Card Draws Can't Save the Strange World

Ah Fu's move list: ↓→ A Black Tiger Pulls Out the Heart ↓→ B Two Dragons Playing with Pearls ↓→ C Mantis Fist ↓→ D Scorpion Palm ↓← A Snake Step ↓← B Flamenco Dance Steps ↓← C Small Fish Swim in Water ↓← D Whale tail →↓→ A/B Lion prays to the sky Close← C/D Lobster claw Aerial↓ A/B Cat lands Aerial↓ C/D Flying crane catches shrimp Special move: ↓→↓→ A/B Head smashes walnuts! ↓→↓→ C/D Giant ax chops down big trees! ↓←↓← A/B Rat steals cheese! ↓←↓← C/D Tiger Claw eats pudding! In the air↓→↓→ A/B The flying elephant steps on the mouse! MAX Super Special Move: Aerial ↓→↓← C/D Tornado destroys the parking lot! ↓→↓← AB Crow flies on a plane! Basic skills: A: Lower section B: Middle section C: Upper section S: Explosion S MAX awakening → S MAX rage ↓↑ Antelope takes off! ↑↑B Antelope leaps! →→ Rhino runs! →A →B →C Cobra! →C →C ←A Electric Eyes! ↓↘→ A Mantis Fist →A Earthquake Fist! ↓↘→ B Melon Fist →B/C Dragon Claw Hand! ↓↘→ C Flying Dragon in the Sky! →B/C Screw Roll! ↓↘→ AB Black Tiger Eviscerates the Heart! C Sickle sweeps the floor! ↓↙← A Snake step! →A Snake fist comes out! ↓↙← B Small fish swimming in the water! →B/C Herring kills! ↓↙← C Whale tail swing! →B/C Shark eats fish! ↓↙← AB Lion worships the sky! →C Tiger claw eats pudding! →↘↓↘→ AB elephant kick! ←↙↓↙← AB flamenco dance move! Special skills: Close C Lobster claw! Close ← B/C Tiger style! Close→ AB asteroid belt! Close ←← B Thunder Fist! Close→→ B Mouse steals cheese! Close←→ C Dog throws weasel! In the air→→ Raging crow flies! In the air→→ A Flying kick! In the air↓↓ A/B Tarzan! In the air↓↙← BC Flying crane catches shrimp! In the air↓↘→ AB The black tiger flies over the vulture! In the air↓ AB the cat lands! ←A The cat shakes the water!/←→A The cat turns around! Special move: →↘↓↘→ A Smashing walnuts on the head! →↘↓↘→ AB Giant ax chops down big trees! ←↙↓↙← A Spider eats flies! ←↙↓↙← AB Tiger claw eats pudding! Super kill: →↘↓↙← C Tyrannosaurus rex flutters its wings and flies! ↑C Flying elephant steps on the mouse! ←↙↓↘→ C Meteors hit the mountain continuously! ↓↘→↘↓↙← BC Super planet burning! If you are interested, you can also go to Kugou to listen to "Black Tiger Afu"

"In Western mythology, fire is given by God; In Greek mythology, fire is stolen by Prometheus; And in our mythology, fire is created by our perseverance in drilling wood to make fire! "Facing the doomsday flood, they took shelter in Noah's Ark, But in our mythology, our ancestors defeated the flood. Look, it is still a struggle, fighting against disaster! "(Dayu controls the floods) "When we read Chinese myths, aside from the plot, the core of culture expressed in the myths has only two words: resistance! If there is a mountain blocking your door, should you choose to move or dig a tunnel? Obviously, moving is the best option. However, in our story, we moved the mountains (Foolish Old Man Moves the Mountains)! Such a spiritual core does not exist in Western myths. Their myths are about obeying God's arrangements. " "In the tribal era, the sun god had absolute authority. If you look at all the myths of the sun god, you will find that only our myths have stories about those who dare to challenge the sun god: During the Huangdi period, Kuafu, the leader of the Kuafu tribe, wanted to pick off the sun, so he started racing against the sun. When he was thirsty, he drank up the Yellow River and the Weishui River. He died of thirst on the road to Daze. His walking stick turned into a peach forest and his body turned into Kuafu Mountain. The story of Kuafu Zhuri reflects the desire of ancient Chinese ancestors to understand nature and defeat it. (Kuafu chasing the sun). In our mythology, people praise him as a hero because he dared to fight against seemingly invincible forces. In another story, we finally shot down the sun (Hou Yi shot down the sun). Our ancestors use this story to tell future generations: You can lose, but you cannot surrender. We grew up listening to such myths and stories. The spirit of courage to fight has become a genetic gene. We don't realize it ourselves, but we will be as strong as our ancestors. We often say that the Chinese nation has relied on constant struggle against nature, disasters, and the environment for thousands of years to survive until now. But how many people have thought about how our fighting spirit that has lasted for thousands of years has been maintained? Every nation's mythology has its own imprint, but have you ever seen which nation's mythology contains so many stories of our struggle to fight against heaven and earth? Lao Tzu's "Heaven and Earth are not benevolent and treat all things as stupid dogs" comes from Chapter 5 of the current version of the Tao Te Ching. What it really means is: The world sees all things as the same as that lost straw dog. It is not particularly good to people, but is particularly bad to other things. In other words, no matter what all things become, it is the behavior of all things (including luck) and has nothing to do with heaven and earth. Heaven is still doing heaven's business, and earth is still doing earth's business. Heaven and earth are the most natural. So people need to fight for whatever they want. This sounds crueler than "God so loved the world", but it is very realistic. These mythical stories that we have heard since childhood and passed down orally to the next generation embody more than just stories. Every civilization was theistic in its early days, but our civilization is the only one that is not afraid of God, so Chinese ancestors never placed their hope of survival on God's care. In fact, having the courage to fight, not being afraid of losing, and never surrendering is the Chinese national spirit and the belief of the Chinese people! ! !

