Reborn in 2008: The Gear-Type God of War

The wheat is ripe thousands of times, but the people are ripe for the first time! Just this sentence can deeply understand people's recognition of great men in that era!

I have seen this title many times and thought it was a boring show about growing up as a top student, but I didn't expect that I clicked in and read it in one go. It feels like a new era of online writing. The writing is sophisticated, full of emotion, and the plot is unconventional. It is exciting and easy to read.

There used to be a self-superhero, but the heroine was more brilliantly written, and a bunch of people just left it there to make a single heroine. The author was originally doing a good job, but suddenly cut off a lot of other character branches, and finally ran out of work and started to complain about the writing of others. The author just writes according to his own ideas. There is no shortage of readers in Qidian. These are the indispensable things to write well.

Let me first talk about my overall impression of this book. Boss Xin's book adopts the classic urban rebirth structure, that is, the male protagonist is reborn as a student, grows stronger, changes his destiny, and ascends to the throne step by step with the help of his golden finger. As an old writer of urban literature LV5, Boss Xin must be very comfortable in writing. Compared with other articles on similar themes, I think this book is slightly better because Boss Xin's writing style is really good, and sometimes there is a sense of eternity in a few words. Moreover, the plot advancement pays attention to logic, not just emotional pulling. It is more delicate and engaging, has no flaws, and the reading experience is smoother. If I put it in a more elegant way, it would be that the reading of this book is more charming and stylish, and does not give people the sense of vulgarity like the face of the nouveau riche. If the time is extended, I believe that this book will stand the test of time better. … However, if we use more concrete words to describe it, the reading experience of this book is like an energy drink, and some refreshing articles are like carbonated drinks. The taste of functional drinks may not be worse than carbonated drinks. But when both are from unknown brands (new books), carbonated drinks are more consuming - readers may feel that it is not necessarily certain whether the book is good or not, but for carbonated drinks, at least the excitement of the bubbles when entering the mouth, that is, the refreshing feeling, can be determined. In an era when online articles are becoming more and more fast-food-oriented, the new book issue can be said to be volume after volume. Paying attention to the early experience, or to be precise, in theory, carbonated drinks that can at least guarantee the early experience are indeed more popular than functional drinks that are not sure whether the experience will be good or not. But here, I am not saying that Boss Xin should turn his book into a carbonated drink, nor do I recommend it. As the saying goes, strong-willed melons are not sweet. The writing style should be whatever it is. First, make sure that the content you write is what you are good at writing. This is more important than anything else. However, before the brand name is established, we can do our best to package the product as much as possible, give readers clearer reading expectations and reading guidance, and try to improve the conversion efficiency of the early stage of the work. Therefore, I personally think that there is still room for optimization in the packaging and guidance of the works in this book. —— Let me state that we are not teaching the author to change the text, nor do we need the author to change the text (plot), but while the plot remains unchanged, we should appropriately fine-tune the introduction and wording of the text, optimize the packaging, provide clearer reading expectations, and provide good reading guidance (referring to strengthening the sense of plot anticipation to stimulate follow-up reading). … First, let's make it clear what this book is about. In my opinion, this book actually has three main plot lines. One is the emotional line, which goes without saying. With the author's writing style, it is not impossible to write about daily romance. As long as you keep playing, don't waver between single heroine and multiple heroines, and set the tone early. The second is the learning line with the golden finger equipment system as the core, or the learning mastery line. Third, it is the business line that can be called the technology line. Visual inspection will lead through the textile factory and lead out later. … As for the emotional line, since the author is not writing a love story, it is just a daily adjustment, and the performance is stable, there is no need to say more or adjust it. Personally, the main thing is to make a choice between the study line and the career line, or the allocation of words. In urban themes, it is difficult to write a long story without a career line. Therefore, a book must introduce a career line. But the time the protagonist travels through is a few months before the college entrance examination. Even if you can start a business in college later, it is impossible to completely stop writing about college life. Based on this, the career line should gradually unfold in the middle and later stages, and gradually increase the writing. In the early stage, you only need to throw out some small plots from time to time, make small fuss, and maintain a sense of existence. Of course, if the outline is well prepared, these small plots can also form a hidden plot line. For example, the foreign trade list of the textile factory was pigeoned because the protagonist accidentally took away two Japanese people when reporting. In short, when readers enter this book, the first thing they come into contact with is the learning line. There is actually a gap between high school and entrepreneurship, so there is no need to establish too much presence for the career line in the early stage. Therefore, I personally suggest that in the introduction of the work, the positive feedback brought by the learning line should be strengthened, the introduction of the career line should be weakened, and only the career line should be retained as the long-term goal of the book. … Let's talk about the learning line. In this book, the learning line is actually organically combined with the equipment line. Through the progress made in the equipment line, the protagonist can quickly realize cash in the learning line. In layman's terms, the equipment line corresponds to plot obstacles and controls the ups and downs of the plot's rhythm; the learning line corresponds to the positive feedback of the plot, and is responsible for making readers feel happy and can pretend to be saints in fancy ways. With this understanding, you can easily get that the learning line is actually the academic line, which is responsible for creating one plot node after another that makes the saint appear in front of others. As long as the nodes are designed in advance, the exciting rhythm of the plot can be grasped as a whole. … The equipment line is equivalent to the side task list of the work. The process from discovering equipment to obtaining equipment is the embodiment of plot obstacles, which corresponds to the tight and tight rhythm of whether the plot is progressing to the end or not. At the same time, the equipment line can also play the role of plot clues and plot prompts, responsible for organically connecting the small plots of the love line or career line. It can be said that from a creative perspective, the structure of this book is very reliable. You don't have to worry about not knowing what to write at the end of the writing and you will have to run around doing it. … So, what exactly is equipment? Although the equipment system is a little fancy, in fact, from a creative perspective, it is equivalent to the previously popular entry system. Compared with the entry system, the advantage of the equipment system is that it is more flexible and can serve as plot clues to connect the plot. But the shortcoming is that the equipment system has a certain understanding threshold, although it is not high, unlike the entry system where readers can easily understand it. Then, what we should do at this time is to lower the threshold of understanding, simplify complex things, and try our best to allow passerby readers to have the most basic intuitive impression of the golden finger of the equipment system. Therefore, I personally suggest that in the introduction of the work, you can omit the setting of equipment synthesis, and only focus on the various special effects that the equipment can bring. At the same time, for the definition of the equipment system, the simpler the words and the more precise the description, the better. There is no need to use plural nouns for vague explanations (the text can be used as a supplementary explanation with examples). … Attached below is a brief introduction to the book that I personally edited for reference (there is still room for further polishing and optimization): Human beings are the soul of all things. The strong power of the spiritual level will infect the objects, making them seem to be sustenance of life, including joy, anger, sorrow and joy, as well as regrets and dreams. Zhai Da was reborn and returned to the small town high school in 2008. He awakened the [Life Equipment Synthesis System], which allowed him to enlighten special items and refine them into equipment for his own use. [Old Man TV], will the content played make people addicted? Zhai Da took out the serious disc with his backhand and became addicted to knowledge. [Artistic Girl's Pen] Will writing down the content deepen your memory? Zhai Da fell in love when he saw it and flirted with her decisively: I will copy your pen! … Pieces of equipment and passages of life dazzled Zhai Da. At first, he just wanted to be a top student, a rich man, change his destiny against the will of nature, and enjoy a cheating life. Later he discovered that he could do more than just be a top student; he could change more than himself. "I will realize your dreams; I will make up for your regrets." "If one day you are willing to be proud of me. Then I promise that this day will start from today!"

