House of Ninja World Icebreaker

Chizhishachen had just completed the layout and was about to harvest the fruits, and then an inexplicable eunuch appeared! I thought something was wrong with you, but I hurriedly came over to open a new book, and it turned out that I am still a Naruto fan! Still Naruto, still Naruto... How can this setting compare to Red Sand Dust? If you insist on cutting off the good stuff, where will it come from? This is outrageous. Open the door to outrageous people! 🤫

The author should not be a full-time author, right? Otherwise, what's the point of living without making money? It's weird to write more and more stream-of-consciousness if you don't have enough resources. . . The previous style of Red Sand Dust is pretty good, a normal hot-blooded manga and light novel. . . I don't know why it feels so long-winded as I write. . .

The writing is too complicated, wonderful but very tiring to read. If it were a physical book, I would be happy to make tea and enjoy it slowly on a weekend afternoon. However, on my mobile phone, I still want to read some relaxing words in one piece.

After reading about 200 chapters, I have some things I want to share with the author. First of all, make sure that you, the author, have a very good understanding of Naruto's worldview. I also have my own ideas. Having ideas is not a bad thing. Only authors with ideas can write different things, but... I want to remind you that you are writing a Naruto story! Traditional fan fiction is already a niche at the beginning. It has been so long since Naruto has been completed, and there are only so many people watching Naruto fan fiction here. And what do we want to see? It's ninjutsu! It's a fight! It's the protagonist's heroic spirit that dominates the battlefield! To put it bluntly, it's still the same as Shuangwen, but didn't I come to Qidian just to see this? The so-called Xiao Bai's writing is just that the way to have fun is too low-level. What Lao Bai still likes is the way to have fun, but the taste is just too good! There are a lot of Naruto fans, all kinds of cheating, all kinds of outrageous shows, but in my opinion, the one who can write the original ninja world and all the original characters, the most like Naruto, is you! But the question is, is the theme of this book too biased? The main plot of Mizuki and Daimaru is basically the research and practice of ninjutsu. By this book, the main plot has become to control the ninja world as a great noble. Although training and fighting are still going on, the proportion is the lowest since the three books. In addition, how much do you think readers will feel immersed in this kind of feudal aristocracy? It's okay to have your own ideas, but this book is the most biased idea you'll ever get! What we want to see is Naruto, not Naruto Noblesse! You can write something different if you want, but if you write specifically about something that readers are not interested in, is your idea too biased? Ask a normal Naruto fan, what is the mainstream of the ninja world? Of course it is ninjas! The nobles in Naruto? What are those things? It's 2023. These days, time-travel dramas no longer go to the Qing Dynasty, they died early in the morning! Writing about nobles controlling the world, is this what the Naruto audience wants to see? ? ... I hope that if the next book is about Naruto, it will mainly be about ninjas. As for this book, it's not to the point where I can't stand it anymore, but it's definitely not as good as the first two books. I just wanted to say something after watching it. As the author of Qidian, you have to know what the readers are here for!

It's been a long time since I picked it up. The author has his own understanding of Naruto's system and can barely explain it. But this thing is also mixed with private goods and some of the author's worldview. . . Furthermore, not to mention the background of this pig's trotters, it really puts one's butt in the position of ruler. It makes me, a bastard, very uncomfortable when I read it. . . . So that's it

After reading it, I haven't read it until around chapter 200. It's not that there is a problem with the writing, but there is a plot that is not acceptable, that is, the cousin pursues Uchiha Mikoto, and Mikoto is ready to agree for the sake of the family. The protagonist supports and expresses encouragement. From a realistic perspective, the behavior of the three people is certainly understandable, but what is the point of writing this kind of plot? It would not take up much space to write, but dismantling the CP itself is a very unpopular act. Another couple has a deep relationship. On the one hand, for the continuation of the family, on the other hand, they can't let go of their wife, so they let her escape and continue to lead the continuation of the family. Not to mention how awkward it is from the reader's point of view. Even from the perspective of the reality of the ninja world, apart from Tsunade, Kishimoto has never written about anyone who is attracted to others after losing their spouse? Jiraiya has been waiting all his life for an opportunity. Not only is it thankless to write this, but also there is a pure land after death in the ninja world. People also have souls after death. If you wait a hundred years later, how will you let Mikoto, who was not called Uchiha Mikoto at that time, behave?

I especially like the author's novel Red Sand Dust. It's not like I opened Goldfinger without thinking. I also have my own thoughts and interpretations on the plot and the background and core of the Naruto world. Kishimoto knows a lot about Hammer Naruto, and today I found out that he has opened a new book. Come on

Nowadays, Naruto fandoms are really full of shit. They use the same cheating and prophets and copy the bullshit conspiracy theories written by poop. Those Naruto fans who have given in are really thoughtful and insightful. Do you have any recommendations from Naruto fans?

The incarnation of obsession in the last book, the Nine Phoenix incarnation is so amazing. In the chapter where Daimaru and Uchiha Itachi fight, Susanoo fights the nine-headed phoenix, which is so amazing. Would you like to finish this book?

If you go this route, why write about Naruto fandom? It's so thankless.

The biggest problem with this book is that the protagonist gets involved with Kaguya at the beginning, which is equivalent to taking all the blame for Kaguya. If it is just the conflict between Kaguya and Hagoromo Hamura, that's it. The question is how to deal with the trouble caused by Black Zetsu? Do you expect it to bury all the truth? If it does, the protagonist will really be a complete villain. No matter how much Mizuki is the savior, at least his understanding of this aspect is with the ninja world. Or the author has greatly added the content of Boruto to establish new enemies and whitewash Kaguya.

