The Final Gentleman

The poster started reading Ah Fei's novels in 2014, from the very beginning "The Boy Who Eats Ghosts" to 404's "Chainsaw User's Manual", I have read a little bit of each one. My previous label for Ah Fei was "big imagination + strong taste". I didn't expect this book to make such a big improvement. Let me talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book in my personal opinion. Please read the spoilers below. Advantages: 1. Modular narrative method: When the author deals with the description of some fantasy creations, he will divide the narrative into the whole and the parts through sub-directories, which very conveniently reduces the difficulty of the reader's imagination. This is the first time I have seen someone use modular thinking in novel narrative. It is very bold, creative and clever. 2. The battle scenes are full of sense: The battle descriptions are graphic and not sloppy. It is hard to believe that this is Ah Fei. The most typical one is the description of the battle in the cemetery at the beginning. The battle scenes are written in four chapters, but it is not boring. In addition, some mixed martial arts terminology is used to help readers imagine the picture. 3. Micro-innovation in settings, integrating elements of horror movies and games: In terms of settings, things such as [blood bar] and [disease] are the first time I have seen them in online articles. In addition, the use of elements from horror movies has been very smooth, serving the novel, without leaving any trace, and will not be as stiff as the previous "Cell Prison". Disadvantages: 1. As the protagonist upgrades, the sense of horror/thriller value plummets: A common problem in most horror online novels is that the stronger the protagonist, the harder it is to write a scary feeling. In the middle and late stages, the so-called horror elements become an aesthetic symbol and make people tired of aesthetics. Typical examples of similar problems include "Mysterious Resurgence", "I Have a House of Horrors", "Hell Cinema", etc. In the early stage of reading, I was heartbroken, but in the later stage I was in a mess. 2. The heroine is heavy-tongued and unlikable: A common problem in Ah Fei's novels is that heavy-tongued descriptions of relationships between men and women sometimes make people physically uncomfortable. This book has curtailed it a lot. In addition, I have a feeling that Ah Fei was swayed about Jin's gender at the beginning. Fortunately, it was not written as a gay character like Ning Zhiyan in "The God of Death". It's hard to say whether Ah Fei's hobby is a shortcoming or a characteristic. 3. The protagonist's power system is messy: The problems left over from "The God of Death", and I have read Chapter 380 so far. The protagonist's power system includes: lunatic, pain chain, dead makeup, moon, killing intent thread, star magic, leather, small grapes, dead ax/metal hand system. The power system is too complex. Each type can form its own system. However, because it is too complex, each type can only be written as one skill. There is a [purification] section behind the blind guess to reduce these things. 4. Eat settings: Gray domain classification: shallow/middle/deep/nightmare/death, jump directly to the old world. Continent map. The protagonist's past life. It's not a serious injury at the moment, but it's suspected of being a piece of cake. 5. Some of the supporting characters are still unfulfilled: One is the insomniac who beats the protagonist in "Skinny Promotion". The writing is not too strong but the sense of oppression is too weak. Compared with Zed, who is also a special agent, he feels like a "hypnotic summoner". In addition, there is a blank background and the suspicion of facial makeup. In fact, when I see this character, I think of Tian Hua in A Fei's "The Boy Who Eats Ghosts". He is three-dimensional and full of oppression. As soon as he appears, he smashes the protagonist into molecules with a hammer. After all this time, I still remember his name. The other one is the fat guy in the trio who is powering for love, which seems almost interesting.

I'm stupid, and the more I look at it, the more something is wrong. First of all, the settings of the world view and power system are great👍🏻 It is worth recommending, and the characterization is also okay. It's the year 3202. Although time travel is a bit cliché, it's still acceptable. But there is one point that makes me most uncomfortable. The beginning of the book only says that the protagonist died suddenly while writing a thesis and traveled through time. I didn't write anything else, but later I started going over the protagonist's old accounts from his childhood before he traveled through time, and talked about what kind of character and experiences the environment developed. But I want to say that in this end of the world, there are probably eight hundred people who have more bizarre experiences and tougher minds than him in this end of the world. No matter what, it is more cruel and bloody than the killer or dead soldier training camp in peacetime. The only advantage the protagonist has is that time travel carries the aura of death and his unique values. But his childhood experience has actually given him a lot of benefits that are obviously different from others. Don't you think it's a bit too much? This is the downfall of this novel.

I saw that some book friends didn't like Cell Prison, so here's a little analysis. The Cell Prison and the Black Tower Unlimited dungeon can enrich the settings of the world of strange monsters, and switching between the two will prevent the rhythm from being monotonous. Moreover, the Holy City Expedition actually revealed the world view, reversing the original assumption that humans should rely on the power of the black tower to defeat strange demons, and instead integrate into the world of strange demons. It also borrowed the Cthulhu setting. Although it was covered in skin, it was considered a hot topic. Although it was much more boring after the Primeus War, there is no denying that the early and middle stages were a superb start. This book is not as good as Cell Prison in terms of world view and structure. Although it is covered with strange rules, it has one point in the early stages. It is not like the infinite flow copy of Black Tower that runs throughout, and there is also the outstanding character Pennywise the Clown. Staying in the world of patients is a bit monotonous, and the world view revealed in the previous book has multiple inversions. This book reveals the integration of human beings into the old world of patients through leather factories, which is full of routines. In the middle, I have been cueing the orphanage, and then introduced the DND plane setting, but it is just a framework. There is no famous world view such as the Forgotten Realms, Dragonlance, Greyhawk, and Eberron, which is equivalent to wasting time. In the last book, many people were attracted by the popularity of COC Cthulhu. It attracted a lot of attention, coupled with the dungeons and worldview reversal in the early and middle stages, it was exciting enough. Of course, Ah Fei has made significant progress in controlling the character of the protagonist and describing the supporting characters. The cell prison is like a road movie, with Count Gouzi constantly changing teammates, and all the banquets in the world. Boss Han is also mature enough. It is fun to follow him on adventures. The character of the gentleman William is constantly changing. The characters such as Yi Chen, Little Putao, and Lorian are all properly arranged, and they are not thrown away after use. The characters have made great progress, but in terms of world view, they are not as good as Cell Prison. Cthulgaria Infinite Stream was a structure with both popularity and diversity at the time, and the reversal of the Great Expedition was really exciting. Although the teammates have changed, Malone and Death are outstanding. The book's novel about epidemics and "alien" worlds is an original world view. Although it quotes the author's old books, only old book friends can understand that it is difficult for newcomers to be attracted by the subject matter, and there is a lack of novelty and twists. It is normal to feel bored after reading it.

