My Wife Is Actually the Leader of the Demon Cult

The early period is a rare masterpiece in daily writing, but starting from the National War, it is just like nothing. Here are the points to complain about:

Shennong is dead. Latecomers beware! The first-level masters mentioned above are very awesome and very rare. As a result, I started walking all over the place. . It was labeled as an invincible novel, but in the end, the protagonist beat a person of a small level above himself and couldn't escape. . The author's writing style is very good, but the plot arrangement is really interesting. Of course, you can also finish it after reading it. I personally read dozens of chapters and retreated to the place where I fought the same half-step master. The protagonist condensed human flowers, and that person condensed earth flowers. The protagonist couldn't defeat him and escaped. He was labeled as an invincible writer and was immediately persuaded to quit. The follow-up plot is not very clear, and judging from the reviews, most of them are negative.

This book is really well-written in terms of conscience. It is neither poisonous nor intentionally funny. The emotional portrayal of the characters is not bad. At least the motivations will drive the plot. The combat power is not broken. I hope that the protagonist will not be said to be the most powerful in the later stage, so it does not look very brainless. At least I think it is better than many books on the market. I think there are still things that can be improved. For example, the character creation is a bit too much. It would be nice if Yu Shan could be more multi-faceted and more vivid so that we don't feel that there will be too rigid scenes. The world view created is not bad for a martial arts world. In the first few chapters, everything that needs to be explained is explained and the motivation is obvious so that it is not difficult to understand. I will give this book a 7/10 I think it is good compared to many books, and I will support it more in the future.

The author has the ability to stop the book today. I have the ability not to vote for this book in my lifetime.

That's it? The quality is getting worse and worse recently, and the length is getting smaller and smaller

This is the second martial arts novel that I read on the software, but I basically started skipping through it later. There were too many scenes with supporting characters, and some of them could be introduced in one paragraph, but I had to write a plot. Just like the scene between the Zhao swordsman and Lin, don't tell me this is also foreshadowing? The author showed Lin Yiyang's character in just a few sentences of dialogue at the beginning, but he also added various plots. This made me more and more annoyed as I watched it. I kept watching it seriously because of your introduction, but the supporting characters became more and more important the further you went. Let me tell you my opinion. I don't have the patience to finish reading the supporting characters written by the author. I only pay attention to the protagonist's role. None of the supporting characters currently attracts me, because their appearance is confusing and their interactions with the protagonist are not deep. Good supporting roles are impressive, such as Zhao Gongming in Senior Brother and Yang Qianhuan in Da Feng, but they are not as big as the author wrote. I hate jumping to subscribe, but it's very annoying when I subscribe and can't see what I want to see. At first, I thought this book was about various misunderstandings between husband and wife due to their status, and scenes of them complaining about each other behind their backs until they die. But now it seems that apart from the early stage, the middle stage will be about the male and female protagonists at the beginning, with some supporting roles in the middle, and then the next chapter will be taken over. It seems like there are quite a lot of words, and half of it is left after excluding the supporting characters. Now I can only keep it, and according to the direction of the plot, it is either ascending or fighting for hegemony. I am no longer as eager to see the death scene of the male and female protagonists as I was at the beginning (because the male protagonist has already guessed the identity of the female protagonist, so there is no sense of surprise.) Hey! I finally managed to watch it and gave up.

For the sake of the plot, a blood god son appeared two days ago, with the peak of the five qi. He was beheaded by the protagonist and his name has been completely forgotten. . After writing so much space, the five qi are the top masters who determine the trend of the world. . As a result, I added one casually, just like watching The Legend of the Condor Heroes. It was almost over, after the Golden Wheel Dharma King, but suddenly the Silver Lun Dharma King came, with top strength, and died in one chapter. . What's the point of him coming out because he only knows how to fight? No need to fight? It has been said in the article before. When the spiritual energy is exhausted, the great master will do whatever he wants, and the eternal immortal will do whatever he wants. Suddenly, a great master appeared out of nowhere. . In a few days, a bunch of great masters will appear again? It turns out that the Grand Master is not dead? How to describe how Zongzheng Huachun is invincible before. . Qi Xuandao is so terrible, he can just produce great masters at random, no matter where you put them. Where do you place Heibingtai and Houjin? You are a martial arts novel. . There is no map to change. . There are no new copies to open. . Such a photo is really disappointing. . I don't know if the author deliberately messed it up or something

