One Piece: The Sky Dragon
海贼之天空龙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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Well, A Book List Born of Interest (Mostly Anime)
An eclectic reader who'll try anything. Here are some books I personally like. The list owners I've been following lately have gotten a bit lazy. Why do they keep going over the same old books? I just remembered I have a list of my own, hahaha. Procrastinating feels great, and once you start, you never stop. A lot of books have disappeared, so I'll do some tidying up and add a few new reads. Updates will still be whenever I feel like it.
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A specialist in picking promising new books of every kind.
A Multidimensional Mixed Bag
A reading list focused on anime and manga, fantasy, and xuanhuan. No abandoned books, just good ones that are still updating, or so I think. I'll remove completed books and focus on new ones. I personally vet every book, and drop any that get abandoned right away. Also, you don't need to send me gifts; they're no use to me. Still, thank you to everyone who has sent me one! It may take a while to add new novels to this list, since I need to make sure they aren't just books with a strong opening t
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The preceding text was well-written; Roger collapsed immediately after his execution. The two fights with Sengoku and Kizaru didn't demonstrate the power of the Devil Fruit at all. Note that regardless of the setting, the author simply didn't show it.
You spent over a decade quietly cultivating your skills, only to go and watch the execution of the Pirate King just to show off, and even have a high-profile fight with Sengoku... Forgive my bluntness, but isn't this just pure suicide? Are you really a time traveler or just a brainless pirate from the original story?
He's been caught again, gambling with his life. Whether he escapes or not depends entirely on luck. If he's unlucky, he'll just wait to die in jail. I wonder how many more people this plot will turn off. Maybe he should just go in every few dozen chapters and become the ultimate escape artist. Don't even mention the possibility of him being rescued. He's just a complete idiot.
The protagonist doesn't seem like a transmigrator; he's more like a low-IQ native from the original work. His way of thinking and behavior have perfectly blended into the chuunibyou (delusional) and idiotic world of One Piece. Is this an intentional attempt by the author, or is the writing so poor that the only option is to portray the protagonist as a lunatic?
The Sky Dragon concept is really good; who wouldn't want a cool god card? Fou isn't a big problem either; these days, what kind of female lead haven't we seen? The author can just do what they want. The problem is that the battles after the execution are truly awful. What impressed me most about god cards is their incredibly cool entrance!
Here are three main reasons why I feel the story didn't do well. First, Fou lacks self-awareness, acting recklessly despite being the protagonist, which annoys readers. The author, being a very imaginative person, kept bringing her back, making her appear like a fly – a constant nuisance. Second, the One Piece fanfiction didn't include enough intense, 1v1 battles.
The author should heed advice and cut the romance, or at least gloss over it and condense it to one chapter or less. What kind of garbage has the author been writing lately? Writing ambiguous relationships in One Piece is the most difficult and thankless task. This world is better suited for writing stories about monks; friendship, battles, and adventure should be the themes. Don't put the cart before the horse!
Quite disappointing.
I just finished reading the latest chapter. To be honest, I was shocked that Katakuri could go toe-to-toe with Bullet and the protagonist without being instantly killed. You've portrayed him as an Admiral-level fighter... How can I put it? Katakuri's strength isn't even as good as Luffy's, yet you depict him going toe-to-toe with Bullet without being instantly killed, and without even a scratch. Amazing! Was I blind? Goodbye.
What kind of nonsense is this? Stealing a friend's pet and selling it for a few tens of thousands of Berries?! 🙂 Transmigrated into a child, and now even has a childlike mindset?! What's the use of tens of thousands of Berries?
The protagonist is truly living up to his character of stubbornly fighting Kaido. Not only is he determined to be the strongest creature, but he's also willing to accept seven defeats and eighteen captures. His sheer stubbornness is admirable, even Jack admires it.