The Storyteller of the Great Sui

Let me remind you, there are more than 200 chapters in which a young girl who lives in the same room and two concubines have a knife together. The so-called invincible flow means all kinds of abuse. I want to lick all kinds of people when they kill me. I can hang a sheep's head to my liking and sell it as dog licking dog meat. Just in this invincible flow, I have been poisoned.

This kind of novel is really nonsense. Is it possible that people from other worlds can't write books because they have no brains?

Literary Youth, Holy Mother, Hypocrisy, Don't use the name of being happy

Tsk, it's another case of selling dog meat over sheep's heads. In itself, it's like reading a storybook

Da Feng wrote it and it became popular. A scholar from the Wei Dynasty wrote it and got good results. I don't know what it is like to be a scholar in the Sui Dynasty I am more concerned about who will write books in the Tang Dynasty or destroy books in the Qin Dynasty😏😏😏

The setting of storytelling is quite interesting, but this setting is actually the same as attribute flow. Some intelligence-reducing links must be used to suppress the growth of the protagonist's strength. Otherwise, according to my understanding, I will definitely go to the capital to talk about the book for a year. If one year is not enough, I will have another year. If I don't say invincible, at least I won't feel aggrieved. But in this way, I can only write 4,500 chapters. You can't just go away like that one. Every time a world reaches the combat power ceiling, you can change the world and continue to make money. This author's imagination is too small. For a book like this on cultivating immortals, if you create a demon clan and then create a god clan, demon clan, etc., You don't need to suppress the protagonist's strength. It was really disgusting to see Pegasus City. They are copying poems and fonts, and then there are a lot of great principles and chicken soup for the soul all day long. If you have the ability, you can popularize socialism. Knowing that the Golden Man fragment is nearby, you either stay away or grab it. Are you not afraid of revealing that you own the Golden Man fragment? The character of the protagonist is also a mess. At the beginning, Li Er Ge was not notified in advance and he had to perform rituals for others. After meeting Sun Bofu, he ignored him because he complained that he could not leave the world. Maybe he thought it was unreasonable. He also added a Ningshuang plot to write Sun Bofu, and I didn't know what to say. In short, just remove the label of Invincible Articles, and the author, you can continue to criticize me. I have no objection if someone is willing to support you. Abandoned

I always felt strange when reading this article. I felt that the descriptions of the male protagonist and the female characters in it were very disharmonious. Later I thought about it and came up with a few points: First, the female characters that appear in it are either dashing, beautiful, heroic, or powerful, but they all have one thing in common, that is, when you see the male protagonist, you will feel from the bottom of your heart that he is so clean and special. Unlike other stinky men with dirty minds, he is unique to me! If the male protagonist were replaced by a female protagonist, this would be the old-school bloody romance routine covered in fairy tales. The love-hate relationship between the pure and unpretentious White Lotus Fairy and the cold Master, the Peerless Demon Lord, fellow juniors and other handsome guys. All of them are powerful figures in the world of cultivation, but they are all attracted by the strong, clean and unpretentious heroine. They want to get close to the heroine. Doesn't that feel like that? Second, my feeling is that it is "icky". The whole text is full of a lot of "she" words, or by describing the male protagonist's inner thoughts to set off the male protagonist's purity and purity of mind. There are also many descriptions of a certain female character turning around and seeing the male protagonist's "gentle smile" or "sunny smile", or seeing a good-looking Taoist priest in the crowd, and somewhere she can't help but notice a very good-looking Taoist priest. A good Taoist priest, but it's really weird. There are very few male videos that depict male protagonists like this. It has a feeling of serving others with sex, especially in a paragraph where Master Hu Qiu praises the male protagonist for several hundred words. The main theme is how dirty people are in this world, but the male protagonist is the ray of sunshine she sees. He is so pure and dazzling that she can't help but want to catch him and keep him to see if he will be dirty. Oh my God! I don't know if the author was moved when he wrote this paragraph, but I came to see Fantasy Xianxia with my arms in my arms, and I was so numb that I got goosebumps all over my body. The third and final point is that I feel that there are great logical contradictions in the male protagonist's outlook on life. He himself has no IQ, and he has mainly relied on his "female friends" to protect him (that is, he is a soft rice). He did not rely on his own hard power to get through several critical moments, nor did he rely on his own wisdom to use his small skills to overcome the crisis. He relied on the support of big figures above him. In the beginning, he was a fox. Mr. Qiu, followed by Sun Jingchan, and then a cold female Taoist nun. I guess it is the preparation arranged by the author to add a new confidante. He relies on the backer for small things and big things. He is such a person, but has inexplicable confidence in himself. He obviously relies on women for everything, but he insists on some kind of character that is difficult to understand. People try to persuade him, but they don't listen, and they are even unhappy. In the end, they have no choice but to find a way out for him. He is always unhappy when others take care of him. He says that what he cultivates is to follow his heart, but doesn't the implication mean that he should mind his own business? But when I accept help from others, I feel very comfortable and don't want to be soft-spoken. In the end, he caused trouble for others, and when they wiped his butt, he turned around and went to cause new trouble To sum up, I feel that this man is a male version of the pure white lotus. He is also dull in his actions and has no courage. Nowadays, female videos no longer accept this kind of persona. In fact, some of the author's plot designs are very brilliant, but the emotional design and image design of some characters seem old-fashioned and cliched. Nowadays, both female and male videos have been popular for a long time, with the setting of a self-reliant male protagonist and a female protagonist. Either your mind is extremely strong, or It means that your character is extremely interesting in some way, such as being particularly cautious, particularly stubborn, particularly promiscuous, or particularly reckless. The author can look at the top books on the monthly popular list to see what kind of characters the protagonists in them have, and what characteristics of the characters are popular among everyone. Of course, these are just some of my own opinions. If you disagree, you are welcome to refute me

