My Name Is Rhine

This book is really well written, and I recommend it to all book lovers. Now let's talk about my feelings after reading it. In the first 100 chapters, the writing rhythm is not very good, but it is okay. Although it is not as attractive as other novels from the beginning, there is no particularly big poison that makes people give up. You can still watch it. After all, it is a free chapter, so you won't suffer any loss if you read it. Because the protagonist has just traveled to the world, neither magic nor Naruto is very in-depth, and there are relatively few descriptions of Naruto's skills in various aspects. But for all the book friends who are attracted here because of Naruto, don't leave in a hurry. After the protagonist comes out of Ra's Kingdom of God, he is basically in a state of pseudo-invincibility on the sea. It's the kind of mode in which although there are particularly strong enemies, the protagonist on the current map is invincible as long as he is weakly developed. Especially after the protagonist returns to the mainland, the stylish pretense is still very enjoyable to watch. Especially after the protagonist prepares to become a god, he begins to focus on the description of Naruto, various abilities, sage mode, chakra! Both the Samsara Eye and the Byakugan are present. There are also in-depth settings, which are quite impressive to watch. Especially the ones when the protagonist is preparing to establish his own church and say the name of his god. The protagonist's six-path mode setting is pretty awesome. To sum up, this book is really worth reading. So far I am quite satisfied. Recommended tickets, monthly tickets and subscriptions will all be taken care of. The following is what I said after reading the next few novels by this author. The author's story introduction and previous settings are very good, but once it gets to the middle and late stages, it really falls apart. Every novel is the same. I was looking forward to this first novel, thinking that the novels written in the future will be more mature and exciting. However, I later discovered that the rhythm of this novel is exactly the same. I can only say that I am really disappointed.

Implementation statement, I read it quickly until it was put on the shelf, so there may be some details that I missed. The book is generally good, but for me, the level division of Immortal Body and Corpse Veins is a failure. How can I put it, the system processing is very good, but this level division of low, medium and high After it appeared, I felt that this suddenly became a nondescript game style, which ruined the look and feel. Moreover, the Sharingan has no connection with the immortal body. People like me who don't watch Naruto know how Madara's reincarnation eye came about. You have perfected the immortal body and the kaleidoscope, do you still need to redeem it for eternity? Does that mean this bloodline is fake, or is it locked by the system? Forgive me for my darker thoughts. Upgrading depends on the system, which means that without the system, there may be nothing. And the protagonist is going to be a master (although history is unwilling to learn 😰). Although I have only read it until it is put on the shelf, I don't know what the status of the master in this book is, no. But judging from the operation of bloodline and marionette, the high-level magician is still very awesome, so from my understanding, if the protagonist has this system, and the exchanged thing is really his own, then if he can exchange the blood of several branches of Otsutsuki one by one, and survive to be promoted to the high-level magician, then he should have everything he needs, right? The pace is a bit fast. I am a good master. I have some problems with my development, but as the protagonist of the novel, it is understandable. To sum up, overall, the book is not bad. For me, it is worthy of nitpicking.

I feel like it's well written. How can I put it this way? I really like this style of fanfic, a Western-fantasy mashup, because it's still a Western-fantasy at heart, but the author has added some elements of Naruto, which is great. Another question is about someone mentioning that the progress is too fast. In fact, I also had this idea at the time. After all, the protagonist at the beginning was still a first-level mage. However, after the first ** (counting going to the Kingdom of God and the blood sacrifice), it became about level 5, and he began to show himself to people. I thought the book was going to collapse, but the author came back very well. He just said that he jumped from the adventure and struggle for survival genre of Western Fantasy to a higher circle, that is, the stream of seeking to become a god. It felt better. Of course, it still feels a little wrong in some small aspects, such as the protagonist opening the observer's eye to save Will. Although the subsequent journey to the Kingdom of God does require a supporting role, I still feel that it would be better to take Evans, because before this, Will always felt that he was not important enough, and his A sister named Yi, the foreshadowing laid by the author always feels too obvious. Of course, these are minor problems In addition, the author once again declares that this book is really good. Four thousand recommendation votes can get one hundred monthly votes, which shows that many people who read this book really like this book. There are many books with tens of thousands of recommendation votes. A few monthly passes, but I always feel that the author's book has not been promoted enough By the way, there is also the problem of fraud in the introduction that someone mentioned. The author finally came back in the latest chapter, and the writing is not bad. The author can try to explain it, or write a better introduction, and the book title can also be changed to a better one. At present, the title of this book does not seem to be attractive to people who see it at first sight. Readers who like to read Western fantasy cannot immediately tell that it is a Western fantasy work pps: I am actually a little skeptical when I see the author double-book. After all, the update of this book will definitely continue, and I have to wait two months for the new book to be charged.

