never see this level of writing again. I hope the author will keep up the good work! Pay tribute!

This protagonist, this book is really disgusting to read

7 Brushes. I have always thought that this book is the pinnacle of Chinese online novels. Unfortunately, if the writing is better, the structure is more compact, and some of the pretentious core of online novels are removed, it can completely compete with traditional literature.

Why do I like this book? Xu Le is as stubborn as the smelliest and hardest stone in the Donglin cesspit, Shi Qinghai is as handsome as the flash of light when he returns from a midnight dream, and the mysterious uncle has countless faces and identities... This is true love!

The protagonist is first inexplicably fucked by this woman and humiliated and suppressed, and then she has to inexplicably resist the pressure after she becomes pregnant and wants to be a father. A group of sidekicks who came to cause trouble because of this woman came over and threatened to break the protagonist's legs. Then the protagonist eliminated a group of bodyguards and then let these people go easily. There is no sense of satisfaction. A person has strength, intelligence, high-level friends, and opportunities, but does nothing. He just wants to be a father at home. I don't know why this book wasn't published back then.

This sense of déjà vu is gone! Too strong😄😄

1: This book is Jianke! There are too many repeated descriptions surrounding mechas, ranging from 300,000 to 200,000 words. The key point is that this mecha, which can almost represent the most practical military weapon of mankind tens of thousands of years later, is still so weak. It should be noted that at this time, the Empire and the Federation were the giants that ruled many star fields, which means that at this time, humans have mastered super-light spacecraft, okay! I admit that it is necessary for the plot, which is a bit arrogant 😃 In addition, if a novel wants to become a classic, it can be long, but the total size should not exceed 1.5 Million words, and online novels can be doubled at most. 2: Those novels that cost four to five million or even tens of millions (except for The Legend of Shushan Swordsman, which is nearly five million words) either do not open the map, or ten chapters are devoted to fighting, and five chapters are occupied by passers-by's sighs and character dialogue. It's really easy to go off topic. Secondly, the books written in this way are either verbal chatter, excessive life-style, or long stories with private information. In fact, it takes at least a week to polish each update of 10,000 words to truly guarantee the quality of the book. But the reality is that serialized online novels and the abnormal market simply don't want to see this happen; especially today, under the dominance of ten cents per thousand words, clear price tags, and the increasingly impetuous entertainment market, it is destined to be difficult to create true classics. Jian Ke has more than three million words, Snow in the Sky has about five million words, and Jian Lai has more than nine million words. I just don't want to read it 😥. 3: Exaggerated sexual plots and too many emotional dramas. As one of the four major literary youths in the Internet, we are not exempt from tricks. The Seven Families are super families that influence the federation. They are powerful families that can influence all major decisions of the federation. It is understandable that one of the seven big families broke the family and fell in love with Xu Miyan, but the second, then the third, and even the fourth... Are hard to figure out. The article also gives a long explanation that seems reasonable but in fact is impossible to become a reality. Okay! Even if this is the dream in every man's heart, even if this dream is too yy 4: The smooth writing is the deepest feeling that this book gives me. In this aspect alone, it has surpassed a lot of writers from Qidian, including many great gods, Platinum. In my opinion, many well-known writers are either deliberately eloquent or pretending to be profound in order to appear different, but they ignore the most basic function of words, which is to convey meaning. 5: I admit that the combination of gorgeous rhetoric and a large number of parallel idioms and colloquial terms can indeed bring visual impact to people and evoke the echo of mind-level hindsight. Those who are interested can take a look at "The Bed of Seven Jin Years is the Grave of Youth". But in comparison, the literary skills of using simple and easy-to-understand language to resonate with people are obviously more sophisticated. In this regard, you can refer to Yu Hua's "Alive" and Jin Yong's "The Deer and the Cauldron". 6: Jianke Jianke, the whole book ranges from the legendary military god to ordinary soldiers, from the protagonist to the supporting role, it can be said that everyone is a Jianke, who is not a Jianke? Everyone is helpless. It's really interesting, especially the scene with He Youyou, which is really wonderful. The setting of his protagonist is somewhat similar to that of Qiao Feng, but it brings a completely different impact and reverie to people. This is the most praiseworthy part 👍. 7: As for those chicken soups: how to deal with conflicts between individuals and collectives, and how to deal with conflicts between families and countries. In theory, political books have made it very clear, but what about practice? We are all adults, and we all have our own standards, and no one can convince anyone else. 5: Speaking of the end, I have to say that the settings of Jiake and the fake hero are really similar. They are also a confrontation between the Federation and the Empire, and they both have the invincible military god Lipifu and the terrifying existence of Hastings. The latter is the founder of the mecha style. They have similar internal conflicts: it is difficult to reconcile the interests of the big family and the country. They both have military radicals, and even similar protagonist experiences, etc... As the author said, Jiake is undoubtedly an excellent online novel standing on the shoulders of giants, and it belongs to the kind of classic that has not become outdated after more than ten years.

This is Jianke's last song. It's rare to see an online article with a comprehensive quality comparable to that of Jianke.

