There's Something Very Wrong with My Hogwarts

This author has some personal stories, but this book is actually pretty good. But the premise is that please don't be led astray by the author's obviously crooked "butt". The Soviet revisionists are not very good, but no matter how bad Big Brother is, they are still better than the Angsa gangs in North America and the white gangs in Western Europe.

Spending money to subscribe, but the book ends up being unfinished. What a waste of money. What kind of broken software accepts memberships and then has to spend money to buy it separately? I spent almost 50, but the book is unfinished. I am really speechless for a novel that is so expensive and yet the book is unfinished! ! ! ! !

I hope the author can properly explore the "role" of the heroine as the main character in the development of the story, instead of treating the heroine as a pendant of the protagonist and participating in the plot as a pure emotional adjustment machine. Many of the heroines (no matter who they are) in HP fanfics on this site are only responsible for blushing, heartbeat, crying, and emotional adjustment. They are almost useless to the growth of the protagonist and the development of the story. There is no sense of disobedience if their roles are removed. It can be regarded as the product of "setting up a heroine just for the sake of having a heroine." The emotional development in these works is often inexplicable (extremely embarrassing), either licked without principles (such as HG) or licked with a "heroic" aura. There is little analysis of the basis of the emotional development of the male and female protagonists and the subtle changes in the male and female protagonists' behaviors and positions after the emotions sprout. Conventional emotional development routines include frequent meetings (participating in the plot in various ways), long-term bickering (exchange and influence of ideas), and giving appropriate holiday gifts (such as the mokeskin pouch given in HPMOR. According to HPMOR's annotation, "According to the book "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them", a moke is a deformed lizard. The mokeskinpouch should be a bag made of the skin of this deformed lizard." "This should be considered a "legal" item. Unlike the Invisible Stretch Spell, which is an advanced spell strictly controlled by the Ministry of Magic, it is only allowed to be used on daily items approved by the Ministry of Magic, such as family tents. It is not allowed to be used for private purposes. HG's beaded bag and Arthur's flying car are illegal abuse.), The stimulation of the suspension bridge effect, and the confirmation of feelings at the Goblet of Fire dance are often not well written (conventional routines can be written well enough, and more delicate depictions are not necessary). Many of the protagonists (only pure HP fans on this site) are too versatile. They are fully proficient in magic, potions, transformations, black magic, magic literature (not referring to all O's in the exam), and some works also include alchemy. Each one is like a combination of Dumbledore + Nicoléme + Voldemort, which is slightly inconsistent in a pure HP world (strong dueling ability and high combat literacy are still necessary, otherwise the strength is too low and nothing can be changed, which is meaningless). The overly versatile protagonist also makes the heroine extremely "cumbersome" and has little value and meaning. Now that I've finished complaining, let's get back to this book. The plot of the first year is good, and the relationship and communication with HG, who is positioned as a "half-childhood sweetheart," are also relatively normal. I agree with the evaluation of "The Light of the Moon" and will continue to support it after it is put on the shelves. Once again, I hope that the author can add appropriate roles to other characters (not necessarily the heroine, but it is more suitable for the heroine to arrange this kind of role), responsible for the traceability analysis of magic spells (split, combination, re-creation and improvement)/magic potion component analysis and potion production/curse magic research and anti-curse methods/transformation research and the use of transfiguration in combat/magic literature analysis/alchemy item analysis, etc. I also hope that the author can do more "various types of magic analysis" for expansion, so as to fill in the plot and reasonably enhance the strength of the protagonist group (too strong will not follow the plot, and too weak will have too little interference in the plot, so a balance is needed). In addition, this is a system text after all. It is acceptable for the protagonist to be more versatile, but it may be more appropriate to focus on "creative talent". PS: I personally appreciate the scene in "HP American Transfer Student" (which is blocked next door to this site) in which the male and female protagonists support each other and face the "test" together. The emotional scenes in this work are more natural, and the depiction of the male and female protagonists' changes in behavioral patterns and positions after confirming their relationship is also more delicate. Then there are Harry Potter and the Dark Room, Forever Knight, The Untold Secret, Second Life and its companions The Reason, Manacled and so on. The authors of these works' analysis and speculation on character behavior patterns under the HP framework is worth a look. Of course, the focus of these works is different from that of the colleagues on this site, so there is no need to copy them. It would be worth looking forward to if this book could add "the role of other main characters" or add personality independence and subjective initiative to several main characters. It would be better if it could depict the subtle changes in behavioral patterns and positions before and after identity changes (key events).

I feel good about the setting, but the various jokes in the main plot are all about cleverness, which makes it very embarrassing. There is no need to force your brain to explain. No matter how funny an adult is, he is just in private, doing business as if he is doing business. The protagonist is always making jokes to show his cleverness regardless of the occasion. What is particularly attractive about the HP fandom is the learning of various magic spells and the research of imagination. The protagonist's strength depends entirely on the system, and there is no sense of self-effort. This article should be called Genius Me's daily fun at Hogwarts.

Present the facts and make sense. No matter how bad the Soviet revisionists are, capitalism is better. You can look at what the colonies of capitalist countries are like. I quote Mr. Marx here. Marx once said: "When we turn our gaze from the homeland of bourgeois civilization to the colonies, the extreme hypocrisy and barbaric nature of bourgeois civilization are nakedly presented to us, because it still pretends to be very decent in its hometown, but once it arrives in the colonies, it is not disguised at all." Actual Example: The Desperate Father in the Congo Free State (Story and Photos on Baidu) Not to mention that the Soviet Union was probably a paradise compared to now. Let's take a closer look at the Soviet Union's work system... I wrote this mainly before I was about to read this book. I noticed that the comments below said that the author had a private job. I saw the content of my review from a review of another book. It seems that this kind of content can also be posted. (The picture has been deleted) Goodbye, I am going to read a book. If there is anything wrong, please point it out.

Aha

Hermione and the hero

Talking about politics without sufficient management experience... A lot of personal stuff

Network picture, just missing a pair of wings

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