Demon Hunters of Great Qi

If Shi Xiaohan were not the heroine, if you dared to write her to death, I would report this book for pornography...

I hope the harem, the author's level of writing about the harem will definitely be unconventional 😏

In fact, I also think that Shi Xiaohan is not suitable to be the heroine. I have always felt that her personality is more suitable to be the protagonist's sister or brother, and her background and abilities are relatively ordinary. If she is a heroine (especially a single heroine), it is difficult to have enough tension. The way they get along with each other has always made me feel like a father raising a daughter, or like the male protagonist raising a pet cat, and playing with the cat every time he comes home tired from work. The mental gap between the two is too big. In fact, the female protagonist has never really entered the male protagonist's world. In the plot, she is just a tool who provides elixirs. Personally, I feel that their interaction is more superficial, purely sweet and sweet, greasy and greasy. (Just like raising a cat, as long as it is cute and can be petted, it does not need to understand each other or be equally matched) Including the chapter where the protagonist is tempted, "She seemed to be in the spring scenery, in the unique spring scenery", which seemed quite poignant at the time. But in fact, this sentence should be borrowed from a similar line in "Your Lie in April". "April" is a youth campus healing episode. It tells the story of the heroine rescuing the hero from depression and facing music and life again. This book is a fairy tale with a dark, cruel and ghostly background. It's not a big problem to borrow a line, but it's actually a bit inconsistent to put this youthful love style into a fairy tale. Especially because the protagonist often goes through all kinds of hardships to defeat the boss (such as Lu's Haunted Mansion, Kongxuan Sanren, etc.), And then gets tired of being with the heroine when he comes back. However, the heroine has no involvement in these events and cannot help. She just plays a role of pure dog food, cuteness and pills, which is even more fragmented. The main character's reason for staying with her is that he "likes her youthful atmosphere" – it's quite appropriate to put it in an urban novel, but is it suitable to put it in a darker fairy tale and ghost novel? This way of writing feels to me like shoehorning an actress who was brought into the cast into a serious drama movie, and asking her to add more scenes and emotional scenes. Her setting and abilities may only be suitable for a supporting role. If she is placed in the right position and exits at the right time, she will leave a good impression and unlimited room for imagination. But in the second volume, this kind of "forcibly changing the outline and forcibly adding scenes in order to make her the heroine" will actually make her morally inappropriate and ruin other people's good impression of her. In contrast, the mood and atmosphere of the scene where Lu Shiyao's remnant soul dissipated in Lu's Haunted Mansion was very natural. It is also written about "love", but it is not obtrusive, and it also has the characteristics of a fairy tale, a fantasy novel, and it is one of the most brilliant passages in the book in my opinion. Personally, I feel that the author's writing style is good and the plot is not bad. It is quite interesting to read the emotional scenes alone. Maybe he can become popular by writing an urban dog food novel. But after reading the author's single chapter, I still suggest that the author should be calmer when writing a book😂... Don't follow impulse, and don't be led astray by comments. (In the second volume, it can be seen that the author has a serious problem. He has taken more leave, and the pace of the plot is slower than in the first volume... In a novel with a lot of foreshadowing, it should not be easy to change the outline temporarily) To some extent, Xiaohan is more popular, maybe because she is the first to appear, and readers and authors have preconceived ideas. But the original heroine didn't appear, so how can you conclude that she is not good? Personal suggestions, for reference only. (Actually, I prefer strong and sassy heroines... Of course it's just a personal taste, the author should follow his own ideas)

There are so few people. Is the title of this book too cliché?

Value? Not even a single skill was given. This kind of attention has a purpose. Moreover, in order to prevent the protagonist from being poached, the news was kept secret, and the possibility of the protagonist to take other paths was cut off. It did not feel like he valued the protagonist, but rather had evil intentions towards the protagonist. Maybe he wants to seize the body. Keeping the news secret, I don't want the protagonist to be too strong.

Worth a look. This book is different from the slaying monsters on the market. The author pays more attention to the portrayal of characters. The story plot is relatively slow, there is no bitterness and hatred, and the progress is slightly slow. The author's poetry is profound, and the interweaving of the text with the poetry at the end of the chapter gives people just the right associations and makes people happy. As the plot unfolds, the world view is relatively small, focusing on narrative descriptions, with foreshadowing everywhere, advancing the plot and arousing speculation. It's worth looking forward to. Just talking about the character creation, it has the talent of fairy grass.

It looks pretty good, but why is no one watching it?

To be honest, I have always felt that the character of Shi Xiaohan is too superficial and too thin. She is just a silly and sweet foodie loli. She is like a mass-produced character using templates in anime. You can also find a lot of them in other novels, which makes people have little expectation. Her interactive plot with the protagonist basically revolves around "eating" and "wanting to be a heroine". It is as boring as coaxing a child (if I read these in classical fairy novels, I would rather watch a love anime). I basically skipped her plot from the second volume on. On the contrary, the story of Lu Shiyao and Zhao Yan made me more interested, and the characters were more distinctive - like Lu Shiyao's smell of a talented woman in a red mansion, I should have checked a lot of information, and another author might not be able to write it. My personal suggestion is that the author should write more female protagonists? (Of course, the most important thing is that the author must act according to his own ideas and not be influenced by comments anymore)

I saw that everyone in the book review area was debating the issue of female protagonists, so I made a voting post to do some statistics

Unexpectedly, it was okay. When I read the introduction, I thought it was the same routine. I didn't expect that the author's writing style was good and the emotions were very delicate. When I first started writing the heroine, I thought it would be too arrogant to give the heroine the title. The author would definitely not be able to write it. I didn't expect it to be so vivid and colorful 👍