I'm convinced, I really can't stand it anymore. They always emphasize that the protagonist is a bad student. It's uncomfortable to watch. It's not scary to be a bad student. What's scary is that a bad student doesn't work hard. I was also a bad student in junior high school. The worst grade ranking was over 400. Later in high school, I went through the back door and paid to go to a good high school. I studied hard and was in the mid-20s in the first and half semester of high school. By the time I was a sophomore in high school, I was always in the top three in my grade. Are scumbags scary? It's not terrible, but don't always emphasize it. Emphasizing the scumbag means that the protagonist doesn't want to change, which sends too big a message to the reader. I know that I am a bad student, but I still don't work hard. I hold the mentality that I am a bad student every day. When it comes to studying, I feel like oh, I am a bad student, so I can't learn. This is definitely not the protagonist. This is a supporting role in other books, and may even develop into a villain with a grievance. I heard that the author's later writing is good, but I can't stand the first part of it. How can I follow it? I hope the author can learn some lessons from his next book. To be honest, the setting is very good, and I also like the world background. I really think it's very good. Originally, the results of this book should be much better now, but many people can't stand the protagonist. I also feel a little bit toxic, and I may have to give up. I feel it is a pity.

It is more reliable for the protagonist to cooperate with the evil god in the later promotion route. Naruto is obviously from the natural system, but there is already a father of nature occupying the pit. After the protagonist enters the legend, he can cooperate with the evil god to kill the god and replace the father of nature. Then transform from the natural priesthood, plant a chakra tree and harvest the creation when mature. Creating a priesthood, plus Byakugan, there are two top priesthoods. Byakugan feels like a space-time priesthood. Find a possible future timeline from infinite parallel worlds. As long as there is one possibility, it is 100% possible. Time and space are involved. It is a bit like the ability to determine the final form of a quantum superposition state.

Very good. It took me half a day to read it. Keep up the good work and I will give you the monthly pass (◎｀ω´) people(´ω｀*)

I can't stand it anymore after reading chapter seventy-eight. That Will is the real protagonist. He has a squire who will kill you at the critical moment. You save him. When he is in a dangerous place, you protect him. He works hard to kill monsters and achieve the priesthood. Give it to him. Whoever is the master is the servant 😰

I really want to give up when I see how to improvise. Why does the author keep emphasizing the protagonist's good-for-nothing attributes? A scumbag, lazy, and dishonest. This is a Western fantasy, not Riqing. Even Riqing will try to highlight the shining points of the otaku Diao Si's character, instead of emphasizing that their failure is because they are lazy, jealous of the top students, and wait to die.

