This NPC Is Too Strong

Let me talk about my Subjective Feelings Nondescript, trying to sell dog meat... Not to mention whether the elements of the book's labels "Fourth Natural Disaster", "Online Games" and "Invincible Flow" have been written Just look at the copywriting section, tsk, apart from the beginning, there is no fishing as an NPC anymore. In the middle, I ran to the "Dead World" to look for resources. Because I found that the response was not good, I quickly ended this copy Then I started to run the Chamber of Commerce in a big way. Not long after the business started, he went overseas again. It's worth sayingCopywriting fraud Since going overseas, it can be said that there are very few elements such as players. It has a fantasy flavor of the underworld upgrade flow. As for the elements of the fourth natural disaster and NPC, removing this will not affect the plot after Chapter 230 I regret subscribing so much... In conclusion, the author does not distinguish between priorities and does not understand the needs of readers and the attractiveness of this book. [Only my thoughts after reading this] [Subjective, subjective, very subjective! !

To be honest, Pig's Feet should be trained by those who are rich and powerful. When tasks are released like this, the rich and powerful will naturally use their own power to complete them, rather than returning favors or helping people they knew before

The recent ones are too shabby. Three or four of them are probably equivalent to one chapter of someone else's content. They are outrageous.

Ampere died. Shouldn't there be an update?

It's getting more and more confusing. The original content of one chapter was split into two chapters just for the so-called two updates a day. In fact, the number of words is not as good as a chapter by other authors. Each chapter is 10 coins, just to make up the number of words. The content is all water and consumes the enthusiasm of readers. It was okay at the beginning, but it was turned into a bad book.

I've read a hundred chapters so far. The only thing I want to complain about is the realm, the golden elixir human immortal, and the Nascent Soul earth immortal. Maybe I was too brainwashed by the fantasy of immortals, and it was so awkward to watch.

The content and direction of the book are very satisfying, and the future plot is worth looking forward to. The character of the protagonist is also great. The author can make it more full-bodied, not only bringing in the general character of a time-traveling protagonist, but also many things that happened in the past may affect the protagonist's current character, such as certain obsessions, some psychological shadows, and the like. I hope the author can shape a world according to his own ideas, rather than being novel for the sake of novelty! Come on! !

It's really well written, good luck to the author.

Why are you taking two seats? By the way, how is this book? Is there a Shennong? Thank you

If this book didn't give away girls, lick girls, abuse the master, suppress the protagonist's strength, and follow your own pace, it would definitely be a good book. This book is really good.

Oh my gosh, I thought my poison resistance was pretty good, but I only saw Chapter 4 and people were almost stunned by the poison😓

I said, does it have to be about swords? How about writing something else? What's so good about a sword? 🙂

Collection Building I am currently working on the follow-up outline and preparing for the next storyline. Coupled with staying up late, my hair is falling a little and my brain is a little weak. Here I would like to collect various magical powers and spells from you. For example: the Demonic Blood Magic Sword, the Yin-Yang Magnetic Extinction Divine Ray, the Innate One-Qi Great Capture, and the Taisu One-Yuan Divine Needle. Excuse me, everyone with a good mind can also get a lot of inflammation. Crab everyone! ! !

The protagonist Li Yu seems to be decisive in killing, but in fact he is indecisive. He seems to be an old man, but in fact he is impulsive and pretends to be cool. He seems to be taking advantage of the players, but in fact he is being taken advantage of by the players! 😂😂😂😂

I'm not telling you, your progress is too slow. I have been focusing on describing the protagonist's desire for cultivation and trying every means to improve it. At first, it was okay to go from mortal to Daoji in 100 chapters. In the end, I wrote 200 chapters from Daoji to Jindan. I initially thought that the protagonist would get to Jindan when Weirdness was just starting to show signs of being weird, in the early and middle stages of Weirdness. Only when Yin Shen becomes a boss can he implement his plan, but as a result, you keep putting it off. At the beginning of the book, he kept talking about how dangerous it is to be weird, and that he should do his best to practice and so on. It's okay to put it off. The writing is not interesting. The protagonist has adventures all the time, and he also gets a lot of good things. You just don't move for a while in cultivation, and you just flick a hammer here and there with scissors all day long.

