Cthulhu Mythos Card Master

Shennong is coming. I have read more than forty chapters so far I can only say that it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. The Cthulhu theme plus card making is a good theme, but the author is not strong enough in writing and has many plot bugs. It can be understood as a children's play version of Invincible. At the beginning, Dagon was summoned to kill two cultists, ransacked the sect's card room, and even touched someone's altar to change the sacrificial pattern. Someone from behind the sect came to jail and captured the protagonist to sacrifice as if nothing was wrong. It is true that except for the protagonist, everyone else is a fool. Then there is the combination of a good gay friend and a childhood sweetheart. One gay friend is responsible for calling the boss Liuliu Liu, and the childhood sweetheart is responsible for sending some candies and gifts. From time to time, the protagonist will be teased a few times, which makes people very lively. Author, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. Forcibly adding them will only poison people away. The combat power has not yet reached the late stage, and it has begun to collapse. When the investigator came to save the protagonist at the beginning, he said he saw orange-quality cards fighting, and then the protagonist appeared and purple Dagon killed the Quartet Group of Destruction Cult. I really thought. There is also a follow-up spy plot, in which a spy comes to the protagonist to be his younger brother. The protagonist admits that he is a spy when he cheats. Can you be smart and just become a spy? What a sewer scumbag. Generally speaking, in terms of the plot, the protagonist is like a monkey who suddenly gained great power, hitting this thing with a hammer and this club as he pleases. The overall plot is unclear and has no connection. The people around him are laughing and joking throughout the whole process, and it also incorporates many bad and hot memes on the Internet. It is suitable for bored bookworms to give it a try, but for old bookworms, it is a waste of time to look at stuff.

As a Crusu culture, it is strongly recommended to sacrifice the heroine.

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Give the cult some brain training From a world view 1. Lack of certain development It can be seen that the author should have his own set of ideas about the worldview. However, the article is limited to the perspective of the protagonist, and we feel that it is just a cool article that pretends to be cool. There is a lack of in-depth exploration of the worldview, such as whether the cards will not disappear after the death of the card maker. If they do not disappear, it can actually not only be limited to the struggle between cults and associations, but also describe the personal stories of some cards. From the article, we can see that cards have self-awareness. They should also have their own loves, hates, and sorrows, and have their own stories, instead of just being attached to the card maker. And in a world where information can be converted into reality, will there be more philosophical questions? Like the origin of man? The principle of card making? How does society develop? These can all be discussed and can create many forces that are both good and evil. They have their own pursuits, their own history and their own unique system (derived from the pursuit and thinking of philosophy). Since we already want to tell the story of Cthulhu, the cards do not need to be limited to one entity, but can be a concept and an addition. For example, in the next period of time, if you do not use the method of reasoning, you will not be able to have any impact on others. There is a lack of horizontal exploration of the worldview. At the current place where the article is written, I can only see that in such a small city, whether it is the secret realm or the way the cult operates and where it lives, there is a lack of explanation for the local strength of the main world or the external forces in the secret realm. Why are cultists so normal (humanoid)? Are the standards for creating cards for secret realm forces different? Are there more forms of power (such as divine blessing, genetic modification)? What is their origin (the offspring of cards and humans are born with extraordinary abilities; powerful secret realms are not affected by the rules of the main world to a certain extent, and there are other power systems such as the system, such as the spirit of speech; compared with the expansion of cards that card makers need, can other systems produce differentiation, restraint, and unique play styles)? After the secret realm was connected to the main world, what was the evolution of the racial history in it? These can all be expanded upon. 2． Limitations of the Protagonist's Identity If the author just wants to make some bad money and write some non-nutritious things. As for the identity of the protagonist, I have nothing to say. But if the author wants to write better, the protagonist must break away from the framework of these colleges and go to a broader map and world. [Open layout] First, you can refer to the way of writing road stories, such as the latest plot. The cult shouldn't be defenseless against an orange legendary item, at least given the quality of the item, this defense is almost non-existent. The protagonist can use the protagonist's greed to deliberately let the materials be stolen by the protagonist due to the cult's trap on the materials, such as noticing the protagonist's potential, thereby capturing the protagonist. And some people (such as a certain insider) thoroughly see the protagonist's potential and even the protagonist's identity as a time traveler, and then make up their minds to invest in the protagonist, creating opportunities for the protagonist and the deep diver race at some cost (such as life, such as faith, such as soul), and using reverse summoning to rescue the protagonist from trouble. However, under the full interference of the cult, he fell into the secret realm and lost contact. The secret realm here can be further away from the main world, and it also helps the protagonist to develop more plots and have more stories to write. The secret realm here can be a complete world, or it can be seen as a secret realm. In fact, it is a certain timeline in the past and future, or it can be another possibility of a parallel universe. Although the identity of the protagonist is special, the identity of the time traveler can be written about more people. For example, in a certain parallel universe, the traveler is not the protagonist but someone else (like Shen Qianqian). And don't suppress the protagonist's combat power, but come up with some more clever ways to fight the protagonist, such as the inference mentioned above, there are or only attacks of a certain color are effective, and you can even write strange stories about rules (but pay attention to the scale). The author is basically different from the great writers in all aspects, so he should pay more attention to the differentiated track and write the article as an imaginative article instead of an assembly line. 3． Problems with the narrative method The narrative is too straightforward, both from a space and time perspective. In such a worldview, there should be more ideological puzzles, logical puzzles, space puzzles, time puzzles, and causal puzzles. These things should turn the world into almost a mess, but also an orderly one. The influence of past card makers cannot be seen at all in the article. Whether it is the cards left behind (What is a human being? The definition of human rights? A multi-racial federation?) Or the impact on the world (folk festivals? Remains of beliefs? Stereotypes? System inheritance? Ideological crisis? Revolutionary innovation?). The increase in combat power is also too rapid. I can understand that the author hopes that the old days will appear as soon as possible. This should not be at the expense of the future of the article. The book in the latest chapter can be used to use some spells to make the incarnation of the old days come temporarily. On the bright line, the main goal of the protagonist's struggle is to become stronger, which lacks versatility and three-dimensionality. The supporting characters are also like standard templates, with no new ideas. They only appear as accompaniment to the protagonist, which makes them seem thin and weak. The future is even more unclear. I can't understand what the protagonist is going to do? I don't understand what the Card Creators Association is doing? I don't understand what the cult is doing? (What happens after the evil gods descend? What is their core idea?) I can't even understand what the author is trying to do? On the dark line, there is little development. The progress is slow (the secret realm is really a very useful setting, and the main world is difficult to navigate, so go to other secret realms and other worlds to develop). There are few hidden lines, and it is basically incomparable with the main line, and it does not reflect the dangers and undercurrents of this world at all. 4． Where is the character's IQ? Can the author give those cults some brains? Also give other characters some brains. This is what I dislike the most about this article. Almost all the characters, including the protagonist, seem to go out without any brains, do things without thinking, act impulsively, and do things without a plan. All manifestations are limited to simple logical thinking judgments and deductions, which makes people feel that the IQ of this world is declining. You can say that cultists rely on faith to think and have an external brain; you can also say that the association has a conspiracy and hide it in the dark; you can even say that the protagonist has not grown up yet and is not well thought out. But if you don't come up with some brainy organizations, organizations that rely on thinking to create cards (such as an organization that takes a certain philosophical concept as the ultimate secret; an organization that takes solving puzzles as its ultimate pursuit ; an organization that explores the truth, investigates things to learn, and explores the principles of everything) I really have to suspect that you have no brain. Summary: The book has many problems, but the subject matter can be described very well, and the author's attitude towards readers who do not understand the Cthulhu mythology is still acceptable. The indescribable feeling does not necessarily affect the protagonist. It can be the opinions of people who do not know the protagonist about him and his cards. The leader of the Card Creators Association can be the protagonist himself from the future or even the past. I'm not sure whether the author has written an outline, but I hope the author can study the outline carefully and let the article have ups and downs, unexpected things, sadness and happiness, thinking and doubts. Let the story have a past and a future, an unpredictable fate, the vastness of the universe, and fireworks on earth. 🤝

