Journey to the West Vase

The prehistoric pattern is greater than that of Journey to the West. Adding the prehistoric setting to the novel can make the novel more exciting. The realms of prehistoric cultivation are saint, quasi-sage, Daluo Jinxian, Jinxian, Taiyi, true immortal, heavenly immortal, earthly immortal, and Sun Wukong. Like Erlang Shen, he is in the realm of the Golden Immortal. Tathagata Buddha and the Jade Emperor are quasi-sage powers. Theoretically, the prehistoric version of the Jade Emperor can crush Sun Wukong. If the setting of Journey to the West is followed, Sun Wukong is a power whose combat power fluctuates. The peak state can cause chaos in the Heavenly Palace, and the Jade Emperor is in a state of panic. When traveling to the West to learn scriptures, he encounters a black bear spirit and fights him in a short time 😅 Even an author who wants to code millions of words of a Westward Journey fanfic will not write it honestly like this... So of course, writing a Westward Journey fanfic cannot be written completely according to the settings of the Journey to the West version. In that case, readers would really be better off watching the 1986 TV series version of Journey to the West😅

The dynasty of Journey to the West is the Tang Dynasty, and the dynasty of the Conferred Gods is the Shang Dynasty. Which one is earlier?

I saw it before it was put on the shelf. It is a rare good book. It is not easy to find a good classic fairy tale. However, there are still some flaws and poisonous points, but they are innocuous to the whole book. The incense ash in the first chapter is a small flaw. The psychological thoughts of the protagonist are not explained clearly. So I was still confused when I saw the protagonist decisively grabbing the incense ash! Then there are the He family brothers and sisters. They are good at being chivalrous, but if they don't know the strength of the enemy, they go to the protagonist to clean up the mess. Even if it is a crushing, it is still unpleasant. The biggest poisonous point for me is the person who wants to kill the protagonist in Chapter 12. He wants to kill the protagonist just because the girl likes him. But in the next chapter, his father found out and punished him. After all, it's almost finished, but it's a little surprising, so here it is. This book is still worth reading. It's very interesting. Don't criticize me, you idiots. If you want to read it, turn left when you go out. If you like this kind of taste, you can come and discuss the plot.

At present, the author's description of the story is quite smooth and silky. My feedback is that the author has his own knowledge and opinions about Journey to the West and myths and legends. There are no obvious exciting or exciting points, but it is comfortable to watch and not boring. There is not too much violence as you go up the stairs. The protagonist in the book has a profound understanding of himself. Cognition, this is one of the few novels that makes me feel that the full subscription is not a loss. I hope the author will not be affected by bad remarks. I sincerely hope that this book will be a big hit. Come on, author To be honest, I have read too many pretense novels and this one is simply enjoyable. The above personal opinions only represent my personal views on this book.

Why hasn't the food arrived so late today? ? ?

It would be better if you could correct the typos

The human race was used as fuel to forge weapons that broke the shackles of the old era. In the end, the so-called human race sages completely sold the human race in exchange for their tickets for the new era. No matter how vast the world of the new era was, there was no place for the human race.

Han Zhongli. People from the Eastern Han Dynasty. The surname is Zhongli. Fame and power. No. Zhengyangzi.

The writing is very good, but I hope there won't be any more storylines in the Fengshen novel later on. I'm tired of watching this stuff, and the world energy level of Journey to the West is obviously higher than that of Fengshen. The most ridiculous ones are those that pretend to be prehistoric. I'm really tired of watching this.

I haven't read the book yet, but I feel like the comments section is a bit harsh. I don't know why everyone is talking about it so much? Myths and legends are all made up by people. Whatever the common people like is welcome to hear and see. What can the author not write? Nowadays, people in the Internet literary world are not so fierce in following the trend. As for bringing Fengshen and Journey to the West together, some people are not happy about it, and they don't want you to hold it back. In recent years, some people have ridiculed Honghuangliu, saying that it was fabricated. I'm surprised. Myths are just random fabrications. Do you think people take them seriously after reading too many novels? Just allow the ancients to make up random things and not allow modern people to make up random things? As for saying that the adaptation is not made up, the drama is not nonsense, he also made up "Feng Shen" and "Journey to the West". In history, Tang Sanzang really brought a team of small animals? Didn't Tang Sanzang cause trouble for Wu Chengen? Take Erlang Shen, let alone novels and film and television dramas. In traditional mythology, Erlang Shen is not a god made up of pieces? Are they worshiped differently? It's okay if the common people like to admit it. Of course, just like the current He Crab God, the emergence of ancient mythological figures also has court factors, such as Guan Yu. As for novels, just read them. China has been around for five thousand years, and there are so many myths and stories that I can't understand them. Just watch it!