This is a rather subjective complaint. . . I read the first thirty chapters and then passed it for a while I feel that this book is quite a pity The Naruto system written without knowing the specific levels of Naruto is really hard to explain Taking away Naruto and writing a pure fantasy book can add a lot of extra points to the book. System writing, especially this kind of popular system that borrows a well-established system, is important not to conflict too much with the original Naruto setting, and to clearly describe the specific capabilities of the system. In this regard, the author gets 0 points. Fantasy novels, especially pure fantasy, are most afraid of destroying the atmosphere and messing up the structure, and it is very important to create a world view in fantasy or whatever it is. Personally, I think the core of fantasy novels is 'wonderful fantasy and perfection', 'vast epic or mysterious', and 'complex but interesting settings'. Emmm, these three points are hard to explain in the scope I see, especially the Naruto system that directly creates serious drama and theme conflicts. . . I just saw the big brother who complained about Naruto. This book can be interesting and not boring if it is purely fantasy or well-written. The book is so awkward and conflicting. You want to combine Chinese and Western food, but give me a chive sauce (Russia), live maggot cheese (Italy), rice bowl (China) (there is such a thing). . . The above is just a complaint about the awkward system and settings of this book. Other than that, the writing style of the book is still very good (just listen to it seriously)

Chapter 10 Can you give me an answer? Author, you don't want to write about Naruto? ? I'm here for the Hokage, you're suing me and you don't write about the Hokage? ? ? Please give me an answer, do you write about Naruto? If you don't write about Naruto, can you please stop mentioning Naruto in the introduction? You are a dog-headed mutton. If I didn't read it for Naruto, your article would be a very good fantasy article. However, you know that I came for Naruto, but it turned out that the fart Naruto had a chapter where the Sharingan appeared. The immortal body said one, oh no, two sentences! ! ! Do you know how I feel? ? Do you understand the feeling of wanting to scold your mother? ? I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing that sentence in Chapter 10, so I came out to ask you whether you should write about Naruto or not! If you don't want to write or don't want ninjutsu, you should tell me as soon as possible, and I will leave as soon as possible, and we will never see each other again, okay?

It's so annoying to watch. It keeps emphasizing that the main character is a bad student. He listens to the Bible in the first class and relies on luck to become a puppet. It makes me feel like he is a salty fish who can't do anything but relies on his golden fingers and family! Wilhela is the protagonist, right? Will, helped him in the most difficult time, saved his life, gave him wages, weapons, and helped him hunt for blood. He was stabbed in a fight, and then he gave him divine power and even carried him to treat him. It didn't seem to have any effect. He acted like a human shield puppet. Hela, as expected, the puppet crow turned into a lolita (maybe there will be an omnic crisis, I can't control it), with a perfect body, divinity, golden race, genius brain, compared to the protagonist as a mage, it is like heaven and earth. There is no need to think about anything in the future. Happiness depends on the protagonist as the god, and maybe she can become the protagonist's wife. The standard dream template Needless to say about the protagonist, the author told me that he is stupid, short, ugly (not as good-looking as the attendant) and the ultimate wage earner. I know you want to write a good supporting role, but let me tell you, a supporting role that relies entirely on the protagonist (who appears around the protagonist all the time, all income depends on the protagonist, and can be helpful at critical times) is soulless and ugly!

After reading Chapter 11, I would like to ask if the protagonist still maintains this kind of mentality similar to that of a * silk later (for example, the academic master who hates serious study. The most amazing thing is that the author keeps emphasizing that the protagonist is a scumbag.) Don't most people admire the super hard-working and high-IQ academic master? Obviously the protagonist has always been a rational and calm persona before, but he is jealous of the academic master? ? ? Generally, people who have plans for their future cannot become scumbags. (Ps. After all, few people have superior IQs. I know a little brother in junior high school who has previewed high school content and works really hard in his studies.)

The protagonist, a mage, is actually a scumbag. Can a scumbag also become a mage?

Damn it, I'm so tired of jumping to death like this. A little mage with a ring actually got involved with the gods. What nonsense.

Minoring in the Secret Puppet School is a very big failure ①: For most readers, they do not like this school of thought, which is a fatal flaw ② It is too hasty, without a deep understanding of the school, and with very good conditions , he casually decided on his own school of thought, without even considering his own golden finger ③ He casually chose marionette. As the protagonist, a meeting gift from the son of a businessman led the protagonist to learn marionette. What about his IQ?

