Konoha Shadow Stream

I feel that the setting in Naruto is quite strange, and it may be inconsistent with how we deal with relationships in daily life and feel awkward. I feel awkward about the relationship between Hanyu and Naoki. Your elder benefactor who regarded you as your own child has died. You had deep feelings for your elder. Your elder died after giving birth to an only son. You became a couple with your elder's daughter, and you turned a blind eye to the only son. It feels weird. The same plot feeling also appears between Kakashi and Naruto at the beginning of Naruto. Kakashi only became concerned about his teacher's son after he became his teacher. In the later period, Shikamaru was very caring about Asuma's children. I don't know what the ending and impact of the plot between Hanyu and Naoki will be, and I'm looking forward to it. Whether Hanyu will survive until the fourth battle, or will he die midway and reincarnate in the dirt later, or will the entire plot change, we have to wait and see

I only read less than 20 chapters, and then hurriedly flipped through the table of contents to find the ending. It was not the type that interested me. I discovered and read the Tenseigan some time ago, and then I discovered the book Naruto Teacher. The daily guide started recommending Naruto fanfics to me. The reviews for this book are polarizing, but the results don't lie. It should be a good book, so I read it. The first 10 chapters were already very attractive to me. I read a full 100 chapters before I thought it would be a good book. But I was a little disappointed in the next 10 chapters. At first I was very angry at the author's comments about "fate" and "goodwill" or "this is a ninja" and "the weak have no choice" in the comment area. I think this is a manifestation of incorrect views. Later, in the author's explanation, I also felt that war might make all this happen, especially a war without restrictions. The author said that the protagonist should integrate into the world of Naruto rather than change the world. The weak are indeed not qualified to change. I was very curious about what kind of story the author wanted to write, and what he would do when the protagonist became stronger. I looked for the ending first. The ending is to end the ninja war, accidentally become the Hokage, let the tailed beasts be united and handed over to others to take care of, and deal with Madara, Zetsu and Kaguya. Except for the tailed beast, everything seems to have the same ending as the original. Maybe the process is more important, maybe the result is more important. I think purpose is the most important thing, what exactly does this novel want to express? I don't understand, if it's just like this, what's the point of time travel? Is it an alternative Naruto who knows the story's development tricks? Such a beginning and such an ending really didn't attract me. There are too few good Naruto fanfics. There is no denying that this should be a fanfic above this level, but it is boring to me, which is a pity. This is just to commemorate the book that still made me uncomfortable until 3:30 in the morning. Maybe I will see this record again one day in the future. If I have leisure, I might as well try reading it and savor the process.

Could that god of fertility be the evil god that Hidan believed in? Then Yayoi's seriously ill Uzumaki girl appeared again, and didn't Miss Momiji say a long time ago that she was a very important character and would be of great use to the development of the plot... Could it be that Yayoi was to be transformed into a Hidan clan? After all, even Tsunade didn't have a good way to cure her. Then let her sneak into an organization (an organization created by Hei Zetsu that is similar to the original Akatsuki) as an undercover agent... Then the question is, since it is a mudslide, will Akatsuki become Wei Guangzheng's charity organization? After all, the three of them had witnessed the prosperity of Konoha with their own eyes. For example, helping those injured or displaced due to war, or becoming a righteous partner, rallying a group of people to fight against the evil war, and building a utopia for peace-loving people... Speaking of which, Danzo has not been out for a long time. Will Black Zetsu lure Danzo into the organization? Using the rope tree as bait, using the glory of the first generation, and the will of fire that Danzo understands that Konoha should have originally, to seduce, the success rate should not be too low. Actually, since you want to write about the effect of a mudslide, would Miss Momiji think about Minato Namikaze becoming a rebel ninja? As for the reason for betraying Konoha, Orochimaru knew about the Nine-Tails division plan, and then designed to capture the Nine-Tails in Kushina's body and then disappeared. He needs a powerful organization to help him find Orochimaru and kill him, and Konoha obviously will not go all out for a rebellious ninja. After all, it is a great ninja village. Then reverse it, just like the original Itachi Uchiha, he is actually an undercover agent. Of course, if Kushina dies, many brave readers will definitely threaten to abandon the book. But there are multiple Nine-Tails, so... Hehehe~ As for the time of Namikaze Minato's defection, just write the Nine-Tails Rebellion, otherwise it will be difficult for Naruto to arrange it, but this Nine-Tails Rebellion is no longer the original Nine-Tails Rebellion. I have already thought of a name for the new version of the Akatsuki organization created by Black Zetsu, and it will be called "Dawn". Dawn is the darkest time, and only after it has passed will we usher in the brilliance of the morning light. For Hei Jue, wasn't it his darkest moment when his mother was sealed? Then rescuing the mother will naturally usher in the light. The members of the organization are probably: the undead duo of Kakuzu and Yayoi, the disaster duo of Rasa and the Earth Spider (Rasa's sandstorm and the earth spider's opening up of the world should both be natural disasters), the explosion duo of Deidara and Bakutō, the speed duo of Minato and Thunder Sword, the water and fire duo of Kisame and Lao Murasaki, and the duo of the leader Naoki and Demon Danzo (corresponding to Nagato and Konan). There are a total of twelve people in the Dawn Organization, which is not weaker than the Akatsuki in the original work. Final PS: The creation of heaven and earth is a forbidden technique of the earth spider clan. It absorbs a large amount of natural energy in the form of seals and explodes at once with itself as the center. The power is roughly stronger than that of Shinra Tensei, but weaker than Super Shinra Tensei. The disadvantage is that the seal takes too long to accumulate power, and it may not be able to withstand the violent natural energy, and there is a certain probability that the spell will fail and self-destruct. If you think it's good, give it a like, it's almost a thousand words 🥺

