Destroying Konoha: Pain's Reign of Terror

15 More fun to watch author Chongya

First of all, the author, you have written a different Naruto fanfic, at least according to your own ideas. I would like to support this first 👍. And so far, the author has written quite well and has many ideas. He writes like Nagato. Here is another wave of support 👍 If I were Nagato, I would be in a world where Naruto's fourth war is about to begin, what can I do, or what do I want to do. Then let me talk about mine: What I want to do is to master nuclear weapons (Earth Explosion Star) to destroy the country in an instant, and then my own Rain Ninja Village will become a big country. No one dares to provoke a large-scale war. If it cannot be fought, it can only be a small-scale conflict. Slowly use the power of ninjas to develop civilian and military forces. Those who are willing to join us can join the Rain Ninja Village to share the cake, take the highest level of force into their own hands and take the initiative, unite all those who have the same goal of Nagato's way (to unify the ninja world), and then conquer those who disagree with force and create a great unification. If it doesn't work in one year, then ten years will pass. In the end, we will all be a family and the hatred will be gone. Even if there is a general direction, it is fine. We will not be able to make big waves, and finally we will go into space. Transfer conflicts. Haha, this is my Nagato... Please don't criticize the random writing! In the end, although not many people reviewed the book and discussed it, many people probably read the book silently to support it. Anyway, it's the author. We have never seen Naruto written from Nagato's perspective. Most of them write about Konoha and we're tired of it. There are very few of these. I'm a big supporter 👍👍 Please accept my knee.

The promise has been fulfilled, although it is not much, it is a sincere thought, come on!

An author who thinks he knows Naruto well. Haha, what I write is as if I have never watched Naruto. I wanted to read the rest, but I couldn't bear the poisonous points of each chapter. If you copy the original work from the early stage and don't want to change the plot, I can accept it. I can also accept it if you let go of a lot of named enemies of Konoha. But if you change the settings of the original work, I can't accept it. The most important thing is that you don't feel that you have changed it. Do you think this is the meaning of the original work? Give a few examples. 1. The jinchuriki tailed beast will not die unless its chakra is taken away, and the jinchuriki will be resurrected if it dies. Poisonous or not? Then tell me how Mizukage died? 2. The Uzumaki clan is just a branch of the Senju clan, and Nagato only has the Uzumaki bloodline. I don't know how to explain this. I remember it was said in the manga that Nagato has the blood of Senju and Uzumaki. Maybe I'm remembering it wrong. 3. Xiang Ling became obsessed with Pain's chakra after sensing it? Maybe you don't know why Xiang Ling likes Sasuke? 4. Kisame didn't know that Obito said that he was Madara, and he didn't know about the Eye of the Moon plan. Kisame is loyal to Akatsuki who takes him in and is led by Pain? You probably don't know that Kisame brought Toto here? Jin Xiao also agreed with Obito's Eye of the Moon plan. I've only read more than 70 chapters, and I won't mention the other poisonous points one by one. I can't stand it anymore.

Naruto's darkening direction is wrong. What readers want to see is a Naruto with the temperament of an evil boss, not the stubborn madman he is now. Darkening does not mean that humanity has been wiped out. Operations like Naruto's killing of the Hyuga family's population are really low. Do you think indiscriminate killing counts as blackening? Popular villains in comics never like to kill indiscriminately. They are unwilling to kill but have to kill for the noble beliefs in their hearts, such as Kaneki Ken and Lelouch. In addition, the darkening of the protagonist usually involves severe blows and unimaginable torture in order to safeguard the so-called justice. These tortures will resonate with readers and make people feel that the darkening of the protagonist is reasonable. However, I don't think the darkened Naruto in this book has experienced anything. At most, Jiraiya died and he failed to take revenge. I really feel that the subsequent experiences are nothing. Naruto's character of repaying evil with kindness will never reach the point of being paranoid and killing indiscriminately. If you want to forcibly blacken it, you might as well write about Hinata dying to protect Naruto and even being fucked by others, Naruto fighting to save the village but still being betrayed by the village, or his companions and elders trying to deprive him of the nine tails that protect him in order to develop ninjutsu, etc... I think any example is better than the illogical blackening event in your article. Finally, Naruto is not a fool. In the comics, his combat intelligence is very high, but he seems naive in dealing with people. It's not that he can't figure out many problems, but he just doesn't think about it from a rational perspective. Once he thinks about it, his IQ and EQ are definitely not low. But in addition to becoming paranoid and cruel in character, Naruto in your article also has lower IQ and EQ, making him unlikable. Okay, I didn't expect to be able to say so much. To sum up, the plot of this book is indeed not very good. But I still read it sometimes, because the author has written a sense of the ten deadly sins, and I think the dark parts are somewhat interesting. I highly recommend the author to write a new book instead of writing a fanfic, and instead write a suspenseful, scary and dark original book. It will definitely do better than the current one.