(The following content contains spoilers, which will affect the reading experience) If you knew that all your tragic fate, living in a slaughterhouse and watching the death of your kind, and even the destruction of the entire planet were all due to an experiment by "God", what would you do? If you were an author, what would you write? This novel will really surprise you.                                                                                                   I have been reading online novels for more than 20 years, and we can be considered "well-read". When I read this book, it really made my eyes light up! This author is so good. I have never seen this kind of writing style before - it's like wrapping a plasma slice with a layer of ketchup, giving it a sour and sweet feeling. What is this? This is what first love feels like! (Not) The author's writing style is skillful and humorous, describing the horror and horror so humorously, and describing the sacrifice and trust so lightly, revealing a unique maturity and madness. This madness is completely different from the madness in "The Strange Fairy". The whole work presents a careless adult world - there are no eternal enemies, only eternal interests - the end of reason and logic is not the utopia of order, but the pursuit of some kind of ideal community of excellence condensed by people's imagination, love and respect.         ，，，，，（shui），， No matter ordinary people or so-called strong men, whether they have names or not, they are all numbers, and how many people die are numbers. Just like the herds of cattle and lions on the grassland do not hate each other, they are equal in this environment. Live if you can escape, die if you can't escape, live if you can eat, die if you can't eat. In other words, like a colony of bees or ants, fanatical worship and devotion are the undertones engraved in life, so simple, so pure. How to describe it? It is like a situation in a spy novel by the Mai family that most domestic directors have been unable to capture for a long time - the Kuomintang and Communist spies are playing mahjong together, knowing each other well but pretending to know nothing about each other, saying secret words that the public does not say, and exchanging information carelessly. During this period, a spy blew out smoke rings and said that everyone worked for wages and had to go back to eat after work. (I forgot the original words, it's like this) There is a sense of relaxation under the tired tension, and personal life and death are not at all a concern. Out of position, everyone is the dust of the times. This book opens up a new path for Crusoe and Jacksuri. In a deformed, evil, painful, fearful, happy, cheerful and lively atmosphere, everyone loves the protagonist together, and the protagonist deserves a different kind of love. It's so special and I love the main character too. Don't hesitate! Get in the car! Ah no, eat this wave of Amway quickly! Back to the work itself, when I saw the end of the fourth volume and William's actions were criticized by many readers, I thought about writing something for this book, so I couldn't help but output a lot of personal opinions in the final chapter of the fourth volume. Generally speaking, I am a silent reader and will not try to influence the author's actions to affect the fate of the characters because of my personal likes and dislikes. A book is a world built by the author, and it should have its own boundaries. This is not an area that readers should easily get involved in. When the author creates a mature character through the plot, then all subsequent actions of the character should be based on the character's own three views. No matter how the author sets up the plot, it should not deviate from the tone of the character itself. If, in order to compromise with the readers, the character is manipulated to make some choices that are not in line with his or her personal color in order to achieve the so-called drama, this is what I think is a "crash" in writing - when an avalanche occurs, no snowflake is innocent. A mature character is alive and living in another dimension of time and space. But the work is not closed. Some authors like to interact with readers. Just like some TV dramas will adjust the subsequent plot and story according to the audience's reaction while filming. Readers can also provide the author with a lot of inspiration and material from different people. Sometimes they can also prevent a character from continuing to collapse, leading to the collapse of the entire world of the work. After all, the author will also have shortcomings. (Wrote a bunch of nonsense again) To be honest, when I saw everyone's negative comments about William and even Yi Chen in the fourth and fifth volumes, I felt sad, angry and disdainful like never before. The protagonist of this book is the most tragic character I have ever read. With the humorous writing and the fact that the protagonist always has pearls of wisdom, readers unknowingly forget how Yi Chen (William) obtained these things - his "calmness" is based on the courage to disregard life and death, while "well-informed" comes from cold-blooded experiments on human diversity. Why are all the supporting characters and even the "crew" who were once enemies willing to take risks for Yi Chen and even die calmly? When I see such a plot, as a reader, I don't feel that it goes against common sense at all, only that it is somewhat unexpected and reasonable. This is probably the charm of Yi Chen. He speaks very few words. He was once a criminal and then became a "murderer". He is also a reliable and trustworthy person. He has the courage and responsibility to "trust others" that "evil" cannot have. Just like I object to the views of individual readers, I do not think Yi Chen is a "murderer". He struggled to survive in the orphanage, tried his best to escape with hatred, and committed suicide without hesitation after his hope was shattered. Then he was reborn for the first time in the sea of ​​death of obsession. In order to complete his revenge, he joined his biological father's former organization (after knowing that his father was not a murderer, I don't know if he breathed a sigh of relief like me), determined to kill evil as a career, and finally returned to the orphanage to destroy this place where evil piled up and raised humans and animals. After the obsession dissipated, he voluntarily accepted the trial and died generously - at this moment, where is his hope for life? Why didn't he die because his obsession dissipated? Is it because of his only friend, his imaginary friend William? At the request of the authorities, he participated in the time travel plan and came to the disease world, but it was William who came to life again, and Yi Chen had sunk into the deep sea of ​​death. This was his second death. Such a scene almost reappeared in the final battle. In order to deal with the "apex predator" in the Cave Heaven Paradise of the Five Zang Gods, he went on a killing spree, and he had already made up his mind to die. In the end, he really died. This kind of death was everyone's forgetfulness of him, and it was the last death of a creature. What is comforting is that at least the reader knows that he still exists, and William saves him again, giving him a reason to continue living. Although Yi Chen, who was resurrected from the disease, calmly called himself "evil", even if he became evil in order to kill evil, it was still "evil" - but are there really evil people who consider themselves evil? How can a person who can deliver trust, a person who has the courage to go forward and risk his own life, be a person who betrays the trust of others? Because he knows that he will not betray the trust of others, he can naturally trust others. Only those who betray others will never give their trust.         ， The author has always stated overtly and covertly that Yi Chen and William are one person and two sides, and they are similar. William seems to be planning rationally, but in fact there is a kind of madness of "sacrifice of life" in every action, covered by a mask of "madness"; while Yi Chen seems to risk his life every time, he seems calm and talks little, but in fact he just draws the sword and does it. This kind of unyielding spirit of being alone and brave is consistent, and their loneliness is also similar.                                                                                                                                                             all all both are all lonely. In this unknown loneliness, they are playing a game of finding friends. In other words, this book essentially describes the lives of a group of "marginal people" in society. Even the world of Lesions is a completely different planet from many coquettish bitches, living in isolation and not recognized. William looked like a completely normal ordinary person, developing new maps, decrypting them, and upgrading them. As the "skin" of the disguise was torn off, it turned out that he was the same. He was the one who linked them. He was looking for friends, and his friends were looking for him. I really don't like to implement the law of the jungle among intelligent biological groups. "Supporting the weak" is the most basic expression of human nature and wisdom. More than 2,000 years ago, people already understood that the common ideal of mankind is to create a "great harmonious world" in which "the old will die, the strong will be useful, the young will be able to grow, and the humble, widowed, lonely, lonely, and disabled will all be supported." With the development of productivity to this day, "supporting the weak" is not just about helping the "weak", but also about tolerating all differences, which may not be understood, but must be respected. Of course people have to swim upstream, but why should they criticize the water that flows downstream? You can be like the light, you can go with the flow, you can have friends who are traveling with you. The book has been completed and it has brought me a happy reading time, but why do my eyes always have fluorescent lights flashing?

