I Feed on Gods

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ The dungeon at Longchan Temple at the beginning was okay, it was considered a ration, and it is understandable that there is a little water in the back, but I really don't understand why the high-speed rail dungeon has started, and the protagonist still doesn't have a plan for himself? In addition to making money, just making money? Tsk, the world is like this, you have such a big golden finger, why don't you plan your future well? Still thinking about money? What role can money play in this world? If you want to solve the problem of parents having children, all you need to do is apply for special recruitment by the state. Because I trust the editor of Qidian more and don't believe that this book will have pacing problems, I just subscribed to a few chapters. Tsk, it's hard to describe it in one sentence. If this book had been published 15 years ago, there might have been a platinum-worthy god. But now? Go and search for a lot of tomatoes! All I can say is, are your starting point standards like this? Can you become a great master with just this rhythm and description? ! All I can say is that you are happy. Of course, the results prove that this book still has an audience, but I can't, I really can't stand this kind of writing. I am writing this post just to give some advice to the latecomers. If you want to read ideas but don't require writing and writing style, this book is a good resource. If you prefer to read descriptions in writing, you can try to take a look, just in case a new door opens.

After reading more than 500 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore, so I'll give it up and put it down. When I first started watching it, I felt that the power system was not rigorous, but the subject matter was still interesting, so I kept reading. Later on, it became more and more vicious. Let's talk about the power system first. Later on, it's absolutely shattering. Let's talk about the top gods. Xia Hongmian, who is at the peak of dragon level, is portrayed as if he is invincible in the world. And then the protagonist's golden finger is not even mentioned, and even the gods kill him at will. All the other dragon levels are really not that much stronger than other cannon fodder, let alone people of lower levels. As a result, with such a disparity in strength, everyone thinks that the protagonist is a soft rice? Secondly, there is a circle of women around the protagonist. I don't know why you wrote it except for the one with double A, but you can leave the rest. It's just disgusting? It's just ordinary people who got involved inexplicably, and then the protagonist is kept with him inexplicably, and he doesn't have a harem and it's useless. The funniest thing is that every time he cracks the pollution, he has to find various reasons to reduce his intelligence to fool him. Are you really looking for trouble, and you just gave him a bunch of resources to raise a bunch of useless vases? And the roommate assessment also embarrassed me. Why is your official organization so useless that even an ordinary person can sneak into the ability user assessment and even pass several rounds, but you can't even find out that an ordinary person is thinking about killing gods every day? Have you daydreamed too much and deceived yourself into it?

What is the logic behind this book's popularity? ? ? ? I've read dozens of them, but I don't feel anything at all. Why is this so popular? ? ? ? Not as good as those written by other small authors? ? ? This book softens the mysterious resurgence, softens the chaos of the world, and softens miscellaneous novels. Isn't this the ultimate suture monster? ? ? ? It's inexplicable that you are still riding a horse. It's just a superficial thing? ? ? ?

After watching it for two days, I reached 168. Let me tell you, really, you should either simply go back to the palace and accept it directly, or you should not write so many female protagonists with a single heroine, and write the ones that need to drive the plot as men. You don't even need to think about the names, it is natural. The plot in the middle is zero points. The plot about the dog in the community is really hard to describe.

I've read over a hundred chapters, but I can't stand it anymore. I feel like there's something wrong with the combat power settings. They all ignore the rules of combat power. Let's talk about Xia Hongyao. Without the protagonist, I feel like she won't survive the next Shenxu. How did a character with D intelligence survive the Shenxu before? Even if the strength exceeds the dragon level, even if you enter a low-level Shenxu, as long as you don't guess the rules correctly, you will die, right? If you don't offer the money for sesame oil to the mysterious Buddha statue in Chapter 2, how can you compete with it? There is also the level of the Shenxu, just like the Qin Palace Shenxu. Nine years ago, was it the one-year Shenxu? It's really uncomfortable to watch.

