From Ninja to Daimyo

Good review! This book is one of the very few fanfics I have read that I would call excellent without hesitation. It's a pity that it was discovered too late and could not be traced, which greatly contributed to the author's better achievements. Let's finish what I want to say first. This book is more imaginative than most fans. The protagonist has said from the beginning that the second generation is still timid as a human being, so why do you want to go back in time and chase after you? Make bold but reasonable changes without fear of disrupting the plot timeline. I am very impressed that Hinata is able to kill the caged bird on herself to end the tragic fate of the caged bird of the Hyuga clan. This is the best solution among all the fans I have seen. I am very happy to see that the red, orange and blue trio are not carrying rice, but have a good life and future. I am very happy to see Obito who has not turned black. Although he is a hot-blooded idiot, and although there is no Lin in this book, the enthusiastic young man is embracing and guarding the life he likes in his own way. Minato and Kushina are not dead, and the arrogant and tough-tongued Nine Lama has become a being who truly knows love. He puts aside his obsession and becomes Kushina's coexistence partner (actually a pet haha). Even the arrogant Madara finally admitted that he was indeed wrong and let go of his obsession. I was very touched when I saw him and Hashirama shouting Susanata Buddha together, really. In terms of plot, Randian is definitely enough. The four heroes of Tianmu Mountain fought bravely against the enemy among tens of thousands of troops. The three-and-a-half-day war has a sophisticated layout and excellent storyboarding. It has been written for ten chapters without any delay, which is very satisfying. I would say that the most exquisite layout in the whole book is when the flying thunder engine causes the dimensional door to open in the middle and late stages. I have not seen this kind of treatment in other books. The protagonist is a time traveler who knows many fictional worlds. The magic of this kind of memory and cognition has cleverly opened up dimensions. In fact, I had a premonition at that time that I was going to write about the multidimensional universe, but after seeing it, I still couldn't help but admire it. The dimensional gate is connected to the protagonist's bloodline cognition, and the protagonist knows many worlds, so the development and future of the unified ninja world are expanded to endless worlds and futures. Finally, the setting issue can be said to be very, very rigorous. The author has said more than once in this chapter that he has shown his sincerity and explained and supplemented the settings in a timely manner. At least in my opinion, the power system and settings are rigorous enough. This book is an invincible flow of logic, with clear explanations that make everything understandable. From the setting of combat power, to the change of political system, and the sea of ​​stars in the later period, there is no disconnect and it is very smooth. Finally, this book is beautiful! Good review! Really good review!

Emotional scenes are indeed the biggest difficulty for male authors. Either they use too much force and become a licking dog, or the harem becomes a licking dog and the protagonist becomes a scumbag. The portrayal of emotions in female videos is much better, but the male protagonist always slides into a passive and receptive attitude. It looks good on paper, but in reality it is completely unrealistic. Because what women want is often contrary to what they need, they not only need respect, but also need to give women strong direction and guidance on specific occasions. Women often lack this part of toughness, and respect is sometimes equated with passivity, and men who are always passive lack charm.

The reason why the mission failed was that the people under my command couldn't calculate coordinates, and they concealed the matter. I was really speechless.

It is a very good Naruto fanfic in terms of original plot. I would give it an 8.5 Rating. If the ending of the plot with more than 100 chapters could be handled better, it could even be a 9 rating. 😆 There is no sense of déjà vu like other Naruto fans who follow the protagonist group and watch the old series and already know the development. It has made great innovations and breakthroughs in the original plot of Naruto. 👍 The character traits of several original characters are also very good and vivid. What surprised me the most was that most of the original plot reflected a battle of wits that matched the characters' IQs. There were no mindless cooking operations, so I was quite happy to watch it. 😁 I didn't continue reading the last 100 chapters of Time Travel in Marvel. Variety comics are not my cup of tea, but the shortcomings are fair enough. I hope the author can do a better job in the next book 🌹

Not bad, not bad. It's much more interesting than some eye legend fanfics that only show off and act cool. It uses modern ideas to transform the ninja world and improve productivity. Compared with those who turn themselves into perverts, they look really comfortable 🤫

As a senior Naruto fan, I have something to say Traveling through Konoha Village has been poorly written, and now it is rare to find some good selling points for traveling through Konoha. The author's journey through Cloud Shadow allows us to understand a different Cloud Shadow, with emotions and passion, clear conditioning, perfect logic, and well-founded. It is considered a masterpiece in Naruto. I found the book yesterday afternoon and stayed up until two in the morning to finish it. There are only a dozen chapters left. If you like Naruto, you can try it. It will definitely give you a different sense.