The protagonist is just a honeypot, either fighting or on the way to fight, and he is also a selfish honeypot. It's a miracle that such people live so long

I've read more than 200 chapters and I feel it's okay, but it's just okay, so I won't read it anymore.

I have spent a lot of space writing about the harem, and the main plot has been progressing very slowly. I think I need to write a few more chapters.

Personal opinion: The story is very good, but there is a problem with the portrayal of the heroine. The role is not enough, and the value is not reflected. There is a lot of interaction with Xiao Tan, and I feel that she will like the mysterious swordsman, and may have emotional entanglements with the protagonist in the later chapters. That would put the cart before the horse. We look forward to a gradual and ups and downs process for both parties to learn their identities.

People in the Demon Cult behave ruthlessly, and they will punish the ten clans with open mouths. The look and feel is not very good.

After two days of chasing it, I found two problems: 1. It was not enough to read, and 2. The title almost made me miss this book.

About "The Black Opportunity is Gradually Approaching" It is a bold guess that the black opportunity refers to Zhao Qingmei, or Zhao Qingmei who is completely "obsessed". Previously, the land book showed that "there is a black opportunity near the host", but this time it specifically emphasized "Gradually approaching". The gradual approach here is probably not close in space, but close in time. So what is pressing and imminent? Only Qingmei is "enchanted". Currently, the Five Qi Grandmaster An Jing cannot be said to have fought or escaped, but the Great Grand Master does not have any forces on the surface (except Nan Weiping from the Demon Sealing Well). Then, the only person who can threaten An Jing's life is the irrational Qingmei. And facing Qingmei, An Jing would most likely not be able to make a move and use up the paper man's second life. During this period, there may be a lot of abuse points. For example, Qingmei chose to destroy the demon species because she accidentally "killed" An Xiaoruan and lost all her cultivation. Yu Qiurong, Duanmu Xinghua, Jun Qinglin and others died. This plot will be a small climax, but if Fei Tu is really written like this, he is very likely to lose fans and be scolded (refer to the dissatisfaction of some fans when An Jing "died" at the hands of Jiang Shang without any resistance) Such a reversal and abuse point. If the rhythm is well grasped, it will be a killer, but if it is not grasped poorly, it may ruin the book. A better solution is to update more, at least don't break it in the abuse stage, don't break the chapter, it's really very scolding

As long as you are not a supervisor, the monthly ticket is yours every month. I think it is well written, but the pace is a bit slow, which is acceptable.

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The writing is very good, unlike a newbie, the plot is not too bad, and the characterization is okay. It's quite interesting. Now I don't know whether to go for a harem or a solo.

1. Jianghu Ninth Rank. The protagonist started at the first rank and thought this book would be more fun. But when he turned around, he found that the first rank was just his younger brother. There were flowers on the first rank, earth flowers, and small flowers. The three flowers blended together (half master), the three flowers gathered at the top (grandmaster), and then the five qi rose. Yuan, one level of Qi... Regardless of how many realms the Grand Master will have in the future, twenty levels in your low-level martial arts novel are not outrageous 😥... Then add in the setting of the seven realms of swordsmanship, the setting of the relationship between heaven and man, and the setting of the martial arts level. The whole combat power system is ridiculously chaotic... 2, that's it, you still level up... The male protagonist's level is strictly limited, and then the heroine can be upgraded at will... The enemy can't be killed no matter how hard he kills, the enemy always wins and has the general power, the combat power is up. Smallpox, smallpox is fought with half-step master, half-step is fought with first-qi master, first-qi is used to fight second-qi, and second-qi is used to fight third-qi. Winning three-qi directly allows the protagonist to jump two levels to fight fourth-qi. You can find the corresponding battles for all of the above, all of which are this The routine is too disgusting... When you can use the four qi and the fifth qi, shouldn't the great master come out... 4. The demon sect's own people also call themselves the demon sect 😅, and you are a sect, no? It's a martial arts sect, don't you have any teachings... 5. The protagonist couple are geniuses. Time is on your side. The cultivation of this martial arts does not require any resources. No matter how slow it is, it will disappear for more than ten years. , Double Five Qi or even Grand Master, who is your opponent? You have to fight tooth and nail... You bully others who are not Grandmasters with one Qi, and bully others with second Qi. You have to fight with others who are obviously stronger than you, and there is no benefit 😅...

