In Hogwarts, Why Do I Have a Cultivation Interface?

... Is there something wrong with this plot? Voldemort's life and death are unknown, most of the die-hard Death Eaters are imprisoned in Azkaban, and then the Death Eaters can organize a surprise attack at Hogwarts to kill Black? If the Death Eaters at this time still had this ability, why would the Death Eaters surrender when Voldemort first died? They would just have to fight a protracted war to turn Dumbledore into a bare-bones commander. Then Dumbledore would either destroy the entire British wizarding world, or self-exile and leave the UK. With such a plot, I personally feel that I can't stand it anymore, and I just ran away...

I just read Chapter 60. Some parts are biased toward immortals, but the collision between magic and immortality is also interesting. I entered the school two years earlier and wrote a lot of things that were not in the original novel. The fact that I am not a car nanny is good, but there are also some unnecessary secondary settings.

Some of the detailed descriptions can be regarded as classics in the Internet literary world. Including but not limited to: Touching the nose Not in a hurry Facial/voice/complexion/expression plain My heart skipped a beat when I met someone To be honest, the atmosphere and style described in this book made me feel like I was not reading a Harry Potter fan, and the background was not magic, but Eastern fantasy or fairy tales. Changing people's names doesn't feel out of place.

Magic is spread randomly, you say spiritual energy is thin, then you build a fence, why is it such an inconvenience to cultivate immortality?

The protagonist always gives people the feeling of being an old loser who is several decades old, but the creativity is quite good.

Investigation report: "Number"-629 Investigation subject: "When people are in Hogwarts, what the hell is the cultivation panel?" -Male protagonist-[Gerald Green] Investigation result: [Reincarnation] Judgment basis: Abnormal characteristics: The time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a researcher of time-travelers The profession of investigating and recording the time-travel situations, aiming to allow observers (that is, readers) in all worlds to know in advance the time-travel situations of travelers in this world, and volunteer to provide observers with fast time-travel information inquiry services If there are any fallacies, Wanwang will correct me ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay until April 30, 2026

The writing is also very good. It is very maneuverable to enroll the protagonist group early and write something different. This is what fan fiction needs.

Two years older than Harry. . ? It feels too early. . Either suppress the combat power, or not suppress the combat power. If the protagonist does not drastically change/accelerate the plot until the story begins, it would be unreasonable based on his strength.

Personally, I don't like it. If I want to see elements of cultivating immortals, why don't I read novels about cultivating immortals? Don't like mixing magic and immortality

Voldemort, it wasn't the prophecy that harmed you, it was this troubled world that harmed you 😭😭🙂

Please collect and read! Dear friends, if you are interested in this book, please take a look at the back. If you have any suggestions, you can tell me and I will take them seriously. The first real novel I read was Harry Potter, so I will definitely take it seriously. The character design of the original work will definitely follow the original work, and the basic settings will also remain consistent with the original work. I also checked the original work and the Harry Potter Encyclopedia while writing, trying to be as consistent as possible with the original work. I will expand and recreate some parts of the original work that are vaguely described. But it is also based on the premise of serving the plot and better understanding. Thank you for your support!

Didn't make it to the paid chapter There's no big poison, nor any advantages There are too many private settings, and there's a tendency to have an original single heroine. I don't dare to bet on it. I guess it's in Goblet of Fire again.

Pretty average. It doesn't have many flaws, but it's not very attractive either. Seeing today's chapter, I feel it's not interesting.

Personally I think it's okay, not great but not bad either

Only 2 updates a day, enough for anyone to read! !

The protagonist has a personality problem. He guessed that Voldemort wanted to do something to him, but he still gave him a chance by being alone with him. He wanted to exterminate the Selwyn clan but failed to do so, which ended up making the matter bigger, and in the end he had no choice but to exterminate the clan. She didn't know Dumbledore's attitude towards her, yet she came right under their noses. I have never seen such a cultivator

What matters is logic and writing style. If you write a system, it is equivalent to carving into history. No matter how brilliant it is, it is still history. (System article comments are pasted, resisting literary history construction)

Even basic magic like stepping on a horse's space can do something that an immortal who has been cultivating for so long still can't do.

The rhythm is good and the ideas are okay, but there are too few updates. Please update more. It's too short and weak.

All of them were refined into Ten Thousand Soul Sails. Zifan borrowed Voldemort's hands to practice them for you, and even fixed the Yan Dan. It hurts if you don't have time.

I came here from Xianxia, ​​so I didn't expect to start writing fanfics, but I think I'll get a little bit of Xianxia, ​​come on!

Good looking I accidentally caught up on the latest one More updates, not enough

It's not enough to watch, and the original characters could be enriched by some more branch plots! Stop pushing your original line, or let others get involved. Nowadays, there aren't even many storylines about the Iron Triangle.

Genuine books and theatrical movies use the same term: Hogwarts, not Hogwarts

Is it the heavens? Personally, I think the world of Harry Potter alone is too boring. If you vote for the Zhutian channel, is it Zhutian?

You already have magic potions, why do you need elixirs? Can't you change them to potions?

The twins' characters are a bit OOC

I feel like the writing style is a bit stretched. Remember, this is fan fiction. What you have to do is to supplement the world view rather than repeat it. The author treats the readers and the protagonist as children, and it seems very embarrassing to have to explain everything.

Too many things were solved in one school year. The problem is that Harry still has two years to go to school.

Is the harem still a single heroine or not?