Douluo Dalu: The Diamond King

Titan Giant Ape Martial Soul! Erming is quite suitable for making soul rings.

Expanding a single sentence into a whole chapter results in rambling, nonsensical drivel, even more tedious than a primary school student's essay.

It's too wordy. Things that could be said in a few sentences have been stretched into one or two chapters, each chapter feeling like an explanation of those few sentences. I want to tell the author, "Dude, you're writing a novel, not a dictionary."

Is there any hope for Douluo Continent? Most of the current Douluo Continent players are like Cao Cao.

It's too wordy, with a single sentence going on for hundreds of words. It's painful to read and extremely poorly written.

There are at least ten instances of the word "after all" in a single chapter. Can't you write without using the word "after all"?

Enough talk, let's combine the armor!

I thought every author would improve with time. Goodbye, sorry for bothering you.

This author must really love using the word "after all"! Damn it, the whole thing is filled with it.

It's incredibly verbose, and the conversations are extremely awkward.