The Wind and Eagle Wings of Hogwarts

I really like this book so far (Chapter 164). First of all, the character creation. The original characters are also well portrayed, especially the twins. When I saw the dialogue between the twins, I really felt that the author had a good grasp of it. Then there are the images of the protagonist and his friends. The design is very reasonable. The desire for knowledge, respect for friends' choices, and "not caring about matters that have nothing to do with themselves"... Although it may seem "ruthless" on the surface, the Ravenclaw-style friendship is well written. He is a protagonist with very Ravenclaw characteristics. The second thing is the plot. There are no logical flaws and it progresses smoothly. As a protagonist who is three years older than them and not in the same college, he did not forcefully join the savior line, but followed his own main line. The design of my own main line is also quite interesting. Some thoughts on Transfiguration are also interesting ↖(^ω^)↗There are some basic expansion ideas. But I feel that the author is not very capable of running several branches at the same time and can only write on one line (although several branches are interspersed, it is a bit like forcibly shelving one line so that more pen and ink can be written on another line). It is not that this is not good, but sometimes it feels a bit thin. Then it may be because the protagonist is a Ravenclaw, and his plot feels relatively bland (just in comparison, and as far as I am concerned, I prefer this hhhhhhhh). Of course, I have to mention that I have a hunch that the author may write about class conflicts with purebloods. My personal suggestion is to write after you are confident in grasping it, otherwise it is easy to overturn. Finally, let me tell you why I like this book better o(≧v≦)o This book is very Ravenclaw-like. Whether it is the protagonist's personality, interpersonal relationships, behavior and thoughts, or the plot description and writing style, they are all very Ravenclaw. Really like it! I hope this book will get better and better! ! !

After catching up with the new volume, as usual, leave a comment before leaving. The first two hundred chapters are wonderful, with plot advancement and character creation seamlessly integrated. The rhythm is steady and varied, and the information is given wherever the plot is laid out, without any excessive effort. The supporting characters never crowd out the main plot, and the writing is staggered. The image goes from vivid to full in a scroll, and there is no trace of it being too hasty. The few things that are slightly deliberately blunt are very sparsely distributed and are often required by the plot. They are not worth mentioning under this kind of writing power. With such a well-organized, comfortable and natural reading experience, it can be said that most authors do not have such skills - not to mention that many fans just have hot ideas and do not care about the outline. From Trelawney's prophecy to the establishment of the Tower of Babel, you can feel that there is a clear difference from the previous part. The plot obviously outweighs the characters. Although the plot itself is also very eye-catching, it has no obvious advantage compared with some authors who are accustomed to focusing on the plot and only focusing on the protagonist. The old characters lack new angles/changes, the new characters are insufficiently introduced, and the transformation of the protagonist is occasionally unnatural. Overall, it is still readable. At least compared with competing products, the ideas and core are very mature, and there is nothing very childish. But my personal feeling is that the preparation is not as sufficient as in the early stage. Of course, it's also possible that the outline didn't go that far in the first place or that it changed halfway—preferably not, otherwise the decline in quality may not be easy to recover from. I hope that after the Tower of Babel is established, the author can regain the control he had at the beginning. Finally, I would like to thank the author for his wonderful presentation, above.

The writing is really good. I have read four or five HP novels, and the narrative style, writing techniques and writing style of this one are the closest to the original. In other words, it is the most consistent with the narrative method of foreign novels, which makes me feel very comfortable reading it. Unlike some fan novels, the narrative style is neither Chinese nor English, and deliberately imitates the translation accent. In the end, it ends up looking completely different and awkward. Moreover, many authors who write fan fiction may have limited cultural literacy, and cannot even use basic words, sentences, and punctuation marks well. This made me feel off-putting and had no desire to continue reading. The author of this novel has good language and writing skills. It can be seen that he has a certain degree of literary accomplishment and will not make some basic grammar and writing mistakes. (I personally have high requirements for language skills in novels. Some sentences that are not read smoothly or the wrong vocabulary will make me feel uncomfortable for a long time, which seriously affects my desire to read. For example, the so-and-so of magic has not finished the subject, predicate and object of a complete sentence. He insists on adding a sentence in the middle to break up a complete sentence, which makes me miserable. If a novel cannot even handle the wording and sentence formation well, then I think the author is not good at it. It is necessary to relearn Chinese writing and reading comprehension, starting from basic grammar) The most outstanding thing is that the author completely wrote himself within the framework of the original work, and wrote the story of the protagonist and Ravenclaw, instead of just developing a pretentious plot around Harry or the main line of the original work like most fans. He has his own thinking and understanding, and it can be seen that the author has researched the setting of the Harry Potter world. Also, the seemingly plain story reveals carefully crafted details: the protagonist is talented but not too ostentatious, has a bit of fun but is not dazzling, and is not a nouveau riche-style cupcake. If this novel can be completed successfully, with a word count of about three million words, I dare say that it will be the highest quality among HP fans, and I hope the author will achieve great results.

