Master of Secret Arts!

The boss is a woman, the colleagues are women, the police officers handling the case are women, and the master and apprentice who make the medicine are also women. The proportion of women is too high. Moreover, most of the positive and important characters are women. The men are either villains or extras. Judging from the protagonist's personality, he doesn't seem like a harem type.

1. The setting is Western fantasy, but the way they speak, act, and act pretentiously is too Eastern, making it neither truly Eastern nor Western. 2. The protagonist hasn't developed his cheat ability at all. To be honest, he currently only has physical attack.

One idea is that in the text, each stage of learning a secret technique involves acquiring a secret technique organ. Beyond twelve stages, multiple secret techniques are required, leading to a situation where the techniques don't coordinate and simply accumulate in number.

It feels so weak; the villain's rituals get disrupted so easily, and the villain's intelligence seems lacking. In other books, the instruments are always activated and can't be destroyed, or the ritual is in another dimension and can't be found normally. The villain's ritual in this book is so destructive that it collapses almost immediately.

At first, I thought that the gap in strength between cult organizations and the security bureau was enormous, and that they could only develop followers in secret, like rats underground who dared not show their faces. As a result, the strength of large cult organizations is on the same order of magnitude as that of the National Security Bureau, and two large cult organizations are even strong…

I just saw the latest update and have a few words to say. You're supposed to be a super gunslinger, but you don't learn gunfighting techniques? What kind of gunslinger are you? The protagonist keeps muttering about needing to learn some hand-to-hand combat, but dozens of chapters have passed, and where's the hand-to-hand combat? How many times has he encountered danger?

The State Security Bureau is utterly incompetent. How can they possibly suppress all cult members? A single branch of the organization can easily go toe-to-toe with a branch of the State Security Bureau; with more, they would have been wiped out long ago. The State Security Bureau's operations are always known to the cult members, and they're always ambushed. This makes it seem like the State Security Bureau is actually fighting back against the cult members.

If you can't stand stories about men living off women, this is best read with caution. The characters are poorly developed, making the writing feel stiff. There are lovable people, sad people, strong people, pessimistic people, extroverted people—even after so many people died, not a single mother cried. It's just a set of statistics, so it feels soulless. It's purely a narrative book.

This is so weak! They immediately repeat what they just said. And when a woman appears, even if she appears several times, their clothing and appearance are described repeatedly each time, which really affects the reading experience.

There are too many women, and they are all beautiful. It's boring to look at them. It's already 2023, not 2013.