The protagonist of Hongye often has the feeling that he is very involved in role-playing, but he is clearly an outsider. He goes with the flow, but does his best to complete every triggered task. Just like the players in the second game, they are restless, imaginative, and willing to trigger new plots and branches. Don't care about losing the so-called advantage of knowing the plot. A psycho, a funny man, and a prodigal son make everyone look busy... For example, Flamenco. He is unscrupulous and plays with the world until he is loved. Kushina and Misaki's love and support, their seniors' recognition and support, and Ain's childhood sweethearts. Originally long-sleeved and good at dancing, it turned clouds and rain, and its authenticity was unpredictable. In front of them, he was a little clumsy and yet very reliable. As a time traveler, the characters in the comics of his previous life seem to have no impact on him, and the accumulation of feelings must start from the encounter in this life.

(Contains spoilers) As the name suggests, the story starts from World War I. This is a very subtle entry point - it breaks away from the shackles of the original work, but does not make the original work completely become the background. The author has reserved enough space for himself, supported by his sophisticated plot control ability, and is never afraid of drastic rewriting, but it is not easy to make everything appear reasonable under the constraints of the world line. The author is famous for his writing skills. The article is divided into eight volumes, with continuous succession, continuous transition, and fine details. The threads of grass and snakes are gray, and the threads are thousands of miles away. Friends who read carefully will not be disappointed. The protagonist is a psychopath and is out of tune with the entire world. This sense of alienation runs throughout. This is not to say that he is a cold person, but that his warmth is only shown to a very few people. This reminds me of Lu Shu. Personally, I don't like this style of protagonist. As for the author himself, although the author has expressed his wish that readers can downplay the imprint of the author in the work and treat the author and the work as two separate things, it has to be said that the author's presence is still very strong in this work, including but not limited to chapters, words from the author, PS at the end of the article, individual chapters, etc. As far as personal experience is concerned, it destroys the sense of coherent reading to a certain extent. If you can accept the above two points, this is a product not to be missed.