The ultimate gentleman crowd! Welcome to you all! Come in with all the writing and painting! Those who eat food must also come in, they are all mine, mine, mine! There is a high probability of being turned over and praised by [Ah Fei] personally! ✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*. [Ah Fei] is super active! A home base for fans of Yi Chen and Gentlemen~ Readers of previous works are also welcome! If you want to join, please join the general group of gentlemen first, it is in the profile! Then go to our dear administrator [Colonel] or [Sister Se]! Or [me]. You must have a good attitude! Sister Se is working hard! Also, don't be casual about how fat Aite is! Writer, painter, cosplayer, high-quality dubbing artist, handicraft expert, short video creation expert, all kinds are available! Remember to bring your small works! Hold up the little flowers to welcome everyone! Break through the threshold of group chat!

Hey, I feel like I dislike William more and more.

The previous writing was great, both the setting and the story were very interesting, and the character of the protagonist was more to my taste. However, after writing more than 100 chapters, the second mission really got a bit overwhelming, and the protagonist had become a little bit mentally exhausted after being beaten? Jin wants his head to agree. It's really too abrupt. If the foreshadowing is really in place and the relationship is there, it's okay to die for the heroine? But what is this, a madwoman? Some people will say that the protagonist will not use his head if he calculates. Of course I know not, because he is the protagonist? But this kind of mentality is not right. It is very different from the previous cautious and brave character who pursues himself. It sounds a bit like a licking dog who has lost himself. Also, before Jin lost his mind when he was arrested, these are too abrupt. Maybe some people like this kind of crazy heroine. Jin may indeed have some hidden psychological problems, just like the protagonist, but what? The plot of rescuing and curing a sick female madman is a bit tiring to watch, and the author did not control it well. It is too abrupt.

Opening the book that exuded a strong ancient atmosphere, when he saw the obscure old Japanese characters, Barry felt that the library was full of malice towards him, and wanted to ask the librarian for a dictionary. But the librarian next to him chuckled, "Don't be anxious, keep reading, you will understand if you read more." Barry continued reading with hesitation. When he first started reading, the strange words were like heavy stones that could not be absorbed into Barry's narrow brain. However, as the reading time continued to increase, the old Japanese characters seemed to be injected with vitality bit by bit. At first, Barry felt that he was dazzled. He seemed to have seen the same word just now, but each stroke of this word was slightly displaced compared to the previous word. When he turned the book to the previous page for comparison, he found that there was no difference between the two. Danger has extended its claws to Barry, but Barry himself is unaware of it. After an hour or two of reading, the words in Barry's eyes were very different. Each of them began to twist and squirm continuously, seeming to break free and stand upright from the page. In their chaotic and chaotic dance, Barry seemed to begin to understand the content of the words. But what Barry didn't know was that the flesh and blood on his body also began to squirm, forming letters one by one, detached from Barry's body, and jumped into the usually visible gap under the chair. As words continued to fall off Barry's body, Barry began to lose weight visibly, but his interest in old knowledge blocked the feeling of physical weakness... The next day, the librarian put a new book "The Biography of Barry" on the shelf.

I am often shocked by Ah Fei's power system and settings. I also like this type of setting, so I would like to ask Ah Fei about the sources of inspiration for his settings (including but not limited to novels, movies, games, etc.). If other book friends know about it, you can also let me know.

The atmosphere is full of weird and mysterious Cthulhu style. No matter from any angle, this work can be regarded as a representative work or even a milestone of this theme. Looking at the entire website, this is the only one that can have such a level of Cthulhu web articles, and other works are hard to come by. Especially the work's description of the strange species named "epidemic" and the description of high-level life forms that are almost alien gods, a sense of horror and excitement that is different from the previous popular online articles also arises in my heart. [Introduction] The male protagonist Yi Chen traveled to a different world filled with gram-negative elements, and began his own adventure and growth in this world that was contaminated by the "epidemic" and caused frequent visions. There were many crises and challenges in the journey. The friends he met along the way also continued to enrich his understanding of the current world. Although it was difficult to change the situation of the world being invaded in a short time, he still worked hard and persistently to pursue the best of both worlds and the secrets of his life and time traveling here. [Reflections after reading] For me, I have been fascinated by Ah Fei's works since high school. I still vaguely remember how the boy named Yujing combined with exotic plants and finally found his own way and stood at the top of the world. As a writer who writes stories set in the world of Kexi. The Internet writer who became famous for his work, whether it is the previous work "My Cell Prison" or the current work being serialized, is still indispensable for the plot content that is full of dangers but endless aftertaste. After reading it, it is like being in the shoes of the hero, sensing the vague sense of danger around you, but also unable to resist the curiosity to find out. The invasion of the new world by the "epidemic" is a choice that life forms in the original world have to make in order to escape from their increasingly collapsing hometown. However, escaping is sometimes not a good strategy. Yi Chen, who became a "gentleman", was busy solving the disasters caused by the epidemic at the beginning, but after meeting "Moon Mark" Lorian, he gradually understood the difficulties of Patient Zero and the seeking common ground while reserving differences between the two worlds, and found a way to get the best of both worlds. It is the best strategy for everyone, which means that there is no need to fight or pay the price of life. You can explore the unknown of the world with the protagonists. Although selfish people still appear from time to time on the road of growth, I can also see the brilliance of those human natures. Even the old "gentlemen" are willing to dedicate everything to their mission and responsibility, and the integrity of these guardians can persevere even in the end of the world! [New Year Blessings] 24 is the year of the dragon. For us Chinese people, the dragon represents our spiritual symbol and cultural sustenance. I believe that Ah Fei can continue to work hard in the new year and continue to bring us more wonderful things. It doesn't matter if the subject matter of the work is niche. When the online literature environment is completely liberalized, this type of work will not be a milestone in the cultural "letting a hundred flowers bloom". One day, readers will look back on the works with different eyes and experience a completely different world of online literature. Although the story is coming to an end and William has been promoted to the master of the epidemic, the story between the twins William and Yi Chen is a brand new and exciting thing. Just like Beng San's "twins on the other side", each has its own will but also brings a different reading experience. Finally, I wish the author and all the book friends all the best in the new year, and be full of energy to welcome the recovery of all things, the vibrant spring and a bright future.

