Monster Altar

I wanted to see a plot that used the abilities of anime characters to show off, but it turned out that I had the ability. I didn't use my imagination to enrich the skill forms, create gorgeous big scenes, kill enemies, fight monsters, play in a realistic style, train skills, and there are always villains one after another who want to cause trouble for the protagonist. I admit that the reasons for causing trouble are barely justified, but writing so many plots that seem to have a deep hatred and sworn hatred for the protagonist is interesting? It's realistic enough, but I just don't feel comfortable reading it. This kind of comprehensive comic doesn't need such realistic training. It's invincible. It's just fun. It's a pity. I have withdrawn it anyway and the poison test is over.

There is a problem with the construction of the world view. Since there is an official powerful organization (which can mobilize most other groups and destroy an illegal organization, it can be regarded as a powerful organization), then the public security cannot be too bad. At least in the city, there cannot be a large number of monsters, and the battles of those awakened people should also be greatly restricted. The system is right Also, it is a bit confusing that the way to collect bounties is cash. The society in this book's world view is still an industrial society. The biggest feature of industrial society is a highly specialized division of labor. Since there is a division of labor, then there should be a complete financial system that does not require a bank card. The oldest passbook should still be available.

But this one is really shit, he has much more awesome talents than the anime protagonist, and he also has the memory to develop. Ace's bounty level is 1 billion in two years since his debut, and he has entered the new century in three months. Anilu can destroy the island by himself in two years. This hot chicken protagonist has more talents than these people, and even Aaron can't beat him in three months. Enelu has not had any training experience since he was a child, so he relies on his own exploration to crush this younger brother protagonist. If the plug-in is turned on so much, any younger brother can hit him while hanging, and when he jumps from a building, he doesn't turn into elements and still breathes. Since he can breathe, wouldn't it be nice to run and have a blessing behind him? Various abilities and talents of anime characters are forcibly reduced.

I quite like this genre, but the author is a scumbag, the world has many loopholes, and are all the characters mentally retarded? The dissuasive effect is too strong

After following it for so long, I feel that the author is getting worse and worse as he writes. Now the plot fight means losing skills, plus after ten minutes, XX dies, the protagonist does not have the spirituality in the early stage, and now it is just to gain experience from fighting monsters. Can you describe more about the environment and fighting? It feels like it's all smooth now, without any trouble. The protagonist is just a tool, fighting all the time and the description is simple:

The world view of this book is a bit unique. Most of the awakened people are selfish and brainless. Where is the order? This is the setting of the doomsday. There is no bright spot except Golden Finger.

I took a look. The author has written four or five books, right? The writing skills are really simple! The characterization of the scene and the psychology of the characters. This is really how straightforward it is The structure of the story. Follow that logic. I really doubt that what I do is just write whatever comes to mind. Is there an outline? The golden fingers are so wide open. To 110 pictures. Besides fighting, it's all about drawing cards. A fight is a tough fight. Isn't this the same set of "Fights Break the Sphere"? I have written three or four books. I don't have any writing skills! Neither does the structure and logic of the story. If the author wants to write this book, he can write whatever comes to mind in terms of structure and logic. The text is plain and straightforward. It is certain that the subsequent results will become increasingly unsatisfactory. It's really too late if we don't make changes. You now at least have the after-effects of the recommendation.

There are not many problems with the book, but the details are not very reasonable, and the use of abilities is rigid, which makes people feel that the protagonist's IQ is not high. The author can read the comments and refer to it. After all, crowdfunding is also popular now to write books, and very rubbish monsters can be exchanged for excellent talents. I don't know what the author will do in the later stage, the first sacrifice You can understand it even if you give me a cheat. You can exchange low-level monsters for high-quality talents every time in the future. What else is there to train for? Just hunt down low-level monsters, collect thousands of abilities, and use them together, such as controlling electricity and water, getting hydrogen out, and using fire control to ignite it. After a few months of development, it is not necessarily more powerful than this, right?

The author made the mistake of writing about Naruto and One Piece's bad abilities. In fact, there are many abilities that are less written about, such as Hunter, Space Knight, Dragon Ball, Inuyasha, Fullmetal Alchemy, Journey to the West, Journey to the West, etc.

The demon ape gave you Saiyan talent? I'm afraid you can't be funny anymore. Go home and eat some books

It is completely impossible to understand the ideas in the author's novel. According to the author's description, how do ordinary people survive? Why isn't it extinct yet? It doesn't mean it has to be reasonable, at least it shouldn't insult the reader's intelligence, right? To say ugly things is just to waste money, and there is no sincerity in writing a book.

To be honest, the idea is very good, and the writing is smooth and refreshing, which is actually good. The only thing the author has chosen is that the abilities he chose are all poorly written, which makes it easy to mess up and the reading experience is poor. Big cheers for the author.

Come on Wuhan, come on China!

In fact, the protagonist should be given blacksmithing, pharmaceutical, or synthesis abilities as well as powerful sealing and enchantment abilities at the very beginning. The growth of these abilities is infinitely easy to set growth conditions. It also eliminates the need for familiar animations. Leading to serious drama.

This theme is very good, yes, the King of Fighters Sochikyō's skills can be added appropriately! In this case, if the protagonist has the melee skill, it's OK.