[Long review of about 2000 words] I have only read a few dozen chapters, but since the experience in this chapter is very average, I want to post a book review to complain about it... When I start to deal with the death of the second generation, it is very vivid. The small number of words shows a lot of the second generation's mentality, identity and personality, but starting from Konoha, this chapter says that the discussion is very intense. Personally, I think it is because of the profound influence of Naruto that most people subconsciously think of passion, youth, justice, etc. Without any foreshadowing. Even if they complain about darkness, it is usually about the Third Generation and the Pot King. But under the surface of Naruto's passion is cruelty and indifference. Especially in the general environment of the Warring States Period, let alone the living standards of the overall people; ordinary people have no ability to resist in front of the ninjas, and can only hope in their mercy and justice; the ninja villages are fighting each other, and the small villages are mostly in front of the five major villages. They can only struggle desperately; while ordinary ninjas in the five major villages are fighting with each other, they are vulnerable to the famous strong ones... This era and the world are miserable. In the precarious years, no one can live in peace, health, and happiness. And the protagonist traveled through time as a wanderer, rummaging through supplies on corpses to survive in the battlefields of ninja fights. In fact, he relied on the sky every day and lived cautiously: If the battlefield is not found today, there will be no harvest; if the battlefield has been looted, there will be no harvest; if someone does not die, give the protagonist a chance If there is a detonating talisman on the corpse and it is poisonous, just leave something and it will be gone; if another teammate appears halfway through the game, it depends on the face; if you collide with others, it depends on your strength... Think about how miserable it is... As a modern person who grew up under the red flag in the past, the protagonist is really big-hearted➕strong➕good luck! ! ! So being able to go to Konoha at this time is a God-given opportunity! Many people have a god-like perspective. They stand and talk without hurting their backs. They criticize and say that this is not good and there is a problem. You don't think about how bad the protagonist's life is. If other villages don't say whether they can survive or not, why should they want you? Even if you go to an orphanage, you won't become a tool and cannon fodder? Besides, do you know more information about Konoha from other villages? It is difficult to be better than Konoha after entering other villages. At least in Konoha, you know some big bosses who are now students, and you know some of the people who are generous and cunning. Even if you don't have ninja talent, as long as you are not too unlucky and have a good relationship with a few people, it is not a big problem to be a relatively decent civilian. To sum up, going to Konoha desperately is a must option. Then it comes to the controversial bait and the place where it was brought to negotiations. Many people think that since the protagonist finally came to report the letter, he should be given a normal life. Otherwise, after the protagonist becomes successful, he will have to live in the air every day? Most people who think this way are probably going to be fine, right? Even if it weren't for the war years, if you, a "foreign" wandering orphan, came back with the late emperor's edict to appoint the emperor, do you think you would be able to settle down smoothly? Not to mention that the late emperor is a big boss who can overwhelm the Seventh Army at any time, and this is still a war period, with internal disputes and uncertain external enemies. If you think more about it, maybe you can... And the superiors did not take the blame out of you and treat you as a real tool. With no choice and no status, you can be said to be okay, that's how realistic it is. And if the person in charge is willing to reward you after your hard work, it is considered an opportunity. And all of this appeared even more cruelly and directly during the war years. Regardless of their background, there is nothing good to say about people who evaluate across time and space. Some people are unhappy with what happened to the protagonist in Konoha, so are you sure you can get better treatment in another village? From practical and dark political considerations, this is a normal encounter in this era. The tone of Konoha's guardianship is not yet a concept promoted in the relatively peaceful era in the late third generation. Moreover, in the world of Naruto, if you don't become a ninja, you won't even have a basic status. Who the hell will lock you up if you don't have the power to restrain a chicken? If you just use a ninjutsu, you will be in trouble, and you may not even be able to eat well. Do you think the ninja village doesn't want to eat? A wandering orphan from another village, and he is still 13 years old. Under normal conditions, do you think he can become a chuunin in this life? Do you have the opportunity to learn a B-level ninjutsu? The contact with the second generation led to him receiving the attention of the second generation circle. This is the protagonist's only chance. So I feel that the author's problem is that the plot is okay, but the description of the protagonist and background is insufficient. In many chapters of this chapter, the feeling towards the protagonist is that he is cowardly. He is willing to obey the unfair treatment. Apart from the lack of social beatings and the consideration of the times, Hongye really lacks words about the protagonist after coming to Konoha, and the impression is that he took a little more kunai from the bait. If the number of words of the protagonist is increased, including his thoughts on Konoha's arrangements, plans for the future, etc., His three-dimensional image can be enriched, and it will also make people feel that it is not what Konoha says. The protagonist actually has his own considerations, so he feels less submissive. This may be a bit redundant or confusing, but it is a free chapter, and this chapter is really an important experience of genuine reading! Also, regarding the cruelty of the war years in Naruto World, many people don't seem to notice it. It is better to say that the protagonist will not die anyway... Although starting from the turning point of fate at the beginning can be more attractive from the beginning, it also lacks a real sense of the era and the protagonist's encounters. After all, if the protagonist starts to struggle to survive and is miserable, it will make people more fully aware of his desire for Konoha and his understanding of many choices, right? Of course, if the protagonist in the first few chapters is doing very poorly, I wonder if some people will be dissuaded. This depends on the author's writing skills. It seems that the original Pirate Code book was not good when he started to get involved in gangs? Maybe add a short prologue to describe it? This book has been on the bookshelf for a long time and I finally finished it today. I have been struggling with this chapter for most of the afternoon, so I said it must be reviewed... A certain science and the Pirate Alliance have read it back then, and they felt good about it. The other books were not popular before they were fattened up, so I started to keep them up when I saw that the author wrote about Naruto again. I finally kept this one alive... Come on, author

