The Great Dao Across All Worlds

The author seems not to understand the proportion between your mini map and the main world. Do you think readers attach great importance to the mini map? I'm almost done writing it. The small map is just accumulation and adjustment. As a result, you didn't see many words in the main world. They were all small worlds. You might as well write about the upgrade flow of the heavens. What's the use of telling me about the main world?

I feel that the protagonist is quite good. If the protagonist is an indigenous person and writes a passionate story, the author's writing style is very suitable. But if you take into account all the cheats that the protagonist does, he is hundreds of years old. The setting is scheming, but his plans are not successful a few times, so he basically resorts to cheating at the critical moment. It's okay once or twice, but I can't stand it again and again. It's better to write a sunny and warm-blooded protagonist from the beginning. Everyone loves it, Xiaoqiang is as explosive, and it's more enjoyable to watch. . .

There is another great Luo in the Yuanshi lineage

It started again and again, the author's traditional skills, the protagonist fights life and death, and then someone finally comes out to take a share of the pie. It's disgusting. There are so many books, but the one written by Qing Yu at the beginning turns out to be the best. Getting more and more disgusting. Really, I was pleasantly surprised from the beginning, and then started to be disappointed, disappointed, disappointed, and kept disappointed.

To be honest, I was very surprised when I saw this book in the recommendation list. The main recommendation was that the recommendation line, "Walking through the heavens starting from protons" was so stupid. I never thought before that the protagonist could actually be a proton. It's not even an atom, how can it advance the plot? How do you travel through the heavens? Is the main plot just to find matching neutrons and synthesize them to upgrade? After I came in, I was disappointed. It turned out that the protons meant hostages, alas. Dian Niang mistook me. By the way, there are many people in the starting point who can travel through humans, animals, and artifacts, but no one has traveled through time into microscopic particles?

The title of the book Zhushi Daluo looked at the copy of the introduction. The copy was full of martial arts. He also asked why this book was not popular. Why should it be popular? I naturally reject some people's thoughts on this book, because there are too many such books. They write about martial arts with the name of Zhu Tianliu, write one or two million words and still write martial arts, and quickly end it after hundreds of thousands of words after martial arts. For this kind of books, I always think that they are trying to sell dogs on sheep's heads!

To be honest, it feels really frustrating to watch. I don't feel good at all. I keep making calculations over and over again. How can you do this world-travel novel? The protagonist has to be calculated by others from the beginning to the end. Even if you defeat one, there will be another one. I am really speechless. And the most disgusting thing is to kill the so-called enemy of the protagonist. It's the first time. It's always impossible to kill, and there's always someone to stop it. It has twists and turns every time, and it's like this every time. It's really annoying to watch And it doesn't matter if you write it like this at the beginning, it's still acceptable. In the end, the writing is pretty good at the beginning, and the handling is quite refreshing. The more it ends, the more it becomes like this, and the more uncomfortable it becomes.

The protagonist obviously has a very high level in the main world and is about to join the sect. It is outrageous to think about the skills in the low martial world every day. He must hurry up and increase his training to the upper limit and leave quickly.

The protagonist is becoming more and more rubbish. Nowadays, any supporting character has more personality and charm than the protagonist! Taoist Master Yuqing, Yuxuan, Seven Killer Sword Lord, Supreme Demon Lord, all of them are wonderful, but the main character is too annoying and unnecessary. If this continues, just delete all the protagonist's scenes! It's better to watch it as a group drama and describe the experiences and plans of these characters in detail, here it is.

The fantasy and martial arts routine is too old. Can't we start from worlds like Shushan White Snake and Liaozhai Journey to the West? Or it's okay to follow the example of the Supreme Being. What's the point of those golden, ancient, and easy-to-deve worlds that are all badly written?