I Am an Immortal Official in Heaven

After reading a few volumes of this book, I felt that it was really neither good nor bad. Some plots were okay, but some plots, especially when Fang Jian made mistakes and was tricked, felt that they were written just for the sake of writing this plot, and there was not enough portrayal of the protagonist's character. For example, the fight incident felt like it was just to forcefully advance the plot. I feel that Fang Jian is sometimes smart, sometimes stupid, and sometimes makes inexplicable mistakes, and it is impossible to tell whether this is an inherent character flaw or something else. After being calculated and making a mistake, he always knows who made it, and goes to receive the punishment after it is over. I made a mistake in my thinking, whether I will change it in the future, and I will not write down at all how I want to deal with the person behind the scenes. Is it because I offended him in the past, so I plotted against him, and then I accepted it in my heart. Is it determined to give him retribution when the time comes, or directly plot back? You have to make a decision. If you don't write anything, it will make the reader very frustrated. Then you will just touch on the last few sentences, which is foreshadowing. The reader will stop reading halfway through. Writing nothing is nothing but foreshadowing, and it has already been separated by hundreds of chapters. For example, when Fang Jian was punished for revealing his true body, he was just punished. It was not written that he did not think of a solution or found another opportunity before the incident was about to happen. He did not make amends afterwards, nor did he write during the incident. Why did he still have to reveal his true body? He knew clearly that he could not do this, and the pros and cons were not clearly explained. It seemed that he deliberately allowed himself to be punished Also, there is no good description of the difference between Tian Tiao and the laws of our modern society. The author himself feels that he has expressed the purpose of Tian Tiao, but in fact there are many places that are not clear. For example, Laojun deliberately wrote ultra-miniature instructions in the treasure refining manual, which caused the protagonist to blow up many creatures. Fang Jian was still in the process of salvation. I've cheated myself, and I won't even mention his stupid behavior, and it's not just once or twice. Nowadays, many fairy tales about meditating or practicing treasures will set up a formation or find a desolate place at any time, and the protagonist will not say why he feels quite happy-go-lucky. He just doesn't learn anything that is not urgent. If it is modern law, then First of all, it is an educational responsibility, because most people or most people who have not been specifically reminded will not pay attention to this line of words. So how much responsibility does the author of the treasure refining manual cause for the accident caused by refining treasures? And is there a deliberate plot? The circumstances should be aggravated. If it is not responsible, then why not be responsible? Are there any laws in this regard? Where are the rights in all aspects? These are not explained clearly either. Why are the rules of heaven never refined and responsibilities clearly defined? Some things may not be distinguishable, but some things can be distinguished originally, but they just haven't been done. We have obviously said many times that there is a modern earth, but there are still so many fake time-travelers, but in the end we only talked about the arrogance of the time-travelers. Then everyone should know that there is a modern society. So why doesn't everyone know the huge consequences of excessive human rule? Why not absorb the essence of modern rule of law and modern governance system? Apart from anything else, why didn't the Jade Emperor and the Four Emperors, who absolutely knew about this matter, not notice it? You took advantage of the loopholes of heaven and misinterpreted the law to investigate the case, and your attitude was like a villain. At the time, you felt happy. But if you can misinterpret one for good, they can misinterpret hundreds, thousands, or ten thousand. Even if the final interpretation is in your hands, the consequences of their misinterpretation are already beyond the reach. Of course, you can say that most of the immortal officials are good, and sooner or later they will be corrected layer by layer, but in this case, why not just revise and improve it in the first place? Try not to give them opportunities to take advantage of loopholes and prevent them from causing bad consequences, instead of correcting them after they have been caused, right? You can say that their knowledge is limited and they cannot memorize so many laws, so they are not worthy. But regarding sentencing, there are some provisions on responsibility that can be distinguished in the laws of heaven and used as the basis of criminal law. From this point of view, the earth is indeed a big problem. There are many governance systems of modern society in it, which are also worth learning from. It's impossible to copy it, but there are many things that can be significantly improved. Is it because heaven didn't pay attention to these aspects at all, or is it because of the arrogance of gods? The author should think carefully.

This book is generally good, with advantages, the creativity is amazing, it looks at heaven from another angle, and the plot arrangement is quite exciting, but the disadvantage is that it is too easy for the protagonist to complete the task. Especially the part about the Four-Eyed Demon King, I thought I had to sacrifice a lot, but it ended lightly, and the story about Tianjun's son was also about relying on cheats to suppress people. It fails to show the intelligence of the protagonist, skips levels to defeat the boss, and relies on plug-ins.

