Romance? This Reborn Me Just Wants to Cash In

At the beginning, he used rhetoric to persuade the school leaders to change his major. He only said a few "official words" to feel good about himself. The school leaders also felt good about him, and he became a "capable" freshman in the eyes of the leaders. This is too outrageous. I have no problem with the plot of changing majors. After all, changing from high to low, the protagonist does some practical operations, and the leader follows the process, which is also very reasonable. The key is that the protagonist just said a few empty words and did not take any actual actions. In the end, he was able to successfully let his classmates switch from low-level to high-level majors. The final result seemed to be that the two people exchanged majors. Do you think this is a dormitory change? Is it as simple as telling the dormitory manager? What's more, changing dormitories is not that easy And when I met the second female lead for the first time, I was trying to improve my favorability in front of the boss and the second female grandmother. What I said made me dig my toes out of the three bedrooms and one living room. How is this different from the "Rasengan" president in "Spring Things", who just said a few "fake" words, and then got the approval and praise of the leader and the practical professor's grandmother. This is too funny. The author is completely self-pleasant and feels too good about himself. Speaking of plot, Sour Plum Soup is too long and complicated. What readers are watching is a plot in which the protagonist earns his first pot of gold by making sour plum soup and stands out among ordinary classmates. They are not here to learn "the development and marketing of sour plum soup". I know that the author is very capable, as can be seen from the characterization of the live broadcast operation, but you are a novelist, not a trainer, so you cannot put the cart before the horse. You can show your knowledge and ability while describing a plot that makes readers happy. This is no problem. Instead, readers will learn something and the work will be more in-depth. But throughout your article, you teach readers how to sell sour plum soup, run a live broadcast, and after you finish writing, you also include a few self-feeling comments. I have no empathy. If you put it in, I just feel awkward. This is also the reason why the plot only advanced for three days after dozens of chapters. Showing off knowledge is a bit too much. Do you know how I felt after reading the last chapter of 8,000+ words? I feel that there is no difference from the previous chapter. The previous chapter was about how the protagonist pretended to be, gained some favorability points, and won a lottery. This chapter was also about pretending, favorability, and lottery. I didn't feel the highlights at all. More importantly, the protagonist didn't pretend to feel happy. Instead, it made me feel that the protagonist was just enjoying himself (the author was enjoying himself). Let's talk about the heroine issue. I know that the author made the female characters so complicated because he wanted to reflect the highlights of the work, the depth and fullness of the characters. I have no problem with that, and I agree with it. After all, most works nowadays depict female characters in a labeled way. But has the author ever thought that his portrayal was in the wrong direction? After reading all the chapters, I didn't feel how unique these female characters were. All I knew was that the author kept telling me "how powerful she is", "how complicated she is", and "how the protagonist is afraid of her". The author just told me simply and straightforwardly that this female character is like this, without any events to show or describe it, which made me feel very pale. For example, the achievements of "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn" are obvious to all. The heroines Xiao Yu'er and Youchu in the book are also labeled heroines. One is arrogant and intelligent, the other has low self-esteem and is resigned. There is no complicated setting like "sixth sense". In the starting point, there are countless female characters with these personalities, but only a few are as impressive as Xiao Yu'er and You Chu, because Lao Liu is shown through events. He only mentions "Xiao Yu'er is so arrogant" after the display, so that readers can have a clearer impression of this character, instead of blindly telling readers that she is like this and she is like that. I really can't feel it. Can you talk less and do more? The too many straightforward portrayals of female characters are also due to the author's excessive self-pleasure. As a black man, you should also say a few words of "life-saving charm" after spraying. The reason why I read this book was because it was number one on the new book list at the time and was very powerful. I have also heard other people recommend the author's "Life Style Male God". After listening to the content of the book, I felt that the author was indeed very knowledgeable, and he was not on the same level as the lousy writers on the street. So when I saw this book, I immediately added it to my bookshelf to read, but the more I read, the more I felt it was a pity. The author is capable and knowledgeable, there is no doubt about this, but the author is too showy and too self-pleasant, which makes me a little bit unable to read it. Some people may say, if it doesn't look good, just don't watch it. Indeed, if it doesn't look good, don't read it. This is right, but it is a bit cruel to the author. If everyone thinks it doesn't look good and just leaves without expressing any opinions, then the author doesn't know what the problem is, so how can the work become good-looking? So I still choose to speak out, and I will continue to watch it, because I am an LSP, and the image of a girl and a girl does not have a deep impression in my mind. I am only a little concerned about the seniors with good figures. As an aside, there is a book I am following that has a fan base of 30,000, and only a few people have commented on the exciting plot, but the book has very good results (some have ordered tens of thousands). The review threshold for this book doesn't have any outrageous requirements, but the number of reviews is about the same as that book, very few. I think readers' empathy and empathy can be reflected in the number of comments, because even if most readers read the novel with their heads covered, they can't help but leave a few comments when they see something exciting. The more comments there are, the more fans will stick to it. For this book, I feel that the comments are not that positive. Of course, if there is any problem with the work, it is most correct to check the subscription. Maybe the long article I posted was just to feel good about myself and to cheer myself up. The author had his own considerations in mind. I also wish the author good health, this book will get better and better, and my senior will push it down soon!

