I Pretend to Be a Prophet in the Salvation Organization

Salvation, behind-the-scenes, and organization-building novels are all my favorite genres. I look forward to a masterpiece that will amaze me, so I hope my suggestions can be helpful to the author in the early stage. Highlights of this work: 1. Personally, I like the process of recruiting talents. Just like the Tarot Club in "Lord of Mysteries", different members have different personalities and different stories. In layman's terms, it is a group portrait. The process of recruiting talents for the protagonist is like collecting cards or drawing cards. I look forward to the emergence of more characters, and hope that the author can give them fresh life and make them a "living person". However, there is a problem that needs to be noted: the recruitment of talents is linked to the map. A larger map means a richer plot, and possible tragic battles in the future. Nowadays, there are only a few people tomorrow, but the protagonist's predecessor saw a hopeless future. Even if the fate line changes, it still cannot be solved by a few people. If it is solved by a few people, it will be a bit of a joke. If there are more main people in the organization, the personalities of different people will be more distinct, which will be a great test for the author. If it is written well, then this group portrait will be a very good point. Be careful not to destroy the character. 2. Control of the plot, the protagonist is the prophet. He predicts major events that will happen in the future through his diary. This kind of spoiler can shape the characters who will appear in the event in advance, but it will also deepen readers' expectations of how the event will go in the future. For example, there are very few diary records about the appearance of the witch, so I wouldn't be too surprised if he was killed by the protagonist in the early stage. However, if the horrors of "Starscream" and "Ten Thousand Arms" are introduced from the beginning, their handling cannot be too simple. In other words, if the description of the BOSS you revealed in advance is very powerful, it cannot be easily solved in the later stage unless you are fully prepared. Therefore, the next crusade against the origin-level monster "Starscream" cannot be too simple. Because of the current strength, you also said in the diary that the entire army will be annihilated and the monster that will appear in a few months can only be laid out. Defeat him through a series of plans that are grand enough (although you now control one of the cores). If the author wants a plot where the protagonist can turn the tide, of course, to me, it will feel a bit like a nanny taking care of a child, because the reader will always believe: "Oh, the prophet will solve it." This inevitably reduces the expectation for the ups and downs of the plot. What I want to see is the growth of a group of characters, not "the nanny mother and the child she doesn't have." So this is also a test for the author, and a heroic crusade is also a plus point, because he witnessed the development, which is the process of history! 3. The shaping of the official organization, this is also a point that can be completely ignored, because this represents the IQ level of ordinary supporting characters. The author is not required to give each of them a distinct character, because there are too many and readers cannot remember them. But the overall core values ​​must be introduced: that is, what is the purpose of the organization's existence? What concepts do they uphold? Every action and appearance they make must present their overall core concept. Can the future be solved by just organizing one tomorrow? Therefore, large and small organizations represent different ideas. They can cooperate with the protagonist, or they can stand on the opposite side (of course, it is best to be the opposite of the idea). If the group portraits of the protagonist group in the front constitute the vivid Mingri Organization, then the group portraits of organizations large and small constitute a complete world! 4. Witness the process of history The development of Tomorrow's organization will be accompanied by events large and small. When readers look back, they will have a sense of witnessing history. This feeling will at least make me want to stop. 5. The reaction of the masses Since the protagonist adheres to the purpose of letting the masses understand and adopts live broadcast to popularize science to the people, the reaction of the people will definitely be related. Like many live-streaming articles, the interesting comments and reactions from netizens are his highlights. When the protagonist is like popular science, it is impossible for them to have no reaction at all, and these reactions are also interesting. Of course, these plots are just seasoning to enrich the plot. At the same time, who will go live and who will carry the banner also depends on which role the protagonist arranges. So, tomorrow the organization's departments will be divided. Which one is the Propaganda Department? Which one is the warhead? The process of dividing the departments later and witnessing the birth of a complete organization is also a highlight. Next are some suggestions: 1. The author divides the levels of enemies, and Origin is the highest level currently. However, we still need to strengthen the segmentation in this regard. Readers must not be confused about who belongs to which stage. 2. How does the author prepare to create the members of the organization? For example, the young lady at the beginning, I can't remember her character clearly now. She didn't speak much, so I only remember that she is now a driver of the protagonist? Are you planning to relegate her to a less important role? The same goes for other characters. For example, Ding Yan, in my opinion, is now a passionate sophomore boy who relies heavily on the prophet and lacks independent opinions. As I said before, if he can become a character who no longer relies on the protagonist and is very independent, then this process must be very interesting (just my own YY). After all, the members of the protagonist must at least grow up to be upright and protective characters in the future. Otherwise, it all depends on the protagonist, and the significance of the salvation organization will exist in name only. 3. The protagonist may be able to deepen his psychological activities, say less words that seem to be profound in long paragraphs, and try to be short and yet profound (this small suggestion can be ignored) 4. What about the description of ordinary people? This is also a place that enriches the plot. In summary, I am very optimistic about this novel and hope the author can write better and better

