Battle Through the Heavens: Super Enhancement

Main character: Damn it! My incompetence has brought disaster upon my family. It seems I must step in!

Queen Queen, Gu Xun'er, Little Fairy Doctor

This is a bit awkward. It mentions guns, but no gun skills... My goodness, Buddha's Wrath Lotus!!! You're copying homework, aren't you? Even if you're copying, at least put some effort into it! -_-|| At least include gun skills. Wildfire Hundred Strikes, gun skills...

Little Fairy Doctor

You're not surnamed Xiao, so why do you keep writing about paranoia?

I hope the protagonist and Xiao Yan are friends. Xiao Yan has a good character and is good to his friends.

Yunyun

Selling pills at dirt cheap prices, amazing!

The pacing is too fast; the whole book reads like it was written on an assembly line. Dialogues, battles, alchemy, and daily life are like diary entries, with nothing particularly outstanding. The protagonist is too young and too powerful. Either increasing his age by five years or lowering his power level would make it much more enjoyable to read. His alchemy skills are alright, I suppose.

If you can't seize opportunities, you can always seize girls. Otherwise, your book might not succeed. Because you don't have any of the satisfying moments readers need, it would be an injustice if it didn't flop!