Survival: A Little Treehouse from the Start

The first and middle stages of the novel were very interesting, and the survival adventure of collecting supplies was really fun to watch. But later on, the focus changed when the districts competed for hegemony. The adventure and survival parts were obviously reduced. I kept writing all kinds of intrigues, and this is a survival novel. If you say that a few explorers get together, it is acceptable, but you will have to get together in the entire district later. Come on, what kind of adventure survival is this? The supplies in the back have also dried up. There are tens of thousands of various supplies. This obviously does not meet the definition of survival. As a result, the subsequent plot becomes very bland. I don't want to read it immediately. I still like this kind of novel about adventure survival and collecting supplies, but this kind of novel is easy to collapse when a lot of people get together.

Every time I see the heroine Li Wenxi's name being called without her surname, it easily makes me think of Leonardo da Vinci, good Vinci😂

Why should a good survival story arrange a harem plot for the protagonist? Even if you want to arrange it, you can wait until it develops. It has been arranged for the protagonist just after the start of survival. It was really awkward during the interaction. The protagonist rushed to keep up with the start and revealed that he cheated. After finishing it, he didn't believe it. I was really speechless. The most taboo thing in survival stories is that he is not clear with the woman.

I just finished reading it. At present, compared with the previous wilderness survival articles, it has its own characteristics, which makes me, an old bookworm, willing to pursue it. But as other book friends said, there is a big difference between a lone wolf and a team. When writing about team survival, in shaping each character image, if one is not handled well, it will easily lower the overall level, which is related to the later level. Make persistent efforts

I ran away in Chapter 8. This kind of writing is copied from each other. The typical performance is a lucky heroine, a rich female supporting character, and an unlucky and mentally retarded pig's trotters.

What I think is bad is that one is Lou Fei'er and the other is the little rich woman who has sex with her. She is always nervous no matter what the protagonist does. How well written it was before, ugh

To be honest, the only reason I couldn't stand reading this book was because of the author's name? Coco (Red Panda) Mimi (Leopard) Silver King (Wolf King) Bat (Ah Fu) Aifei (Pangolin) These are all dog names. No one really thinks that such a name can retain readers. No, no.

Dear readers, Coco is a red panda, not a giant panda!

After reading three hundred and one chapters, I really couldn't read any more. The male protagonist is really like a "nouveau riche", with "external appearance" but no "connotation". Even during the process of reading, I felt that the male protagonist Ji Chaoyang was more suitable to be the male protagonist. Lei Yi: No idea. After reading so many chapters, I really feel that the male protagonist is very childish. There is a contract, but the contract is very casual. Except that Mimi was chosen in the current environment, the rest is like as long as it is a mutation, I want to contract, and I don't think about anything else. Lei Er: Not responsible. This is also an important reason why I can't stand it. I made a contract with Ma, an important person with abilities. As mentioned in the previous sentence, he will attack the opponent when he is hurt. However, when the giant python brought the person to the point of death, there was no reaction... Anyway, there are a lot of tricks, so everyone can take advantage of them.

It's written in a mess. It's clear that the top reward in the first event is only for the protagonist to have a mobile watch screen. In subsequent events, you can also chat and trade with the protagonist in the wild.