I wanted to give up after reading 1/3 of the book. It was okay at first. Although many game settings seemed a bit off, it was okay as a game article. Later, there were many flesh-and-blood exaggerated settings, and it felt like a fictional comic. It is shocking to see such exaggerated settings in ordinary life, but if all the characters always have such exaggerated settings, it will not seem exaggerated. Sometimes it is a little uncomfortable for the protagonist to see something, but as a reader, it is no more uncomfortable than the other monsters the protagonist encounters along the way. I might prefer the setting of strange things happening in ordinary towns in the early stage. Later, when I arrived in the old world, it was more like a world with stronger force than the human world. It is still very human in nature. If you exclude the characteristics of Cancer Palace, it is actually no different from what you are in Zion. It is a human organization. You said that when you first arrived at an old world inn, except for the weird food, it was still a regular inn. As a reader, I feel that the old world may be more mysterious, but currently it looks like the human world with a different style of painting.

Briefly tell me your feelings after reading this book. In my opinion, this book is worth reading. The writing is excellent and the thinking is clear. But the biggest problem with this book is that the main tone of the book results in a small audience. When you read Brain Waves, you will feel that it is a magical book. If you are a reader who likes to read mindless and refreshing articles, please take a detour. The following is a detailed description of some of my views on this book (it only represents my personal views and may involve spoilers): The current growth path of the protagonist in this book can be said to be smooth, but the world environment and past experiences all reveal depression. This kind of depression is different from the common apocalypse. The introduction quoted in the article is a kind of "hopeless" and "terminal illness" struggle. Yes, the protagonist, a dead and reincarnated person, is struggling in the world; a group of people in a small tribe are also struggling under the siege of pathogens from the old world. Under such oppression, the paranoid and warm humanity seems very precious (I have to praise the author's portrayal of the characters here). Gentleman, perhaps refers to this kind of stubborn and slightly pathological human nature. It is funny to say that the world is sick, and the way to cure the world is to become the pathogen, rely on the pathogen, and be exposed to the pathogen. It's not surprising that the word "end" comes from, perhaps the "death" of the protagonist is the ultimate relief. It can only be said that the author's book is quite "ambitious". At the same time, it is hard not to feel that the author was in a state of creating this book: a graduate student who was about to graduate was worried about the article, and he also occasionally felt the new crown virus, and he was exposed to the sun for several days. Hahahahaha. In summary, this book is not suitable for readers who have no brains to read and have a Virgin heart. At the same time, many descriptions in the article may make some people feel slightly uncomfortable. But I have to say it is a good article worth reading. Come on to the author, stick to your original intention and write well. It's not easy to find a book that suits your eyes, but don't die~

I feel that the subsequent plot is clear at a glance, but it lacks the feeling that the greatest fear comes from the unknown.

The protagonist is admired all the way and always has a stunning impact. The attention and training from teachers and senior management, and the admiration of peers can be said to be a side profile of the protagonist. It is indeed extraordinary, but this "attention" from others comes out of nowhere and is inexplicable. Although the reasons will be revealed later, when you start reading, it feels like the protagonist has too much aura. Although, I still like watching this kind of perverted feeling hehehe. Cthulhu-style books are best for reading quietly alone in the middle of the night.

#EndSpring, Suicheng# Basic reward part of the event. Appreciation 🤭🤭🤭

There are many excellent novels by this author. But most of it was due to the supporting characters and the plot that caused the male protagonist's character to collapse, and it was impossible to watch it later. I hope the author can control it in an orderly manner. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง It's a very interesting novel (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

I was playing Fallout 4 recently, and I had a sudden thought. If there are any similarities, it is not a coincidence (bushi) When the Gray Realm began to spread across the five continents, countless diseases destroyed countless human settlements, the original world form was completely transformed, and the old order and scene were almost completely destroyed. A considerable part of Therefore, the obsession of the dead or the surviving people with the concept of "order" merged with a certain disease in the old world (extreme personality disorder?), But there was no suitable carrier, so they had to exist on the steel ruins of the present world. After one era, the "Constitution" was born. [Constitution] is an extremely special disease that was born on the ruins of the present world. It looks like a wooden-hulled three-masted sailing frigate from the Age of Discovery. It was supposed to spend its old age in a museum and was affected by the disease and mutated into a disease. However, it did not mutate towards the essential concept of [battleship], but focused on [order]. Therefore, the Constitution has only one goal: to find a regulation that can restore the pre-disease order and fully comply with the interpretation of the concept of [order] from various angles. Due to the particularity of its birth and the mystery of the disease, the "Constitution" will recruit special diseases from all over the country to become "crew members" and transform their ultimate purpose into its own. (Constitution is a thick gold frame in terms of personality) The [crew] of the Constitution are essentially part of the Constitution. Various diseases will not eliminate their own characteristics when assimilated, but will build new values ​​​​based on the ultimate goal of the Constitution. Among them, the outstanding ones who have made significant contributions to the ultimate goal will be awarded [positions] by the Constitution. The highest-ranking [Captain] can even control the Constitution in turn (but in fact he is already in the shape of the Constitution). Captain: [Captain Ironsides], looks like a metal object that conforms to keyword descriptions such as [safety], [protection], and [firepower]. It has a huge metal body. The arms extending from both sides are equipped with various weapons (including but not limited to three-barrel miniguns and three-shot rocket launchers). The lower body is composed of a pair of mirror-image McClam wheels, which has extremely high mobility). The Ironclad Captain possesses excellent intelligence, and his understanding of order (the doctrine of firepower superiority) is the most influential plan on the Constitution. Therefore, he was rewarded by the Constitution and promoted to [Captain], responsible for everything on the ship. It was originally the latest war machine in the world before the disease. It has remained intact after a total of 1,768 wars and made indelible contributions to the victory of the war. After the disease attack, it was infected with [war]-related diseases. After the birth of the Constitution, it was recruited because it single-handedly eliminated 7 extremely chaotic and evil original diseases, and agreed to all the requirements of the Constitution with its complete consent. Personality: Thick gold frame, the frame is composed of various thermal weapons, the whole is axially symmetrical, and is filled with dark blue liquid. (There are also first mates, navigators, and bosuns. I won't write about it. I don't have enough imagination. XD) The Constitution "sails" in the gray area, or between the five continents, or you can see her somewhere in the old world. The Constitution will dock somewhere from time to time to replenish the crew or assess the surrounding environment, and implement one of the "orders" finalized on the Constitution. ps: No one knows how the USS Constitution moves, ever. . .