By the way, does the protagonist really stink? How about learning from the Hanged Man and putting himself into an antiseptic container, and then talking through a computer?

I am already past the age of second grade, but this book gave me that feeling of second grade. I hope the author can continue writing. By the way, let me tell you my own thoughts. The author can refer to them as appropriate, or you can ignore them completely. I really hope that my thoughts can give the author suggestions, but I am also afraid of interfering with the author's thinking, so you can make up your own mind! The first thing is about the ability of prophets to predict the future. This ability can be said to be bug-level, but the writing is also full of bugs. First of all, it is about the future. The possibilities of the future are endless. If someone can predict the future, then the result he predicts is the predicted result. The predicted result is the predicted result... Endless. This is a bug. However, you don't need to pay attention to this kind of detail in the novel, just ignore it. As for the application of this ability, there are already many works that can be referenced, such as Nicolas Cage's Foreseeing the Future or Tom Cruise's Minority Report. There is no need to elaborate too much on the prospects of this ability. According to my idea, Death is Coming is also a good reference. In addition, there are accidental killers. The method of killing people using various mechanical skills is very suitable for predicting ability. However, if it is simpler, then get a Barrett anomaly special sniper rifle, hide and shoot from ten thousand meters away, because when you shoot, you can already predict whether you can hit it, and you don't need to care about your shooting skills at all. Even in the future, will there be an ability like the good luck girl in One Piece, where she can directly kill her opponent through a chain reaction by just flicking a coin. In addition, there is no need to be so troublesome about the collection of intelligence. You can let the protagonist keep a diary, sort out the information collected in daily life, and write it all in the diary. By predicting the future, watching the subsequent diaries... This method can completely effectively organize the information. I even thought about talking to my future self through the protagonist's abilities. There is also a plot about the protagonist pretending to be cool, watching people from the future communicate... In the eyes of others, it feels a bit like a fool. You might as well know what the other person is saying through your ability before the person on the other side speaks, and answer directly before the opponent asks questions. In terms of ability, I will write so much first. This is also my own idea. The author can just show it to you. Well, in terms of plot, you can make up your own mind. When I first saw that bus, I had an idea. Could it be controlled by a web spinner? Or maybe this bus was owned by the witch. So would snatching it also give the witch a warning? Anyway, the witch will definitely not dare to take action. As long as it does not exceed the bottom line, it will be robbed. I even imagined whether there would be a big battle in the future when a bus would suddenly drive out from the void, and a bunch of Mingri members would descend from it. It would be such a surprising, magical, interesting and curious scene.

The follow-up reading I saw from other authors is really important for newbies, thank you

Recently I saw a picture, and I feel that his blindfolded tone really looks like a prophet, hehe, let's take a look

It's really sad. I liked this book very much, but I ended up going to find Tianyuan as a eunuch near the end. The prophet's journey has no end. When you were an eunuch, he was still fighting against time! Doesn't this extend the prophet's time endlessly? I want an ending!

A man who has just graduated from college, with a bunch of half-grown children, who are not yet 60 years old, we want to save the world, hahaha (ಡωಡ) The 68-year-old security guard at the entrance of hiahiahia said that he still has too little homework.

2p pure enjoyment of vertical painting (?) Someone has released xp, just take a look (paralysis)

Yes, I feel that there is tension and excitement, but there also needs to be the brilliance of humanity, such as a brother to a sister, a sister to a sister, or between brothers, or between lovers, a great relationship. Or the happy picture of grilled fish in a golden environment

The most ideal photo I can think of is actually this one that I substituted at the beginning. I feel that Ding Yan is a little less intellectual and a little more naive than this one, but at least he is still a serious college student (By the way, the picture is from Miyoushe. I can delete it if I am not satisfied with the original picture)