The setting of this mecha is so illogical and retarded. In the universe of this setting, in order for a mecha to be as important as blowing, it must have the following properties: 1. It can fly, sea, land and air, and can produce oxygen at a very fast speed. 2. It has the support of super energy, which is similar to a crystal mine but is very small. It has an extremely long battery life 3. It can be invisible. Stealth is the most important point. Only if it can be invisible (stealth aircraft can avoid all kinds of radar electromagnetic detection) can it avoid the threat of missiles. (Of course, this world can travel light years. I seriously doubt that the author even knows what light years means. Thinking about it, I travel light years in an ordinary spaceship every day, and it only takes a day or two to arrive. There is no such thing as space jump, and there is a space carrier, but it doesn't even have missiles.) 4. The powerful long-range firepower support can carry out beheading and assassination operations without warning, which is called affecting the battle situation in the universe. The killing weapon Then the mechas in the book can't fly... And they keep boasting about their maneuverability (meaningless) 😅 The most advanced mechas are all crawler type. I can't figure it out. If your track chain is dry, what maneuverability can you say in front of aircraft and missiles? (Yes, there are no missiles, but according to the speed of the track, you are at your limit. Even artillery cannot be avoided, let alone air strikes.) How strong can the mobility be...? The other is to run on mechanical legs, and the combat method of the mecha is mainly melee combat... The only long-range weapons are machine guns and artillery I am convinced by this kind of IQ. Even humans 50 years ago would not be able to defeat this mecha. It is simply a scarecrow. First of all, the practicality of this mecha is not as good as that of a tank. The long-range weapons it can carry are definitely not as good as a tank's artillery. After all, it is a robot that needs to stand. Then the armor cannot surpass the tank, it is determined by the shape (same material) Finally, close combat seems like a joke. The technology in that world is so advanced that space fleets can fight across light years. There are no missiles or any guided weapons. You can say that there are no nuclear weapons (because the elements in the world are different, there may be no elements such as uranium), but there are no missiles... Only artillery 😭 So does interstellar combat rely on hand-to-hand collisions of space ships? This kind of mecha is a joke if there are missiles in front of it. If it is locked, it will die. Another seven or eight-meter pure steel giant running on tracks and legs. To be honest, artillery with radar is enough to deal with it. This kind of thing is meaningless. Although it is fantasy, since it is written realistically, at least it has some IQ. Either the cosmic technology is very low-level, but the technology is very high. You can travel in light years by plane, and there is no space jump and folding 😭. I don't understand. Then why do you insist on using the word light year? This junior high school student wouldn't talk nonsense like this. It's really uncomfortable to watch. There are also various highlights describing how important mechas are to the universe. Not to mention the above issues, there are no more than 1,000 mechas in the entire federation, but the population is tens of billions. The war between two cosmic countries... This kind of mecha that uses its legs to run and fight with its arms has a decisive role? How did you get this brain? I'm convinced

When choosing a book, you really need to read the reviews! This book was basically useless in the later period. I have no more content to write, so I just wrote a bunch of thoughts to make up the number of words. Nausea. The author's writing style is okay, not too naive.

This is the most disgusting thing about the relationship between Xu Le and Xiaomeng. One party gives unconditionally and the other party unconditionally lets them down. The most disgusting thing is that the one who gives has been let down so many times and is still so selfless? The one who is letting you down will always say that you are the most important, and then betray him directly. Afterwards, I was so moved by my own sacrifice that I sacrificed you even though you were so important to me. I am so fucking great.       ，，，？ Can anyone tell me about the ending of these two people? It's so jarring. It was a very good book, but it's a pity to abandon it like this.

To put it bluntly, the protagonist only does things with one heart and does not consider anything else. He only wants to be happy. The key is that he is hypocritical and does not admit that he is like this. What the uncle said in the early stage about what would happen if an old thing falls into the hands of an individual was successfully reflected in the hands of the protagonist.

I can't stand the narrative style, it's grinding, and there's no progress even after 100,000 words. What was originally a very interesting story is boring.

Xia uses martial arts to break the ban. This is a martial arts novel covered in science fiction, and it is written in a romantic style. The pinnacle of Mao Ni.

In the first realm, you kick mechas with your feet, tear apart battleships with your hands, take the enemy general's head from the crowd of thousands of soldiers, and become invincible on the battlefield. There is also a reasonable and legal old butler of the golden finger system. It is a top-notch novel. In the second realm, the plot has twists and turns, foreshadowing can be seen everywhere but not abrupt, the characters are full-bodied, and the story is very strong, awesome~. The third realm, alluding to reality, big people have the means of big people, small people have the persistence of small people, and the third is youth's pursuit of morality. An overflowing sense of justice should be the most admirable thing, and it is extremely ideological. The fourth realm is to deeply immerse yourself in each character and feel their powerful and rich inner world. Each character is a hero in his own mind. Since then, all emotions have been filled with two words - greatness. If you have different opinions or additions, please feel free to let me know.