Whatever, Let’s Try Putting It All Together

Is there anyone here? I really want to know, "Basketball+Chicken=?"

One's imagination is limited! The author's racking his brains may not be as good as a reader's flash of inspiration. Here, Xianyu would like to ask for some inspiration and ideas about addition formulas. ____+____=____ Everyone can use their imagination freely and leave a message in the comment area of ​​this post according to the formula a item + b item = some kind of weird item. Xianyu will read the creative ideas of friends from time to time, and select some interesting ideas to incorporate into the book. Maybe your creativity will become the funniest plot in this book, but not necessarily! Looking forward to your active participation~

Ask Shen Nong for help to taste it, whether it is a good herb or a poisonous weed.

After reading this introduction, I only have one thought "Big Brother" Warning I also give the author the word "danger".

After reading about forty chapters, I found the writing to be okay, without any bad points, but too routine and loose, with no attractive points. The main line is vague, but the plot lacks small stories and climaxes, and the daily writing cannot be as bland as an ordinary person's daily life.

The male protagonist be like:

It's typical that you have a good idea, but the writing and conception can't support the story. It is recommended that the author first look for the works of great masters to learn from their experience. Look at their framework format and how to deal with details. The most important thing is how to write a climax and capture readers. You can't catch people. May I continue to write and think, and eventually become everyone.

So far, it is still daily-oriented content, but extraordinary settings are a common phenomenon, and there are official organizations, and some places are not handling it well. The landscape stone at the door will glow. I know there is no radiation but I don't care about anything. The spider, a laboratory product related to the supernatural, was lost, but the senior high school students were asked not to go to class to look for it. In some places, it is obvious that the author deliberately created a coincidence. Smart spiders can be created, but there is no way to add spider silk slime. The protagonist needs help. It happened to be lost and the protagonist found it and gave it directly to the protagonist. Generally speaking, this kind of thing is designed first and then manufactured. If you want to take shortcuts, then the product will most likely be used for research instead of being given to the protagonist. Even if there is excess, let the protagonist make more. Why didn't you wait until the meeting before doing this, instead of arranging for someone to send it over? Will the protagonist send it back when we meet again? And the protagonist put it away directly. It seems to be just to give the protagonist a spider robot pet. I hope the author can optimize it in the subsequent plot.

Okay, Shen Nong would like to briefly talk about his humble opinion. Advantages: The writing is basically smooth and a little humorous. Synthetic superpowers or golden fingers have always been interesting settings, and this setting is a plus. It has elements of love, and the writing seems not to be toxic at all, Xiaotian (personal opinion). The content about being at school with my brother is pretty good, with a bit of humor. The imagination in front of the synthesis ability seems to be barely okay. Disadvantages: 1. As an urban supernatural novel, it takes a daily route and currently has no main line. There are only two mainstream urban powers, upgrade and love. Either it is the main storyline of upgrading that makes fighting more enjoyable, or it is the emotional main storyline of using superpowers for love strategy. In this book, superpowers can be used for combat, scientific research, or farming. After all, synthetic ability is nb, but there is no mainline, only daily life. I don't know if your editor has told you about your current problem. There are two goals ahead, one is to win the heroine, and the other is to explore the effects of abilities. After I finished writing, I had no goals and entered into a superpower work routine. Gone are the nonsense conversations between brothers and the sweet love between girlfriends. The synthesis of brain power and superpowers is also averagely written. 2. Let's take a look at the issues. If this kind of intellectual book is not good, it is really not good. And your synthesis ability is not only not innovative and attractive, but the synthesis article has its own exciting point (synthesizing new items, no matter what the logic is, the item is attractive when it is useful), but this exciting point is also gone. When I was in school, I wrote that part very well. After you leave school, this part becomes pure research. The fun part of it is that it is relatively slow-paced. If you write pure research for a long time and there is no use value, it will be even more boring. You don't have a main plot yet, so it's boring and boring. The rest can be filled with combat upgrades and daily love affairs. If you don't have these, you can only stare. In addition, because there is a limit on the number of synthesis items for the protagonist, there are fewer items that can be synthesized, which will also affect the novelty. Other works can use precise synthesis to raise expectations for the special uses of the synthesized items in the future. You can neither be precise nor mass-produce it. Stuck in the middle. 3. The setting system related to abilities is crude. But it's okay if you are an everyday writer. Settings such as technology level are also very vague. The style of painting looks no different from our times, but the mechanical AI spider is set to a high level, and even the equipment department in this city has mechas. Confusion makes the picture unclear.

Author author, a cat plus a cute girl equals a cat girl So what does a dog plus a little girl equal?