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I finished reading the two hundred and forty-four chapters in one go. I felt very happy. I will go and read the previous book first.

Overall, this is a good read and worth a read. Of course, I personally think there are several shortcomings. The first is the inner teacher. The character is too superficial and does not look like a real person. He is just an NPC arranged by the author. The author is also a Riddler. We only know that he is a top student who graduated from Renmin University and eats free time in school. He does not know anything else. But the energy is quite high, and the level of thought is even higher to a certain extent, giving him the appearance of a hermit and an expert. The second drawback is the teaching and training program established during the summer vacation. First of all, I feel that the money earned is too much, which is unrealistic. Two hundred students earned over six million in two months. On average, a student has to pay 20,000 to 30,000 yuan in tuition. This was in a poor county in 2008. It is too far away from reality. The second is the issue of distribution. Most students just do odd jobs, but they earn a hundred times as much as they paid for their labor. This is actually the protagonist giving his share of the money to these classmates. This is a handout, not reality. Later, when students enter society, they realize that society does not work like this. I'm afraid that the author will later portray the protagonist as a Madonna to build a utopia that is divorced from the real world.

This book was particularly good to read before the college entrance examination. The protagonist is witty and humorous, and the emotional scenes are pretty good. The part about the grandfather in the back is crooked. In fact, if it takes Chen Gou's route, this book might become more popular. The early descriptions of Lu Wei and Xiaolu are very soulful. It's a pity.

After entering college, I felt that the content was a bit divergent. First, selling alcohol all of a sudden? It's strange, it feels very disconnected from Harbin Institute of Technology. I thought that after attending Harbin Institute of Technology, I would learn some things, but the content of the study was just a brief talk about classes and exams. The main character who has just entered the freshman year, his skills are high-precision machine tool operation, and the other skills are writing? High school science content? Don't you want to develop well? Second, to become a disciple of Mr. Qian, based on a novel? Ideas for the future? Any ideas that can be realized? No, buddy, Li Liyuan has done a good job, right? Third, Android system? When you go to Harbin Institute of Technology, you don't engage in hardware, but software? Want the whole cash cow thing? Provide funding for future research? Fourth, the ability system of the book was so confusing to me, especially the magic suit. I only felt awkward when performing magic. Summary: Before Chapter 300, I wanted to call it food, but after Chapter 300, I felt that it was becoming more and more chaotic. There was no main line, and I just wrote whatever I thought of.

[Mottled Conference Whiteboard] Green: A magnetic whiteboard with a rusty frame, and the scrawled writing "2003 Hot Topic Plan" remains in the corner Source of belief: The start-up team used it to collide in this office 17 core business models were developed, and the whiteboard pen was written many times until the ink ran out Equipment effect: Resonance of inspiration: When the team stood around the whiteboard for discussion, the "Thinking Storm Field" was randomly triggered, and scattered ideas were automatically integrated into a complete solution Unblocking task: Use this whiteboard for strategic analysis during strategic cooperation with three industry leading companies (0/3) ​ (After unblocking) Special effects: Decision-making reflection: When using the whiteboard to analyze business strategies, the wall will project "potential results of different decision paths" (visible only to decision-makers) Remarks: This is the most critical time and must not fail With pictures