Complaints about some current Journey to the West fans. 1. There are saints in "Journey to the West". In fact, "The Romance of the Gods" plagiarized "Journey to the West" and "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", thinking that the saints in "The Romance of the Gods" are awesome. In fact, the world of "Feng Shen Yan Yi" is very awkward, in the 44th chapter. Original. Yang Jian once practiced the Nine Transformation Yuan Gong, with seventy-two transformations, infinite wonderful ways, the body became a saint, and he was granted the title of True Lord of Qingyuan Wonderful Ways. However, in Chapter 92. It is said that Yang Jian went up to Meishan Mountain and looked around. Suddenly he heard a sound from under the cliff, and thousands of little monkeys rushed out, holding sticks in hand, and they all came to beat Yang Jian randomly. When Yang Jian saw the young monkeys fighting around, he knew he couldn't win, so he had to escape and go down the mountain. Let's talk about the Tongtian Cult Leader. In fact, this character is basically copied from Sun Wukong. Below is a comparison of the two hymns. Journey to the West, Chapter 7, Sun Wukong: The Hunyuan body is in line with the innate nature, and it is only natural after thousands of calamities. Miaomiao Wuwei Hun Taiyi, Ruru Fudong is called Chuxuan. The non-lead and mercury smelted in the furnace for a long time is the immortal. There are endless changes and changes, and the three refuges and five precepts can never be mentioned. The Romance of the Gods, Tongtian Cult Master, Chapter 78: The Hunyuan body is innate, and it is only natural after thousands of calamities. Miaomiao Wuwei teaches the Dharma, and Rurufufu is called Chuxuan. Long-term refining in the furnace is not mercury, and longevity outside of things is all dry. There are endless changes, and Western Buddhism belongs to escape Zen. " Did Master Tongtian also enter the furnace? But what's more funny? Look at the comparison between the two situations, Sun Wukong: He took out the wishful stick from his ear and waved it against the wind. The bowl was as big or small as it was, but he still held it in his hand. No matter what is good or bad, the Heavenly Palace is in chaos, and the Nine Stars are closed and the Four Heavenly Kings are invisible. Good monkey spirit! There is a poem to prove it: Tongtian Cult Master: As the saying goes, Taoist Taoist Tongtian said: "You don't need to boast that you can fight with each other, the Tao is like a deep sea, how can it be spoken. This is the gap. Here is the funniest part, The Romance of the Gods, Chapter 77: The wind is howling, the universe is rippling; the thunder is fierce, shaking the mountains and rivers. Electricity switches on the red ribbon, flying through the clouds and flying fire; fog obscures the sun and moon, and the earth covers it. The wind blows the dust in the face, the thunder scares the tigers and leopards into hiding, the lightning makes the birds dance wildly, and the fog makes the trees disappear without a trace. The wind only stirred up the waves of the Tongtian River, the thunder only caused the ground to crack and collapse at the border gate, the lightning only made the immortals in the Zhuxian Formation bewildered, and the fog was so confusing that the disciples were lost under the reed canopy. This wind is really pushing the mountains, turning rocks and pines down, this thunder is really majestic and shocking, this lightning is really flowing in the sky, shining on wild golden snakes, and this fog is really permeating and covering the nine layers. Journey to the West, Chapter 99: A gust of wind shakes the universe; a thunder shakes the mountains and rivers. A quince flies through the clouds and flies into fire; a day of fog covers the earth. The wind is howling and the thunder is fierce. The red silk is shining, and the stars and moon are misty. The dust and sand blew in the wind, the thundering tigers and leopards hid, the flying birds screamed, and the foggy trees disappeared. The wind stirred up the waves of the Tongtian River, the thunder shook the fish and dragons in the Tongtian River, the rays of light made the Tongtian River completely bright, and the fog covered the cliffs on the Tongtian River and made it dim. Good wind! The fallen mountains, rocks, and pines fell down. What a thunder! Jingzhe hurts people with great power. So cool! The flowing sky illuminates the wild golden snake. So foggy! The sky is covered with chaos. Look at the big difference between the two, and the most important thing is that in Fengshen Romance, Tongtian River only appears once. Isn't it funny? 2. In Journey to the West, the Erlang God is named Yang Jian. In fact, there is no full name of Erlang Shen in the whole book. Moreover, Erlang Shen has many names in Taoism. 