There is a storyteller who jumps from the building door, and a knife catcher who climbs over the wall to catch monsters. The powerful and powerful people do not understand the public opinion, while the wealthy people pretend to be chivalrous and pretend to be free. There are bones sitting in the court, saying that the right way is in people's hearts There are souls of injustice dying in the ruined temples, squinting and forgetting why they died. A man with good songs, good wine and good beauties left a great reputation throughout the world. There are people who have affairs, steal horses and steal precious wealth, and they will be scolded by thousands of people and it will be difficult for them to enter the afterlife. I have seen the beautiful lady in the Red Mansion hiding her face and smiling sweetly, I have seen the bitter and hateful evil man in the dungeon lowering his head and wailing. It's just a sword, blowing the candlelight into the wind, and the red dust spreads thousands of miles at dawn.

In the second volume, the two female protagonists are directly stabbed to death. They are forced to commit suicide by the young master who has inherited power for thousands of years. The protagonist comes back to take revenge and tear the young master apart with his hands. If you have high poison resistance, check it out.

The first part of this book is really good, but the second part feels like changing authors. As an old bookworm, it feels like I suddenly changed from a book written by an old hand to a newbie. The second part is filled with all kinds of falsehoods, talking about all kinds of tangible things, full of great truths, and the descriptions also have a feeling of YY. I often see this kind of books written by newbies, just YY, it gives me a feeling that the protagonist feels like this The posture is very handsome, and then he pretends to be cool, and then explains that he is not pretending. In the first part, I feel that he really wrote a kind of free and easy way of a monk, and in the second part, it is just to show free and easy. Especially when the three women died, they made me laugh. I felt like Ruofeng changed to a sad BGM during the live broadcast of the crying scene. It was really great. The behavior of the protagonist was exactly what the author wanted to express. Things feel very conflicting. The protagonist is free-spirited and indecisive. The protagonist wants to escape from the world of mortals but is in love with it. The protagonist is fairy-like but wretched. The protagonist sees through the world of mortals but is trapped in it. Generally speaking, it is a group of conflicts between what the protagonist says and what his body does. It's not that he can't accept the death of a woman, but that he died inexplicably. Maybe it's because I'm stupid and can't see that the IQ of the foreshadowing is not enough. Alas, this book The beginning of the book is really good. I had the feeling that the author suddenly became famous when writing business articles. He did not consider whether others would accept it or not. Otherwise, how could he only achieve this result? It is such a pity. If you just do YY and become invincible, you will get more than this result. The most taboo thing in life is to stand in the middle and not make a choice. Indecision and hesitation are often lost. Wait for the author's next book, 😓