Dare I ask these golden-fingered protagonists? After more than 200 chapters, one woman confiscated them, they have no career at all, and they are dragged back and forth between three women every day. In the end, they are still eunuchs. Pay attention, after 200 chapters, they are still eunuchs! Can you believe it? After sleeping with a heroine, I didn't dare to play with her for a whole day. Comrades, did you vomit? I'm sick and vomiting

A certain author: "When it comes to writing about cities, I am 🐶"

Let's put it this way, there is no sense of satisfaction at all. Chun Chun is just being sentimental and bringing trouble to himself. It's so idle that it hurts. I really don't understand what the author's intention is for this arrangement? Make it difficult for yourself? Or a perverted desire for challenge? Narcissistic self-pleasure? You can obviously find an opportunity to make a date, show off your beauty and strong figure, and easily win over the big breasts you are obsessed with with your fingers. You don't have to give any explanation, and people will follow you wholeheartedly, and you will not lose the heroine's personality charm. The result is this? Why do you want to be a monster and lower your favorability, and then resolve it? Pull? Fun? Interesting? It was simply a retarded operation among the retarded, and it made me look like I was awesome. It really made me laugh. The previous writing is so good, and the entrepreneurial part is also very good, but how can there be such a useless operation, and it is said to be a cool article, so cool, so cool

The protagonist is already reborn with the added system, and the hangup is big enough. Why do we need to arrange for a white and rich girl like Xiao Gu to come out? It is not impossible to have such a fair and rich girl in the heroine, but it is too early. Her appearance directly made Xiao Chen and Xiao Pei look a little funny. A strong T0 like Xiao Gu should be arranged to appear after the system is upgraded. And the current character design of Xiao Gu is too perfect and ideal, and the plot is too strong. Strong here means that it is difficult for the author to make reasonable changes to her, and the protagonist is not an honest and innocent good man, so the existence of Xiao Gu will either make the protagonist a scumbag, or crowd out the other female protagonists. Xiao Gu is like another cheater, perfect. The weak constitution the author assigned her seems to be a shortcoming, but in fact it is a strength in the plot, because it is a plus point in the readers' minds. Actually, when I read the back part, I felt that the heroines in this book actually occupied the ecological niche of villains. The two rich second-generation classmates were just funny clowns. It was the three heroines who really gave the protagonists confrontation and interaction. So the ultimate boss like Xiao Gu should not be conquered at the same time as the novice village boss like Xiao Chen Xiaopei. If there are only these three female protagonists and there are no new characters in the future, then just pretend that I didn't say anything.

Through the author's descriptions of money, women, and desires, I can actually see the cowardice and inferiority hidden behind the illusory imagination. It's not that what the author writes is all obscene and unrealistic, but it feels like a rat in the gutter will one day succeed the villain. No matter how explosive and exciting the content is, the bad nature reflected will be as vulgar and unbearable as possible. To put it bluntly, a common man trapped in the theory of value is still imprisoned in the market even if he is reborn. His reality and spirit are not a little better (except for his parents). Instead, his hatred and desire are magnified by rebirth But it is true that reading online articles is just for fun, but I believe that people should always use words better.

The biggest problem with this book has been exposed, the logic is broken. The protagonist has a system to spend money on women to get gold coins, and then the protagonist provokes a super rich second generation. The father of this rich second generation is a daughter slave. As long as his father investigates carefully, he will find that the source of the protagonist's money is unknown, and the only option left is money laundering.