From now on, the title of the protagonist will be called Lord of Shadow Stream (Dog Head)

The whole book is finished after reaching Chapter 6, and I only read the ending of the subsequent plot. The chapter before Chapter 6, "Wonderful Spectacles Harm the Country," was the end of the story for me. Because I don't like to see regrets. Good book, worth reading

Some people find it abusive and others find it embarrassing. This is mainly due to the gap between the author's own ideas and his writing skills. Obviously, the author wanted to strike a balance between comic style and realistic style. It adds some realism to the whole novel, but obviously due to the author's own abilities, this approach seems to have failed. It feels like this is deliberately advancing the plot. Some readers think that the protagonist is so strong now. If he had intervened earlier, his brother-in-law would not have had such bad things happen. But it is obvious that these readers still think too simply. I said before that the protagonist is an outsider in terms of identity, a wanderer on the battlefield. Through a little luck and chance, he happened to join Konoha Village and became a Konoha ninja. His relationship with the Senju family is one of mutual cultivation and reward, and the main node of the relationship is between him and his teacher. Of course, in the eyes of outsiders, he is the protagonist who is cultivated by the Senju family. The protagonist is an existence similar to a retainer of the Senju family. Theoretically speaking, the protagonist should be loyal to the Senju family and die for the Senju family like a retainer. But it is obvious that the protagonist is only the teacher in the end, and he only loves the teacher's daughter Tsunade. So what? The protagonist can't control the Thousand Hands. The protagonist is an outsider. The protagonist was able to be with Tsunade before. The reason was when Senju made a commotion for the first time. Tsunade took Hanyu's side. In the eyes of Senju's radicals, this is regarded as a traitor. How could a traitor from the Senju family control some members of the Senju family? The rope tree was theoretically educated by Tsunade, and the tutor was appointed by Tsunade. Placing the rope tree on the Senju's side also represents a political compromise. It is both a compromise to the Senju family and a compromise to Konoha. Staying away from rope trees is politically correct. What else? The eldest granddaughter of the Senju family is your wife, and the eldest grandson of the Senju family is your student. You are an outsider and do not have the status of a student of the first, second or third generation. There is no blood inheritance among the various families who founded the village together. What's going on, do you want to rebel? Of course the protagonist doesn't care, but those people under the protagonist are like the Uzumaki clan, don't they care? I have said it before, this can be said to be killing three birds with one stone. It is beneficial to him whether he advances or retreats, and it is equally beneficial to him whether he succeeds or not. This is almost a perfect conspiracy. My brother-in-law does not matter whether he moves or not, whether he flees or not, whether he lives or dies. As long as he raises the flag of rebellion, Tsunade will become the successor to the Hokage. Destined to be cancelled. No matter what, Tuan Zhan won this round, but the protagonist showed his strength and frightened the ambitious people including Tuan Zhan. In one sentence, the author's writing power is limited and there is no way to express all of this naturally, not to mention that the previous writing style was more joyful. The sudden shift to the dark wind of reality made some readers feel uncomfortable. This itself is the responsibility of the author. All this cannot be dismissed.

As a reader who has been following the subscription, I am really angry and helpless.

