The Wind and Eagle Wings of Hogwarts

I haven't finished this book yet, but so far it's definitely in the top three best Harry fanfics I've read! The reasons are as follows: 1. Magical World ~ Reveals a living magical world, not the puppets in the book world, or the completely imaginary Stitch Monster. It fully respects the original work and has its own innovations. There is no over-interpretation or licking. It is a magical world of flesh and blood, beautiful and ugly, very real. 2. Independent personality ~ The protagonist has embarked on an independent path, rather than being a follower of the trio or the "life mentor" of the trio in many fan fictions. The author is more focused on writing a story rather than writing a product of obscenity. The protagonist has his own friends, his own experiences, his own growth, and his own world. 3. Magic system ~ The magic system of this book seems to be very reasonable at present. Fans are now polarized: First, it is a complete fantasy and over-interpretation to improve the protagonist's strength. If it were so easy to improve, would there be so many amazing and talented adult wizards playing house in the original book? The second is to rely on an illusory system to force improvement, which is more reasonable than the first, but is also very un"magical". This book cleverly skips the magic experience in the first three years, reasonably avoids the easily criticized magic accumulation stage, and provides a good explanation for everything. 4. Character relationships. The relationship between the characters respects the original work very much, without adding some inexplicable characters, such as Snape's tenderness, Professor McGonagall's sinister suture monster, etc. On the basis of the original design, it is reasonably extended according to the character, making everything look natural. Dumbledore is not the nanny of the little wizards. He always brushes up on his presence. The professors are also very busy. In summary, this book has made a lot of innovations on the basis of respecting the original work, giving readers a new beginning in their childhood memories, making people unable to help but read on. The results are currently not in line with the quality of the book. It may be that the exaggerated writing style at the starting point is more inclined to the kind of invincible writing or happy writing. In contrast, I prefer this kind of "sinister" hiding behind the scenes ^ ^~ Unfortunately, this month's monthly votes have been lost early. I will start saving monthly votes today to make up for the monthly votes owed to the author. Friends are also welcome to vote together, so that more fans can see this book, so that the author has more motivation and more financial ability to continue creating. I hope the author writes better and better!

The heroine chooses Hermione. Although it is a bit cliché, Hermione is indeed good-looking. So if you are not looking for a good-looking wife, should you look for an ugly one?

After reading the discussion circle, I quite agree with what one reader said, that is, the introduction is not good. To be honest, I have seen this book many times, but the introduction made me have no desire to click in. Until today, I accidentally clicked in and read it straight away. There is a big difference between the protagonist's character and the impression given by the introduction. He is a very good character, including other supporting characters. The writing is also good, and the plot design is also OK. It's rare to find another good Harry Potter fanfic. So it is recommended that the author re-write an introduction. Of course, if your introduction has a profound meaning, just treat it as if I didn't say it. ps: It is also possible to crowdfund and write an introduction. After all, there are many talents and idiots in the comment area.

I gave up on the words of the heroine Hermione. I really watched too much. It feels like the queen heroine.

Foreign netizens used software to create character looks based on the descriptions of the original "Harry Potter" books to see if they are what you expected.

After reading these chapters, I feel that it is well written I will continue to follow it Complain about it Why do most HP fans ask Hermione to be the heroine...