One thing to say, I want to see Milton X Scott

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It's great. After reading about forty chapters, I can't help but comment. I've read basically all the novels written by HP fans. Personally, this book ranks among the top three most interesting. The original plot is very interesting, and the characterization is also good. The reason why the score is particularly good is that I think the title and introduction are a little holding back. It is very serious, but not clever enough. And I personally feel that the protagonist is a little bit, well, walking in brocade clothes at night? Whether it's a new discovery in the Transformation Book or the matter of fixing the little witch, they are only for their own entertainment and no one knows about it. Perhaps if you "release" it a little bit, readers will be much happier, for example, using your eyes to make the little witch realize something, making her furious, gnashing her teeth, and fearful, but without evidence to report (she feels that she will not accuse the teacher because of her childish pride). I want to be the protagonist again, but ask for trouble again and again. Isn't it very interesting~ Of course, this is just my own opinion. The author does not need to change. Write well according to your own ideas. If you write with this quality, you will get a lot of monthly votes!

. . So boring. . . Just like reading from a textbook🙂🙂

I haven't finished this book yet, but so far it's definitely in the top three best Harry fanfics I've read! The reasons are as follows: 1. Magical World ~ Reveals a living magical world, not the puppets in the book world, or the completely imaginary Stitch Monster. It fully respects the original work and has its own innovations. There is no over-interpretation or licking. It is a magical world of flesh and blood, beautiful and ugly, very real. 2. Independent personality ~ The protagonist has embarked on an independent path, rather than being a follower of the trio or the "life mentor" of the trio in many fan fictions. The author is more focused on writing a story rather than writing a product of obscenity. The protagonist has his own friends, his own experiences, his own growth, and his own world. 3. Magic system ~ The magic system of this book seems to be very reasonable at present. Fans are now polarized: First, it is a complete fantasy and over-interpretation to improve the protagonist's strength. If it were so easy to improve, would there be so many amazing and talented adult wizards playing house in the original book? The second is to rely on an illusory system to force improvement, which is more reasonable than the first, but is also very un"magical". This book cleverly skips the magic experience in the first three years, reasonably avoids the easily criticized magic accumulation stage, and provides a good explanation for everything. 4. Character relationships. The relationship between the characters respects the original work very much, without adding some inexplicable characters, such as Snape's tenderness, Professor McGonagall's sinister suture monster, etc. On the basis of the original design, it is reasonably extended according to the character, making everything look natural. Dumbledore is not the nanny of the little wizards. He always brushes up on his presence. The professors are also very busy. In summary, this book has made a lot of innovations on the basis of respecting the original work, giving readers a new beginning in their childhood memories, making people unable to help but read on. The results are currently not in line with the quality of the book. It may be that the exaggerated writing style at the starting point is more inclined to the kind of invincible writing or happy writing. In contrast, I prefer this kind of "sinister" hiding behind the scenes ^ ^~ Unfortunately, this month's monthly votes have been lost early. I will start saving monthly votes today to make up for the monthly votes owed to the author. Friends are also welcome to vote together, so that more fans can see this book, so that the author has more motivation and more financial ability to continue creating. I hope the author writes better and better!

The heroine chooses Hermione. Although it is a bit cliché, Hermione is indeed good-looking. So if you are not looking for a good-looking wife, should you look for an ugly one?

After reading the discussion circle, I quite agree with what one reader said, that is, the introduction is not good. To be honest, I have seen this book many times, but the introduction made me have no desire to click in. Until today, I accidentally clicked in and read it straight away. There is a big difference between the protagonist's character and the impression given by the introduction. He is a very good character, including other supporting characters. The writing is also good, and the plot design is also OK. It's rare to find another good Harry Potter fanfic. So it is recommended that the author re-write an introduction. Of course, if your introduction has a profound meaning, just treat it as if I didn't say it. ps: It is also possible to crowdfund and write an introduction. After all, there are many talents and idiots in the comment area.

I gave up on the words of the heroine Hermione. I really watched too much. It feels like the queen heroine.