I don't want to continue watching it. In the past few days, there have been various fights, challenging this and that, and then the male protagonist swept everything. In fact, there is nothing wrong with this. But I suddenly remembered that I originally clicked on this novel because the title was "My Wife is the Leader of the Demon Cult". As a result, I just started writing about daily life in Yuzhou City, which made me feel very relaxed and interesting. In addition, the author's writing is really good, so much so that I am reluctant to give up now. I don't know how many people are like me who love to watch the daily life of the male protagonist and the female protagonist. You play me and I play your happy life between the two big men in vests. Qingmei, who looks gentle and virtuous but is actually ruthless, Tan Yun, a snack foodie who is strong in martial arts but has strong limbs and a simple mind, An Xiaoruan, a pretty girl with a weak appearance, the ghost swordsman An Jing, who is strong in martial arts and chivalrous, Li Fuzhou, a high-ranking member of the Demon Sect who is actually both civilized and martial, and a delicious puppy named Xiao Heizai who was bullied. That time in Yuzhou City really seemed so relaxing and comfortable, as if time would freeze in those peaceful days. However, the good times did not last long, and the author started writing about Jianghu which was not very interesting. Personally, I think there is still a certain degree of control. It is better to limit the copy of Jianghu in moderation. This only represents my personal opinion. An Jing is the male protagonist, so he must be invincible, so writing about the male protagonist passing five levels and defeating six generals is actually not interesting. I feel that writing so many fighting scenes is superfluous. The opponents are all strong men in the world, and they are not as powerful as the male protagonist. There is no suspense at all. I originally thought that soon after the fall, the male protagonist would settle things and go into seclusion in the mountains with the female protagonist, and then they would start making love, you and me. At worst, the story would be about the male protagonist dominating the world. As a result, not long after the two became deeply affectionate, the male protagonist began to lead the demon sect to reform the evil. To be honest, I really had no interest in infrastructure. It was just that the male protagonist became the number one swordsman, a master of ten qi and a hundred qi, and finally became an immortal and then fought with immortals. After completing the Nine Nether Purgatory Magic Code, the heroine also became a master of ten qi and a hundred qi, got rid of the demon species, defeated Jiang Shang, completed her revenge, and became the empress? I don't know why I wrote this paragraph. It may be because I have saved several chapters and haven't read them yet, and I have no motivation to continue reading. Maybe it's because I watch more female videos, but I still like to watch emotional and daily videos. I suddenly thought that the Demon Cult is so important to the heroine? Is upgrading that important? I remember it was said at the beginning that the heroine didn't want to be the leader of the Demon Cult. Maybe she just wanted to become stronger and protect the people she loved. But looking at it now, the plot has completely turned into a flow of killing monsters and upgrading. Both the male protagonist and the female protagonist were burdened with heavy shackles, which were so heavy that they couldn't breathe. The heroine wants to take revenge, revitalize the demon sect, and work hard to achieve involution. The male protagonist is obviously a time traveler, but he is burdened with the responsibility of revitalizing Xuanmen and recovering the Zhou Dynasty (is it possible?), And he must also work hard to achieve involution. The male protagonist's previous system cheat was to count down how long it would take before his identity was revealed and he would become stronger silently. Now that his identity can be revealed, does it have no other use? It can only identify opportunities? No system upgrade? Isn't the female protagonist already very strong and can live a sweet life with the male protagonist? Why is she still practicing? If it were me, I would probably choose to be a salted fish. . . Tan Yun. In fact, I am not a Tan Yun party, I am a standard Qingmei x Anjing party. But now I can only watch Tan Yun's plot. Tan Yun is still the same Tan Yun, and the others have already changed.

