The Everyday Life of a Hogwarts Player

The author's views on the reform of wizarding society, especially educational reform, are very problematic and very naive. From a sociological perspective, only a social structure that needs each other has value. If every wizard can be self-sufficient through seven years of compulsory education as the author envisions, the biggest problem will be the fragmentation of society. A society where there is no need for interaction between people will have no value. The education reform envisioned by the author will lead to the disintegration of wizard society. After seven years of compulsory education, wizards will only live in a small circle of three or five friends after making a few friends. In the end, wizard society will be a loose wizard alliance. Since the development potential of Muggle society is much greater than that of wizards, doesn't such a loose wizard alliance give Muggles a chance to defeat each other? If this continues, wizards will become Muggles' guinea pigs in the near future. Moreover, people have different interests and talents. It is impossible for every wizard to be capable and keen on studying magic. Referring to the real society, we know that only the winners who have been screened by primary school, middle school and university graduate students are qualified and capable to study science. Others have little value to scientific development per se. The author's educational reform is very naive, and his views on Lockhart and Rita Skeeter are also very one-sided and incorrect. As protagonists of divine thinking, they should be admired rather than despised. Because they really used their talents and magic in their respective fields.

Two questions: 1. The diary is a Horcrux. It was made in the year Myrtle died. Myrtle's death was used as a sacrifice to split the soul. At this time, Tom was a prefect and his grade was estimated to be fifth grade. The reasoning comes from the memory of the old slug in the sixth part: the Horcrux that Voldemort asked about in fifth grade. At this time, Voldemort should not have started making Horcruxes; and then the second Horcrux recorded the capture of Hagrid. In addition, there is no original text stating that Hagrid is of the same level as Tom. 2. The alternation of first person and third person in the article is very funny.

There was just a chapter review discussing Ron's appearance and Hermione's casting. It was very pertinent. I also replied to it, but it suddenly disappeared. I guess I deleted it after seeing my reply. Discussion is normal, don't delete it, otherwise mine will no longer be visible. Except for personal attacks and advertising book reviews, I will keep all other comments when I have time.

To be honest, I really don't like the character of Kate. Mainly because of the way she appears, I don't like it. When Penelo goes on a date with the protagonist, she suddenly interferes. Later, she knows clearly that Penelo likes the protagonist and she has to follow him every time they go on a date. She always feels like a habit. Not to mention the bad feeling and the feeling of deliberately causing destruction, I just bypassed Penello and contacted the protagonist directly. After all, Penello should have known about it, but then he went on a private trip with the protagonist, which really confused me. What kind of bloody love triangle is this? It's okay to go to a world of two behind your best friend's back and her boyfriend's back! She looks more like the protagonist's girlfriend than Penelo. In my opinion, she is like the kind of green tea mistress who competes with her best friend for a man. The male protagonist also feels like a central air-conditioned scumbag to me, who only has two choices when it comes to picking up his girlfriend and best friend! The love triangle between the scumbag boyfriend, his green tea bestie, and his silly sweet girlfriend made me feel a bit stinky after watching this emotional drama...

Who is the pig's foot? I'm confused and can't understand! Is it Harry Potter? Why do I feel that Harry Potter is the winner in life. Lane Smith is like a piece of shit, always researching this and that behind the scenes, and the author has too many personal items!

The title of this book should be changed to "Ryan's Brainstorming Daily"

The heroine is the most difficult to write. If you have good writing skills, then write as many as you like. The more you write, the happier everyone will be. If you feel that your level is not good enough, then you either don't write it, or you write about your childhood sweetheart. It has been developed since childhood, so it has a high error tolerance and will not be abrupt. Perfect

Everyone could have given up on this. This is a running story. The protagonist rarely appears later. Do you think it is strange that the protagonist rarely appears? It is directly about the daily life of Harry Potter. It feels like you are almost out of writing the main character of the fanfic. You might as well finish it directly, or you should not be a copycat and just copy Harry Potter.

The author writes everything very well, except when the first female protagonist appears, it is too blunt, boring, and upsetting. You either write directly in advance that you want to develop her, or you write that you are not interested in her, but using her for magic experiments, your writing is really unflattering, I couldn't read it I wanted to give up, but because the other settings written by the author were really good, I skipped reading. But if there are too many chapters like this, there are really no fans, or you wrote that the heroine contacted him in order to locate Hogwarts so that she can be teleported there. This is fine, but her appearance is really too sudden.

I can't stand it anymore. I was so awesome before school, why should I go to school? There are also a long-winded group, there are so many theories that they have directly become gods and are still playing with children. It's quite Aquaman, just do it well and see all kinds of contradictions.