I'm more curious, are there no plots in other continents? At first, I thought I would go to other continents to explore, but now I have completed the route. I have met several plague lords in the old world, and I have never encountered humans from other continents. Are they all dead? 😰 I feel that even after the new world is fully infected, there will not be any plots in other continents.

Regarding epidemics, do you feel that in the later stages of the epidemic, the world suddenly became less cruel and more tender? But to put it bluntly, the epidemic has almost killed the human world... The so-called gentleman, the final result is to betray the gentleman's character and become a part of the epidemic. He became a part of the disease. It feels a little uncomfortable to think back. Although according to the world view, there is no other way to go. It can be said that the epidemic world colonized and assimilated the human world, and humans became extremely willing to be such honorary citizens (in a few years, there will be no pure human beings at all, but become part of the disease). Some particularly interesting settings For example, the Black Domain (the prophecy sets the rules and allows humans to act according to them. It is a bit like a rules game. I have only tried it briefly. After entering the world of epidemics, I feel that I don't mention it much anymore:) There are also cemeteries and secret medicines (I don't mention them much in the middle and late stages) If I am a second creation, everyone will have fun (in fact, I am more interested in organizing doctors, making secret medicines, and maintaining the character of a gentleman (by the way, William is acting, and the character of a gentleman has never been lost, in the circus Is it a gentleman's practice to scare people to death by collecting groups? :), Interested in eradicating epidemics) You can even cooperate with epidemics (leather factories can be interpreted as probiotics or harmless diseases that can coexist with the human body) Furthermore, there is another point that I don't find very satisfying. Death Plague, kill that dean. The dean was also transformed into Death Plague... And was brainwashed because of it (it can be said that his personality was rewashed, and he sided with the epidemic and was enslaved). What was the protagonist's statement probably (to the effect that he thought it was good?) Then why didn't you get killed by Death Plague? It doesn't seem to be a big deal? And... Yi Chen's fucking perverts. Following Yi Chen, I feel a little washed out (somewhat, uh, how can I say it's not comfortable) I've mentioned the heroine issue before, so I won't talk about it The author has a very good imagination and ideas, a very novel world view and a mature and pretty good writing style

It's a book worth reading. The characters are a bit stiff at the beginning, but become very vivid later on. The author should have improved it. The writing style is great and the writing is wonderful. It's a bit sadistic. The more I look at it, the more I feel that no one can beat the pig's feet. It can't defeat teammates, friends, teachers, or even single enemies. Pets can defeat their owners. I have a bit of ability in everything, but I'm not very strong, so those who like to read cool articles should be careful.

Tmd is beautiful, the collision of all kinds of chaos is very interesting. As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep following it. Also, can there be more chapters?

