Douluo Dalu: The Diamond King

Titan Giant Ape Martial Spirit! Erming is quite suitable for making a soul ring.

One sentence is expanded into a chapter, and it is full of nonsense. It is more streamlined than a primary school student's composition.

It's so long-winded. Things that can be written in a few sentences are basically written in one or two chapters. Each chapter is like explaining the meaning of a few sentences. I want to say to the author, "Brother, you are writing a novel, not a dictionary."

Can Douluo be saved? Nowadays, most Douluo are Cao Cao

The writing is so long-winded, one sentence can last hundreds of words, and it's painful to read. It's very, very clumsy.

There are at least ten "after all" in a chapter. Wouldn't you be able to write without the word "after all"?

No more talking, just fuse the armor together

I thought every author would write better and better, so I excused myself.

How much this author likes to write the word "after all"! TM, the whole article is full of it.

It's so long-winded and the dialogue is awkward.