Douluo Dalu: The Diamond King

The plot can be said to be very bland. The main thing to watch when reading a fanfic is the protagonist of the original plot, that is, some of the things happening in the background. Or something different from the original storyline. But in the early stage of this book, I only saw a novel that told a fantasy and old-fashioned story line in the Douluo Continent. Some early descriptions of the protagonist's upgrade were too complicated and boring. Especially some fights, and the most disgusting thing is that there are too many side descriptions in this book, which are about the main plot of the story. There are basically only a few sentences. In every chapter, the author is exaggerating and talking about a very simple thing. The author has to spend a lot of ink writing various examples of his views on this matter, as well as the protagonist's intention behind this matter. Do I need you to keep talking? One thing repeats itself over and over again. Of course, all readers are mentally retarded and cannot see your intentions. Do you need you to keep talking about it? I have read over 400 chapters now. The plot can be summarized in a few sentences. The protagonist has been upgraded to god level. The family power also upgraded from one Titled Douluo and multiple Soul Douluo to many Titled Douluo, and then he arranged them there. And the author describes too much the so-called intentions behind his actions. It makes me vomit just looking at it. Regarding the characters in the main plot, there are not many. It's all about the interpretation of the intention behind it. I wish the protagonist could just wave his hand and he would be able to talk about it for several chapters.

So-so. The whole book is characterized by being bland. The plot, emotions, and even the battle scenes are bland. It's too ordinary.

The plot is not poisonous and the writing style is relatively novice

After reading the first hundred or so chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. After looking at the table of contents, I lost it. I have been looking for a book for a long time. Every time I read a novel, I read the reviews first. Then after reading the reviews, I was directly persuaded to quit the book before I read the book. I read this book without reading the reviews. Fxxk shit! Qimao's rating means you can buy it, right?

He has always been very idealistic, always explaining things unilaterally, and having to analyze everything. He is really Luo Liba Suo, such a good background subject, written like this

The plot is good but too watery

The first few chapters are a bit stained, especially the dialogue between father and son. There are a lot of forced words, but that's fine later on. The King Kong family model also needs to be changed. The patriarch, that is, the grand elder, will leave when he retires. He can only come back when he is almost gone. Instead of doing this, it is better to separate the command hall and the elder hall directly. The deacon hall is managed by the clan leader and is responsible for running the family. The elder hall is the outgoing deacon and clan leader, that is, the retirement, and cannot participate in the family business. This is better than leaving.

The writing is very stiff, like a running account, like a machine, and there are too many loopholes.

The plot structure is flawed, but still watchable, but the tone and wording made me feel like I was reading a running account, as if someone had simply written a summary diary.

Therefore and after all there are too many