After reading Chapter 58, I just want to ask weakly: Don't you want to learn the shadow clone developed by the second generation? As someone who has watched Naruto, I probably understand the benefits... Right? One more point, although the young Sandai is courageous, Danzo has not completely turned into a black man, and Mito still has an extraordinary reputation, we still have to do a good job of backup, so as not to be assimilated to the first illusion: the will of fire... Also, during the Fourth War, the protagonist is 60 or 70 years old, can he still survive? How to solve the problem of old age and frailty, I personally think it is best to start at the genetic level... Finally, let me talk about my feelings. I feel that there is no problem after reading the current chapter. It is well written, but there is a lack of awareness of worries. As someone who has seen and understood Naruto in a previous life, he knows all the styles of Konoha. You must be on guard. Don't wait until the third generation of Danzo is tricked to fight back. The Otsutsuki family is also troublesome. If you can't beat it, join or just hold on and we can win.

[With the Prophet] The only people I respect are Senju Sanshi, Uzumaki Mito, and the second generation can only be said to be barely considered, and the ones who can fight a protracted battle with the current Hanyu are Hashirama and Madara, but Hashirama and Madara cannot get the respect of Hanyu , my personal guess is that Mishino, who was restricted by her physical condition during her lifetime, lost her body and chakra restrictions after reincarnation in the dirty land, and with the strengthening of the reincarnation eye, she can compete. After all, she is the daughter of Senju Hashirama and Uzumaki Mito, and she is the top in terms of blood. Isn't there a foreshadowing of the other gods earlier? The reason for the fight between Misaki and Hanyu should be due to the other gods. The article also said that regardless of whether Hanyu's battle is favorable or unfavorable, the world will restart again. Is it possible that Hanyu is stimulated by the death of his wife and son and transforms into a big demon who wants to open an infinite moon reading? For the sake of his thousand-year wish, the dutiful son of Black Zetsu secretly joins forces with the ninja alliance to stop Hanyu. In this way, Hanyu's success or Black Zetsu's success will open the infinite Tsukuyomi and restart the world. All ninjas are just tools to be manipulated (personally feel that this result is more in line with the fate of ninjas). The ending of this book is speculated: 1. Hanyu successfully opens the infinite Tsukuyomi, reaches the other side of the ideal land, and spends a good time with Tsunade and his own children in a false, infinite, unwilling to wake up, with no end. 2. Hanyu successfully opened the infinite Tsukuyomi, but woke up due to the nature of a time traveler. In the ninja world where everyone except himself fell into the infinite Tsukuyomi, he missed the past of Misaki and Tsunade alone, waiting for his wife who would not return day after day, looking forward to saying the words "Welcome back", but until the time of eternal sleep, he never heard the gentle words "I'm back". If the author can write these two similar endings, I think I can remember this book for twenty years, just like I can remember the story of Half Melon's Mask for another ten years. Although this kind of unfolding is enough for a mudslide, as a reader, I personally don't want to see this kind of razor-sharp ending. I still hope that Yu Hanyu's story can have a beautiful and satisfactory ending. Whether the last volume is called Feather Dream (or Rain Dream) or Spring Land depends on the author.

Well, the author is a storyteller. If your own story contains too many personal comments about yourself, it will inevitably be a bit embarrassing. Do you understand? This is leaning towards pure otaku writing. Of course, some people must like it, but the audience for pure otaku writing is a bit small. After all, pure house writing is not far from self-interesting writing.

I just found out that it's the same author as a certain scientific Naruto, but I feel like this one is much better than the previous one 👍

Are you Tsunade the heroine?

To be honest, the writing style of this book is pretty good, and the ideas are pretty good. However, as I read it, I felt that the writing was not very coherent in some places, and it was a bit draggy in some places, making it difficult to read. But overall it's okay. I'd like to give you a recommendation and hope it can be written better.

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The book is very good ww I like it very much, don't say my level is low because I haven't seen the paid chapters yet. . The main thing is that the protagonist always breaks the dimensional wall, which makes me feel very immersive I wonder if there are any plots like this in the future I am not a fan of WW, maybe some people like the protagonist who constantly breaks the wall, but I can't accept it.