It's great to have raised thirty-five chapters

Dark clouds covered the sky over the entire town of Easton, and except for a ray of light from a kerosene lamp, there was no light in the cemetery. Perhaps it was because it had just rained, but William Behrens almost fell down before he could enter Cemetery No. 4, Which was to be patrolled and inspected this time. "This is not a good sign." William Behrens sighed with self-pity. Since bidding farewell to Dean Fran at the orphanage, he has come to this strange town to serve as a gravekeeper. At the beginning, he thought the work here was quite easy. He only patrolled and inspected various cemeteries according to the contents in the employee handbook every day, and dealt with some non-compliant cemeteries. But slowly, he discovered that there were many very strange places in this cemetery. For example, there are often strange sounds coming from the cemetery, which seem to be chatting with him, and seem to be reminding him of something. For example, if he fails to follow the rules in the employee handbook, he will always suffer some terrible disasters. For him, who often made mistakes in the orphanage, it is really difficult to be perfect. He is really afraid that he will die here one day. "When inspecting Cemetery No. 4, You need to ensure that the number and order of tombstones are consistent with the original." This is what the employee handbook says about Cemetery No. 4. However, in the past, there were never any big problems with Cemetery No. 4. Just when William Behrens thought he could go directly to the next cemetery, he was surprised to find that there was an extra tomb in Cemetery No. 4. "How is this possible?" Easton is a very deserted town. Except for the administrator who communicates by phone, he really hasn't seen anyone wandering around here. Not to mention, there is one more tomb. "According to the manual, the excess tombstones must be completely bulldozed, and the corpses inside need to be moved to Cemetery No. 7." After working here for a while, William Behrens is already familiar with the rules in the employee handbook. Just as he was about to take the shovel and take action, he was surprised to find something strange underneath the extra tombstone. Under the weak light of the kerosene lamp, he could vaguely see a faint green light on the rattan near the tombstone, slowly moving deeper. "What is this?" He didn't believe that any fireflies would be interested in the tombstone. Now I'm afraid there is only one explanation for this situation. There may be some terrible creature under the tombstone. As for this green light, he did not react at first, but when William Behrens noticed that the plants that had exhausted the green light seemed to have withered automatically, he realized that perhaps the creature inside was sucking the life out of the surroundings. Run? A thought flashed through his mind, but he still shook his head. Not to mention not completing the rules in the employee handbook, he may die. Even this monster may not let him go tonight. The whole cemetery is full of withered vines, and maybe together they are not as vigorous as a living person like myself. "Give it a try, and the bicycle will turn into a motorcycle." William Behrens carefully picked up the shovel he placed on the cart, and then slowly walked towards the unnecessary tombstone. That monster was really ruthless in absorbing life. After a while, he could already smell the smell of rotting plants. Apparently dead. However, this incident suppressed the courage he had finally raised. "Even if I don't complete the rules of the employee handbook, I can still live for a few more hours, right? But if it really goes down like this, if I get entangled with this monster, I might be gone in a few breaths." William Behrens thought carefully and took a step back. He didn't even care about the cart next to him, he just wanted to escape from this slightly dangerous cemetery as soon as possible. "If you can't escape, fight it hard." If he encountered this kind of weird sound normally, William Behrens would definitely be startled. But now that his life is in danger, he has long been unable to care about it. "This..." Before William Behrens could take a step out of Cemetery No. 4, Several very strong roots poked out from the bottom of the tombstone and launched an attack directly in his direction. "Dean Fran, if I could do it again, I would definitely listen to you and learn the real skills, instead of deserting when you are giving us lectures, or even often making you angry." Perhaps realizing that tonight was really doomed, William Behrens simply told all the guilt he felt towards Dean Fran. He has never seen his parents since he was a child. He was always brought up by Director Fran of the orphanage. Dean Fran has always treated him well. Although he often made him angry by being naughty when he was a child, he never blamed himself. Even when William Behrens first became the tombkeeper of this cemetery, he often gave him some food and drink for fear that he would be hungry. "Huh?" Just when William Behrens thought his life would end, those roots stopped in front of his kerosene lamp. It seems that there is no next step. "Is it afraid of fire?" He wondered: "If that's the case, is there any chance to fill in this redundant tombstone tonight?" He raised the kerosene lamp and walked slowly inside again. At first, those roots could not be avoided, but when he got very close to the tombstone, those roots seemed to have the courage out of thin air and blocked the kerosene lamp. "Isn't it still possible?" William Behrens subconsciously took two steps back. He didn't think that the light of the kerosene lamp could burn out these strange roots. If these roots attacked him desperately, he might really have to explain it here. But if you retreat directly and leave Cemetery No. 4, According to the employee handbook, you will encounter disaster, and too many disasters may cause death. He seems to have been trapped in an infinite loop. "Dean Fran, if you are by my side, you must know what to do in this situation? William also wants to be reckless, but if the result is that the vitality of the body is sucked away by these weird roots and he dies in pain, why not choose a way to die for myself?" "Perhaps, this is also a kind of relief?" William Behrens smiled bitterly, and finally slowly retreated from Cemetery No. 4. However, he did not choose to go to the next cemetery. Instead, he returned to the safe house where he worked. Just now, he had figured it out. For such a coward who is afraid of life and death every day, always thinking about how to avoid violating the rules of the work manual too much and causing disaster or death, it is better to just commit suicide directly. No wonder when he first joined the company, the "administrator" told him that their job had zero turnover rate. All those who wanted to leave their jobs died in the cemetery? "Should I have a good meal before I die?" As an ultimate foodie, William Behrens reluctantly backed away as soon as his hand touched the poison he had prepared. It would be a pity if you can't have a full meal before you die. Dean Fran has said before that if he is about to die, he must have whatever he wants to eat, and he must not take advantage of his stomach. Now William Behrens thinks so too. He carefully looked at the wooden table in his room, and found that there were only a few vegetable leaves left, which was too little even for stir-frying. Fortunately, there is a small bag of millet on the bedside. Mixed with these pieces of green vegetables, it is barely edible. "It's a pity that I don't have time to buy some meat, otherwise I could really be luxurious tonight." William Behrens simply cooked the food in front of him, then sat on the bedside to taste it. He could swear that he had never eaten such delicious millet porridge in his life. "It's a pity that the administrator has to find new employees." After eating the millet porridge, he didn't hesitate and drank the bottle of poison in one gulp. But there was still some time before the attack, so he still found a piece of paper from the bedside. By the light of the kerosene lamp, I actually wrote a suicide note in style. "I'm going to die, I will definitely die." "..." After writing his suicide note, he went straight to the wooden coffin he had prepared beside the bed. Ever since the second day of working here, when he encountered those very strange disasters, he knew that one day he would die in his job as a "gravekeeper". But, even though he had expected to buy the wooden coffin, he never thought that he didn't even have a few head-on fights with the monster, but ran back and committed suicide? Cowardly? But he seems to have always been such a cowardly person. He opened the lid of the wooden coffin, and the furnishings inside seemed simple. But he didn't care at the moment. He took the suicide note he had just written, lay down directly in it, and quietly waited for death to come. He never thought that one day in the future, "he" would leave this wooden coffin and create a new world in these cemeteries. Now, the only thing he knows is that he is finally freed from the so-called rules in this cemetery. Although, he paid for it even with his life. ... A scorching light flashed over the cemetery. In the safe house, the eyes of the corpse that was supposed to be dead actually opened again. Although, rather than the name William Behrens, perhaps it is more appropriate to call him Yi Chen now. "He" is resurrected, but he is not the same person.

