The Prince of Slytherin's Curses

Author, you can't write Asinsha to death, you can't leave Asinsha in the Soviet Union, and you can't write about Asinsha changing schools. Are there any book friends who agree?

What kind of rubbish novel starts by saying that he invented more to fight Voldemort and then keeps announcing his own curses? What a ridiculous novel makes me laugh to death. Voldemort is resurrected and you don't read newspapers, right?

Originality is okay, but can you please stop going to the East? The painting styles on both sides are different.

I seem to dislike Gryffindor when I read Rowling's writing, and inexplicably like Slytherin. . . .

It feels like the protagonist's sister has always been dependent on the protagonist, but she has no achievements. Can the protagonist's sister be written off?

This book belongs to the refreshing series, but the protagonist's development of magic spells in his childhood is a bit too simple, too easy, too simple and crude. Even the three powerful men in the Harry Potter world, Dumbledore, Voldemort, and Grindelwald, were not able to develop magic spells casually. The author set the protagonist to be able to easily develop various powerful magic spells, which is a bit too lucky and unnatural. Luna's mother is He died due to an accident while developing the magic spell. The protagonist had nothing to do, and without any theoretical basis of magic, it was simply unlucky. Magic was really too much in the hands of the protagonist. It would be more reasonable to add some plug-in-like magic theoretical basis to the protagonist. The author was a bit unconsidered in this regard. It would be better to add some reasonable settings.

I don't quite understand. It's clear that the Daily Prophet often denigrates the protagonist, but the protagonist also discloses magic in this newspaper to increase their sales. I really don't understand it~~ It can be published in a smaller newspaper and suppress the Daily Prophet at the same time. After all, I have invented so many spells that I can publish them without having to publish them on a big platform.

The werewolf paw prints on the protagonist's father, the golden nanmu wand of the protagonist, and the radiance of the Virgin exuding from him illuminated my dark room. Ah! After carefully reading the plot of more than ten chapters, I couldn't help but sigh: five precious minutes of life have been wasted!

I saw that Veritaserum was used at a banquet. It is impossible for a family to have Veritaserum used by others, and it is impossible for a family to let others use Veritaserum. The head of a family gave Veritaserum to others. Do you know what Veritaserum is used for? It is used to extract confessions through torture. This is used at banquets. Is it used to make enemies? No one will tell their true feelings. Not to mention the banquet, even if it is. No one in the police station will reveal all their secrets.

This fanfic is suitable for people who have never read the original work. . . Because the author gave me the feeling that I have never read the original work. . . . In just a dozen chapters, it actually clashed with the original setting five or six times. . . . . . Neither is the writing. The running account + vernacular reminds me of the composition I wrote when I was in primary school. This book is obviously the author's own work, but some people actually find it interesting. . . . Were readers a few years ago so resistant to poison from fellow fans? . .