3. Journey to the West, Nezha has the world circle Hun Tianling. In fact, Nezha in "The Romance of the Gods" and "Journey to the West" are completely different. Now, the Nezha we are familiar with is actually a suture monster. "Journey to the West" Nezha's appearance ➕ "The Romance of the Gods" Nezha's weapons. The 1986 version of Journey to the West also got it wrong. The fourth chapter of the original work "Journey to the West". Nezha became furious and shouted, "Change!" Then he transformed into a man with three heads and six arms, fierce and holding six kinds of weapons, including a demon-slaying sword, a demon-slaying knife, a demon-binding rope, a demon-subduing pestle, a hydrangea ball, a fire wheel, and ya-ya forks, and struck at his face. 4. Red Boy is the illegitimate son of Taishang Laojun. Actually, I can't figure out how it came out. The original chapter 41 is very clear. The sky is filled with fierce flames, and the earth is red with majestic power. But it's like fire wheels flying up and down, like charcoal dust dancing from west to east. This fire is not a fireman drilling wood, nor is it Lao Tzu's cannon pill, nor is it a sky fire, nor is it a wild fire. It is the fire of true samadhi cultivated by demons. The five cars combine with the five elements, and the five elements are transformed into fire. Liver wood can generate strong heart fire, and heart fire can cause the spleen to be flat. The earth of the spleen generates metal and metal turns into water, and water can generate wood and penetrate the spirit. All life and transformation are caused by fire, and fire spreads all over the sky and flourishes all things. The evil spirits have been enlightened for a long time, and they will always be the first in the West. The demon cultivates into true samadhi fire. In fact, Sun Wukong can also do this. Tai Shang Laojun immediately said: "The monkey ate the peaches, drank the imperial wine, and stole the elixir. My five pots of elixirs, both raw and cooked, were eaten by him. They were forged into one piece using the fire of samadhi, so they were made of gold and steel and could not be hurt in a hurry. 5. Wang Lingguan is a security guard. >In fact, when Wu Chengen wrote Journey to the West, he probably wanted to catch up with the Taoist God of Thunder. The next one is the Zhenwu Emperor. What should I say? Everyone should know who the Emperor Zhenwu is. Original Chapter 7: A person who is brave and loyal has a bad reputation. One is low and the other is lucky. How can a hero be brave with an iron rod and a quick golden whip? One is Taiyi Thunder Ying Huazun, and the other one is Monkey King Taishang. This is the seventh chapter of the original text. He couldn't help but jumped out of the alchemy furnace, kicked down the Bagua furnace, and walked out in a panic. Setting up the fire, watching the stove, and Ding Jia's group came to fight, but he knocked them down one by one, like an epileptic white-fronted tiger or a wind-mad one-horned dragon. Laojun caught up with him and was knocked upside down by him, and he escaped. He was knocked upside down and walked away. 7, Sun Wukong did not break into the Nantian Gate. This time, the monkey king used the iron rod to hit the enemy east and west, and there was no one who could stop him. They were fighting in one place, but the victory was still undecided. He sent General Zuo to Lei Mansion, and mobilized thirty-six thunder generals to surround the great sage. They all fought fiercely. The great sage showed no fear at all. The Jade Emperor drills into the table in the 6th edition of "Journey to the West". 8. The Jade Emperor plays a big game, which is the theory of releasing water in the heaven. In fact, in the Ming and Qing novels, the heaven is really like a bus, and everyone can get on it. Of course, this is not convincing enough. Chapter 7 of the original work: The powerful ghost king and the crowd said: "Long live, I don't know where this great sage learned this method of protecting himself. I chop it with knives and axes, and it is struck by thunder and fire. No one can be harmed, but what? Hearing this, the Jade Emperor said: "This guy, this guy, this guy... How to deal with it?" " Original Chapter 31: The teacher smiled and said: "That monkey is still a village custom. He accepted the strange god for him. He didn't thank God for his kindness, but just retreated. "The Jade Emperor said: "It is only a good thing that he is fine and peaceful in heaven. "Some people may say, rice mountains, face mountains, and golden locks. In fact, in the original work, Sun Wukong never touched these three things. Chapter 87. When the