Don't be too restrictive, it's a cool article after all

Come on, come on! Let me add a setting to the author's altar. First of all, the sacrifices are divided into those killed by the protagonist and those obtained through trading. 1. Killed by the protagonist: The setting of the shadow is that because the prey is killed by the protagonist, the prey has a similar relationship with the protagonist such as causal value and resentment value. These relationships will affect the compatibility between the acquired abilities and the protagonist, which is reflected in the strength of the abilities. , Even because it is hunting, there is a greater chance of obtaining combat abilities. 2. Obtained by buying and selling: Such sacrifices can also obtain abilities, but they will be biased towards life-type abilities, and they are biased Living sacrifices and dead sacrifices: Obviously, living sacrifices gain stronger abilities and have a higher degree of compatibility Sacrifice types: Blood and meat : It is easier to obtain physical talents Spirit type: The probability of obtaining mental talents is higher Energy type: Obviously Technical type: Some monsters have powerful skills, such as using swords, guns and sticks. It is easy to obtain such talents after sacrifice Spirit type: You can think about how weird it is. ……………… Multiple sacrifices: Compound abilities can be obtained The problem of prey selection: There is no way at the beginning, there will definitely be conflict of abilities later, so sacrifices must be made with caution Tips for multiple uses of the sacrifice space Qiao: It all depends on the author's plot needs I found this book very interesting as soon as I read the title and introduction. However, a very manipulative cheat failed to score points. I only saw the protagonist being hunted, counter-killing, sacrificing, cultivating, being chased, counter-killing...

In normal movies, it's okay to have an intuitive judgment, but in anime, it's a bit painful, as the power system collapses too easily.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I feel that the power system is seriously broken. Not only that, but other settings are also quite broken. First of all, in terms of the power system, the protagonist has high attack and low defense, and his physical ability is quite poor, which is very consistent with the super power system. But if we look at the other awakened ones, forget about those who transformed into beasts. The assassin who awakened his shadow ability was hit so many times by the protagonist's heavy machine gun-level fireballs, but he was only injured. Look at the two people who ambush the protagonist, a person with lightning ability, wielding a big ax and resisting the protagonist's heavy machine gun-level fireball is no big deal. It doesn't matter if the wind ability user is slightly injured after being hit. Does the author have any misunderstandings about heavy machine guns? Or is it that the body of any person with abilities is the super alloy level? If so, how strong must the monster be to force humans to be like this? Then there are settings about assassinating others in order to grab prey, or even greedily stalking and planning to rob in official territory. I can't understand it even more. Humans have already They have been compressed in the city, but they are still so capable of fighting among themselves. You must know that every awakened person dies, and one is missing. The officials actually say nothing, and let these black sheep destroy the foundation of mankind? If the officials are incompetent, then that's it. The author has already said that the strongest ones are official personnel, but they don't care at all.

Don't forget to recommend old books. There are so many new books every day in Qidian. If you go to old books to attract people, you will definitely not be popular. The last book is actually very good. If you go to old books earlier to attract people, the results will definitely be good. If you don't go to old books to attract people, the results of new books will not be much better at the beginning.

I only read Chapter 27, and I discovered that this is a world without order. Tens of thousands of dollars in profit can make one person murder another person. No one will stop the killings in the city. The official existence only lies in issuing bounties to hunt monsters. When human beings' survival is seriously threatened, they don't know how to unite and are constantly at war with each other. I think it is really a miracle that human beings are not extinct in the world described by the author. 🙂

This book is so poisonous. I thought it was a fairy grass, but I didn't expect it to turn into food and grass, and finally turned into a poisonous weed. Take stock of the poisonous points. After all, those who only talk about the poisonous points but not the poisonous points have no ***. First of all, although this is a book about high martial arts wasteland, it is normal for human nature to be dark, and it is acceptable to intercept, kill and attack for a small amount of money, but who is going to give you the overnight meal? Secondly, when provoking a new enemy without taking precautions and waiting to intercept them, I saw this is simply poisonous. Then I really didn't think the protagonist couldn't beat him, so I just ran away, 😆😆😆. In the end, with just these 20 chapters, I was successfully persuaded to quit.

It's not to my liking since Knight, I hope this book 👍

This is your third book. As an old book fan, I have always found your ideas to be good and novel. Rewards points, I wish you a good flow of literary thoughts. No other author has given me a tip, it's you😄

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The Goldfinger setting is interesting, but it falls apart at the beginning. The protagonist has hacking abilities and can even invade countries. He has the ability to use money to strengthen his power, so he has to fight in the wild to earn money? The golden finger went too far and collapsed all of a sudden. If you are being chased, don't hack into the bank and use the enemy's money to strengthen it. This is too brainless and terrible. If you use this golden finger on a dog, you can probably do the same as the current protagonist.

I don't want to say anything, but after reading a few chapters, it's too poisonous. The natural devil fruit is written in a scumbag, not to mention that it doesn't even have the ability to create original skills. Fire has no temperature, only kinetic energy. After I'm convinced, it's still the same old author! ! ! Can you take a look at the detailed settings of animation abilities and reflect them more rigorously? I originally thought he was a new author from junior high school, but I didn't expect him to be an old author. This is my first time to criticize, and for no other reason than for the setting of the altar ability and how to put it, yes, it's okay to be angry without arguing, so why should I do it casually? ? ? I feel sorry for the creativity of this book.

This book is so good. I'm going to leave now. Come on everyone.

The idea is good, but the plot is crappy. The pig's feet are weak and painful to watch. A good book about killing monsters, upgrading, and being invincible. It makes you smarter and smarter. If you don't do anything all day long and have a bunch of useless abilities, is it here to increase your slots? The writing is not good but it is so complicated that it doesn't even have a main line structure.

Let's put it this way, the plot is more novice than novice! Fighting monsters to upgrade, fighting monsters to upgrade, fighting monsters for the sake of killing monsters is not interesting at all, and the writing skills, I can't believe it. This author has also written two complete novels, each of which has an average of more than 100,000 or 200,000 recommendation votes. If it is your first time to write a book, I will not say anything. After writing for so long, your writing style is so bad! It's similar to how I wrote essays in high school.