Foreign netizens used software to create character looks based on the descriptions of the original "Harry Potter" books to see if they are what you expected.

After reading these chapters, I feel that it is well written I will continue to follow it Complain about it Why do most HP fans ask Hermione to be the heroine...

Read the comment section and ask about Hermione. First of all, we need to distinguish between the Hermione in the movie and the Hermione in the novel. I read the novel first, and mainly read the first few movies. I think most people like the heroine Hermione because most of them like Hermione in the movie because she is good-looking. However, for some people who read the novel first, Hermione is not good-looking, and her character is not as likable as in the movie. Comparing the movies and novels, it can be said that many of Ron's highlight moments were given to Hermione (I remember there are statistics on Zhihu), resulting in Hermione's image being much better than in the novel. As for Ron, his highlight moments were not profound, nor did he have Emma's look. At the same time, Ron in the fourth part was really annoying, or in other words, Ron was very "ordinary" in the whole book. As a result, many people couldn't accept the combination of Ron and Hermione in the end, which led to many novels competing for Hermione. I don't have any feelings about this. I feel that the most important thing is not to be OOC. I think the reason why many people don't like the heroine Hermione is actually because Hermione's performance is OOC and has little to do with the movies and novels. She is just like an ordinary academic girl wearing Emma's skin. At the same time, due to the difference between the movie and the novel, Hermione's character is actually slightly different. I personally feel that the Hermione in the movie is more likable (after all, there are many highlight moments). What I can't understand the most about the heroine Hermione is having a harem. I think Hermione's character is OOC if she has a harem. I don't think Hermione would be willing to be a member of the harem. So some people should actually admit that they only like Emma and not Hermione.

Netmap Four Colleges

The color scheme and raven feathers of this one are very Ravenclaw, maybe the raven can eventually evolve into this.

I have only read part of it now, but because I am naturally obsessed with HP fans, I still take the liberty to express some humble opinions and express my personal thoughts. First of all, there is the issue of the male protagonist. Scott himself is very charming. He can defeat 90% of his peers. He is hungry for knowledge and decisive in his actions. He also has a hint of leadership style, and he knows that he will become a great person in the future. But when I look at him, I always feel like something is missing. I'm either looking for trouble but I can't explain why, or I just can't fully understand him as a person. How to put it, there is no way to summarize Scott's most attractive points in one sentence, and he cannot confidently tell others about it; he is probably a typical Ravenclaw, who in most cases does not care about himself, but he has teachers and classmates who respect and love him, and his position is very clear... Axi, It's hard to say. I hope to strengthen the characteristics of his personality, not only how much he likes to learn and how strong he is, but also what he will do for others and his attitude towards each character (such as how close the Weasley twins are to him, whether they are just companions on night walks or can be handed over when in danger, etc.). Maybe we can explain some things that are difficult to explain in the first person from the perspective of others, which can also moderately increase the fun of the article (I didn't feel happy at all when Scott added 50 points for sending paintings to the professor, because other people didn't understand at all...), I am also very curious about what kind of existence Scott is like at Hogwarts. Then I want to talk about the heroine. Tentatively it's Hermione? For me, it doesn't matter whether there is a heroine or not, but the prerequisite for writing a heroine is of course that the emotional line must be stable. Many fans are frustrated because of the heroine, and the lack of CP will of course dissuade some readers. Here again I have to take my favorite pirate fan out for a walk. The male protagonist of "One Piece Code" has been a monk for nearly 400 chapters (at least there is no emotional line described). This will not dampen my enthusiasm for this article at all, but when the empress appears, I will also look forward to the show between them. In the final analysis, the author's writing style is seasoned, and the character's character is well controlled. It is clear whether he has a sense of CP. Hermione and Scott, the setting seems to be very good so far. The two college bullies have something in common, which can dissuade a lot of spare tires. One is a frizzy and proud lion, and the handsome, calm and somewhat sinister Ying Ge can just handle it. There is also an age difference, so it would be sweet to go in the direction of the man doting on the woman. Personal suggestion (actually I want to see it): Brother Ying seduces the whole process intentionally or unintentionally, the lion goes from secret love to love (I automatically substitute Emma), as for the way of confession, you can do it in any way, and the confession of a top student must have the style of a top student? I haven't tied it yet, alas. Let me talk about a few more points that attracted me to this article: First of all, the writing style is very good, and then the plot is of a long and steady flow, which made me want to continue reading. The real reason I decided to follow it was because of the characters. The control of the characters is really good, and the scene where the twins appear is quite amazing! (Well, if Scott's roommates are really important, you can dig a little deeper. For example, the chat reveals the playboy's thoughts on falling in love; the melancholic man doesn't like it very much...) Well, that's about it. The above are my despicable suggestions, sincere and sincere, no lies.