traveler heard the words, he was shocked and didn't dare to start playing again. He walked out of the temple with a face full of shame. Bajie smiled and said: "It doesn't matter! It doesn't matter! My brother was willing to take me there, and he transformed into a dharma body. I ate all his rice and noodles in one meal, and broke the slats to prevent the rain. "Walker said: "Idiots, don't talk nonsense! This is a plan designed by God. How can you see it? Tripitaka said: "If you say this, how can it be good?" "Walker said: "It's not difficult! Not difficult! Before I left, the Four Heavenly Masters told me that I could only do good deeds. " 9. Zhu Bajie's nail rake is better than Sun Wukong's golden hoop. In fact, the golden hoop is much better than the nail rake. Chapter 88: "Hongmeng first judged pottery and iron, and it was set by Dayu himself. Lakes, seas, and rivers are both shallow and deep. I once knew everything about this stick. During the time when mountains and rivers were opened to control floods, he lived in Dongyang Zhenhaique. Over time, the clouds will shine brightly, and they will fade away and remain bright and clean. Lao Sun has a share in the future, and there is no way to change it according to the formula. It should be as big as the universe, but as small as a knot of needles. The name of the stick is Ruyi and the golden hoop is unique in heaven and earth. It weighs 13,500 kilograms, and may be thick or thin, and may arise or die. He also helped me make trouble in the Heavenly Palace, and also accompanied me in attacking the Earthly Palace. Subduing a tiger and subduing a dragon can be done everywhere, and refining demons and destroying monsters is easy to do. Raising your head and pointing towards the dim sun, all the ghosts and gods in heaven and earth will become timid. The Chaos Immortal has been passed down to this day, and it turns out that it is not mortal iron. " Chapter 75: "The stick is made of nine-turn iron, and Laojun forges it in the furnace with his own hands. King Yu asked for the sacred treasure, and the four seas and eight rivers were the final test. The stars are darkly arranged in the middle, and the two ends are covered with gold pieces. The patterns are densely covered with ghosts and gods, with dragon patterns and phoenix seal characters on them. A stick named Lingyang is hidden deep in the sea and is difficult for people to see. The formation and change will soar, and the five-color glow will appear. Lao Sun gained the Tao and returned to the mountain, experiencing endless changes and experiences. Time can be as thick as a big urn, or as small as an iron wire. As thick as Nanyue and as thin as a needle, the length changes with my heart. With a slight movement, colorful clouds arise, flying brightly like lightning. The air-conditioning is freezing, and streaks of killing fog appear in the sky. When the dragon subdues the tiger, I will carry it with me to the ends of the earth. I once used this stick to cause trouble in the Heavenly Palace, and broke up the peach feast with great power. The king of heaven never won the bet, and it was difficult for Nezha to fight against the enemy. The gods were beaten with sticks and did not hide, and hundreds of thousands of heavenly soldiers fled. Thunder generals protected Lingxiao and flew up to the Tongming Hall. All the angels facing the palm were frightened, and all the protecting immortals were confused. Raise the stick to overthrow the Beidou Palace, look back and shake up the South Pole Courtyard. Emperor Jinque saw the evil force of the stick and specially asked Tathagata to meet with me. Victory and defeat are natural for military strategists, and hardship and disaster are indistinguishable. I have been waiting in line for five hundred years, but thanks to Nanhai Bodhisattva's advice. There was a monk in the Tang Dynasty who made great vows to heaven. The ghosts in the city who died in vain will go to Lingshan to seek scriptures. There are demons all the way to the west, making movement very inconvenient. I know that the iron rod is unparalleled in the world, and I asked it to be my companion on the road. The evil spirits went to the underworld with the soup, and their flesh turned into the mortal world and bones turned into noodles. Everywhere you fall under the evil spirit stick, you have no plan. The Bullfighting Palace was destroyed from the top, and the Senluo Palace was crushed from the bottom. The heavenly general once chased Jiu Yao, and the underworld wounded him and ordered him to die. Dropping Zhenshanchuan in mid-air is better than the Taisui Xinhua Sword. Relying on this stick to protect Tang Monk, he defeated all the demons in the world! " Moreover, I found a place