Fish anchor, here comes the picture

Rating: 6.5/10 Advantages: Some copies are quite creative, the overall imagination is quite big, and the overall logic of the whole text is online Disadvantages: The writing is average, the description of the group portraits is very thin, and the writing is like a tool man The most annoying point: There are no distinctive male characters, so the focus is on the women around the protagonist. Generally speaking, the protagonist of a web page is either a man who has no woman in his heart, a god of nature who draws his sword, and what you see is the male protagonist's sparks and lightning all the way; or he is a man who has a single heart all his life, a misty world, benevolent beauties, longing for each other, day and night; or he has a harem of three thousand beauties, bulldozer style, not asking for a single outstanding description, but a large amount of food, which can also attract LSPs. This book probably wanted to write about the first encounter at Fenglingdu, and the misunderstanding of Yang Guo's life style when he met him. As a result, he lacked writing power and wanted everyone. But after you sang and I came on stage, I played mahjong so well that no one remembered it, so it's better not to give it up

The writing of Hero's Creed was pretty good, except for the extra time towards the end and a dispensable underground world. This book is completely unfinished. I can understand if you try to make up the word count, but your protagonist has a low IQ and emotional intelligence. Isn't it too much to brag about it to strangers? You also forcefully de-intellect the people around you, and you also have eight-pack abs, body shape, etc. The author can't be a woman. Let's talk about the issue of dungeons. Except for the first dungeon... The rest of the dungeons are simply useless. To be honest, I gave up on the dungeon when I saw it. Your combat power is no longer a problem. When you read this book, you can basically feel that there is no level at all here. There is only the male protagonist and a bunch of idiots and civilians. The dragon level and the lion king are all empty when you write them down. When you meet the male protagonist, they are just a bunch of idiots and civilians

I have watched 60% of the game, and here are my personal opinions: 1. The settings are quite interesting, and the various Shenxu gameplays are not boring. The settings can support about 30% of the game. 2. The protagonist changes from a virgin to a villain, but I think it's okay. As a novel, it still needs some heroic elements. Haven't you seen enough of the evil stuff in reality? As for what I think needs to be improved, the main ones are: Appropriate descriptions of group portraits, duel between heroes, and descriptions of powerful enemies can help the novel be more durable, otherwise it will easily become a fast food. 1. The supporting role is too weak. No matter what level the divine hunter is, apart from being able to fight a little, he is basically just a foil to the tool man. Such a setting basically ruins the world view. I don't know how other god hunters live without the protagonist. 2. Common people are the same. They have no features or highlights, and they are basically just facial makeup. The game is not bad enough, and there are basically no heroes. Logically speaking, thousands of civilians are currently being consumed, and I don't have any heroes with outstanding humanity, nor have I seen other civilians who have nothing to do with the protagonist become god hunters. (This was slightly described in the dog chapter, but it disappeared later.) Because of this, I am now 60% ready to give up. The plot flow is too modular. I hope the author finds these suggestions interesting.

As a stranger who has read more than 500 chapters in one go and has never read the author's other works, I feel uncomfortable and want to write my first book review since reading the novel. I believe that many readers' first impression of this book, like mine, is that "the subject matter has good potential". From the beginning of breaking through the Buddhist temple, starting to understand the sacred ruins and sacred objects, and later starting to contact other hunters, I personally am still looking forward to the extended development of the world view in the future. What are gods? And why did gods suddenly come to earth decades ago? What disappoints my expectations is that the protagonist, Xiaobai, has grown up to almost dragon level now, but I still lack understanding of this world. I saw that the author added a level of strength structure in the middle, but this really doesn't convince me. The combat system of the current work is just like the description of Chinese chess. The simple ordering is to rank the chariots, horses, artillery, soldiers, elephants and pawns. The order is like this. I can't judge the growth of the protagonist from the protagonist's victory over the gods and other hunters. The invincible flow should also allow readers to understand the level of opponents and have a certain impression of the protagonist's growth. Personally, I feel that there are too many idle people, the description of miscellaneous fish is too distracting, and the protagonist's ability development is too scattered. On the contrary, the protagonist lacks impressive opponents and improved combat abilities. At the end of each battle, there is a feeling of "Oh, I slapped others in the face, I gained a lot of divine favors, and I can't remember a lot of divine objects." And isn't the protagonist really a monster who doesn't magically own his own body? Am I the only one who is more curious and worried about the influence of gods in my body than the protagonist? Could it be that a god whose body has fallen actually wants to take my body one day? Can the protagonist really refrain from making any attempts to explore his body? When it comes to the description of miscellaneous fish being too distracting, I feel that what makes me most distracted is the excessive description of the psychology of idlers in the early and middle stages. It doesn't matter if there is a description, but it cannot be repeated every time and lacks depth. Every woman is jealous of the female characters around the protagonist, and every female group member wants to have children with the protagonist in Shenxu. After seeing these, I feel that human beings are too monotonous and boring, which affects the reading experience. As for whether the scene where the protagonist is in is fighting in the Shenxu or daily development, as long as it makes me feel that the protagonist is growing up step by step, it doesn't really matter. I hope the author will not rush to set up Chongshenxu because he is afraid of some too watery comments, but he also shouldn't be too sloppy in daily life. I know that the author has tried to put the protagonist in some problems related to real society. The scene echoes the theme, but sometimes it feels that the scene is too abrupt or not deep enough. It is recommended to integrate daily life with these, such as that bar. One can also integrate some social issues, and at the same time, combine the Buddha bead incident to let the protagonist follow the clues to find some activities of domestic underground wild hunters, and combine the protagonist's life experience and growth with the development of the plot. I hope that the subsequent cracking process of the gods can further reveal the secrets of the gods. Instead of simply cheating on cheats, the interaction with the gods is also a way to let the audience understand the gods better. All in all, I'm still looking forward to understanding the opening question. Come on, author.