I just used the skin of the gram series, and did not write about the indescribable fear.

Shoggoth Girl

To be honest, I can't believe that this book has the nerve to call itself the "Encyclopedia of Cthulhu" in the introduction. Unfortunately, the Ke type and the Cthulhu element are different. When I saw that the protagonist directly made a "Big Qiu" and could directly summon it to drive, I knew that putting the word "Ke type" in the title was basically a gimmick. Wouldn't this be a refreshing novel for the invincible Xiaobai?

[Tweet] This is a story in which the protagonist travels through the world of card making to make cards using the Cthulhu Mythos, and then embarks on a coquettish trick of pretending to reduce dimensionality and attack. Watching the protagonist create a god, people of the Cthulhu genre can finally have fun. I hope you who love the Cthulhu Mythos can enjoy the fantasy world provided by the author. [Summary] The protagonist was captured by the cult at the beginning and imprisoned in a water prison to be sacrificed. Li Ming, who was still a trainee student, used simple materials to create a purple-quality "Dagon". By the way, he drew a symbol of Dagon's Secret Order on the altar. As a result, when the evil god came, he was led astray and summoned Dagon. From then on, the protagonist went on an unstoppable journey. Story Book title: "The Restraint Card Maker" Author: I still eat instant noodles today (newcomer) Status: Serialization (signed) Recommendation index: ❤❤❤❤🤍 [Keywords] Cthulhu/Card Making/Evil God Secret Cult/Easy and refreshing article/Beast Taming/Encyclopedia [Highlights] The explanation of the Cthulhu myth is relatively comprehensive, retaining the original flavor to a large extent, and can be used as a popular science for newbies Setting ★★★★☆Cthulhu + card making, a great combination Plot ★★★☆☆The connection is smooth and a bit interesting Writing ★★★☆☆Novice, funny, complaining Characters ★★✰☆☆Clear personality, each with its own characteristics, suspected to have a female protagonist, even too few, currently not sure (I personally don't like female protagonists, especially in the C-type world) [Prediction] The protagonist can be regarded as the creator of the Cthulhu Myth in this world (Vision A (General), others will regard it as a prophet of some mysterious sect to worship the ancestor. It should not fall over in the end... After all, how can you be sure that this is true, or am I just teasing you. Although it is still a bit raw, as a newcomer, his plot and writing style are relatively good. Although there is still a gap compared with the great masters, it is enough for a refreshing article. I hope it will get better and better as I write, and I am super looking forward to it. I thought of this card when I saw the title (˘ ³˘)❤ {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

This opening... Can Dagon be created with just that kind of rubbish? Then a one-star card can kill others in their lair?

Nice idea, but the characters and dialogue are so stupid