At night, it rained continuously. The city streets are filled with a damp smell. The figure of William Behrens is looming under the dim street lights. He was wearing an ancient gentleman's costume and holding a beautifully carved cane. The rain stagnated around him, and the light was swallowed up by his shadow. The sound of footsteps was particularly clear in the silent night. William Behrens almost walked through the entire city and walked to an abandoned church. The exterior wall of the building is cracked, and although the gate is still standing, it has long lost its former dignity. The moonlight shines through the clouds and rain and shines on the ruins of the church. This church has been forgotten in a corner. No. There is not a single person in the whole city! William Behrens waved his cane lightly, and a gust of wind blew by, scattering the moonlight and sweeping away the rain. Pushing open the door, a stream of old air poured into William's nose, old and cold. Walking inside, every step William took seemed to expand the darkness around him. The altar that was once dedicated to the gods is now empty. Broken stone bricks and broken pillars are scattered on the ground, and moss has grown between the stone pillars. "The abandoned place is really an ideal place." William whispered to himself. The faded murals struggle feebly, twist and scream on the pale walls, like dead memories. The ancient patterns and symbols are almost unrecognizable, leaving only a vague shadow. A sarcastic smile appeared on the corner of William's mouth: "Time is merciless, no matter how glorious it once was, it will eventually become ruins." Enter the depths of the church, William came to a door. The gate is solemn and simple, and the carvings and patterns on it solidify the years. The door was locked firmly, and the slightest breath seeping out from the crack in the door made people shudder. But William Behrens was not affected at all. Oh. Aren't there just a few people peeking behind the door. "Behind this door, it's really lively." William reached out and touched the carving on the door, and something passed through his fingertips, an ancient atmosphere that remained in the depths of time. Slowly, he pressed the door handle. A dull creaking sound sounded like a ghost's whisper. The door slowly opened, revealing a secret room inside. William can see, people inviting him to step into the darkness. "Silence." People stopped making noise. "You can go home." People nodded and thanked them, and then slowly disappeared in place. The secret room was filled with dampness and dead silence. "Well, it stinks." William covered his nose and waved his crutch. When the wind blows, the smell is gone. William snapped his fingers, and the candles scattered around lit up. The faint light illuminated the ancient magical artifacts placed around the secret room. The magical instruments are placed in a messy manner. "The past glory is all the prologue." William secretly said silently. Under the dim candlelight, his eyes turned to the ancient stone box in the middle of the secret room. William felt a force calling him, as if he had a blood connection. He approached the stone box step by step. His fingers touched the lid lightly, and the ancient material made a faint sound between his fingertips. William smiled slightly and opened the stone box without hesitation. The stone box opened, and a necklace caught William's eyes. The necklace is made of jet-black dark gold, with a deep black gemstone inlaid on the surface, known as the "Shadow Stone". This gem is as black as night, as if it is condensed from darkness itself, and is believed to host the dark energy of the abyss of hell. The entire necklace seems like a chain of darkness rising from the abyss of hell, releasing a suffocating evil aura. Suddenly. William Behrens's gaze penetrated all the obstacles and saw a person. That was a girl of eight or nine years old. She was not one of the people who made a noise in the secret room before. She is not in the secret room. She is not in the church. Very suddenly, the girl's figure appeared in the school outside Badiao Street. Alone, tearing at one's own face gracefully, ladylikely, smilingly, unhurriedly. William scratched his head and grinned. Interesting, it finally appeared. A good show is about to begin. The next moment. His eyes shone with joy, and then became fanatical, as if he was deeply attracted by the power in the necklace. William stretched out his hand to the necklace, and a gloomy aura enveloped the entire secret room. He gently picked up the necklace, and strange power poured into his fingertips. His fingers touched the ancient necklace. "The power of darkness is so wonderful!" William laughed wildly, his tone revealing a deep intoxication, as if he was about to merge with the darkness. There was just a hint of pretense in his tone, as if he was performing. He put on the jet black necklace. The candlelight in the secret room began to whisper, and suddenly dimmed. The figure of William Behrens was twisted and ferocious, and was finally completely swallowed by the darkness. Midnight. William walked out of the abandoned church and saw the crowded streets. Looking at the church again, it had a completely new look, regaining the solemnity of yesterday. He smiled slightly and began to walk through the city. The streets are bustling with people walking among the vendors' stalls, choosing all kinds of weird products. The streets and alleys are filled with strange stalls, and colorful lanterns sway in the breeze. The lights flicker. The vendors hung various decorations, and the various foods in front of the stalls exuded attractive aromas, arousing the appetite of passers-by. People had festive smiles on their faces, holding lanterns and candlesticks in their hands, communicating enthusiastically. There were shouts and shouts, and all kinds of strange products were dazzling. People stopped and gathered on the streets to watch various small performances Laughter and blessings came from time to time in the city, as if they had forgotten the troubles of life and immersed themselves in the carnival. But... Every time William passes by a place, a dark atmosphere will quietly fill the air. Strange humming sounds came from the streets, and mysterious symbols appeared on the walls. And then. The lights dimmed around him, and the city became eerily silent. His steps are light and confident, as if he were a gentle nobleman, his manners noble and decent. The east is white and the sky is getting brighter. William Behrens visited almost the entire city and entered the "Liutiaohe Street Elementary School". The school gate is open, seeming to welcome all curious visitors. He walked across the lawn, and the fresh air filled the entire campus. In the middle of this quiet campus, William saw the eight or nine-year-old girl. She stood there, wearing a white dress, and a soft light shone on her body. The girl's face is innocent and pure, her eyes are clear and bright, and her long hair is fluttering in the wind. Completely uninfluenced by William Behrens. She smiled slightly, like spring flowers swaying gently in the breeze. Standing in the playground, the girl was peaceful and peaceful, as if she was an angel descending into the world. If you can ignore her behavior... She is tearing her face apart. William stopped and stared at the angelic girl intently. He felt deeply strange. In a city with no people, suddenly it is full of life, even crowded. The place where he walked was deserted and quiet again. But in the elementary school at the end, the girl named Arya was completely unaffected by him. Of course, this girl is also the one he saw in the secret room earlier. Interesting. How interesting. "Oh, it's so magical! It's so beautiful! Girl, why are you here alone?" William exclaimed exaggeratedly. When the girl saw William coming, she nodded slightly. She stepped forward, suddenly showed a look of surprise, and said in a sweet voice: "Hello, Mr. Behrens, my name is Arya!" Arya smiled from the bottom of her heart. Her laughter seems to have a healing magic, soft and beautiful. "Mr. Behrens, welcome to my school. There are many interesting places on campus. Do you want to check them out?" Arya exudes kindness and kindness. "Oh, I just passed by by chance. What are you doing here?" William did not answer her words and asked with a smile. The girl looked at William affectionately, with a hint of cunning in her eyes: "I'm playing house!" As she said that, she showed William the piece of flesh she had just torn off. There are still blood streaks in the meat, red and white, flowing out in colorful patterns. "I'm making my dad!" "Your dad?" William frowned, confused. This is really a bit weird. To take a step back, even if the weird factors are eliminated. What does this flesh have to do with Laoshizi's father! ? "Yes, let's play house! We need daddy, mommy, and myself." Arya piled the piece of bloody flesh under a huge flower and mixed it with a large circle of skin and flesh around it, and explained, "I am fertilizing daddy! I planted a daddy yesterday, and a new daddy will grow today!" "Is this your father?" William asked, "Did your 'father' grow?" Arya's eyes flashed brightly, and she said with a cute expression: "Yes, my father, mother, and myself are all grown!" She stretched out her hand and pointed to two smaller flowers next to her. "This is mom! This is me! It's about to bear fruit!" William was more interested in the girl. He nodded and smiled kindly: "Kid, do you need any help?" Arya shook her head, losing a lot of red She refused in a sweet voice: "No! The teacher said, do your own thing! You can't develop the bad habit of relying on others!" "Okay, that's too much trouble, I'm going out of town." William shrugged and turned around and left without hesitation. One step, two steps, three steps, four steps, five steps... "Mr. Behrens! Please wait a moment!" Arya stamped her foot and called to William, the kindness and cuteness in her voice lost a bit, "It's been a long time since we've been in school. Here you are, you are the first guest in the school in the past twenty-three years. Don't you know that there are many secrets hidden here?" William chuckled, feeling the urgency in the girl's tone. However, he deliberately concealed his observation and pretended to be ignorant: "Really? It's interesting. However, this school doesn't seem to have anything special." The girl blinked and the corners of her mouth turned up slightly: "Mr. Behrens, I have always believed that , some things cannot be taken at face value. The secrets on campus are very deep. " "Well, I am always curious about unknown things. It is a wonderful fate to meet you here." This time William did not refuse Arya's proposal. After hearing this, Arya smiled slightly and gently led William to wander around Liutiaohe Street Primary School, introducing every corner. The campus is peaceful, as if frozen in time. William walked by, but nothing changed. The old concert hall, green lawns, and quiet teaching buildings are all immersed in the tranquility of time. While walking, they came to an ancient library. The girl gently pushed open the door, and a faint scent of ink came to her face. The girl led William through the bookshelves. The bookshelves are filled with all kinds of books, as well as some dusty scrolls and ancient manuscripts. Arya stopped and took down a book from the bookshelf. The cover glowed with black light. She said softly: "This book records that event in this city. Mr. Behrens, are you interested in this?" William reached out and opened the old book and browsed page by page. "Twenty-three years ago, nuclear waste exploded." He whispered to himself. "People turned into gas in an instant, and were hit by the shock wave on the ground, walls, seats, stairs... Forming carbon shadows." He continued to read books to learn about the incident that year. The book describes the impact of nuclear waste leaks and explosions. The city has become dead and lifeless. "How did the nuclear waste explode when it was well stored?" William continued to flip through the book. "Hee hee, I gave Uncle Zhang a necklace." Arya suddenly interrupted William's flipping of the book, narrowed his eyes, and said slyly, "They killed my father, killed my mother, and they want to keep lying to me." William Behrens stopped flipping through the book and looked at Arya curiously. "You mean, this necklace was the cause of the nuclear leak and explosion?" He took off the necklace from his neck. "Yes." Arya smiled. "At that time, my father and mother stopped doing scientific research and became teachers in this school after retirement. They have been opposing the storage of nuclear waste in this city. But some people above and However, the company tried every means to suppress their voices, even killing them and making it look like suicide. "I gave this necklace to Uncle Zhang, the director of the nuclear power plant. He also worked hard to get revenge on my father. "Then, hee hee, they went crazy! "Bang! "Everyone in the city has disappeared, leaving me alone. In this way, they can no longer put pressure on my father and mother! The father and mother I planted belong to only me!" Does this necklace have the effect of making people crazy? Although Arya concealed it well, she had already been sealed as a demon. William Behrens looked at Arya intently, holding the black necklace tightly in his hand. "Is this the secret in the school? These alone are not enough to see." "Yes, yes, Mr. Behrens, please come with me." Arya exited the library happily. It can be seen that no one has been here for so many years, and she is very happy to have someone listen to her share her secrets. The two walked to the gymnasium. Open the door. The entire basketball court was filled with men and women. "Mr. Behrens, look, they are all my parents! "Since that incident, not one of them has been missing! "They're all here! "No one can take them away anymore! "Even one!" Arya looked at William eagerly, "Mr. Behrens, can you be my father?" The girl's eyes showed desire. "Okay, I promise you, as long as you are happy." William Behrens knew the cause and effect of the matter, smiled like a gentleman, and agreed to Arya's request. "Let's go back to the playground." Arya's voice was gentle and sweet, as if everything was under her control. After passing through the flower bed filled with fragrance of flowers and walking along the quiet path, the two of them walked back to the playground. Arya also brought a shovel from the flower bed. "Welcome home, Dad." Arya dropped the piece of meat in her hand, and bright red blood dripped on the lawn. "Mr. Behrens, Dad, you are the best dad! As he spoke, Arya dug a hole in the lawn. The shovel cut across the lawn and sank into the ground. Every time Arya dug seemed to be done carefully The process of digging the hole was meticulous and focused, after all, she wanted to create a comfortable home for her father. When the hole was dug, Arya carefully invited William Behrens into the hole, and then used gentle movements to lift his father. Then, Arya used her hands to gently cover the soil around her father, filling it up layer by layer, finally wrapping her father up warm and safe. After his father was carefully placed, Arya picked up the pieces of meat and piled them up. Above Dad. …… …… The scene changes. A light song sounds on the stage: "In the small garden, dig and dig, plant little me, and bloom little flowers. "In a very big garden, dig and dig and dig, and a very big mother will grow, and very big flowers will bloom. "In a very large garden, dig and dig, and a very big father will bloom, and very big flowers will bloom. "