Regarding Danzo's strength when he was young. 1. Danzo grew up with the third generation, the young patriarch of the Sarutobi clan, and was accepted as a disciple by the second generation. This at least shows that Danzo's status in the Shimura clan will not be low, and as the son of a high-ranking family member who can survive until the end of the Warring States Period, his talent should not be low. 2. When being chased by the Golden Horn and the Silver Horn, he struggled with whether to stay behind. This shows that at least in his self-perception, he was sure to intercept the pursuers in a short time. Otherwise, they would be useless in an instant. The pursuers were strong enough to surround and kill the Second Hokage. From this point of view, Danzo at this point in time was at least at the elite jounin level. 3. During the Warring States Period, ninja battles were mainly based on physical skills, with auxiliary Ninjutsu or illusions (this can be shown in both comics and animations). Danzo can be considered a person from the Warring States Period (he was about ten years old when Wood Industry was established), so his physical skills are definitely not weak, at least not a shortcoming. When fighting Sasuke, he only used Wind Release Ninjutsu, which shows that at least what he showed at that time was not the strongest strength in his life. 4. It seemed that he was unable to fight back after being beaten by Sasuke. In fact, everyone knew what his physical condition was at that time. He was still staring at Obito next to him. It was normal for him to be beaten to death by a kaleidoscope. 5. When the third generation took over, his limbs were intact, but when he appeared again in old age, he lost his arms and was blind, so he must have a lot of combat experience. To sum up, regardless of Danzo's character, at least his strength was very strong before he became disabled. It may not be as good as the third generation, but it will not be too weak (people will not be jealous of people who are much stronger than themselves, but only jealous of those who are luckier or slightly stronger than themselves).

The level of a ninja is never based on the amount of chakra. It is a position. You must have certain experience and ability to advance. In addition, there are no titles such as Kage level and Six Paths. Shadow is also a position, and Six Paths is just the title of Hagoromo. In addition, the level of the technique does not represent the power, but the difficulty of practice and side effects.

If, I mean if, could you feed the Uchiha captives aphrodisiacs... And then let Kumogakure have them too...

Not many people like the parasite-like existence of the Daimyo, especially in a world like Naruto where the power of force is explosive. It can only be said that it is in line with the values ​​​​of the supremacy of the Japanese Emperor.

The most puzzling thing about Naruto is that since the ninjas who have extraordinary power have not been killed, the daimyo who only have the ability to impose economic sanctions 😏 I, the ninja, want to be a noble master and do a gross task, and kill all those nobility noble daimyo.

In fact, there are many highlights in this book. 1. Plot promotion. You can discover the impact of the author's every step on the ninja world. It's not that rigid pattern. 2. Character behavior speech logic. So far in this book, there is no tendency for the characters to collapse. Extremely logical. This is very awesome. 3. The author of this book is the kind of person who has really carefully searched the chronicles of the ninja world. I also know the logic of ninjutsu triggering. I can't find any clues in this book yet. For example, the idiotic behavior of opening a permanent eight-door armor and thinking that one's strength has improved. I don't understand the basics of using ckl as internal force storage and use. If you watch it, you will find that the actions of the protagonist are very reasonable. You can fully participate without being embarrassed. 4 A novel that does all of the above (it is hard to imagine that all of the above are not wrong). This book is actually very powerful. The kind that makes you laugh. You can sigh to your heart's content. Damn it! Outrageous! Think about it carefully. Very reasonable. This is indeed the case. Possible. Tenable. It could happen. . . This is super nb. . My rating for this novel is Xiancao. . If you read this comment, you can check out the free chapter now to see the effect. . Then you will find out. This novel is really nb. Worth supporting. . . . He is really a rare nb author. .

I discovered this book a long time ago and just started reading it today. I was absolutely shocked when I read it. I read the latest chapter from the first chapter in one breath. Of course, don't be fooled by my fan level. I didn't read it from a pirated store. It's just that the large system has permanently banned me from talking and I can't speak. I opened a small account to relieve my bowels. I hope there will be more.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 98. The style changes back and forth. One moment he is a hard-working type (working hard to break the blood stain disease), and the next moment he becomes a show-off type. The strength in key aspects is also wrong. Konoha is not that good, and Yunying is not that good. Without any accumulation, they directly defeated four ninja villages, and still used more than 300 people. Directly destroys the rhythm. Then many of them are thinking about the effectiveness of the orphanage. If the orphans are underage, there will be great results there. Blacksmith plan, are you the only smart businessman? The original book said that the major ninja clans are doing business, and it does not imply that you have an advantage over others. The assembly line requires equipment and investment. The key issue in discarding the book at the end: What I read is a Naruto fanfic. It is not a 14-year-old who can conquer the world inexplicably. He can use various lightning escape ninjutsu without learning. He also needs to understand the boundaries of blood stains first. It is not a secret inheritance. That requires blood or two or more chakras to synthesize new chakra. According to you, it's just that the pig's foot bloodline is more suitable for adapting to thunder escape, and it cannot produce chakra out of thin air, learn various ninjutsu, and easily achieve variant Yin seals. It gives people the feeling of writing whatever they want without considering logic. Pig's feet can be used in various ways without accumulation at all. The key is to find some kind of psychic beast to come to the ninja world (first, the immortal in Slippery Bone Forest is a otaku, second, these summoned beasts are all clones of immortals, third, the location of the psychic beast is just relatively secret, not to enter the ninja world, please refer to the plot of finding the snake cave)

