Setti, Pirate Nemesis!

I don't understand why it disappears just after looking at it

🙂 Seti is obviously a heroic and gentle person. As a result, I can only think of one word for the description in the book, barbaric. Barbaric without any sense.

Saw Chapter 34 This book is well written overall, with the protagonist's character, appearance and application of skills. Author, please keep writing like this. There is another book about a wealthy man with a bunch of fancy skills, so I just cut it.

Sett is not such a completely brainless person What was written in the front is very good, until the deliberate reduction of Sett's IQ later turns out to be a failure In the background story of Wanhao, Wanhao's clever access to the fighting arena is not a mindless fight, but a conspiracy and a fair and just grab Isn't it enough to have Mundo without a brain? Sett can obviously be dubbed as "Sett, who once relied on a pair of iron fists to run rampant in the fighting ring, now rules his lawless land with a pair of iron fists", please don't deliberately reduce your IQ

Why does the protagonist of a fan fiction being a time traveler give readers a sense of empathy? Because the time-travelers are as familiar with the plot as we are, at least roughly. The protagonist has never seen One Piece, so his identity as a time traveler is meaningless. Even if you write that a wealthy man in the game travels to the world of One Piece, it will be the same as now, and maybe it will be more enjoyable for readers.

I like this book very much, keep it up! I'm going to see other worlds. Let's take the first step, old man.

Jinfu Jinfu, the whole audience cheered.

I'm afraid that the author keeps adding the skills of other heroes. Isn't the most beautiful thing about the Brawny Pirates is the Brawny Pirates template, and the domineering system that fits the Brawny Pirates very well. Adding the skills of other heroes doesn't feel like a pirate, and it feels like a League of Legends fan with a different world view. I sincerely hope that the author can simply write "Warrior + Dominance" without adding other hero skills. The talent system is already very strong. I think there is really no need to add the skills of other heroes. I hope the author can consider this small flaw carefully. This book is really well written and I like it very much. If it could be purer, this book would have huge potential. Come on✪ω✪

Whatever you say is a strong man

Do you have any recommendations for pirate and naval novels that don't have a heroine or that have a heroine who appears at the end? Please help me, please. Please save the children. There is a shortage of children's literature 😭😭😭