Wizard: Drawing Cards, Starting with a Potion Variety Show

The content of the variety show at the beginning is quite interesting, but once you enter the investigation bureau, the content is very embarrassing. The plot design is a bit low-level, the characters are not as clear as before, and some of the twists are a bit inexplicable and seem to be forced to explain. Moreover, the improvement in strength of the system can no longer be seen, and it is a bit of a behavior of resting on one's laurels. I think the purpose of joining the Investigation Bureau is to improve his strength. Shouldn't we develop more of Dumbledore's characteristics instead of focusing on the development of potions? Now that potions are used as an auxiliary means, the improvement of the protagonist will be more obvious, right?

It's very fragmented. From the variety show to the residential masterpiece, it can be said that there is a connection problem. After that, when I came to the mysterious world, I felt that the fragmentation was very serious. It would be better to write another book like this. There is obviously a lot of the alchemy school system constructed earlier that can be written. I don't know what the meaning of writing in the mysterious world is. What is the setting of the protagonist? Or does it flesh out the protagonist or satisfy the author?

1. Your coding speed is a bit slow now. You want to improve it this week, at least 10,000 codes per day. Did you do it? 2. Will you continue to revise the text of each chapter to make it the best possible?

The content is quite unique, but you still have to add settings later because it is just an imaginary world view now. We don't know exactly what it is like, the differences between wizards, who they are fighting against, the levels and classifications of potions, what kind of world of magic and science is it outside?

I have read Chapter 16 and it is very interesting so far. The variety show should be a reference to "MasterChef". It is easier to write before the end of the show. However, how to develop after the end of the show will test the creativity of the plot.

It is a replica of a foreign show Hell's Kitchen. The characters, both Eastern and Western, all have modern Western-style translation accents. The protagonist speaks in ancient ways and in modern ways. The plot is average, the plot is a bit bloody and the character conflicts are blunt. (Not a big one) has been shaped into an arrogant, shirking of responsibilities, and a weakling who loves to step on others to create conflicts. The barrage clown comes out from time to time, which is purely disgusting. In terms of the world view, I thought it would be grander, but the result is a piece of shit. Confusing magic potion and cooking is quite speechless. You can eat rice indiscriminately, but can you eat potions💊 indiscriminately? There is also the problem of materials. High-end materials such as dragon's blood can be wasted at will. Just make a variety show. If it is a HP world view, the author himself has written a multi-dimensional space world view. The result is this? 💩Shit, if you like to watch modern urban literature, variety shows and no-brainer writing, you can watch it. If you are looking for novelty and want to watch western fantasy and fantasy, you don't need to watch it.

Before the limited release, I just ordered seventy chapters. 🙂

The feeling of fragmentation is too strong, I have no desire to watch the potion variety show anymore.

The plot after the variety show is similar to that of Investigator. It has a completely different look and feel. Goldfinger seems to be there but not there. It seems to be written by another person.

What's the point of hosting the game now? Why spend so much effort on this game? The more I write about the main line, the more biased it becomes.