Read the comment section and ask about Hermione. First of all, we need to distinguish between the Hermione in the movie and the Hermione in the novel. I read the novel first, and mainly read the first few movies. I think most people like the heroine Hermione because most of them like Hermione in the movie because she is good-looking. However, for some people who read the novel first, Hermione is not good-looking, and her character is not as likable as in the movie. Comparing the movies and novels, it can be said that many of Ron's highlight moments were given to Hermione (I remember there are statistics on Zhihu), resulting in Hermione's image being much better than in the novel. As for Ron, his highlight moments were not profound, nor did he have Emma's look. At the same time, Ron in the fourth part was really annoying, or in other words, Ron was very "ordinary" in the whole book. As a result, many people couldn't accept the combination of Ron and Hermione in the end, which led to many novels competing for Hermione. I don't have any feelings about this. I feel that the most important thing is not to be OOC. I think the reason why many people don't like the heroine Hermione is actually because Hermione's performance is OOC and has little to do with the movies and novels. She is just like an ordinary academic girl wearing Emma's skin. At the same time, due to the difference between the movie and the novel, Hermione's character is actually slightly different. I personally feel that the Hermione in the movie is more likable (after all, there are many highlight moments). What I can't understand the most about the heroine Hermione is having a harem. I think Hermione's character is OOC if she has a harem. I don't think Hermione would be willing to be a member of the harem. So some people should actually admit that they only like Emma and not Hermione.

Netmap Four Colleges

The color scheme and raven feathers of this one are very Ravenclaw, maybe the raven can eventually evolve into this.

I have only read part of it now, but because I am naturally obsessed with HP fans, I still take the liberty to express some humble opinions and express my personal thoughts. First of all, there is the issue of the male protagonist. Scott himself is very charming. He can defeat 90% of his peers. He is hungry for knowledge and decisive in his actions. He also has a hint of leadership style, and he knows that he will become a great person in the future. But when I look at him, I always feel like something is missing. I'm either looking for trouble but I can't explain why, or I just can't fully understand him as a person. How to put it, there is no way to summarize Scott's most attractive points in one sentence, and he cannot confidently tell others about it; he is probably a typical Ravenclaw, who in most cases does not care about himself, but he has teachers and classmates who respect and love him, and his position is very clear... Axi, It's hard to say. I hope to strengthen the characteristics of his personality, not only how much he likes to learn and how strong he is, but also what he will do for others and his attitude towards each character (such as how close the Weasley twins are to him, whether they are just companions on night walks or can be handed over when in danger, etc.). Maybe we can explain some things that are difficult to explain in the first person from the perspective of others, which can also moderately increase the fun of the article (I didn't feel happy at all when Scott added 50 points for sending paintings to the professor, because other people didn't understand at all...), I am also very curious about what kind of existence Scott is like at Hogwarts. Then I want to talk about the heroine. Tentatively it's Hermione? For me, it doesn't matter whether there is a heroine or not, but the prerequisite for writing a heroine is of course that the emotional line must be stable. Many fans are frustrated because of the heroine, and the lack of CP will of course dissuade some readers. Here again I have to take my favorite pirate fan out for a walk. The male protagonist of "One Piece Code" has been a monk for nearly 400 chapters (at least there is no emotional line described). This will not dampen my enthusiasm for this article at all, but when the empress appears, I will also look forward to the show between them. In the final analysis, the author's writing style is seasoned, and the character's character is well controlled. It is clear whether he has a sense of CP. Hermione and Scott, the setting seems to be very good so far. The two college bullies have something in common, which can dissuade a lot of spare tires. One is a frizzy and proud lion, and the handsome, calm and somewhat sinister Ying Ge can just handle it. There is also an age difference, so it would be sweet to go in the direction of the man doting on the woman. Personal suggestion (actually I want to see it): Brother Ying seduces the whole process intentionally or unintentionally, the lion goes from secret love to love (I automatically substitute Emma), as for the way of confession, you can do it in any way, and the confession of a top student must have the style of a top student? I haven't tied it yet, alas. Let me talk about a few more points that attracted me to this article: First of all, the writing style is very good, and then the plot is of a long and steady flow, which made me want to continue reading. The real reason I decided to follow it was because of the characters. The control of the characters is really good, and the scene where the twins appear is quite amazing! (Well, if Scott's roommates are really important, you can dig a little deeper. For example, the chat reveals the playboy's thoughts on falling in love; the melancholic man doesn't like it very much...) Well, that's about it. The above are my despicable suggestions, sincere and sincere, no lies.