that best reflects the difference between the two. It is also one of the biggest bugs in the whole book. It is jokingly called the Crouching Tiger Stone God. Chapter 20: However, the traveler and Bajie drove the tiger down the hillside, only to see the tiger run down and collapse in front of the cliff. The traveler raised the stick and hit it with all his strength, and it turned violent. His hand hurt. Bajie opened up the palladium again, and it turned out to be a tiger skin covered with a Crouching Tiger Stone. Chapter 48: The fool jumped down, revealed his true form, and struck the palladium with his hand. The monster retracted his hand and walked forward. There was a sound of "The armor was broken!" " 10, Thirty-six Transformations of Tiangang > Seventy-two Transformations of Earthly Evil. However, the original work does not have these two at all, the second chapter of the original work. The Patriarch said: "Forget it, what do you want to learn? There are ordinary Tiangang numbers, which have thirty-six changes, and there are ordinary earth evil numbers, which have seventy-two changes. "Actually, when converted, they are 4936 and 8972. The latter two are from the Immortals of the Qing Dynasty, so has Wu Chengen been to the Qing Dynasty? Chapter 47 of the original work. Bajie said: "Look at what the master said! I can only change mountains into trees, rocks into leprous elephants, buffalo into a big fat man, it's okay, but it would be a bit difficult to change into a little girl. " 11, Sun Wukong cannibalizes people The only time this point appears is in the 27th chapter of the original work: The traveler smiled and said: "Master, you know it! When Lao Sun was a demon in the Water Curtain Cave, if he wanted to eat human flesh, it would be like this: it would turn into gold and silver, or it would turn into a table, or it would turn into an intoxicating person, or it would turn into a woman. If there are those infatuated people who fall in love with me, I will lure them into the cave, steam or boil them as they please; if they can't eat them, they will be dried in the sun to prevent the weather from getting dark! Master, if I arrive late, you will fall into his trap and suffer his murderous attacks! "The Tang Monk believes that he is just a good man. Not only does Tang Monk not believe it, but there is also a Ruo. The possibility is very small. However, in the original work, there are many places that can prove that Sun Wukong has never eaten human flesh. Original work Chapter 28: The Great Sage said: "You go to the foot of Nanshan Mountain and take that I stripped off the clothes of the hunters who were killed, washed away the bloodstains, and wore them to protect me from the cold; I pushed the corpses of the dead into the deep pool; I dragged the dead horses, skinned them, and made them into boots; I marinated the meat and ate it slowly; I brought the bows, arrows, guns, and knives to practice martial arts with you; I collected the variegated flags for my use. "The monkeys accepted the promise one by one. Since Huaguo Mountain is so poor, the monkeys are not allowed to eat human flesh. How small is the possibility of him eating human flesh? Original Chapter 99. The two elders tried to persuade him, but they had no choice but to see what he wanted. Sun Dasheng has never eaten fireworks, so he said: "That's enough. " Chapter 39. This passage is the best proof that Sun Wukong has never eaten human flesh. The master has a strong opinion: It turns out that Zhu Bajie has been hurting his life since he was a child and committing evil and eating people. Life is a breath of fresh air. 12, Marshal Tianpeng = True Lord Tianpeng of the North Pole. Actually, these two are not the same person. Tianpeng and Tianyou came out of the Lingxiao Palace in a hurry and said, "Please wait a little longer, my Lord is here." "This Tianpeng is the True King of Tianpeng, and Zhu Bajie is not even worthy of carrying his shoes. 13, Chang'e is the Taiyin Star King. In fact, in "Journey to the West", Chang'e has a profession. Original Chapter 95. Everyone looked up and heard Sun Dasheng shouting sharply: "Your Majesty Tianzhu, please show your queen and concubine to watch. Under this treasure building is the Moon Palace Taiyin Star Lord, and the fairy girls on both sides are Chang'e in the Moon. The person Zhu Bajie was teasing was actually called Fairy Nishang. It is also the 95th chapter of the original work. At this viewing point, Zhu Bajie was moved by lust and couldn't help but jump in the air, hugging Fairy Nishang and saying: "Sister, you and I are old acquaintances, and I can play tricks with you." PS: (If you think there are too many words, there is an abbreviated version below.)