Fantasy and Naruto, two niches combined together, have become a super niche genre. People who like fantasy may not necessarily like Naruto (for example, I always feel weird because I really don't know Naruto). People who like Naruto may not necessarily like fantasy, so this book is really terrible. The writing is okay, but the system is really messy. I gave up after reading 60 chapters. I hope the next book will be better. Take care of yourself

Secret puppet crow turns into a little girl and is caught off guard by a poisonous mouthful

There's something wrong with the previous sentence segmentation. In addition, is the protagonist a little too afraid of the professor? It feels like every time I go to class, the character of the protagonist will collapse.

After reading dozens of chapters, it's really hard to understand. It doesn't matter that the protagonist is a scumbag and hates studying. I wonder if the ninjutsu shadow clone is used to learn knowledge? I don't know how to use it even if it's disconnected?

What the hell is this? Why did it end like this?

Written at the beginning, if you mainly want to see Naruto-style battles, you will have to wait until more than fifty chapters to see it. This book is actually mainly about the DND system. It can be seen that the protagonist has developed the Naruto-style fighting method. And I always feel that writing will deviate in the direction of invincible flow... I saw the listed content in one breath, and wrote something first (I really don't have no starting coins!! The great master of the bathroom is protecting me!!) The author's writing style and frame concept are very good, and the plot content is generally not illogical after I quickly read the first hundred chapters The inconsistency is probably the mage protagonist with Naruto's fighting style... Although I think if the bloodline is limited, it is enough to open a pupil technique, and if you take the mage route, you can focus on ninjutsu. Hmm... Okay, I just think the painting style of the protagonist with so many bloodlines fully opened and curse seals is very strange (eating lotus root)... In addition, sometimes the protagonist is suddenly not serious and a bit... Obtrusive? It's just that sometimes the rhythm is a little bad, but it's okay, it's just a sudden point. The plot is very exciting, and there is no forced plot. This kind of Western fantasy novel will indeed feel much better without that kind of plot. The author also mentioned best friends, so I will just mention it. The two protagonists have different identities, and there is no need to talk about spending more money. Writing about the protagonist's ordinary aristocratic life will also give us readers a more sense of empathy. Maybe the first novel I read was best friends, so I think we may need to pay more attention to some details In addition, can the author reveal a little bit about whether the protagonist's upgrade path will be a mage or a hokage? I just felt that the pace was a bit too fast after reading it earlier. The protagonist's transition in the early stage is a bit fast. The combat power is also rising a bit fast, and it feels like the part that just came out is almost over... Finally, come on, the author, I hope I can calm down and write the story in my heart The monthly vote has been cast, and the last one... I will come back to re-order~ 😅

The exchange of the Sharingan and the Senshi body is useless, but the main line is not clear. I don't know what I am writing in this mess.

Personally, it's a good book, but what I personally can't accept is that a first-level mage starts playing against the gods, or hard steel suddenly has a big push to exchange for blood to compete with the power of the gods, and the exchange is for some souls that are not even legendary. I went to the Kingdom of God to search and fight for a while, and then came back as a low-level mage.

This book is very creative and fascinating to read. I hope you can continue to work hard. Come on, I support you so much.

It's a very good book, but it's crazy at first glance. It feels like I just learned the small fireball and was forced to the later stage. My own studies of history, astrology, puppets, spells, and ninjutsu are messy enough, but I still want to make a big deal out of it.

When I saw the ninjutsu, I immediately retreated without mentioning the chakra. The Hokage's chakra was created by the sacred tree. Where did your chakra come from?

I don't understand. Why does Mao want to join that pirate group in Chapter 117? The protagonist's original family can crush such small people, and the way to become stronger is to hunt down their peers,? ? ? Funny

I started a new book and forced it to end unfinished. This is actually a good book. I quite like it.

As an old bookworm, this book is really good, but it's a pity

Overall, this book is pretty good (even the last eunuch). From chapter 100 onwards, it can be read as a fun read, but the previous system doesn't feel very useful.