Louis’s Fantastic Adventure

What I admire about the author is that although the subject matter and writing style are okay, he can perfectly bypass all the exciting points that readers want and make the wonderful copy world boring.

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I suggest you take The Last of Us 2 to 1 and let Joel play it and see what it feels like.

I took a look and found that the author was still using this account on August 16th and was reading like crazy. I don't know the specific situation. Either I changed my career, or I don't want to write a book for the time being. So what about you, the author, please tell me whether you want to write it or not!

I vomited when I saw that in addition to the protagonist there were teammates, I hate this kind of single protagonist, but ended up playing with multiple players, I didn't like it 🔨

It's been over half a year and there's no news about a new book. It's so sad.

Originally, I came to this kind of infinite stream just to see the protagonist reveal himself as a saint. The mystery of identity is one of the cool things. How did the protagonists in this and the previous book do it? The reader just saw the cool thing about pretending to be B. The protagonist immediately confessed all his identities to the natives of the plane. The previous book was better, but this one was more brutal. Not only did he explain everything about his world of braves, but he also explained everything about the diaosi who was waiting to die in bed before he was reborn. He had to explain it once in every world. Who can blame him for his poor performance?

Both harem novels and single female protagonists can be written well, but the question is, does the author have the strength to write a harem novel well? There is no threat and there is no need, because I was quite happy to read it. I just saw that some readers would give some personal opinions on the things that don't work. This is also a suggestion that I hope the author will write better and better. It is undeniable that the plot is still very attractive to me now, but is it necessary to have in-depth communication with the female characters? The reason why harem stories are easy to explode is that most girls become accessories or vases, which does not help the main plot. It is just a water plot The impact on the male protagonist is that he is a bit too lustful. After all, cultivation is a one-step process, and in-depth communication is also a one-step process. The only difference is the difference in time description, but it is the same to the readers! [After all, in-depth communication can be done in one chapter, and hard practice can be done in one chapter]. For readers, it is just a chapter Although I can accept it, "My point of view is that a dying person is reborn and is living his own life seriously. I think it should be acceptable to do these things?" I have read good harem stories where the character's personality drives the plot, rather than the author's desire for the protagonist to take over. The female character has her own personality and her own plot, and even overly wants to see the heroine's plot be greater than the protagonist's plot 😜 This is very important, not just a flower vase The female character's values ​​are "too traditional or deviant", or her personality "doesn't care", etc., Which prompts the male protagonist to get a harem! It also prevents the story from being ugly because the characters all have "souls and feelings" and will develop like this. Although readers may not accept it emotionally, they can understand why the plot becomes like this If in addition to maintaining the main plot line, characters can be added to promote the plot, and the emotions can be sublimated, instead of simply stopping at the in-depth communication between the sexes, the emotional aspect will no longer be a place where the author is disliked Come on, author, I think the story is written very much!

Rating 2.5 Stars Evaluation: Chicken ribs sprinkled with some cumin. Advantages: 1. The "real" protagonist, whose thoughts and actions are very down-to-earth, the most typical ones are "Eat and Sex" and "Shilipo Sword God", which can make many readers feel immersed in the novel 2. The lack of respect for the original plot is the most characteristic of the author and the biggest advantage. Every time you enter a world, you can clearly feel the protagonist's thoughts of "I just want this world to be what I want it to be." This can satisfy the reading needs of most readers and is also one of the charms of secondary creation. Disadvantages: 1. The characters are not fleshed out enough. It is reasonable that the protagonist does not have a distinctive personality, because this is the window for readers to enter. However, the supporting characters are too thin and do not have a fleshed-out image, or there are not enough examples to construct their image. But I could vaguely feel the author's careless intentions from the beginning. This may be due to the fact that the book was unsatisfactory, and subsequent development was aborted. 2. The branch world is formulaic. After changing the original plot in different planes, there is no more in-depth deduction of subsequent changes. It always feels like a superficial taste. The charm of the original plot and the customized plot are not revealed. Others: 1. The interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters is also one of the advantages, but this book failed to reflect this well. For example, what I still remember is the first core mission, Mr. Detective's various tests and complaints about the protagonist, which is indeed very interesting. 2. In the author's previous work, the presence of supporting characters has always been very high, and the presence of Arthur and Merlin is interspersed throughout the text at a certain rhythm. But in this book, there seems to be a breaking point between supporting characters and protagonists, supporting characters and supporting characters, supporting characters and planes, and it ends before you even get into it. Comparison: The point of not being afraid of the original plot is also reflected in other works of the same type, but it is fundamentally different. Other unlimited streams, changing the plot is the way to gain profits. The author here, changing the plot is the purpose, I like it very much. Conclusion: Compared with the previous book, this book is really bleak, but the author's personal style is really attractive. I hope that the author's characterization and plot deduction can make more progress. I want to see the protagonist and his friends learn, grow, travel and do things in various worlds together.

It's getting boring, and the sperm is really getting to my head later. The setting is also very boring, so let's leave it at that.