During Those Years When I Was Investigating Cases in the Zhenfu Division

I immediately lost the desire to watch the game again. Those who said that Da Bong was more beautiful than Da Bong didn't know how to say it out loud.

In fact, I was very happy when I read Chapter 390, but the reason why I gave up the book was because it was written about King Jing's success in seizing the throne. An emperor will definitely be prepared when he knows that King Jing is a traitor. It is difficult to understand the purpose of the author's writing. I hope to see the emperor come back. It is not a real death, but a fake death. The middle paragraph is because I really don't want to subscribe and read it. It's boring.

This is a book that exceeds 80% of the starting point. Although the protagonist has a heavy halo, the author's writing and narrative are very smooth and comfortable to read. I hope the author insists and I pay to read it. Support the author.

This is a book that exceeds 80% of the starting point. Although the protagonist has a heavy halo, the author's writing and narrative are very smooth and comfortable to read. I hope the author insists and I pay to read it. Support the author.

Excuse me, is King Jing dead? Has the emperor been restored? Has the prince returned to the palace? Has Du Yuanchun been resurrected?

One of the advantages of the author's books is that the protagonist always gets full marks for pretending to be B.

It's a cool article. And he has a good sense of proportion, and he hits all the points, which makes him feel comfortable without being embarrassed. The method of breaking up chapters is particularly clever, much like an experienced storyteller. The chapters are linked together and attract people to follow. The story is also told in a eloquent way. Although most of the plot is not as expected by the readers, and there is room for improvement in the explanation of details, it is better because of the relaxed and humorous writing style. Characterization can capture the main character. One or two shots can outline the outline in three or two strokes, forming a clear and unconfused silhouette. If I am to nitpick, the plot is too tight and makes people breathless. When you are chasing it, you can't stop. When you stop, you think that so many plots happened in one day or two or three days. It's so tiring. It's the same feeling I had when I watched "24" and "Twelve Hours". However, as a cool article, these are not problems, and it may even make people shout "That's not better!"

Are there any more normal books in this ten-day free period? I really vomited, it was like digging for gold in shit.

Opening a new book without notice is like walking in brocade clothes at night

Old fans said that among the several books, they probably liked them the most

It's a bit confusing. Every time the protagonist solves a case, he has to be chased by an enemy master once, and he doesn't remember it every time. He doesn't know how to protect himself. It's boring to use the same routine for how long. Also, everyone in the imperial court is a pig. There must be something wrong internally, and there is no self-examination. Could it be that without the protagonist, everyone else is a fool?

I can't stand copying poems. Why the hell are you still copying books? Dream of Red Mansions, are you kidding me? Give it up.

Can I read this book? Is there any review from Shen Nong?

I just feel like there is no one in Great Liang except Qi Ping! Whether it's detective work or road fighting, it's all on the same level! Didn't anything big happen in Kyoto before Qi Ping came to Kyoto? No one solves the problem? The protagonist is the proud man of heaven, but the others are not all useless! The male protagonist's strength is over exaggerated! A country cannot be strong only by one person!

Everything was fine until I saw the part where the fishing law enforcement escaped from prison. I just find it difficult to accept. In other novels, the protagonist can do whatever it takes, but this book is different. First, this is a novel with the main plot of solving a crime. Second, the protagonist is a law enforcer. Since you are going to write a book on this topic, at least the protagonist must abide by procedural justice. The author knows who is guilty from God's perspective, and the readers are hooked. If one of these people enters the judicial system in the future, if they use these little tricks, it is possible to destroy an innocent person. The author should think more about what impact it might have before writing this kind of plot. Online literature is also literature, and literature should give people something to think about. Mechanical dogmatic procedural justice is often the last line of defense to protect the weak. It concerns you and me, and this kind of thing should never be promoted. Of course there are less than upright things in the novel, which appear to make people think more deeply. But putting it on a front-facing law enforcement protagonist, with no coercion, no helplessness, no life and death, already conflicts with the character design. I can only think that the author is bringing in personal information.

The protagonist has solved so many big and important cases, but apart from the spread of his reputation, there is no real benefit at all. There is neither promotion nor special material rewards. Others can take credit even if they have some casual achievements in reality. Others can solve a big and important case. To be promoted, the protagonist needs several talents. Today's crime novels basically follow this routine, as if the protagonist deserved to be prostituted for free, not to mention that the protagonist has other achievements, which seem not worth mentioning. If all these were focused on others, they would still be standing still.