It's just my personal opinion after reading the book. I don't know if everyone agrees with it. It would be better if the bread can also come in and take a look. As for the decline in reputation, I think it lies in two aspects: the main line problem and the writing characteristics problem 1. The main line problem. The main lines of Bread's urban writing are roughly two: one is the career line, and the other is the emotional line. In terms of career line, although the "life department" has not been completed, it also involves the country's economic system, which is very competitive. The "Consumer Department" plays in the financial circle and is also very high-end. In these two circles, one is the quick money, but the other is the high level of sex, which can satisfy many people's complacency. There must be many people who have also imagined that they can make waves in business or financial markets, right? Therefore, these two career lines can be accepted by the public, which is very interesting to see. But as for this book, the career line is indeed on the live broadcast track, which is relatively niche, and the sense of substitution is too small. Moreover, for those who are interested in live broadcasts, most of the focus is on the "female anchors" that everyone knows 🤭. But let alone the female anchor in this article, I haven't even figured out the female protagonist. Such a "plain" novel has reduced the appeal of the live broadcast track to the lowest point! On the other hand, the career line mainly provides readers with a sense of accomplishment, and can also provide strength support for the protagonist to show off. This is one of the exciting points of reading. If it is extremely exciting, it can become the climax of a work! However, this book has one million words, but the protagonist has not achieved much success in his career. He is still in the stage of making cakes for himself and others! The biggest thing the protagonist pretends to be is a birthday gift from a woman! For now, it can be said that the career line is not supported at all! Let's talk about the emotional line. In the first two books of Bread, the protagonist "Beheading the Girl" is very decisive and seldom drags his feet. Even if there is a pull, it doesn't last for a long time. There is still some money-worshiping among them. Mu Qiang's "wild monster" automatically comes to the door and lets the protagonist play wild. This is very real and makes readers feel happy to read it. Looking back at this book, the protagonist is like a eunuch. Not to mention fighting with the heroine, and not fighting the wild monsters that come to his door. This is very disgusting. Is the protagonist reborn as a eunuch? No matter what the author wants to portray the protagonist into, as far as the protagonist's performance of retreating from the battle is too feminine and not like a man at all, I personally feel that the author is pulling for the sake of pulling. The plot of the three heroines, too, is going on every day. It's already a million words long, and it's still going on. It feels like most of the book is going on, but are readers really just here to read it? I'm afraid not! And just keep pushing, you have to give readers some hope! But the author is very incompetent and leaves no hope to the readers. As for the favorability degree, it has no reference meaning at all, because it will decrease. It seems that the protagonist finally managed to increase the favorability degree, and he was able to return to before liberation. The repeated push and pull with Chen was really annoying. The part that shocked everyone the most was the scene with Senior Yu. Many people were looking forward to a climax in the company meeting, but the author acted in a coquettish way and deliberately refused to acknowledge each other and did not say anything, and his favorability dropped drastically. Perhaps from the perspective of the bread, this is a true reflection of human nature, but from the perspective of the reader, it is pure being fooled, and hope is completely broken. Readers cannot get any positive feedback from the book. In other romance novels, you can at least watch the relationship between the male and female protagonists gradually deepen, and you can increasingly expect that the protagonist will finally achieve success. But this book is different. This good impression can be reduced, it all depends on the author's operation. The author does not give readers a sense of security at all, and has no intention of being a man. It has already stretched a million words, and maybe it will still be the same after another million words. Favorability rises and falls. This is also the main reason why many readers find it uninteresting, because they have no expectations. To sum up, in terms of the main plot, whether it is the career line or the emotional line, it does not meet the readers' demands. After one million words, there is not even a climax! It is inevitable to be considered a hydrology. It gives the impression that the author just insisted on dragging out the word count and wanted to drag out four to five million words. 2. Writing characteristics. If the protagonist only makes readers feel weak and makes people feel that the author is dragging out the plot, then the writing characteristics are the main reason why many readers cannot read it. One of the characteristics of Bread's book is that there are many explanations, such as explanations of the psychological game of the characters, explanations of business operation models, etc. This shows that Bread has a large reserve of theoretical knowledge (emphasis added, this refers specifically to theoretical knowledge). Bread likes to instill this theoretical knowledge into readers through articles. This is a major feature of bread, which attracted a large number of loyal readers from the beginning. But success is also a failure. This feature is very attractive when used well, but it is also very discouraging when used indiscriminately. In terms of career lines, everyone loves to read the detailed information in the previous two books. On the one hand, most people are interested in knowledge about the business and financial circles. Also, after I understand some of these, although it will not allow me to make money with this knowledge, it will allow me to use this knowledge to show off in chats with others, show off my understanding of economics and finance, and show that I am a literate person. But what about this book? How many people are interested in the convenient knowledge of live broadcast? Some people don't watch live broadcasts, and some people watch them, but they have little interest in live broadcast management, and there is no place to show off this knowledge. Since they are not interested, who wants to be forced to stuff a lot of hard knowledge into their brains? I came to read novels for entertainment, not to learn, not to mention that this number of words still costs money! Comparatively speaking, who is happy to spend their own money to learn something useless and not interesting in their own time? I think this is the biggest reason why this book dissuades readers. Talking about the emotional line, the main problem is that it is pulled too much, and it is pulled repeatedly. In addition, every time the bread is pulled, it requires psychological analysis, which may make you vomit. This type of psychological analysis, when I read it for the first time, I felt it was very unique and quite good. Reading it occasionally is a great advantage. But you can't help but keep looking at it. No matter how good something is, you will get tired of it if you look at it over and over again. Do you know about aesthetic fatigue? Infinite pulling and endless psychological analysis make people tired of watching it. You can't blindly use your strengths. This time Bread applied his characteristics to the wrong place, and coupled with constant repetition, it became the biggest poisonous point of the entire book. My words may be exaggerated, but as a long-time reader, I sincerely hope that bread can reverse its decline. The strength of bread is understandable, and platinum is no problem. But you also need to think about it from the reader's perspective: what do readers want to see, what don't they want to see, and what they are tired of seeing and need to make some changes. It is best to listen to readers' opinions. I sincerely hope that Bread's book will get better and better as time goes by!

An author of a harem novel actually played with literary youth in the finale? I can understand the previous books whether they are bad endings or not, and I can also accept them if they are barely finished and have an open ending. But there is so much foreshadowing in the beginning of this book, and in the end you told me to only accept one? What's going on? Fortunately, I didn't book the whole thing directly.

It's 2024, why are there still authors who can't figure out that writing about waistcoats in cool novels is a huge poisonous point? Who would care to see you acting as a Gou Daoliu in an urban novel? There is also a system in place and it is too poisonous to write such a large space about live broadcast internet celebrities.