I have been following the latest updates all the way, and I feel that if I watch Lao Fan's Naruto fanfic for the first time, my eyes will definitely shine. Leaving Konoha Village, keeping distance from the main characters of the original work, and seeing the protagonist as the mastermind behind the scenes is also a novel experience. The important thing is that the openings of leaving the Ninja Village that I have seen in the past are basically not very long. It can be said that I have found a good direction that no one has written brilliantly. This is not surprising. There are too many original parts and the requirements for authors are also high. I felt numb when I saw the middle part. The protagonist and Kaguya discussed becoming a god, and becoming a god again. They all tried their best to become a god in the third book! It is nothing more than a way to gather consciousness and gain faith. The first one is a clone, the second one is an artificial elf, and the third one looks like a fish-man. Everyone is attracted to Naruto because of the exciting fights. There are too many struggles of consciousness and concepts, which is really not good to watch. This is also the reason why illusion is gradually marginalized in the original work. Later, Umibozu is supposed to become a god. Fortunately, his help to the protagonist is still in water escape, which is not too fancy. But why is this glass water water dragon bullet so complex? What should I do if I forget all the principles of fluid mechanics and chemical engineering and can't understand it? It has a bit of a shadow of the strongest water escape, and the book uses ultra-pure water to give everyone a physics lesson. Can you come up with some simple yet clever tricks? Something like the original Sand Iron Boundary Method is just right!

I feel like this idea is very novel, and there should be very few in Naruto fan fiction. But correspondingly, choosing a noble as the protagonist inevitably lacks a sense of immersion, especially since the protagonist does not have a strong connection with any of the original characters. Everything is cooperation and use at a distance, which is full of a sense of alienation. It fits the setting, but it's not fun enough. With a lot of worldview supplements and discussions typical of the old fan, it's inevitable that it won't be very popular. It's still good to watch. I will support Lao Fan as long as he writes. Come on

In this book, Orochimaru's IQ has dropped a lot All gifts and fates already have a price Orochimaru doesn't know about using curse seals to control others There must be a big problem with something that comes in vain He doesn't change his body immediately

This is a stupid stream of consciousness thing. I think I can keep watching Red Sand Dust at the back. It's very uncomfortable to watch this set at the beginning. Forget it, you can enjoy it yourself.

One thing to say, the scene where the time bomb turns into a portable grandpa is a failure, and the portrayal of Kaguya is also very bad. I have to say that the golden finger is really bad.

I have read more than ten chapters, and the writing is okay, but the whole story is about the Riddler and the power struggle. I personally don't like this type of reading. To attract readers with mystery and unknowns, it would be much better if it was an original world, but it is a fan. There are other secrets in the ninja world that readers don't know, so it would be a little more enjoyable to write.

Momiji Big Sister~(￣▽￣～)~

The last book was so long-winded that I didn't even know what I was reading, nor did I know what the pile of support meant.

Thousands of people's blood book Kaguya Otsutsuki becomes his wife

Hello, author. This book of yours is much worse than the last one, Red Sand Dust. I'm a little sorry, I subscribed by choice. Well, I saw the 19 yuan one. How can I put it, the biggest problem is that if the plot is not advanced, the protagonist or the supporting characters that you want to see rarely appear, and there are also very few scenes. It doesn't advance the plot and there are no exciting clips that I want to watch. Especially during this period, there is basically no advancement in the plot. (You ask about the plot advancement, the two-pillar plot.) But the plot is full of chatter. (It is recommended to reduce the length) It does not necessarily mean that it is not allowed, it does not matter if it is a little bit. After the plot, it's all about Chelulu. 🙂

Ah, this author is really awesome. She is a generation ahead of her. I didn't expect Xiangling's mother😓. There aren't many good-looking girls in this generation (ꐦÒ‸Ó) You're an idiot

I originally thought that the author was going to write Ice Escape 😭😭. Isn't Ice Escape cool? Why no one writes 😭😭

Come on, the last book was a pity. I know the author tried hard to pave the way for another ninja world route, but unfortunately it turned into self-questioning in the later period. I hope this one will be better.

Can this kind of secret technique that cannot increase combat power and have no lethality be understood as optimizing the next generation or hugging the thighs of female characters, such as the Raikage secretary, Tsunade, Mizukage, and the Fourth Leg Shadow or developing illusions or microbial poisons that use smell

The author's Naruto fanfic is quite to my liking, unlike a bunch of other Long Aotian

At first, I thought it was a change of identity, and I conquered the world by conquering girls with my ability in a leisurely manner Later, when I saw the linkage with Kaguya, I thought I would conquer Kaguya by playing the emotional card, and thus conquer the world Now I understand, it turned out that I was conquering Kaguya while playing behind-the-scenes The author finally started to write about behind-the-scenes, come on ＾0＾~, I am still looking forward to the author's writing style, but it is a bit slow 😅

The author's characteristics of this book are too strong. All the characters have the same personality, that is, they have one persona. They show different expressions because of the differences in the character's stance, height, and information gap.

Damn it! Fortunately, I brushed it several times a day and finally caught you! 1St floor! ! !

Damn, what does the limit of five votes per month mean?