Pindao Started to Take Action

It's hard to believe that the master the protagonist worshiped was a real master, and all his disciples were dead. No wonder the deacon ran away. If the master hadn't seen the clues when he came out of seclusion and asked him to escape, he wouldn't have known when his master was sold 😄

There are inconsistencies in this introduction. In the first part, we want to improve the atmosphere, but in the later part, we are told that we do not follow martial ethics. This means that there is at least one rule in the original atmosphere.

Journey to the West: The poor monk bowed his head The poor monk returned the bow

Haha, I am not suitable for writing purely original stories. The development of the world view is too poor. The protagonist is strong as soon as he appears for no reason, and he often handles problems with great generosity. He seems to be the human avatar of the heavenly general, unscrupulous and free as if he has a backstage. If the protagonist carries a sign on his back, it says: There is someone above me. Then this whole novel will be much more comfortable to read. I believe that the results will be good if it is a high-quality novel, and it will not be as miserable as it is now. The old Taoist is suitable for writing Journey to the West. The Immortal descends to earth, the Liaozhai Heavenly God will enter the mortal world, and the Water Margin incarnates the Jade Emperor.

There are many factions in this sect, and there are endless tricks behind the scenes. Disciples without background are just trash. A group of big bosses are fighting among themselves, and sooner or later they will be over.

Now the starting point is too complicated, level 5 in Xianxia is like a newbie

Kill Two in Two Chapters, such a powerful new book? Reminds me of an old friend on the list of gods

It's pretty good, but the setting of the realm is a bit outrageous The protagonist is still practicing Qi, and if he can still beat the golden elixir in the three major realms, his combat power will collapse. The disciples have all become exhausted, and the protagonist is still practicing Qi. Recently, a person has been introduced who has already practiced Qi ten years ago. He is now at the fifth level of Jindan, which is a bit fast. The high realm is too worthless. When I look back, I see that the protagonist is still practicing Qi, which is a bit inconsistent. , we can only look forward to ascending to the upper realm later.

Okay, okay, I'm just a poor person, I'm holding my hands, you're starting to do it

I read it all in one go. The first three chapters are average to above average, which is pretty good. The opening chapter 20 is a bit discouraging because the background setting and protagonist setting are too vague and look a bit poisonous. For example, a storage bag only owned by three children of aristocratic families was sold for 5,000 spirit stones, but it was not enough for the protagonist to upgrade to a small realm. The combat system has no skills, it's all about numerical values. After Chapter 50, these settings will gradually be connected in a reasonable manner. For example, why is the protagonist so special? It feels better to be able to read chapter 80. The pace of the article is relatively fast, and there is no chaos when moving from place to place. The protagonist is decisive in killing, his teammates are powerful, and there are no twists and turns in the plot. The writing is very good. However, now that I have upgraded to Mahayana, I have made all the arrangements for my own home, and it feels less satisfying to go to other people's homes to cause civil strife behind the scenes. I hope I can quickly end the lower realm and reform the upper realm.

I was attracted by being an immortal official in heaven and followed this author. As soon as I opened this book and saw the second chapter, I lost interest. The writing is not bad, but I hate this subject matter, the underworld cultivating immortals. The opening scene is about the intrigues between flies and dogs within the sect, haha.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not sophisticated.

I started late, but I have already sent it -

Eunuch just came on the shelves, so does this author

A sect has a sect leader and a leader. What do you think?

Start? I thought relieving yourself + getting up at night!

It's been three days and one chapter has not been updated? ? ? ?

Can the author tell me a bit about the background of this book? Is it still in the Heaven series?

The protagonist of this article is actually 1.86 Meters tall? ? 😍😍

I think we can refer to the Archangel of the Three Realms and Han Xiangzi's mythological structure of heaven starting from painting.

This fucking thing is updated every day, is it still possible?

I have read more than 20 chapters in the second volume. What does this master mean by chasing a moth into a flame? Is this a bad ending?

An ordinary invincible article, pretty good

This word count is enough to kill!

There are shadows of Xuanhun Daozhang and Daodao competing