Chief, Stop the Face-Slapping

How many people think that "chief, don't slap me in the face"?

Except for the first three chapters, which are free, I have subscribed to all others. This is my first time doing this. I don't know how long I can last. I am still a student.

Seeing that the protagonist's sister was going to stay, I suddenly felt a little scared I used to read books where the protagonist's relatives and friends were in danger in dangerous places, that is, they were forced to rape by various villains, and then the protagonist came back at the critical moment. I was really afraid that the author would write this kind of plot.

It feels pretty good, but there are a few bad points that make me want to give up the book 1. The protagonist feels like she graduated from a cooking school and can make N kinds of food and pastries using original ingredients. Then every time someone joins the team, the old team member will ask her to eat dozens of delicacies one by one, which is annoying to watch. 2. Obviously the Dayangma tribe has realized that the protagonist is very cool, but there are still some people who refuse to accept provocations, and then get slapped in the face in various ways. Afterwards, as if they are meeting for the first time, they feel that the protagonist is so annoying. 3. Every time I fight, I want to report all my trump cards. If the enemy can be killed with two pinches, I have to introduce the skills, levels, props, and units for half an hour before killing him. Fighting is like a fight between two children. They chat for a while and fight a few times, talk for a while again, and fight a few more times. There is no tension at all.

What's wrong with Damselfly? The update speed has been a lot slower these days. Let me know if you have any problems. We don't have to press F5 all the time

Are you off on Sunday? Still thinking about volume 4.

After reading three chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist's father died for the tribe, and the fate of the remaining children has become like this. Who will dare to sacrifice their lives for the tribe in the future? Do you think all senior executives are NC?

In fact, to be honest, this novel is very good overall! But his description really left me speechless. When he stroked it, he said he was petting a puppy. When he described someone else's loyalty to you, he said someone else was a dog! You are not describing the state of mind, you are already insulting. Think about it for a moment, how would you feel if someone described you as being loyal to him, but in his heart he thought you were his loyal dog. The author completely writes it from a third perspective. This work does not bring himself into the perspective of the protagonist at all. It is purely for us readers to watch, which is a bit careless. It is purely for the purpose of making money. When the novel is mixed with interests, it will indeed deteriorate.

Why do you think there are so many stupid supporting characters in the previous chapters, they are just mindless! It makes my head hurt to read them. The novel is still very good. It's just that there are always those idiots who pop up and disgust the main characters. Occasionally, one or two are much better, but they can't stand it anymore! I haven't seen it yet, so I don't know what happened. There are too many brainless descriptions of the supporting characters in the previous chapters, which overwhelms the word count and disgusts the readers, making old bookworms fall into the trap. If the author sees it, he can consider modifying it to improve his income. He just makes suggestions and personal opinions. If there is a conflict with the author's intention, I will treat it as if I didn't say anything.

This book is over, let's do some statisticsHow many people are looking forward to the author's next book to write a follow-up to panic