I Founded a Secret Society in London

Recommended by a friend, I had high expectations at first. However, after reading more than 30 chapters, I felt more and more regretful. When it comes to Sherlock Holmes, it relies on the details of the original Sherlock Holmes to maintain a certain level. When it comes to the Secret Cult Simulator, it relies on the Secret Cult Simulator game text to maintain a certain level. What about places where neither is involved? Typos, repeated exclamation points, redundant mental activities, and inappropriately detailed descriptions all revealed the timidity. Sherlock Holmes met the injured protagonist at the fire scene and asked him what happened. I have seen the story short and omitted, and then completed it through memories, but I have never seen the protagonist speak an 800-word narrative on the spot. Later, he used a minion to create a ton of rhetorical settings. Does a low-level person who has been teaching for half a year have this level of education? How could he know so much? Sherlock Holmes + Secret Cult Simulator, what a great idea! There is an entire literary work and an entire game to copy, what a great foundation! How come it is executed like this when it comes to the execution step? It's just like an idea that works hard enough to be published but ends up being published in rubbish. What a pity! What a pity!

I have never been exposed to the Tantric Cult Simulator, but I have read Chapter 39. To be honest, this book gave me a very strange feeling. The author wanted to write that the protagonist is a crazy and thrill-seeking fun person, but the portrayal does not look like it. Now the protagonist is always pursuing power and keeps fighting. At present, there is basically no description of the other people. They are all tool people, either stepping stones or providing information. Overall, the tone of the book is a bit like that of an online novel from 7 years ago. From beginning to end, the map is changed, and the characters are not created. The mystery of the Esoteric Cult is not well reflected. As of now, I feel that the author is eager to popularize the setting of the Esoteric Cult among readers, instead of telling a good story. But the setting only serves the story itself, don't let the story serve the setting.

What a secret religion? As a worker, I only have eyes for the company! Chairman!

The main character is a soldier (Blade). He became a private detective (Light) due to illness (Winter), and he has a friend who is a military doctor (Blade Heart). All he needed was to form the template of the Colonel and the Lionsmith.

In fact, to be honest, it doesn't matter if the protagonist wants to have a harem or something. After all, he has a good relationship with Mary Morstan, and now has a good relationship with Clovette/Emma (her sister). In the later stage, he may also meet my personal favorite psychic Carter. Carlo, not to mention the female version of Sherlock Holmes who has always had a good sense of the protagonist. Furthermore, the most unpleasant thing about online articles is also the lowest point is hypocrisy. The reason why most people like cool articles is because reality is very boring. I'm very unhappy already. If I write about it on the Internet and commit a little bit of literary youth, it will really make people lose their temper~ Another point is how to put it, the theme is to establish a secret sect and then become a saint, not to help the official destroy the secret sect organization. What's more, the company incident I don't think the handling of that part is particularly perfect. Theoretically speaking, our starts are careerist starts, that is, there are no owners. I admit that he used some dishonorable means to obtain the high position of GG Company. This can be clearly shown in his performance. He committed perjury, secretly showed him more profound secrets, and accepted them as believers and followers. As for the Anti-Suppression Bureau, through the spell of the Cup Cult, you can let high-ranking people (especially the older/sick ones) give you an official free ride. That is the connections/favors of the authorities. They will also join the sect for their own benefit. Although they will not be very pious, the benefits will make them make the right choice. Cure their diseases or extend their lives, and they will bring you unexpected gains. . As for the plot of the movie version of Sherlock Holmes, for example, we can find the villain in the first film, Lord Blackwood, who wants to rule the country with fear. This is also in line with the teachings of the blade (fighting/war/physical conflict/spiritual conflict), not to mention that there is another possibility of choosing Professor Moriarty, the moth god~ These two heavyweights are taken care of, and apart from other things, aren't the spells of these two secret cults rising steadily? Generally speaking, the protagonist and the title of the book say that he wants to establish a sect and become a saint, but what he does is a means of promotion. He feels a bit lacking in personality, lost his way, has no big goal, and always thinks about doing good things. What he does is indeed a good thing in the eyes of the people, but it is not beneficial to himself, or it is a good thing that does not maximize the benefits. In this world view, the saint is the first to die, so there is no need. I want to be able to become a saint, and in this hospital incident, the Heart Sect did do good things and treated many people. At least the public thinks so. As for the unfortunate patients who mysteriously disappeared, it can only be said to be the lesser of two evils. In the face of greater interests, there will always be some sacrifices. PS: The book is good, but the protagonist's behavior and dealings are always a bit literary. The world is not black and white, and has the protagonist ever thought about it? He himself is a practitioner of esoteric Buddhism, so he naturally stands on the other side of the world, or on the opposite side of the anti-suppression bureau. Sooner or later, there will be a duel, so why not be prepared in advance? Assimilate the people around you, transform their thinking, and let them know that the esoteric religion may not be a sinful thing. It is just a necessary sacrifice on the road of scientific research and practice, but it is not recognized by some people~

Esoteric Cult Simulator, start!

I came here for fellow Tantric sects. I suspect it would be more engaging to play the game and record it in writing. In terms of character creation, the protagonist's personality is never established. It has always been written that he is murderous and has a sharp edge, but it is not reflected much in the relevant plot. He has always been said to be unsociable and like Dong, but sometimes he behaves very diplomatically. In terms of plot, the main line of establishing a religion has been delayed again and again. The plot of Esoteric Cult Simulator itself is bland enough, and the author also made many of the existing conflicts seem trivial. Logically speaking, it is okay to have a lower limit for the esoteric worldview, but what is needed to describe the worldview is writing. In terms of writing... It's a pity that ak's copywriting is so good that readers' expectations are too high. A little humble opinion. The leader in the game is a person with extremely strong desires, and it is his desire that makes him move forward firmly - "My ultimate goal. I must pay the price for it." All his anti-social and anti-human behaviors point to the road to ascension, that is, his desire to surpass ordinary people, a desire that is stronger, firmer, and grander than ordinary people. The road to ascension is inherently a path to perversion, so we might as well create a pervert who is extremely paranoid as the protagonist. Giving up worldly ethics and morals can sometimes give characters a unique personality. Come on, author. Looking forward to seeing you next time!

This was my past, but now I have transformed. These are my clothes and I lay them aside. This is my skin, but it is just a borrowed thing. It's my name and it's just an eyesore. This is the woodland, where we strangle the light. I was here, but no longer.

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The writing is quite good, but Sherlock's gender change is really bad. Wouldn't it be nice to write a macho man? It's really inconsistent. It is outrageous for a rich girl to be allowed to wander around as a private detective without her family telling her the truth. Moreover, those writers on detective techniques cannot imitate the real Sherlock. It would be great if Sherlock was not written as a macho man who fought side by side with the protagonist.