Make do

It's getting worse and worse, and I can't help but complain. The first person to complain is Yan State, especially Zhao Zhiwu. How did he become the emperor? Zhao Zhiwu only obtained the throne after launching a coup. According to historical inertia, his task was to clean up the court, stabilize the Yan Kingdom, and do a good job of maintaining stability for the next generation. But he is actually raising poison and indulging the two princes to fight among themselves. The most speechless thing is that the Yan Kingdom is still surrounded by powerful enemies. There are Hou Jin, Zhao Kingdom, and Nanman. Their strength is not weaker than that of the Yan Kingdom. Are they really not afraid of losing both sides in the fight and then destroying the country? Are you kidding me here? In the end, Zhao Xuening, who had not received any political training, ascended the throne. Is Zhao Zhiwu so sure that Zhao Xuening can stabilize the court and manage the country well? In particular, if Zhao Xuening wants to ascend the throne, he must rely on the power of the Demon Cult. Why wouldn't Zhao Zhiwu kill Zhao Xuening and directly support Qingmei to come to power? (Especially looking at the current plot, what Zhao Xuening can rely on is the power of the Demon Cult) Before Zhao Zhiwu took action, he thought he was so wise and powerful, but after he appeared, this is it? That's it? Will you just watch the two sons fight among themselves and leave something behind after their death? If the protagonist hadn't cheated, the Yan Kingdom would have been over. The second one is Zhenyi Sect. As the largest sect in the Yan Kingdom, it is also the state religion. Didn't there even be a Five Qi Grandmaster before Xiao Qianqiu? Zhao Chongyin won over Xiao Qianqiu to win over Lonely. The entire Zhenyi Sect felt like he was the only master. After Zhao Chongyin failed, Xiao Qianqiu was even more like a normal person. You are a member of Zhao Chongyin, so are you not afraid that Zhao Xuening will settle the score with your Zhenyi Sect in the future? Once again, it's Zhou Xianming. I thought he was so powerful, but now he looks like a complete loser. What good ideas did he offer when Hou Jin and Zhao Guo came to fight? What contribution did he make to Yan State? Isn't it even more ridiculous to think about abolishing the sects in the world? The protagonist is you, the thigh of Yan State. How do you think you can abolish the sect? This is not a matter of your time at all. In addition to the problem of characterization, the combat power has also collapsed. Although I expected it to collapse, I did not expect it to collapse so completely. I just want to know whether a master master can turn the tide of the battlefield around? If not, then why does the protagonist feel like entering a deserted land when entering the battlefield? If the situation of the battle could be reversed, then Jun Qinglin, a five-qi master, would be killed by five thousand people. . . .

It's just disgusting to have so many affectionate female supporting characters in a story about a single female protagonist. If you want to have both sides, both the harem party and the single female party will be offended. Moreover, the plot fell apart as it went on. It was originally a good book, but it was a pity.

After reading the latest comments, I really got to my heart. Tianhu was shattered in the beginning and later in the game.

Chicken ribs are tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away.

I think this is okay

Don't worry about those people who only read ignorant and cool articles. Come on, author. Although I know you are tough, I still want to praise you. I hope your writing style will remain tough as always. Now that you have chosen your path, don't look back.