I understand that the management of heaven is the entire universe, all heavens and worlds are star systems, and all channels are wormholes. The so-called blocking of space and time is the ability to limit the speed of light, interfering with things such as curvature, wormhole opening, quantum teleportation, etc. Due to the distance between galaxies, Daluo Jinxian and below do not have the ability to cross galaxies. The guidance of the heretic true demons also provides coordinates for teleportation. Taiyi Golden Immortal can destroy a star system, Taiyi Xuanxian can destroy a planet, True Immortal can destroy a continent, and Yang Shen can destroy a big city (this article treats Yang Shen's full blow as a nuclear bomb). In this article, the universe has its own basic laws, and the cultivation system and the technological system are just two different ways of applying the laws. This article also mentioned that the earth is the only one in the world. According to the speed of the development of the earth, the earth-moon and earth-fire colonization systems will be initially established in a hundred years. The average life span of the residents will reach the human limit, master nuclear fusion and quantum computers, and master spaceships and space elevators that travel thousands of kilometers per second. In five hundred years, spaceships have spread throughout the solar system and reached 0.3C. Antimatter manufacturing has been initially mastered. Strong artificial intelligence has been applied on a large scale. Any warship has the ability to be completely self-sustaining. The lifespan of residents has exceeded the natural limit. Mind uploading and artificial brain-assisted technology have begun to be applied in the military field. Since heaven restricts humans from exceeding the speed of light near the earth's star system, the earth can control any planet within 50 light-years within a few hundred years by relying on a 0.3C spacecraft. When humans go beyond this range, they will discover the phenomenon of super-light speed, discover advanced energy such as spiritual energy, and discover sects of cultivation, and sooner or later they will collide with heaven. At this time, should Heaven completely obliterate Earth's technology or allow freedom, or even use technology to arm itself? What kind of sparks can come out of this?

Update, update, did you steal it?

I am immersed in the magnificent scene Next page, gone 😆

I am a big SB, and it didn't take long for me to sink anyway.

As expressed in the lotus lantern, a mortal's life lasts only a hundred years, while an immortal's life spans a thousand years. Immortals and mortals fall in love with each other. If a mortal dies, will the other person find a way to revive and extend his life, or will he go to the underworld to save people? If all the immortals did this, people would not suffer from birth, old age, sickness and death. What would the mortal emperors think? In the end, the underworld is disordered and the world is in chaos. Therefore, the heavenly laws are chains and shackles of the desires of the gods. If the gods do whatever they want, how can mortals live?

Originally, the setting of the orphan was quite good, as he climbed up in heaven step by step. He must arrange a Hunyuan Daluo mother and a Hunyuan wife for him. This book became "My Experience of Life in Heaven"

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Brother, you are a mercury-refining little miscellaneous fish, but if I give you an artifact, you can threaten the true immortal? A little baby wielding a big gun? Is this considered poisonous?

Tang San enters the Haotian Sect The protagonist enters the Heavenly Court When he was weak Tang San: I will bear all my father's sins Protagonist: No matter what, you cannot violate the rules of heaven and cannot attack the immortal officials The powerful queen Tang San: My father is right Protagonist: He does not recognize the new rules of heaven and suppresses the emperor of heaven with his backhand

The author writes the novel day and night, directly revising the outline. I spent hundreds of words describing in detail why gods are not allowed to get married, and asked the protagonist to punish so many gods for getting married. Later, I directly changed it to allowing marriage. It's just child's play.

Power Structure Chart of the Upper Level of Heaven

Brothers, are there any books like this where the male protagonist is the god of justice? I have seen too much anti-Tiandao, and I want to see Shuntiandao.

Why should Tianfan be separated from each other, reproductive isolation? Still unable to bear it physically😎

In the later period, it felt boring, especially after the emergence of the Innate Infinite Realm... It had nothing to do with the main purpose of the book, and it became a very ordinary article.

I don't know if the author is reflecting that this heaven is submissive to the inside (the human race believes in the heaven and is one of its own) and attacks the outside world (the demon race is against the heaven and is an outsider).

At the beginning, the protagonist gets an excellent assessment as a ninth-grade earth god, and then gets the position of a sixth-grade mountain god to provide advice. But the flaws are too big, and there is really no way to round them off logically. It is estimated that those immortals lived for millions of years and tens of billions, and the Jade Emperor lived for hundreds of billions of years. And the earth is only a few billion years old, for gods and goddesses who live for such a long time. What does human intelligence mean? The protagonist's IQ is only that of the most ordinary human beings. The gods and gods have been watching humans with this kind of IQ for countless billions of years. Does the protagonist have the ability to make plans? The protagonist's IQ and experience can be said to be the lowest among all immortals. In front of immortals with a long history, the protagonist is not much different from a fool, right? Don't say that the protagonist is no different from a fool. Even the earth does not have any secrets. But with only billions of years of history, do nuclear bombs really mean anything? People on earth can make nuclear bombs, but the earth itself belongs to the Three Realms, and nuclear weapons are not special at all. The surface of the sun is nuclear fusion and nuclear fission. The protagonist who was born on Earth is really not worth mentioning, at least it is impossible to show off his IQ. The protagonist has a golden finger, but it's weird to make suggestions. Do you, a mortal with the most ordinary IQ who has only lived for a few decades, teach people who have lived for trillions of years how to do things?