Some suggestions and opinions for the author: 1. The description of daily life in college, the characters are both male and female, but they are too flat and facial-like. Human nature is complex and contradictory. Everyone you write about has a standard behavior pattern. Just look at the beginning of this person and you can completely judge any of his subsequent behaviors. People are growing up, and they are far less human than those in Wild Dogs. Although the Wild Dogs chapter is also thin due to early foreshadowing issues! But at least it can be seen that there is an idea. 2. God Hunter is a problem of division of power system. Is the first enemy Lion King so weak? The protagonist is now a dragon, and the whole world is walking sideways! How will your enemy behave in the mid- to late-game? Can we only fight gods in the middle and late stages? In this regard, I suggest you learn from your best friend and figure out the relationship between system characteristics and restraint! Otherwise, if your character equipment skills are stacked like this, you will be unable to finish in the later stage! 3. The protagonist's thoughts and behaviors are rather awkward. In terms of the harem, his behavior is that of a straight man, but his thoughts are those of an lsp in order to cater to the readers. It is recommended that the character style be consistent. In terms of combat thinking, daily life and Shenxu's behavior feel torn apart. If you take the endlessly armed protagonist in the dungeon, you will all have the same idea. I really feel that the current description is very contradictory in reading, and it feels like the character has been replaced after entering the original version. If you behave like this, it will be very painful for you when you deal with real-world battles! (It's still early days, I hope the author will slowly adjust these problems through the growth of the protagonist)

It is best for the protagonist to be a lone wolf. After all, the setting is to devour this kind of thing, it is best to be a lone wolf. The protagonist is so awesome, and the money transaction in the early stage of joining the organization is best just due to the family background in the early stage. If it is still written like this in the later stage, the character design will easily collapse. Now there is still a chance to come true.

At first I was looking forward to the follow-up development of this book. However, the protagonist has the illusion of a split personality, and the perspective of a passerby supporting character may be too much. The transition from wanting to save the people under God's game to being sinister and contrived was so fast that it felt uncomfortable. The depressing plot is as suffocating as the fragmentation of daily life and the intelligence of the characters in the book! Can you imagine how I went from being very interested to feeling uncomfortable! Brother! How many years has it been! How can an official organization be so stupid! ! ! God hunters are different, I agree! But as the protagonist, can we not be so stupid and pretend to be a virgin at the same time? It doesn't matter what kind of harem you have, man please order it! We are not playing Guigu Bahuang!

The selection of materials is great. The writing was good at the beginning. The characters have been established and the world view has been explained. The theme is quite novel. The gods, sacred ruins, and sacred objects are indeed quite attractive. But why did it gradually stop working later on? The male protagonist's character also collapsed a bit. At first, he felt like he was strong, calm-minded, mysterious, and otherworldly. Now I don't know how to describe how I feel about him. I just feel a little disgusted. Especially the time between him and Jin Yingzhen, it was really outrageous. To me, half of the character's character was already broken at that time, and the protagonist At the birthday party when the group first arrived in Goryeo, the male protagonist hit the female star because he heard the God of Cookery say that she was trying to catch him. I thought it was outrageous. Maybe the author wanted to make the male protagonist appear to be powerful, but it gave me the feeling that the male protagonist became angry because of shame, and hitting girls is a very bad behavior. At this time, the image of the male protagonist in my eyes basically collapsed. There is also the author who drives a small yellow car from time to time. I think it is not necessary. If it is a little more obscure, it doesn't matter if it is driven occasionally. It can add a little interest to the article, but the author is a bit too presumptuous. It is still recommended that the author think about it carefully and take a break for a while if it doesn't work. The material selection is really good. It would be a pity if it was wasted.