The more I look at it, the more something seems wrong. Where is the freedom that I promised? Why is the protagonist slowly tying chains on himself⛓️, becoming less and less free?

This is a great work by an old Ford, with the addition of Rimbaud, which really fits my image of Scott

The original Harry Potter fanfic seems to have broken away from the stereotyped sorting and rigid plot flow, but is promoted by the Potter worldview (the protagonist is the protagonist, and Potter is Potter). The characters are calm and have their own ideas. Eagle fans are ecstatic. The supporting characters also have very distinct personalities and are not the protagonist's followers. Regarding the emotional line, I really like what the author said about arranging the heroine according to the subsequent plot instead of giving her away at the beginning or deliberately being emotionally weak, which is a bonus. I don't really like the argument that the whole series has no heroine or that whoever the heroine is will be abandoned (a good emotional line can make the reader laugh, and it is also the growth of the protagonist, and also increases the richness of the work) About the cleverness of the popular character Hermione and the surprise glimpse of the public at the ball, Luna's quirkiness, and Fleur's beauty are different from the original work. Everyone likes to leave and never give up. Whether it is none or even a harem, it is a test of the author's writing skills. From now on, I am looking forward to the next development. What will the protagonist choose in the end? With reasonable foreshadowing, for readers, they are watching the protagonist's growth and life. There is no need to put invisible restrictions on the protagonist based on their own desires. Finally, I wish the author's writing skills will get better and better, and that he can bring you and readers good works that will have endless aftertaste.

Clamoring for Hermione. Look at Emma's current appearance, are you still hungry

To be honest, it was really good to read before it was released. I didn't want to miss every chapter. The protagonist's personality is also good, and anyone who wants to kill him will just die in anger. As for after it is released: 1. You can still read the fourth grade volume 2. In the fifth grade volume, a small boss in Medea has been increasing her strength and provoking the protagonist. However, the protagonist tried his best to learn from Ravenclaw to no avail. After one or two hundred chapters, his strength has basically not improved. During this period, various little people (Grapplan, Bode, Carlo, etc.) Have been trying to kill the protagonist openly or covertly, but the protagonist has been persuaded by the professor not to fight back every time. It was not until the gang blatantly attacked twice that he decided to fight back, which was very aggrieved. Except for the content related to the prophecy, this volume has no plot advancement at all. It is just a daily word count, so just skip and read. 3. After the 1994 summer vacation, it can be seen that the author is speeding up the progress, but it is estimated that readers have almost run away by now, and I can't hold on.

The adult version of Scott, I asked a lady from Old Ford to do it for free (she doesn't answer now), he's really handsome 😍

Milton

Apart from this one, are there any other books where the heroine is not Hermione? I almost vomited when I read that Hermione was the heroine. It's everywhere.

The early stage is really refreshing. Whether it is the description of transfiguration or daily life, Scott's roommates, you can feel that it is an independent perspective from the original work The interaction with the original characters often makes people smile, but now I have seen more than 300 pictures and I feel very boring... Starting from the appearance of Medea... Although Scott's purpose is to be a free eagle, he is restricted by Medea... I personally can't understand it. The solution wants to be free, but does not keep Medea at arm's length, but instead takes all the benefits... I think Scott should be able to understand the principle that there is no free lunch. At first, I was looking forward to Scott's various breakthroughs in magic, learning and improvement, but later I felt that it was repeatedly like "Where is Rimbaud's enemy?" How does Scott plan to get rid of people?

Scott, suddenly found a set of pictures, by a Korean painter

I hope the author will keep the pace, adhere to the original idea, and not be influenced by some book friends. I really like this style now, it's relaxed and enjoyable. Always recommend the full order.

Ravenclaw Crest—— Ravenclaw Diadem—— Ravenclaw Common Room——

I have to say that the plot of choosing a dance partner to be jealous is really disappointing. It was so embarrassing that I almost got sick from watching it. I didn't get any benefits before, so I cut myself off to participate in the second round. Then I deducted five points here. Hogwarts has so no cards, and Dumbledore has so no cards? The protagonist is too strong, can't he just crush the streamer and write the competition? You have to forcibly weaken the disgusting people🤮