Why do you have to add a woman? Is it necessary to prove that the protagonist is a normal man? And what kind of logic does Chang'e have? Xuan Yue likes the protagonist, does the protagonist have to fall in love with her? Then why didn't you obey Second Senior Brother back then? There are so many people who like Chang'e, how many times will you marry? Isn't it good for An An Fenfen to be busy resurrecting your original husband?

It looks good. If you continue at this level, level 5 will not be difficult.

Can you please add more? It's not enough!

Are there no pure Journey to the West novels? Why is Journey to the West mixed with novels about ancient gods? Obviously, Sun Wukong's combat power in Journey to the West can be said to be one of the ceilings. The only reason he can't defeat him in the original work is because of magic weapons, and the magical path is not very useful.

Why do some people think monkeys are not strong? Let's refresh the knowledge for "veteran" Journey to the West fans who have never read the original work.

All served. The Four Great Classics. To put it nicely, it's actually only four novels. Times are different. If only the development of ancient novels was the same as modern times. Those four books have long been submerged and are nowhere to be found. There is no such thing as being awesome or not. As long as the world is shaped well. Good story. People love to watch. That's good

Seeing that many book friends have doubts, I wrote this post to explain it. First of all, although my book borrows some settings from Honghuang Liu, it is not intended to be written as Honghuang Liu. Therefore, do not directly copy some settings from Honghuang Liu, as this will cause reading difficulties. Second, this book does not mean that the more ancient they are, the stronger they are. Rising stars like Sakyamuni and human sages are not weaker than those ancient beings, and some are even stronger. There is no lich war in the third book. The witch clan is just a race setting when the world first opened. Although there is the term saint, it is actually just an honorific title with no actual bonuses. There is no so-called killing of three corpses. There are only three flowers gathering together and five qi to rise to the source. After that, they will comprehend the world and form their own Tao fruit. In terms of strength, the first echelon is the Taoist Sanqing, the Buddhist Three Saints, Nuwa and Houtu. These people are already at the ceiling of their combat power and are seeking to transcend. The second echelon is the Buddhist past and future Buddhas, the Immortals, the Four Bodhisattvas, the Jade Emperor, Zhen Yuanzi, and Minghe. They all have five qi and the origin, and the three flowers gathered at the top, but they failed to bear their own Tao fruits. The powerful people often mentioned are actually these people, with different combat powers but the same realm. Now they are actively looking for their own path in order to bear the fruit of the Tao. The third echelon is some hidden powers. These people will be written about in the future, but not many. They all have five qi dynasties but encountered difficulties at the Three Flowers Gathering. The fourth echelon is the monkey Yang Jian.

1. You have learned the Thirty-six Changes, but you still covet other people's influence? Has he learned the thirty-six changes? This change is not just about becoming bigger or smaller, it is the way of change in natural evolution. 2. Entering the world of mortals lowered the tone, but fortunately the plot behind it was pretty good and didn't have much impact. But making friends with the fox clan is unpleasant. This charming atmosphere is too abrupt and affects the originally fairy atmosphere.