Seeing the annual salary of 100 million, I really can't stand it. The background of the plot is actually quite innovative, but in any dungeon, the number of deaths exceeds four figures, and there are less than 3 dungeons in half a year. The casualties are relatively small, and 5,000 people have died. This is a script that even comics would not dare to draw like this. Regarding strength, the more Divine Favor you have, the stronger you will be. Then I looked at it, and if you took all Divine Favor, the three copies would have exploded at about 7.8 Points, and it would all be plot-based killings, so it really doesn't matter whether you are strong or not. I also became more and more fascinated by the interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters. The women who wrote about them all took the initiative to write down the characters, saved them several times and then died. The men were basically jealous of the treatment of the protagonist, or they were rich and powerful and paid for their lives, and then died. In the end, I still had to check whether the women who appeared in the copy were in the character list every time. The character of the protagonist is even more outrageous. He is coquettish, loves to show off, is lustful, innocent, wants to be famous, doesn't like the limelight, loves money, is not tempted by money, and is a holy mother. If you don't say anything, you don't do it yourself. It looks very separate. Everything is done halfway and then the mind changes. I thought it was the kind of Long Ao Tianwen where a bulldozer doesn't use his brain, but instead of bulldozing, he just used his brain to analyze the game despite the presence of plug-ins. Many girls with a lot of profile descriptions also went offline in various miserable ways. It is said that there are even more poisonous ones behind. I really can't stand it anymore, everyone, take care!

The character of the protagonist reflects the author's subjective thinking, vision and conception to a certain extent. What I saw in this book is a male protagonist who is extremely selfish, hypocritical and has low self-esteem. Although this is a fantasy novel, it is mixed with urbanism to a certain extent. I have never written a book review. This is the first time I will comment on the male protagonist of this book. The first male protagonist has low self-esteem when he has no money. He comes from a single-parent family and was raised by his mother who worked hard. When the male protagonist gets rich, he does not go home to see his mother as soon as possible, but buys a copy of the first apartment for himself during the Chinese New Year. Then I have a harem with wine and meat, and I don't want to go home to improve my mother's life. Secondly, I can casually give my own thigh pendants harem graces. They are all girls. My roommate wants to be a god hunter, so he directly persuades him to quit and says he is not suitable. He is extremely egoistic. He has a lot of graces in his hand but refuses to give one. This reflects that the author only has a sperm harem in his mind. Thirdly, if you are a woman, you need to have some sex. The team is all female, including the teammates around you, whether they are aunts or aunts, they all have a crush on the male protagonist. As long as he is a man, he must be a villain, or he is just a little bastard who comes to have sex with him. It is extremely intellectually depressing.

I haven't read a few chapters, but it's all about conflicts. I forcibly create all kinds of conflicts, and then let the protagonist show off, and the bystanders praise me. How can I put it? It's a bit bad.

It feels a bit unfinished, don't you think?

See the latest chapter. The conclusion I gave first is that this book is basically hopeless. Characterization is the biggest problem. A more specific description is I think it is very vague about what kind of person the protagonist is. Of course, similar problems will appear in many cool novels. Except for the protagonist, the portrayal of the female characters can only be described as appalling. As of Chapter 330, Gu Qingxiang may be the only one who has been more successful in portraying female characters. Other characters have to say that they want to give birth to a child for the protagonist every two or three chapters. This is not how they make up the word count. Then there are other supporting characters, who are either dead or called Lin Shen. There is this problem or the reason why this is a problem is that the level copies described in the book are all based on the setting of relying on the protagonist's golden finger to pass the level. In other words, there is no so-called trial and error or room for observation and reasoning. They just wait for the golden finger to give the answer. There is no logic at all. Without his golden finger, no one will know at all.

I can't stand it anymore. The setting of the novel is interesting, including the ruins of gods, taboo objects, and pollution. The characters are all quite unique, but they have no brains. The protagonist clings to his conscience and can't get over the hurdle in his heart no matter what he does. The gods have descended to earth, killing people indiscriminately, and the world is in chaos. Can you put your conscience troubles in the dimension of protecting all mankind? Sleeping with more women can be ranked later. The exploration process was also very boring. It was like having my eyes opened with the big tree at my back, but it was not interesting at all.