What I hate the most is the kind of people who always say: "Ah~ the author can write by himself, and the author can write according to his own ideas." Are you smart? Are you noble? Are you using me to be a good person? If it's good, it's good. If it's not good, it's bad. Why shouldn't it be put forward? The author himself will look at it and make corrections. It's not like he's just making senseless attacks. The book club can't give suggestions? Is this a book club or a fan club? The author can speak for himself based on the data. Let me put it bluntly. The last picture is about the protagonist retreating from the Demon Cult. I think the author did not handle it well! How to say? You don't have to criticize me for what you don't want to read. Books are not specifically written for you. Let's put it this way, I am a novel reader. If you ask me to take a picture of my identity as a writer, I won't be able to take a picture. But as a reader, if you think I can't read your book, I will leave immediately. No one supports anyone. You can write to those who say good things to you. It doesn't matter to me. You can speak for yourself based on the data, or they can support you or the author and treat it as if I didn't say it.

It was quite interesting at the beginning, and it was also the first book I spent money on. Then I saw various female supporting characters. I wrote so much and didn't open a harem, so I wrote less. Then there were various word counts, and I couldn't change the map. In the end, the Grand Master was the ceiling, and the rest was really poisonous and unfinished. I haven't read it for more than 100 times. I suddenly remembered today that after watching the pirated version of the ending, I didn't use the plug-ins. It's really a pity. The book that could have been used to confer gods was just like the chapters were broken at the beginning. It's really a pity and disgusting. Finally, I hope that the next book will be well written. If it doesn't work, just write a romance.

I barely made it to chapter 340 and had no choice but to quit. I originally wanted to skip it and watch it, so that I could finish it with less poison. After all, it has to have a beginning and an end, but I couldn't bear it anymore. Didn't I say that Qidian has an editorial department? Does the author's manuscript have to be reviewed by them first? There are several typos in almost every chapter, yes, not one for several chapters, but many in one chapter. The sentences are not fluent and are everywhere. At first I thought it was because of the low number of words, but later I realized that this is a problem of illiteracy. Some people say that Gu Long's one or two words or not many words per line is to defraud manuscript fees, but it is undeniable that he can often use the first few words to quickly let people enter the time, place, etc. The swordsman-like speech style in Gu Long's works is also quite contemporary, but can you imagine Ye Gucheng and Ximen Chuixue Station on the top of the Forbidden City chatting for half the night? Every time we fight, we have to talk like Gu Long for a long time. It's really annoying Combat power jump is a common problem in many novels. Although the jump here is faster, I can tolerate it, but some details are really disgusting and make me want to vomit. For example, in more than 330 chapters, when Wang Shiyi was excited, the author specially gave him a way to crush the city bricks with his bare hands (the powder fell down). However, the ghost swordsman broke through the city with one sword and the whole world was surprised. Isn't it normal for such a shoddy project? (Although the two are not the same city, but there are no special circumstances, they should be considered to be of the same level, right?) I very much suspect that the author has no outline, so there are too many inconsistencies. For example, what he said to the woman's corpse in the whitewashing of Jiang Shang is different from what others said to his son after his death If you are not too smart, you should not write about wise generals and counselors. But everyone can guess that the so-called three famous generals will be at odds with the Demon Sect. Not only does Emperor Yan not care about it, he is also there: Hearing thunder in the silent place, this is really shocking to me. Force: Beng, every time you fight, you use one move and I move, but it doesn't actually reflect why you use this move. If it's an ancient dragon, then use one move. If it's Jin Yong, use breaking shields for defense, and use breaking swords for swordsmen. If it's a game flow, then repeating the same move will cause internal energy disorder, or damage to meridians, etc. Intelligence: Beng, everyone sees beautiful mountains and clear waters from a distance, and loess garbage from up close. From the long-distance description of the wise general who was tricked and killed with a gold of 200,000 to the wise general who acted wisely after the character appeared, he never saw a figure and just heard his voice, so he thought he was the Emperor Wu of Li Shimin and Zhu Di. As a result, it is really hard to explain when he appears. After reading more than 300 chapters, it is said that it is Zhao with the old man Shifang is stronger than Yan. Shifang just has to wait for the evil spirit to merge with the spiritual energy. If he is really strong, why not destroy the Yan Kingdom earlier and wait slowly. If he is afraid of Yan Kingdom or other great masters (who are behind in combat power), then he just needs to find a place to stay, right?