Super Enhancement in Uncle Jiu's World

I'm giving 100 points just to vent. After reading more than ten chapters, I want to ask the author whether he had any knowledge of Taoism or related matters before writing the book. Talismans, talismans, talismans. Do you know what talismans are? Just write it down. Dozens of high-quality talismans were used. The talisman is a name given by the heavenly authority; what you wrote can be called either a talisman or a spirit talisman. I'm speechless watching them throw talismans one after another 😑

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There's too much explanatory content in the article, especially when it's interspersed throughout the plot, which disrupts the rhythm of the story. I suggest the author focus on the plot, and explain or elaborate on the explanations or inner monologues together. My current feeling What did A do? A starts thinking to themselves, "Why did I do this? Why did I make this choice?"

They're all pretty good, but I'm wondering why these Golden Core cultivators can't fly? While it's true you've raised the characters' cultivation levels, writing about someone like Uncle Nine at the Foundation Establishment stage would be more appropriate. After all, it's the Dharma-ending Age. If you don't include cultivation levels like Refining Essence into Qi, then fine…

Uncle Nine

Turn water into dragon

Uncle Nine

Uncle Nine

Author, your idea is excellent, but your writing style is lacking, like a newbie. Also, did you buy this comment? You wrote 20 pages and got over 100 comments!

Uncle Nine