Although there are various poisonous points in the front, these are minor poisons and can be tolerated. What I can't stand is that in Chapter 77, the Ancestor of Styx, the protagonist, a little shrimp who is not full of energy, can actually fight with the Ancestor of Styx in one or two moves. Is this the Xixi version of Journey to the West?

This woman appears out of nowhere. It's like the author just calls anyone when he misses a woman. It's really disgusting.

I haven't read the book, but let's talk about the original Journey to the West! Many people talk about monkeys and always rip off the original work, but in fact the original work is very confusing because it has no finished product! Historically, there were many versions of the original work, which were different in the Ming and Qing Dynasties. Each version had different stories. It is difficult to determine whether the original author was Wu Chengen (the people who verified Wu Chengen as the author are Hu Shi and Lu Xun). The modern original work of "Journey to the West" was a publisher who combined other versions of the story on the basis of a certain version (such as the Shidetang version). This also caused many bugs between the character systems in it, so it is unscientific to force the original work to define the characters! The original and most complete version has never been found or recorded!

In fact, Journey to the West and Fengshen were written too early, and the author would have certain bugs in the settings in the book. For example, at that time, the author thought that pig iron was the hardest, so the monkeys in Wuzhuang Temple could not hit the ground that was three points harder than pig iron. Therefore, generally authors will intentionally strengthen character expression when writing books, but I feel that most fan books have only weakened, not enhanced, Monkey King's strength in the original Journey to the West. Guanyin in Journey to the West commented that Wukong is "invincible among a hundred thousand troops, and has a reputation in the Nine Heavens." The record of monkeys causing havoc in the Heavenly Palace is real, but some people always say that the Heavenly Powers did not take action. The monkeys only hit the Nantian Gate and did not enter the Heavenly Palace. They say that a group of people in the sky were just playing monkey tricks. I don't believe a single word of the many hymns to monkeys in the original novel.

The chapters of Bai Xiaoyao and Jin Chanzi are poorly written, which greatly affects the perception. First, these two people are friends with the protagonist, but their image is not good. The woman is arrogant and domineering, and the man is glib, which makes readers not like it. Secondly, not to mention how unreasonable it is to pair Tang Monk and Bone Spirit together. After all, this is a fan of Journey to the West. Let's tolerate this for the time being, but in the end, Bai Xiaoyao became possessed and didn't kill him. Even if he was suppressed, it would be fine to prevent harm to others, so he just let him go. Just let Jin Chanzi go, after all, he is so sexy that he is so stupid. What is going on with the protagonist? After seeing him a few times in total, he can have such deep feelings, and his character is broken. Author, don't mess around with the plot of Journey to the West. Just write about the things that overlap with each other, and don't be rigid about the things that can't be. People like Jin Chanzi who are so cruel to themselves are reluctant to do anything to a woman who is pestering him. He is not Tang Seng yet. Also, is the protagonist licking him too much, like a nanny? The above is what I think is unreasonable. After I finished writing, I felt that the tone was not very good. In fact, this book is very good. In order to prevent it from affecting subsequent readers, the author will delete it after reading it.

This sudden emotional line is really hard to accept

I don't know if the author has noticed that the copy of the alien world has spread, but I haven't subscribed to it anyway.

The biggest problem with this book is that there is no Shennong in the comment section, which made me poisoned.

Don't be picky. This is a normal book that is rare in Qidian. At least the writing and plot logic are flawless.

. . . It's a bit nonsense. Pig's Feet has only been practicing for thirty years and can fight against the likes of Nezha and Yang Jian. He's not worthy even if it means letting him go. Why don't you make a transition? The realm aspect is too nonsense. You didn't explain in the book what you did. How can you practice so fast? In a short period of time, it's the same as those who have been practicing for tens of thousands of years. It doesn't open when hanging, and it doesn't hold the heel. It feels very tearing.

What a waste of a good subject, the beginning of the story was really good. The protagonist struggles to survive in the world of gods and ghosts. First, he learned the magic of the Sword Immortal by chance and fought against injustices along the way. In this setting, as long as a chance protagonist of immortality is arranged later, he can travel around the world of Journey to the West.