Well, Ouyang Xiaoqian was rescued by the protagonist, pulled up her sleeves, stuck out her tongue, and called the protagonist Uncle Li. The protagonist was seeking the method of the second soul, and she asked the protagonist to take her. Alas, I can't escape this type of character in novels.

I think if the author can continue Ma Jia's book, it should also have good results.

The Pill King contains a hundred-year-old elixir, which will make all creatures run away on their own after unsealing the city. Let the protagonist's cultivation level improve a little to reach the innate perfection. It made me happy to see this. The co-author and the main character are heads🐷.

Eunuch's is a bit normal. This book really opens up and down. It's full of details in the early stage, and the player descriptions are okay. In the later stage, especially the paid chapters, 90% of the descriptions in one chapter are repetitive. I felt bad after reading them. After a few chapters, I didn't say anything, just one point. I can write several chapters, and skipping them does not affect reading at all. The details are gone, and the players are gone. The data in the later period is naturally exhausted. No one has read it, and I feel panicked about the loss. I have only seen more than 200 chapters. I really feel that I am so angry at the loss of Qidian coins.

There are too many useless chapters. It feels good in the early stage, but it feels like it is in trouble later. Isn't this book characterized by NPCs, whose strength is the highlight? But now how many chapters have passed before we get to the golden elixir. I don't want to read anything else. I just want to watch the protagonist develop silently as an NPC, use the players to become powerful quickly, and become the big BOSS behind the scenes.

Based on the writing skills of the previous book, this one should not be bad, but it still seems to say that the previous book was such a pity, the last book was such a pity, the last book was such a pity! ! ! Okay, I've decided not to write it, so I'll be optimistic about the author and this book. After all, it's probably too much to ask him to go back and continue writing the last book. Okay, the author remembers that this book is updated every day ~~ I love you😘

Don't let me talk about the water. A book friend complained that it was too watery and the post was deleted. My comments there are no longer there. This book already has a lot of poisonous points, and no one will subscribe to it if it continues. As a novel lover, I don't want to see this rare novel about cultivating immortals being buried, so I'll stop here.

As soon as Chapter 357 came out, it was so powerful It can pull people from one world into another world to play and create such an existence. What do you think this kind of existence is like? Then he couldn't kill a small golden elixir, even though it was just a ray of spiritual thought. With a three-world layout (Dao Eternal Game World/Player World/Weird World), and then actually becoming greedy for the innate spiritual roots, it is really outrageous. Push it directly into your trouser pocket

I don't know why most fairy novels nowadays like the second soul. Isn't it awkward to have two people? After reading several books, there are clones of second souls. Abandoned

When there is no popularity, I complain all day long that my writing is not popular, I have no motivation, and I don't want to write. Now that I have traffic, it is bad again, you?

That's great... You don't really have much space to write about this player, it's a bit like trying to sell someone else's meat...

It's so beautiful, the writing is very good, and there are no messy emotional lines. Come on💪

It's the last day of the month. It's not too much to be extra careful.

The inexplicable Qian Ying, whom I have only seen a few times, is weak in cultivation, just because he has a better figure? Have you never seen a woman? Even if it's 108G, it's just a transformation technique. It's not impossible... I'm speechless. I have written 700,000 to 800,000 words. Adding a woman, who wants to be the heroine, is still a weakling. It would be better for you to just develop a lolita and become your apprentice, Luo Shuxue, than this woman. With her innate talent, this woman can combine two top-notch Taoist methods and create one on her own. Why is she so awesome? The main character, wife control, is also written in the same way when writing about his apprentice's mother. When he writes about the wife, he starts to write ambiguously. If you write openly, I will tell you to be honest. Isn't this the practice of licking two-dimensional photos?

I thought you could follow the path of "Super Mechanic", the ancestor of the NPC genre, so why ruin your future?