Destroying Konoha: Pain's Reign of Terror

15 Chapters, so enjoyable to read! Author, keep going!

First of all, author, you've created a unique Naruto fanfiction, at least it's written according to your own ideas, so I'll give you my support for that 👍. And so far, your writing is quite good, very imaginative, and you've written it from Nagato's perspective. Here's another round of support 👍.

I've kept my promise. It wasn't much, but it was a token of my appreciation. Keep it up!

An author who thinks he knows Naruto very well. Ha! His writing is like he's never even watched Naruto. I was hoping to read further, but I couldn't stand the constant barrage of plot holes. I can accept you copying the early parts of the story and not wanting to change the plot, and I can even accept letting go of a bunch of named enemies from Konoha.

Naruto's descent into darkness went in the wrong direction. Readers wanted to see a Naruto with the aura of an evil boss, not the stubborn and obstinate madman he is now. Turning to the dark doesn't mean losing one's humanity. Naruto's actions, like killing members of the Hyuga clan, are really low. Do you think indiscriminate killing equals turning to the dark?

Let me say a few more words... I admit that I read this book using someone else's free access code, and some people might criticize me for getting it for free and still complaining... But I still want to say a few words. The first 200 chapters are really good; the logic, character development, and main and subplots are all quite good.

This book is explosive from the start; the subject matter is good, but it has three major flaws: 1. It is related to Danzo. Regardless of the reason, people who read the novel come from the original work. Few people like Danzo, who is a scapegoat. Cooperating with Danzo is even more disgusting. He could have easily taken it by force with his strength.

Author... Is it chapter 46 instead of 44? Is it okay to still call this chapter numbering? I thought you'd updated three times already.

Naruto disgusts me. I don't think he's really turned evil; rather, he's just become more rebellious, obsessive, selfish, and unreasonable. For me, the main characters in shonen anime are generally not very appealing; they seem enthusiastic on the surface but are actually unreasonable, selfish, and obsessive.

I'm speechless. Reviving Haku, Sasori, Kakuzu, etc. Is one thing, but writing Naruto like a brainless, idiotic villain is another. And then there's sealing the Tailed Beasts into Tobi (who lost his memory, which isn't your fault anyway). None of that matters!