I think the author is showing signs of writing a female protagonist. My suggestion is that it is best not to have a female protagonist. It is best to maintain the current friendship. If there is a female protagonist, it will not matter how many subscriptions he loses. Fang Jian's character image will collapse. Originally, Fang Jian is alone. Concern, having a heroine becomes Fang Jian's weakness. If I want to write about you, I might as well write it when there is a plot with Qing Fairy earlier. Now that I have seen this, I love to watch Fang Jian follow the rules of heaven to catch demons and eliminate demons. As far as this book is concerned, is it interesting to talk about love?

Fang Jian seems to be practicing with the law of heaven as his Taoist heart, right? Because he abides by the laws of heaven and enforces the law ruthlessly, Fang Jian's practice goes smoothly. In the Seven Fairies incident, the emperor absolved Qi of his crimes with just one word, and also used this to change the rules of heaven. It was not surprising that Fang Jian became possessed on the spot. Later, because of a favor (actually, he was tricked), he intervened in the important affairs of the human world. His Taoist heart was broken on the spot, and it was normal for his body to die and Taoism to disappear.

Although there is no heroine, Xiao Qing is a bit dangerous. Just be a normal Taoist friend. Don't write about Xiao Qing's feelings about Fang Jian all the time. It's terrible. If there is no heroine, don't write about Xiao Qing's feelings about Fang Jian.

I'm single. No one knows anyway

Too bad

Jiang E is really disgusting, she smells bad, and she even drinks green tea. It's not about her and Yue Toad. It's normal for a toad to eat her and fight back, but this character is really disgusting. I felt like vomiting when I saw that part.

The protagonist says that the disciple's understanding is higher than that of the protagonist. It feels like saying that two-dimensional creatures can understand the perspective of three-dimensional creatures. The protagonist is already Taiyi Xuanxian, and the disciple is just a mortal. How can his understanding be compared with that of the protagonist?

Excellent work, the first and middle stages are really good, but the later stages are boring.

The chapters are really confusing. Some of the readers' comments were completely brainless. The most basic thing is, what book are you reading here? What does the main character do in this book? For a while, I want to think of the protagonist as a casual cultivator who kills decisively and cold-bloodedly. After a while, the protagonist is asked to do things according to current police standards. At least in the first few chapters. I didn't expect it to be so noisy at all. The protagonist is a heavenly official, a land official. Cultivation is still the lowest level of Qi refining. A monster is coming and wants to tell you to get out. In the world of Journey to the West, monsters have rebelled many times. I feel that after all, he is a genuine official who doesn't want to go out. The monster is about to burn down the Earth Temple, which is the most fundamental to the Earth God. Then the protagonist reports it and is said to be poisonous. Then he was sentenced to 10 years of repression. It was also said that you were betting on your 10 years in reality at that time. Which monster can't live for thousands of years? There is also a cat demon in the back. I sneak attacked the protagonist and was beaten in self-defense until he vomited blood. Then the protagonist saved him again. Then someone said, the protagonist has set up a private court and cannot be lynched. Oh My God.

To be honest, this book really made me addicted in the early and middle stages. The character of the protagonist is not a cookie-cutter joke. The "execution of the laws of heaven" makes people want to stop. The description of heaven is also very specific and grand. However, in the later stage, the stalls are too big and it is not interesting to follow. I feel good after finishing the book later in the middle stage. Anyway, the first three million words are enough to read, and the rest are used as epilogues. It is a bit like the multiverse plane universe, so people who want to read traditional mythology may not read it. If you like no heroine, just don't watch the later stage The new heroine who complained in the comment area is already in the later stage.

The chocolate is laced with shi, and previously he was unyielding in punishing the various gods who broke the rules of heaven for marriage, but in the end the protagonist turned around and hooked up with his master Jiutian Xuannv. Did the author change his character? How can it be double-standardized like this? It makes me sick, the equator is ruined

This book was well written at first, but after it was put on the shelf, it slowly became unsatisfactory. There were too many modern terms, and it was too funny and meaningless. The person who originally wanted to create a third way besides Buddhism, made it so funny, and the style failed to improve. It is a pity that this book.