Although drunk. But I still love busty Tsunade-chan the most

I understand why this book is so good, because it has a martial arts flavor

I can't save much, so I wish I could sit and lock myself in a small dark room while being tied up and typing.

I like the author's writing style, but I feel that it should be over after finishing the Ten-Tails. I also like the daily stories written later, but they are indeed a bit unfinished.

I think the next step should be the reincarnation of the dirty land, pulling out the third generation and continuing.

I heard that you can win awards just by reviewing a book?

Every time I read Momiji's book, I learn new ways to play Kakashi Black. Other books are also black and white, but Hongye is different. He will say: At the age of 16, Kakashi still maintained his consistent youthfulness, and his strength remained at the level of a 12-year-old 🙂

Will of Fire is a lie. Obviously, my father was the last Hokage and made great contributions to the village. My mother, as a Jinchuuriki, sacrificed her freedom. In the end, in order to prevent the Nine-Tails rebellion, both of them died. She became a new vessel and had to endure the eyes of the whole village. These three generations still talk about the will of fire with shame. The hero's blood was shed in vain, and even the descendants cannot be protected. Naruto is a typical patient with Stockholm Syndrome

I am the maid of Mito Uzumaki, the secretary of the Fourth Hokage, the actual controller of Shadow Stream, the leader of the Uzumaki clan, a member of Konoha's advisory board, and the absolute number two female ~ Uzumaki Shiko-sama, don't you deserve to have a character card? 😆 I'm almost dead and don't give you a character card. Miss Momiji, please be a human being 😆

The writing technique of this book is very sophisticated, the plot is well arranged, and the characters are deeply portrayed. However, the author is a serious literary youth, and he often writes well and suddenly gets fed up with shit.

To some people with ulterior motives: 1. Focus on writing books first, and do not do evil things. The Internet is not an illegal place, and those who maliciously incite, spread and create rumors will eventually be punished by law. 2. Regarding the previous disbandment of the book group, I have been managing the group for many years and have the habit of keeping unclear chat records. Even if the group is disbanded, I can still view the previous group records. Please ask some people with ulterior motives to provide strong evidence. I have now saved the videos recorded within half a month in the original group to prevent accidental loss. And can provide all complete chat records within half a year. If you need incomplete records from the establishment to the dissolution of the group, you can also provide it 3. As for brushing up on scores, Hongye has really been a down-to-earth author so far. If this book requires brushing up on scores, wouldn't it be better to brush up on the pirate book, the hunter book, or the comic book? As for the big guys who rewarded the three silver leagues of Red Leaf, I believe you can also see in other book review areas that there is no such thing as brushing the scores. Even when I opened the book, I didn't look like a fourth-level author at all. In the initial stage, a few friends in the group spontaneously promoted it on social platforms or software. If someone insists on cheating, please provide substantial evidence. 4. All records of this incident are retained as screenshots. The author "Hongye Zhixuan" expressed that he reserves the right to pursue his legal responsibility. Do not do harm to others, justice will never be absent! Never believe or spread rumors.

The first part of the story is pretty good, but later on when the protagonist proposes to divide the Nine-Tails, it's a bit discouraging. Doing so will make Kyuubi's hatred of humans infinitely deeper, and even Naruto may not be able to gain Kyuubi's trust again. But I thought that the protagonist was dedicated to the village after all, so I endured and continued to watch. Only later did I discover that the Nine-Tails was divided into eight, and its power was weakened to an unknown extent. As a result, the village only controlled one-eighth of the Nine-Tails, and the remaining seven-eighths of the Nine-Tails were all used by the protagonist as batteries. Only then did I realize that the protagonist did not split the Nine-Tails for the village at all. It was for my own selfish gain, and in addition to the fact that the protagonist actually used Erwei's name to deceive Erwei in order to achieve his goal, I discovered that the protagonist turned out to be a person who cared about his future floods for his own current interests. He had been deepening the hatred between the tailed beasts and humans. He was clearly aware of the plot, but in the end he did not consider the future at all, and would only deceive and plunder when facing the tailed beasts. Use tailed beasts as tools. He clearly knows that he does not have any special bloodline, and he is completely powerless against the final boss in the world of Naruto, but he has been poaching the future protagonists. I no longer understand what he wants to do.