I saw more than 300 pictures. . . A few comments, overall it is very good The first problem is that the difference in realm is too small. Maybe the protagonist improves a little faster, but it feels like there is not much difference The second is the fighting problem. From what I have seen so far, I feel that the protagonist does not have a good fighting performance except relying on realm and golden fingers, and has too few skills. It feels a bit vain to fight in one battle. You can add more methods, such as whether the protagonist uses a knife or a gun, or whether he is a weapons master, and what kind of school he is, or the sword skills commonly used in the yamen, or when fighting, for example: Qi Ping's eyes are focused, he remembers the color of his hand, and stabs at the enemy's waist, or Qi Ping's sword skills are streamlined, which he has learned through life and death fights again and again. There is no fixed method, and he pays attention to ruthlessness, such as the part when chasing Cao Yuan. . It feels like the protagonist has no level at all, and has never practiced fighting seriously. He relies purely on reaction, and then Qi Canghuang has no role. Maybe the author thought that he would use it during fighting, but when he wrote it, it can better reflect Qi Ping's exhaustion and pursuit of Cao Yuan. . . I feel that if I had a golden finger, I wouldn't have chased him for three days and forcibly discovered Qing Yuanzi. I personally feel that it is a bit far-fetched. It can be ended quickly with the golden finger, but the protagonist is unexpected, and in the end it is Cao Yuan who fights back and falls into the water and faints. I feel that it will be smoother than three days. . . It feels a bit embarrassing Of course, the flaws do not hide the flaws, it is one of the few good novels I have seen recently. I have written so many of them, and they are all my personal thoughts. I hope the author will get better and better!

It's true to express desire before suppressing, but you can't always think that the protagonist is not good enough and then slap him in the face. When solving a case, and also when giving gifts, you always feel that the protagonist is not good enough. Every time the protagonist pretends to be awesome, everyone thinks that the protagonist is very powerful. Next time, they will still doubt the protagonist's lack of ability, and they will get tired of it after watching too much. (After reading the plot of giving sugar to the teacher, I felt that the protagonist couldn't come up with anything good and then was slapped in the face again)

The most disgusting thing is that because of a poetry meeting, I copied 200 poems in one night and I couldn't bear it.

Planted a picture

Just write normally, at your own pace. However, it is a bit blunt to rely entirely on the case to advance the plot, and the supporting characters and passers-by do not necessarily have to be related to the case. In addition, there are few in daily life, and a little more may add a lot of color. (Just say whatever you want, the author writes at his own pace)

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't figure out why I brought a girl with me to the northwest for secret investigation. I'm the most speechless. Is it inconvenient to take a girl with me when I go out alone? If you can't fight but you can still run, something will happen later, then you save the woman, and then the relationship will heat up, that's the routine. . .

A little suggestion This emperor can handle it, and there is no problem in saying that he is a benevolent king. But the emperor is still an emperor, and a benevolent king is still a king. The emperor said that jealousy is not a problem when the male protagonist is so prominent, but there must be fear. The male protagonist has been in the spotlight again and again, and the people of Kyoto have turned to him. Where is the emperor? What's more, the male protagonist is a monk, has no problem in the five realms, has no shortcomings, is not greedy for money, and is not lustful. How dare the emperor use it. Afterwards, someone can give the male protagonist some advice, or the male protagonist can be alert himself.

Is this opening different from the title, or is it just that the realism of the exercise is improved? I thought the big thing in the profile was a fake show, where I really grabbed a lot of resources and wandered around the world slowly growing up.

I still feel that the emperor is not dead, I hope he has a backup plan, at least his soul has escaped. In addition, please let King Jing, who is seeking skin from a tiger, be tricked to death by various forces, and get your box lunch as soon as possible. This false emperor looks disgusting.

I'm so sad to lose the new book... I've been following it to the latest, and I still want to see the protagonist's counterattack against the manager, and then the reaction of Bai Narcissus and the others. I want to see the Song Dynasty, the extraordinary world and the mechas.

Solving crimes and cultivating people is difficult to understand. The monks kill people in shocking ways. They are so torn that they can't be stitched up or down.

I was disgusted when I saw the villain successfully usurping the throne.

After reading a few chapters, I understood the writing style: obvious references, endless narration, frugal character lines, and so on.

The emperor is dead... I feel that this paragraph is very depressing, and the writing is slow, and the chapters are broken, which makes it even more uncomfortable. Let's see how the subsequent reversal is. I feel that this paragraph is not very good.