Let me say a few more words... I admit that I read this book with someone else's free account. Maybe some people will criticize me for paying for it... But I still want to say a few words. The first 200 chapters are really good. The logic, characterization, and main and branch lines of the plot are really good; But starting from Chapter 300, our protagonist Nagato directly becomes an NPC. The author's goal is to look at the entire ninja world. Often the protagonist does not have a chance to show his face for 10 to 20 consecutive chapters. It is clear from the previous article that Konan is the heroine, but the frequency of her appearance in the article is not as high as Gaara, Terumi Mei, Karin, etc., And there is no emotional drama at all. It is unclear why the author wants to write Konan; Starting from Chapter 450, the plot collapsed, all kinds of people, horses, monsters and monsters came into battle, and the main line [Unification of the Ninja World] could hardly proceed; After Chapter 500, the strength of the Ninja World began to explode (understand that I used the word "explosion"), and the real Jonin was not as good as a dog; After Chapter 600, the power system collapsed (yes, it collapsed), and our protagonist Nagato faced life and death crises many times. There were many more unknown characters in various parts of the ninja world (I don't watch the theatrical version, so I may not know much, don't judge me on this) whose strength is second only to Nagato. But brothers, now Nagato's body has been perfectly integrated into Hashirama's cells and has complete control over the Samsara Eye. Such combat power can rank 5th to 7th in the ninja world described by the author... Whirlpool physique + Hashirama cells + fully controlled Samsara Eye + fruits of the sacred tree (mostly chakra fruits) + One-tail Shukaku = Can't enter the top five in the ninja world? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! Are you kidding me?                                                                                                               <

This book exploded at the beginning. The subject matter is very good but there are three poisonous points: 1. It has something to do with Danzo. No matter what the reason is, people who read the novel have come from the original work. Not many people like Danzo, the scapegoat, and working with Danzo is even more disgusting. You can completely steal it with your strength. With Payne's six-path super movie level strength, there is no problem. 2. The Rinnegan Eye is not Nagato's, but Uchiha Madara's. Ben will definitely play tricks on the Rinnegan Eye, and he will probably set it to automatically use Rinnegen to resurrect Uchiha Madara at a certain point in time. This can be seen in the anime when Madara was reincarnated in the dirt and thought it was Nagato who resurrected him, and he said that Nagato is so big. It can be speculated that Nagato himself is a puppet, and Nagato cannot use the true power of the Rinnegan. My personal recommendation is to go to the moon to grab the Rinnegan. The Super Shadow level can also defeat Toneri who does not have the Rinnegan. The method of entering the moon is in the movie version. After grabbing it, you can dig out your own Rinnegan. Or tampering with Nagato, like the one he did with Obito, how to solve this? 3. Without the system, how could Nagato defeat Otsutsuki Kaguya, the ancestor of chakra, and he did not have the power of the Six Paths Sage. Even if you use Sasuke Naruto, how could you defeat them who have the power of the Six Paths? How can they listen to you? The Immortal of Six Paths won't just sit idly by? How to solve this bug?

Author... Chapter 44 is over, is it Chapter 46? Is it okay to call this a chapter number? I thought you updated 3 times

I feel so disgusted when I see Naruto. I don't think he has become a black man, but he has become more rebellious, paranoid, selfish and unreasonable. For me, the main characters in hot-blooded series are a bit off-putting to me. They seem to be hot-blooded but are actually very rational and selfish and paranoid. The feeling of this book has been strengthened. Naruto has always regarded Nagato as a villain, but from what aspects did he see it? "Originally, as long as Uzumaki Naruto heard Nagato dare to say such words on behalf of the Ninja Alliance, he would immediately speak out, because in Uzumaki Naruto's heart, all the Kage present are qualified to speak on behalf of the Ninja Alliance, only Nagato, the evil bastard, is not qualified. Kill Die Jiraiya, kill Fukasaku Sennin, kill Konohamaru... Killed too many Konoha villagers, how can such an executioner with hands stained with Konoha's blood deserve to speak on behalf of the Ninja Alliance!" The above is taken from 5? In Chapter 96, Naruto only judged evil people from his own perspective and killed the people he cared about. Of all the ninjas, there was no one with blood on his hands. Why did he kill the Hinata family without thinking that they were your friends and family? Oh, yes, Neji still killed them. The key is that people think it should be done. The friends also thought it was appropriate, and even advised Neji to show off, since his family would be fine anyway. All of them have poor IQ but pride themselves on being righteous. I talked a lot about my Ninja Way and so on, killing all those who are plotting and so on. But in reality, just do it to anyone who doesn't like to listen to what they say, and even your friends will die. If Danzo provokes me, I will fight him; if the daimyo supports me, I will kill the daimyo. I also thought that it would be better if I acted as a shadow, and I was so confident. Whether Tsunade or Danzo, when dealing with things, they always consider the village and so on. I think Naruto really wants him to come, why should he come? He is nothing but messing around. Although there are several places where it is suggested that Kyuubi is instigating him to cause trouble, I think it is still the problem itself. Later on, there is also an inexplicable 100% match with the Nine-Tails. Is it probably the villain route? This Naruto is really disgusting to me, but there is no way that the original protagonist will not die in this book, and he will continue to disgust me in the future. . .

，，，（） These are nothing!                                       You suddenly resurrected the entire Uchiha family, and sacrificed two Sharingan eyes of the Uchiha Reincarnation, to forcibly shake time and space, cancel the Uchiha Reincarnation, and resurrect them to their previous appearance. Finally, another technique that can forcibly summon the eyes in life? Nagato: 666, when fighting, you must fight with a roar! I'll beat your mother! Why didn't Madara just summon my eyes away when he was resurrected?