Forget it, I really can't stand it, Zuo Xi's brain circuit is not something normal people can understand

There are a few things that are quite outrageous 1. The difficulty is very strange. For example, the male protagonist basically cheats the entire game, but except for the male protagonist, the rest of the team basically cannot survive. How did the other bosses develop? At present, it seems that it is all based on trial and error with cannon fodder. Where do you get so many cannon fodder? 2. The official is very strange. I have not seen any official capability system, equipment, facilities, training institutions, etc., And there is not even an early warning patrol and emergency response management system. A √8 official only knows that there is a fire and goes to put out the fire or pay money. When normal people enter the pollution field, no matter their identity, they rely on the male protagonist for popular science. Except for gods It is obvious that other classes of hunters will die if they go in without knowing anything. And then you have to say that it is a small scale. It can kill a circle at every turn. For example, pollution breaks out at a gathering in the rich circle, pollution breaks out at a gathering in the anchor circle, and then a group of people die. There is no social unrest, and there are some gossips and rumors on the Internet every day. 3. The most difficult thing is that the male protagonist met two women in the early stage and kept them with him until death. They took them with him in the early stage and later in the later stage. The two women have no fighting or decryption talents. Apart from being willing to die for the male protagonist and solving physical problems, they have no effect. They are pure burdens and burdens. Heavy training, and it's not that they will die if the male protagonist doesn't take them with him. The pollution disaster in this book is relatively passive. For example, the male protagonist's mother and ambiguous classmates have been living a normal life, and even many god hunters can choose to retire if they are willing to give up eternal youth (not give up their power). Just because the two girls wanted to follow the male protagonist, they were reluctant to do so. The male protagonist himself said that he felt that he might not be able to protect them, but he still carried it with him every time. The upgrade system of this book has nothing to do with entering the field. It all depends on absorbing foreign objects, equipment and divine grace. These things the male protagonist can bring out to them, and the further he looks at it, the more he is having a brain hemorrhage.

This book is good enough, and it is amazing in the early stage. However, the author did not handle the emotional line very well. There are too many branches of emotional development, which affects the viewing of the main plot. The character of the protagonist in the middle period is still a little bit toxic in the early stage. In the early stage, book fans can understand that they are ignorant and stumbling, but in the middle stage, the character is still half-full and feels that it is a mess and not decisive enough. In the middle period, it turned into an urban romance novel, and I was confused when I read it. The main plot of the book has been separated from the main plot to eat gods. The outline structure and story background of this book are very interesting. Traveling to the sacred ruins of various countries will undoubtedly become a masterpiece, but the author did not handle it well, and it can be seen that the author's thoughts are a bit confused. Moreover, the level of the divine hunter has not been handled well. This needs to be improved and does not reflect the existence of the hungry wolf level, violent bear level, lion king level, etc. They are all reduced to trash fish. The rules for monsters and sacred ruins are not hierarchical and it is very awkward. This needs to be changed. There are many disadvantages and many advantages. Only the protagonist who goes through hardships becomes a masterpiece. Killing some female protagonists can reflect the horror of Shenxu and hone the protagonist's character. Otherwise, the male protagonist is like a hen protecting her chicks. This book can only be ignored by everyone.

What the hell😀 The author is from Nantong, right?

Who is reading this book? Chapters 1 to 5.

If the author doesn't do this, and later invites the decent villains from the previous more successful books to make guest appearances, similar to the Marvel Universe, he might be able to gather a group of old fans. For example, Tang Zheng and Silver Trojan, Sister Q and Qin Yan, and the Millennium Earl, by the way, the final battle that was not written in their time and space is also included, so that many concepts are reasonable.

It's not bad, just read it without thinking about it, it's a "brainless" read, and don't think about the details. In addition, this book can only be read in hoarding. Sometimes it's really too watery. I can give out some candy by watching the main character and the female character, and I can give out some candy by reading Dumpling Dumpling Tea Girl Da Xiong Crazy Pi, but the problem is that this new book is guaranteed to be good. Mu and her daughter still have an agent. It's really unnecessary. If you can't write a pornographic novel, don't leave the readers hanging. Why waste so many words on new characters that appear and disappear? There are also issues such as combat power, the sense of separation between reality and the gods, etc. I won't go into them. I hope it will be well written.

More good-looking

Can you write more, or else you should update more every day. Reading your book is like having a difficult childbirth.

This kind of writing is somewhat similar to the copy unlimited flow and urban campus cool articles. Once you have a rough outline and some ideas, you shouldn't just rush into writing and write dozens of chapters at once, and then revise them carefully, right? It's OK to find someone to ghostwrite the props and plot for others.