This Man Is Not Calm

Every night in the middle of the night, I start reading the books I've read before to see how the authors of these books are doing now. Today I turned to The Savior and saw that the author is half-dead. To be honest, I'm a little tired of all the nonsense plots and conspiracy theories in the Naruto section. I want to see the author write a Naruto novel that is as good as or even better than The Savior 🙂

The first Naruto was written so well and there were so many characters to write about, but the second one was written about Sand Shadow, and there was no sense of immersion. What are you writing now? If you are a rich second generation, you won't say anything. You don't care about fame, wealth and income, so just continue to be so ignorant. You will never get platinum.

I still like the author's Red Sand Dust

So if you want to write a novel, just write it. If you don't have that level, don't bring in private stuff. If you're a literary youth, you won't see anything at all. Just be simple, rough, and happy and be done with it.

Lao Fan, Naruto needs to be updated too, we can't favor one thing over another.

Naruto, the eunuch of the Ice House in the ninja world, eunuchs can easily lose their character.

Write Naruto honestly, remove your excessive understanding of the Naruto world, and add storytelling and daily life. Even if you only have 1 million words, it will be better than the millions you wrote. The two books of Red Sand and Savior reflect your writing style. The main thing is that 80% of a book is brainstorming and supplementing various settings. It is really unnecessary. There is no story, no one can read it, so you can completely create a new world and new story by yourself.

I went to write about Naruto, and now I have two or three big and small kittens. You go write and don't kill indiscriminately

Let me go, it looks pretty good so far, right? How did you come up with the title of the book? I saw it a few times before but didn't click on it. I was really short on books. When I came in and took a look, I realized it was quite interesting!

I think the author is suitable for writing historical articles or gods. How can he write urban articles?

The author really needs to attend an online literature class or something like that. I have read all four books and they are all qualified in all aspects and even some of the skills are excellent. It is a pity that there are major flaws in some very basic knowledge of online literature, such as how the book title introduction and subject matter cooperate with intelligent promotion. The result is that readers who want to understand that this is a good book must be very lucky not to ignore the inconspicuous title. The incomprehensible introduction and the patience to read the first twenty chapters are comparable to studying in the West, so put aside your arrogance and learn the theory of online writing. If you don't change your perception, you will delay a good author.

From sand dust to cutting ice and then from sand dust to cutting ice all the way to this point, the bookworm emerging from under the banyan tree said it was very satisfying.

+1 For the monthly ticket, I haven't read it much, and it's time for apprenticeship. Why don't I cut it off and start another Naruto book? It's time to write about Hidden Cloud Village🐶

Up to the end, I felt that the writing was really good. The emotional scenes were okay, the career was not bad, and there was basically no golden finger. Otherwise, I would have been quite uncomfortable, but it was a pity that it was not popular.

I guess the author felt dissatisfied with the city and ended up doing it himself.

The update time will be changed to 6pm in the future.

I have to say, although the title of your book is about a country in another time and space, Koshien and the like are too similar to Japanese terms, whereas Koshien and the like are better.

The content idea is actually very good. Although I feel that this book is not as creative as the previous book "The Melancholy of a Winner in Life", it is quite interesting. In terms of setting and insight into how things work, the author's level is definitely far higher than most people. However, the sentence structure and expression really need to be adjusted. Just to give a few examples: in books, you can often see a long list of attributive modifications in front of "". This syntax is actually not in line with the Chinese language habits. Put the attributive at the end of the sentence, and the text will be more concise and clear; in many places, the narration of events is mixed with too many objective comments, which are said to be the thoughts of the characters. In fact, it looks like the author writes a small argumentative essay from the mouth of a fake character. If you really have ideas, you may wish to go to the book review area. This creates a sense of alienation from the narrative of the novel, which breaks the reading rhythm. In short, when reading many places now, there is a feeling that a single chapter or a paragraph of insight is very exciting, but after a while, you will find that you can't find many reasons to keep reading. When writing novels, one has to either completely sacrifice the storytelling and directly deconstruct the text form of the novel, but no such attempt has been seen so far; or it is better to strengthen the storytelling and improve the fluency of writing. I didn't finish reading the previous Red Sand Dust because the story behind it was really too weak.

Add 1 to the monthly ticket, when will this book end~~ I and other Naruto fans can't wait

The writing is quite good, but it seems not very popular. Maybe the title of the book is not that good.

Certified by a 20-year-old book lover, it's very comfortable to read. Come on💪

This is a great book. The author has his own style of writing and the content is based on his experience.

It's well written, but not enough to read. Personal feeling~ Jade has ten colors and five rays, and its beauty cannot be concealed even by its slight flaws! ~(¯▽¯~)~

The author is very smart. The popularity of Naruto has dropped, so he just took the opportunity to change his taste. Come on! Take good care of you

The advantages and disadvantages are obvious. Advantages: Reasonable use of information gaps in the early stage, and through the perspective of rebirth, we have steadily taken the right path to success in the next twenty years. Disadvantages: I stuck to new energy in the later period, which doesn't make sense logically. I have no interest in literature and art, and I pretend to be very stiff. I wrote about the Three Kingdoms, which has such a low status in the literary and art world. Even the association didn't ask for it. Is it considered a third-rate author? There are a few games on the console, but the most powerful Pokémon and Mario have not been developed. Are these peripherals not making money? The handheld console is gone. There is absolutely no need to develop new energy sources, and the capital utilization rate is too low. The Huang family cannot secure just the race track.

I wiped it. It was the first time I brushed it. I cried because it was written in 23 years.

Did you open the vest and write something else📖?

Your introduction is too watery, it doesn't say anything, it's so foggy that I can't understand it.

Does the author have any other novels in the works? Asking for directions