When I first read it, I was a bit confused about the title of the book. How could a ninja, even a wealthy ninja, become a famous person? Especially for an extremely important daimyo like the Kingdom of Thunder, unless the protagonist has the blood of a daimyo or becomes an adopted son. To be honest, the daimyo can embarrass the shadows of Ninja Village, and even tease the five shadows, but the five shadows can't help but respect the daimyo on the surface. After all, this is Japanese animation, and they are very particular about class and blood. In real history, the status of ninjas is very low. Even very famous ninjas with great military exploits, such as Miyamoto Musashi, have a very low status. Even though this anime elevates ninjas, the author never dares to be too outrageous. The Japanese are very good at expressing themselves and positioning themselves in whatever class they are in.

The author should be very clear as to why the data was dropped. The plot of this Chuunin Exam is purely watered down. After becoming a daimyo in the summer, the protagonist should have begun to unify the ninja world, but the protagonist did not. Instead, he changed from a chess player with the ability to turn over the table to a chess piece, being led around by various people. The first protagonist does not need to personally lead the team to Suna Ninja Village. After all, the Chunin Exam is just to delay time. The second protagonist goes to the Sand Ninja Village to trigger Bai Jue's hidden plot, but is it necessary for the protagonist to hand over Bai Jue's body, or is it really necessary to leave a body for Bai Zee? After all, the protagonist described above is very familiar with Bai Zee, how could he not know about this back-up plan? Thirdly, although there is no distance limit for flying thunder gods, it also consumes chakra. Hatake Shigesho and Namikaze Minato (Have you forgotten that Namikaze Minato is still the leader of Konoha?) How much chakra is enough for them to raid the Eight-Tailed Jinchuuriki from the Sand Ninja Village with three shadows from the Sand Ninja Village? Fourth, since the war has begun, why doesn't the protagonist defeat the Suna Ninja Village and attack Konoha instead? After all, there are all outstanding young ninjas and Mizukages in the Suna Ninja Village. The answer the protagonist gave me is that there are civilians, businessmen, and nobles in the Suna Ninja Village. These are the shields of the Suna Ninja Village. But now that the war has begun, what kind of value do these so-called shields have that enables the protagonist to abandon the Suna Ninja Village, which has absolute value and is vulnerable?

There is nothing wrong with the author wanting to change the plot, but logically speaking, it is impossible for Tsunade to rebel against the village. It's just Kato Dan, he's dead when he dies. How could Tsunade be threatened, not even by her brother? Has anyone in the Hokage been threatened to rebel against the village? No 😒

The author's book is really good. I haven't felt the blood boiling in a Naruto fanfic for a long time.

The title of the book was delayed. I've seen Naruto write about famous names before, and he wrote about everything. Not to mention politics, he couldn't even write very basic tactics well. This book is written above the historical average level. If you put it on Naruto, it would be like grass jelly. I have never read a better book on Machiavellian except for Naruto. Naruto is only good at writing about the overall situation, but the details in this book are even better. Worth the wait. Consider changing the title of the book

———— "Jiraiya... Is dead?" Tsunade's face was paler than the white uniform she was wearing. She knew very well that from the moment she carried the contract scroll, every step she took was on the road to betraying the village. It's just that she has always naively thought that she could afford to maintain the little stolen happiness of "Mrs. Kato". It's nothing more than putting yourself on the scale of trading. Even if the face of your lover becomes blurry in your heart, when you see the word "broken", you will only think of the lump of flesh lying on the bed first. Even if you gradually get used to the existence of a certain devil, as long as you can continue to persevere... Persevere and don't fall into ruin... But now, fate has added weight without warning. A blood-stained, furry white weight pushed her balance directly into the endless hell. "He killed my people, and I will kill him for my people." After Ziyue's demon said this, he walked out of the room, obviously not wanting to explain any more. "Although this woman's chakra has been sealed, we cannot underestimate her ability. You guys, go and tie her hands and feet." After a while, a female ninja fixed her hands and feet with special restraints. When leaving, another lock was added to the door with a "click". There is no doubt that she cannot escape. But that doesn't mean she can't be freed. At this point, she could still end her own life. "APTX-4869", Tsunade said the pre-agreed code word in the weakest voice. The sound was weak, definitely enough to avoid the detection of the ninja outside the door, but she was not the only one who could hear it. At least the little slug hiding in her stomach could hear it clearly. "Tsunade-sama, actually..." "I have made a big mistake that is irreversible, and I cannot continue to make mistakes." Perhaps, from the beginning, I should give up... "Die like a ninja." "... I understand, Tsunade-sama" As the little slug returned to its original body, a red and white capsule fell into Tsunade's gastric juice. This is the deadly poison she developed based on the secret pharmacopoeia of the Senju clan. Just this small one can make people feel painless... Unexpected severe pain suddenly swept through her whole body like a wildfire. The pain was so heartbreaking that she even lost the ability to cry out pain. But soon, along with the pain that should not have occurred, something surprising happened to her: her body gradually became smaller and transformed into the body of a child! This is not a technique, but a real reverse growth! Even the chakra seal became loose during this magical process! Without time to think too much, she took off the handcuffs without making any noise, opened the ventilation duct with the chakra she could barely summon, and got in.

