The Gray Wizard of Hogwarts

In Chapter 196, Lao Deng asked the protagonist to help him make a Horcrux, and Lao Deng already knew that this was a novel world. Just give me poison and kill me. The only interesting thing about this novel is the magic theory, which is very imaginative, but the author is so imaginative that the character cannot stand up at all. He is completely based on his imagination, making the story logic extremely confusing. And hey hey hey, hahaha, woc, all kinds of shock, very old-fashioned writing style. The character design is extremely poor. Story, logic is confusing. Brain, currently the top class in Hogwarts. That's it, I abandon the book and say goodbye.

What impressed me most about this book. Fantastic magic (×) Delicate characterization (×) Ups and downs of the plot (×) Quack (✓)

I couldn't stand it anymore. While talking about cherishing my life and not getting involved in Harry Potter's affairs, I hung out with Quirrell and even passed out in front of Quirrell two or three times. No, I was really so assured that Voldemort would not be a killer. I was still confident that Dumbledore could intimidate Voldemort. Just for those two curses, I ran over to help. Quirrell was doing trouble in the Forbidden Forest when black magic was banned and he didn't know about Dumbledore's protection. If that protection hadn't blocked a life-killing curse, the protagonist would have died. No, he was only in the first grade and 11 years old. He was so anxious to step into the battlefield between Old Deng and Voldemort. It was a bit ruthless to seek death, and he still talked about cherishing life.

I can't understand it. I really can't understand it. I hope someone can explain it to me! ! ! I saw Chapter 92, where Dumbledore told the protagonist that he hoped that the protagonist would influence Voldemort and become kind again (?) To be honest, I really couldn't stand it when I saw this, even if it appeared earlier that the protagonist only talked to Quirrell once in class, and when they met in the office, Voldemort immediately appeared in person (he just inexplicably took a fancy to the protagonist, without any testing, and just lost his temper). I can tolerate it just like this, I just assume that Voldemort is a person who is so ambitious that he is brainless. After all, in the movie, Voldemort does behave like a brainless person. But Dumbledore hopes that the protagonist can influence Voldemort and make him good again. I really can't convince myself! Dumbledore's performance in the movie does seem to have Fudge in his head in many places, but I think the strongest white devil of the century shouldn't be so sweet! He shouldn't be able to forgive a Voldemort who killed countless people, right? This treatment is almost equal to that of his old lover! When did the relationship between Dumbledore and Voldemort become the same as that of his old lover? Did he suddenly become a role model for others at this moment? Really, can love forgive everything? It really doesn't matter how big a mistake you made, but because you have love, can your sentence be reduced? (Example) I was really confused when I saw this. I kept thinking about this in my mind. After turning the page, I couldn't read it at all. My mind kept thinking about the plot, which greatly affected my mood when I read it next! So I hope that a book friend can kindly come out and explain to me whether there is such a plot behind it! Is it really the protagonist who wants to influence Voldemort? (The protagonist was cautious and wary of others before, but then because of Dumbledore's words, he really thought, "How about giving it a try?") Was Voldemort really influenced in the follow-up? Please kindhearted people, please save me from this terrible sense of substitution!

I just finished reading the public chapter. The protagonist has no system, but he is more ruthless than the system. The so-called study of the magic system is basically "the power of my thinking". I haven't graduated from the first grade, but my achievements are as follows: 1. Created my own magical animal transformation spell, which can even turn into an optimized version of the original magical animal, such as a dragon-skinned werewolf; 2. Developed a "prank candy" that can transform into a viper or a werewolf after eating it (can be used as a prank candy) Obviously the cost is not high); 3. You can easily use the Cruciatus Curse and use it as a "soul scalpel" to treat soul damage; 4. Easily bypass the black magic ban imposed by Dumbledore. As long as the protagonist "I think" is white magic, the Cruciatus Curse, which can only be used with malicious intentions, can also be used as white magic; 5. Greatly reduce the blood curse beast The conditions of humans and werewolves (have not yet been completely treated); 6. A floating spell makes the entire black lake float; 7. After listening to it once, you can use the Divine Guardian, in the form of a magical animal; 8. Improved the "Wizard Eyes" potion that the black wizard has studied for a lifetime, and by the way, improved the potion into a magic spell; 9 , after studying Grindelwald's alchemy works, it was of course improved into a spell; 10. Learned to make Horcruxes; 11. Optimized the learning method of Animagus; As for learning the goblin's "Elf Eyes" magic, Dumbledore's "Mud Knight" magic, Quirrell's knot magic, etc., I will not list them one by one. In general, there is a strong beauty of learning the immortal mode at the age of eight.

I really can't stop watching it. What kind of magic does Rowling know? She has to be a fucking Chinese author! Fantasy, weird yet reasonable and orthodox. Sometimes I wonder if Anton is as cool as I am in the Harry Potter world!

After reading more than 500 chapters, I finally couldn't stand it anymore. To put it simply, it didn't meet my expectations. The character of the protagonist is very strange. Sometimes he does whatever he wants, and sometimes he is not afraid of death. He does things like hitting a hammer here and there. While saying that he is satisfying his curiosity to explore magic, he also directly cuts off the connection with the top "magical creatures" such as the Dementor Nebula. A lot of magic theories have kept me from understanding what the main plot is, and I never insist on one thing. You can say that you are indecisive or don't like killing, but it always feels like it's not straightforward enough. And for me, the biggest problem is that I have significantly modified the main plot, but I have no other main quests. Although some people say that magic theory is very good, I do not deny that I have really written a lot of settings in this area, but it seems too boring to me, not lively and interesting enough. Basically, whoever said something, the protagonist immediately becomes enlightened, understands some magic principle, creates some magic theory, how amazing it is In short, if you want to watch something with a main plot and a likable protagonist, it's best not to watch this. To be honest, Professor Magic is much better.

This is a magical world, Anton's magical world, not Harry Potter's. This is a real world, not just a fan.

After watching the beginning, the plot was good, but it was a bit deliberately dark, and some parts didn't make sense. For example, as a ten-year-old child, the protagonist does not look like a ten-year-old child at all. No one around him really treats him as a ten-year-old child, and no one realizes how unreasonable such words and actions are for a ten-year-old child. Ten years old, not even old enough to enter school. Normally, the body is not developed enough to use any magic. Even if the protagonist is special, other wizards treat him like a seasoned dark wizard. Even if they are not malicious, they do not treat him as a child at all and let him assume the responsibilities of an adult. This is unreasonable, really unreasonable. This is a question of basic logic, not even an adjustment to the worldview.

The plot is very imaginative. It completely breaks away from the usual feeling of reading the original work in fan fiction. This is a new book, and the author does not procrastinate in writing and will not make people impatient. He is simply a new Harry Potter