Master of Secret Arts!

The boss is a woman, the companion is a woman, the police officer handling the case is a woman, and the two masters and apprentices who refine the medicine are also women. The proportion of women is too high, and most of the positive and important roles are women. The men are either villains or sidekicks. Looking at the protagonist's personality, he doesn't look like a stallion type, right?

1. The background is Western fantasy, but the pretentiousness in talking and doing is still too oriental, and the things are neither east nor west 2. The protagonist has not developed the ability of Goldfinger. To be honest, it is just a physical attack. Since Goldfinger can improve the skill level, you should learn more skills at this time, such as physical attack, spell attack, movement speed, constitution (defense), etc., And improve these aspects simultaneously. Otherwise, except for attack, the protagonist himself is still an ordinary person. This protagonist's brain is abnormal and he is not a qualified protagonist.

An idea is that the secret training level in the article will have a secret organ. If multiple secret skills are required for more than twelve levels, the secret skills will not cooperate with each other and are simply accumulated in quantity. If the secret skills cooperate with each other to form a system, it can be advanced, such as legs, feet, shoes, lungs (endurance). After advanced, it will become an agility system legend. If multiple systems cooperate, such as fighting, movement, and resistance to strikes, it can become Myth Because the mysterious organs are not necessarily physical, the combination is not necessarily physical. For example, if the organ is a gun, a boat, or an artillery, you can be promoted to captain The number of component organs is different, and the strength is also different. Four components are stronger than three The system combinations of each myth can overlap. For example, if you fight and move, you are a warrior, but if you move and hide, you are an assassin. , Fighting, gunner, movement is like a gun fighter

I feel so weak. The villain's ritual is destroyed at every turn, and the villain's IQ is not enough. In other books, the instrument is activated and cannot be destroyed. The ritual is in a different space and cannot be found normally. The villain of this book is a little destroyed when the ritual is activated. Let's stop. Not only the protagonist is so weak, but the villain is also very weak. There is no such despair, suffocation, grandness of the villain's ritual, or the tension that if you don't do something sexy soon, you will be beaten Mediocre villain, mediocre ending 😵

At first, I thought that there was a huge gap in strength between the cult organization and the security bureau, and that they could only develop followers secretly, like rats in the ground afraid to show their faces. It turns out that the strength of large-scale cult organizations is on the same order of magnitude as that of the Security Bureau. Even two large-scale cult organizations are strong enough to resist the Security Bureau. With such strength, do they still need to hide? Do you still need to secretly develop believers? Just break the soil and become independent.

I saw the latest one, let me tell you a few words, you are an extraordinary gunman, but you don't learn the art of gun fighting, and you become a gross gunman? Looking at what you wrote, Pigfoot keeps muttering, it's time to learn to fight, it's time to learn to fight, dozens of chapters have passed, where is the fight? How many times have you encountered danger? Once he was choked, and once he was almost disemboweled. Can you give pig's feet some IQ?

The Security Bureau is too overwhelmed. How can we suppress all the cultists? One organization branch and the Security Bureau branch can fight against each other. If there are a few more, it will be over. The Security Bureau's actions are always known to the cultists and ambushed. The Security Bureau in this article is resisting the cultists, right?

It's best to be careful if you don't like soft rice. The characters are very impersonal, so they look a bit stiff. There are cute people, sad people, strong people, pessimistic people, extroverted people, even death💩 so many people don't even have a mother to cry. It's just a set of data, so it seems to have no soul. It's a purely narrative book📖, personal reflections. Why don't you have any friends of the same sex? It's too exaggerated to think of having a harem.

That's too cool. What I just said should be explained again immediately. If a woman appears, even if she appears several times, her clothing and appearance must be described repeatedly every time, which greatly affects the reading experience.

There are too many women, and all of them are beautiful. It's boring to watch. It's already 2023, not 2013.