Immortal Martial Arts: Beginning as the Great Sui’s God of War

Isn't this the name and introduction? This kind of article has been around for a long time, but there is a good one, that is "Xianwu Da Sui", and then I wrote a small 2 million words, and then stopped updating, so you should be imitating that

I feel that what you wrote is very strange, especially the part about Murong Fu. Murong Fu is no longer confident, that is, he is an idiot and mentally retarded. I am very surprised why his brain is not too fragmented at all.

This is?

Pinduoduo is not as good as Zhutian Goudao

The writing was okay, but it was too watery. It reminded me of the feeling of reading novels ten years ago. At that time, there was no pressure and everything was written in large strokes.

I haven't read this book, but the problem is that the military god Yang Su was there in the Sui Dynasty. Why does the author think that the protagonist you wrote can beat Yang Su? You must know the function of Yang Sujun and the entire Li Er military group to attack

There were a lot of typos, and the author felt uncomfortable seeing that he had to correct the last ones.

It turns out that it started from Xianwu Da Sui Dynasty, and it was written by you, but it was unfinished at the end.

Come on 🙂🙂😍😍😍

Without a map, this makes it very difficult for us. It feels like the author is writing all over the place.