Reborn in 2007: Starting as an Elementary School Student and Adding Points

I don't even know what you're trying to say. The government respects you, you can refuse, but you can't refuse, and are even afraid of, another capitalist or some kind of mob boss whose legitimacy is unclear—what are you trying to say? What are you trying to say? What kind of underhanded, cowardly existence can reach this level of openness? This is outrageous writing.

The author's writing is so evocative! It gives you the feeling of finishing high school morning exercises, the first class being math, and feeling dizzy and drowsy. You want to grasp the key points, but you're helpless. You can only drift into a dream, dreaming that your life is like a cheat code, that you can do anything, like a fat kid becoming a model, your worn-out brain being replaced with…

It's well-written; the rebirth of a primary school student is quite interesting. These days, dating is everywhere in the city.

Don't you really understand your readers? The initial impressions were okay, but now you're writing about drawing, romance, phone manufacturing, computer competitions, and now basketball—it's all haphazard and disjointed. One thing isn't finished before another appears. Most importantly, will everyone like those plots? Stop writing about things we don't really like.

In short, the author's potential is the same as the protagonist's potential. In a situation where things were supposed to go smoothly, Li Yan, who was supposed to be very intelligent, would not have taken any action at all. The author added the clown character out of the blue to make the later plot seem more contrived. As a result, the protagonist also turned into a clown.

I gave a tip to get some feedback, but overall, in my opinion, your cheat-like abilities are inferior to those of real people, let alone capable of changing the world. Geniuses and prodigies abound. I can't understand why your system inexplicably added a stage restriction. Do you think there are any prodigies in reality who finished their undergraduate studies at fifteen?

Author, have you considered that it is inappropriate and impolite to paint a picture based on a friend and then send it to auction without asking her opinion? This behavior is inappropriate and offensive, not just for girls, but for boys as well. After completing a painting based on her, shouldn't the first thing to do be to ask for her opinion and whether it can be circulated? They are friends, not strangers, and should be treated with basic respect. This behavior is disrespectful.

The earlier parts were pretty enjoyable, but the basketball game was a real letdown. We were practically getting thrashed in the face, and all we did was try to console ourselves, saying it was pointless anyway. I just went back to my dorm and cowered.

I'm relieved to see that no one likes the basketball storyline. I skipped through all the basketball-related episodes. The main problem is that it's too fake. Basketball is a team game. I can accept winning a few games, but I can't accept being number one in the whole school. My suggestion is to delete this part of the story.

A bizarre criminal organization has switched to using AI to write books?