Why original heroine? ? Is there not enough beauties in the original novel? Do you have to do something so thankless as originality?

The original party is nothing, I eat sweet tofu nao.

The most serious mistake of the protagonist and the Raikage started from robbing the Nine-Tails Jinchuuriki. They killed the Hokage (suicide) and gained no substantial benefits except fame. There is also the Amegakure Village. What is the purpose of helping Amegakure? Resource? Ally? Insert a knife into the enemy's weakness? After paying so much, what did you receive? Others have many friends but few enemies, so the protagonist only makes enemies The Leaf Village keeps the third generation there, and after ten years it will be out of business, and they have to make trouble. It turns out that at most one third generation of the Lord of Shoujing is killed, and the last one is the fourth generation of the God of Killing with incredible mobility The protagonist is really a time traveler and knows the plot? There is also the matter of the daimyo. Is it necessary to kill that daimyo? Throwing a genjutsu and making him a puppet would at least provide a fig leaf, allowing the daimyo to announce to the outside world that he was suppressing Yunying and reducing funding. In practice, wouldn't it be more subtle to send ninjas to various places to clear the way for genjutsu to take over government affairs? If you are seen through, at least you will have a fig leaf to cover your face. How can you risk the disapproval of the world and force a female daimyo to go up? Well, all the big names in the country will look at you. Now is the whole world, and all the people (big names) who have the right to speak will look at you. It's cool, all the armed people (Ninja Village) are unhappy with you, and the result is that there is someone in the world who is willing to make trouble as long as there is a leader Being an enemy of the whole world, let alone whether it can be achieved, which rebellion/uprising/unification is achieved under such circumstances? Germany in World War II? He lost Qin in the Warring States Period? He joined forces vertically and horizontally to break up his enemies, and did not face the enemies of the world at the same time Taizu of the Ming Dynasty? All the descendants of Yan and Huang in China are his potential subjects and sources of soldiers. Judging from the number of people, he is the most powerful one. Now, I want to see how the author will solve the situation of making him an enemy of the whole world.

You don't need to read it after reading it for free. The previous article was good. It was poisoned as soon as it was released. It organized such a big plan to go to Konoha to rob the Nine-Tails. It had all high-end combat power. However, because of the wrong calculation of the so-called coordinates, the Heavenly Sending Technique directly sent the Raikage and the Raikage away. It was a waste of a big advantage. The whole ninja world began to be wary of Kumogakure. Can these coordinates be calculated wrong? , You didn't consider this for such an important thing? , Don't you have some computing personnel? Furthermore, the protagonist was kidnapped in the Kingdom of Yu. The Raikage's Heavenly Sending Technique was so accurate and accurate. Why can't it work now? It's all just for the purpose of watering down the plot, slowing down the progress, and forcing a wave.

Above average, every one of them can reach the sky.

It was well written in the early stage, but after about 100 chapters, it has already established a great advantage. Suddenly, a forceful attack caused the unity of Konoha to awaken. All parties were afraid of Kumogakure, and even sent away the third generation of thunder and a bunch of elites. It was forced to slow down the progress. It was really disgusting.

Nice! Really pretty! It's a rare start for Thunder Ninja. There are no poisonous points. Currently, it mainly focuses on construction strategies. The writing style is also OK! Keep up the good work💪…Finally, I wish the author a Happy New Year🎉All the best!

In a blink of an eye, Escape from Konoha and this daimyo can be called the top Hokage fandom.

Giving away a huge advantage in one wave is too outrageous... The art of heavenly sending is a very dangerous art. It is impossible to shoot without knowing it. On the one hand, it is impossible to send two people who do not understand the art without technical personnel. On the other hand, it is impossible for these two people to completely understand the consequences of miscalculation of the art of heavenly sending.

Awesome, the early excellent Yunyin Village was cut in half as soon as it was released. The reason is so stupid, you can do it just to slow down the progress.