I'm an old book friend. From chasing ghosts to the end, the setting of eating ghosts in the later stage is a small flaw in a novice's writing. It does not affect the epic scenes of cross-border battles and the outstanding characters in the later stages. The settings of the God of Death and Eternal Resistance + Plants correspond to the two personalities of Yu Jing. Don't worry about the inconsistency between the title and the content of the book. In the article + protagonist halo link, the strength of the president and the so-called invader in the later stage is just a mess, not as good as the plot of the protagonist facing off against Goodman; at the end... Not to mention that the title and content of the book are not consistent, the disease design is very innovative, but not outstanding. I knew something bad was going to happen when the soul was separated in the middle 😁. Sure enough, neither of the two protagonists was well written, and their combat power increased sharply. I know you are in a hurry, but can you stop being anxious first? The progress of the update is even more unflattering. The update of the big chapter will be stopped for one day, and one chapter will be updated on Sunday... Then it is watery and unfinished. My friend, from the perspective of consumers, there is really a problem with your attitude. The writing is okay, the outline (I suspect it is not) is really bad, the creation is innovative, and the attitude is really good! No matter how exquisitely packaged shit is, it can't escape its essence. I will still read your new book to see when I can extinguish my brother's passion for you with shit~

I drew it as I imagined (there may be a big difference

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After William and Yi Chen separated, the writing became more and more weird. The disadvantages of the two protagonists are too obvious. You can't let a reader take on two different roles, not to mention that the interpersonal relationships are interconnected but completely different. William's transformation should not be too abrupt. Even his pursuit of evil after becoming the master of the epidemic is too abrupt (or the writing is a bit crazy. Although it is understandable, it is a sick world, but it is really inappropriate for you to write the protagonist's brain badly) From the beginning to the end, William has always been a gentleman. Even if you pretend to be evil, you still have to consider the reader's acceptance, okay? I can only say that you should drive high and go low.

The early stage was really, really interesting. The setting and writing were superb. I have always liked Ah Fei's writing style. It is recommended to stop your losses as soon as you see the content of other worlds. Once the big world comes out, the protagonists are divided. The more you watch, the more tired you become. It is not as interesting as the novel suspense at the beginning. 😒 But I really recommend watching it. It's not a loss at all if you just watch the front part. 👍

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