"Ma Tie, are you willing to convert to Shangqing Maoshan?" "My mentor doesn't mind that I am from a side sect, and Ma Tie is willing to convert to the Shangqing sect..." That year, Ma Tie, a side sect and a left-winger, was included in the Shangqing sect. Although it caused a lot of controversy in the southern phantom world, he finally took the right path. After all, at this time, the sense of family status has basically disappeared. After all, even the sect does not know how long it can continue. The road is hopeless and immortality is elusive. Ma Tie, who can achieve a few magic tricks by self-study, is already considered a genius. However, a few years later, internal fighting suddenly broke out in the already feuding court. This has been a fight in the court for countless times. Some people with lofty ideals realize that this ancient thousand-year-old empire has once again entered its period of decline, and turmoil is coming again. Some of them were always unwilling to do anything for the people, and began to seek the country's survival path in modern times, hoping to get rid of the ebb and flow of the dynasty and find a new path. The path they were looking for was a constitutional monarchy. The struggle between the constitutionalists and the royalists is becoming increasingly acute! This year, while Ma Tie was practicing medicine in Zhenyang to relieve his difficulties, he met a woman. Ma Tie, who originally thought he was devoted to the Tao, got married... Not long after, he met a progressive young man from Hunan. They were both worried about the current situation of the country, and they regretted meeting each other so late. Progressive young people joined the constitutionalists and campaigned for propaganda. Ma Tie naturally joined the constitutionalists. However, not long after, the sharp conflict developed to the point where swords were facing each other. Both sides were joined by extraordinary beings from the phantom world, and the bloody conflict intensified. That year, my friend died tragically, and his wife also died due to the effects of the fighting. Ma Tie went too far in revenge and killed a powerful man, and was wanted by the court. Both the imperial court and the Phantom World are after him. In the end, his mentor came forward to arrange a way for him to go abroad, allowing him to take his children to a foreign country overseas... "I have been wandering for a long time. In the past ten years, I have lost all my deep gratitude and lost my life and death to my mentor and friend."

A new journey begins! Brave middle-aged people, go and create miracles!

The first is that it is difficult to write well. Writing this requires talent. The emotions you write are not on the same level as female videos I want to see emotions and go to Jiangnan and female videos. Authors, don't use your shortcomings to compare your strengths with others The second is the character setting. Now the protagonist is an extraordinary person who kills people and fights every day In the protagonist himself He can't tell which day he will die. It is extremely irresponsible to go to bed with the female neighbor now This kind of protagonist who can't walk when he sees a woman is disgusting to see. He is decisive in killing and fighting for the road. It was so well written before, but you give me this one, which is extremely poisonous There are many books about becoming gods nowadays, about women's feelings. It is not a necessary factor The full score is 100, and now this book is 80. If it is written about women, it will be 90 points. If it is not written well, it will drop to 30 points r> The fourth thing is that you are about to write a sex scene now. You are in a hurry to come back. Don't go against the censors. If you are a little bit pornographic, you will be blocked if someone reports you. Finally, you can find a good book and don't give it a 404 Those who ask you to write about women every day are harming you. If you don't write about women, nothing will happen. If you write about women, things will easily happen.

I would like to provide some reference advice to the author: Judging from the current plot, the protagonist's ability must be improved through continuous card drawing. I have read a lot of novels in which the protagonist draws cards to strengthen his progress, but many authors have written that after drawing a large amount of an ability, it feels messy and unsystematic. Instead, the original characteristics of various abilities have been lost. Moreover, if the various abilities are updated and iterated too quickly, it will not create a deep impression, and instead the protagonist will appear mediocre. Among the many fantasy protagonists today, the more successful and famous ones basically have their own signature features - such as Naruto making balls, Luffy's rubber body, Kurosaki Ichigo's Getsuga Tenshō and even Emiya Shirou's projection magic, and these are just anime characters.                               The more famous protagonists in related online novels are like the former protagonist of the Arcane Throne, who converted technology into 'scientific' magic, whether in reality or in theory. Or maybe it's the various distinctive 'magic' and 'acrobatics' performed by the protagonist of the Lord of Mysteries, which has become quite popular in recent times. These highly identifiable abilities can make it easier for readers and viewers to distinguish the protagonist from other supporting characters, deepen the impression, and even reflect the protagonist's personality and character characteristics from a certain aspect. For example, the protagonist's "everyone for me" in the author's last novel is very good, but it is a pity that there is not much description later. And it's best to have an ability that can be used throughout to a certain extent, with some kind of enhanced upgraded version or ultimate move, and it's best to have a high level of force - such as positron cannon, infinite sword system, etc. Therefore, when it comes to the ability to draw cards, it is best to choose one or a few that have upgrade potential and are powerful as the core to strengthen and upgrade, but it is best not to constantly replace them (to deepen the reader's impression, just like an outline). For example, the protagonist's current martial arts system can absorb the physical skills of martial arts masters from various backgrounds, and then integrate them to establish a system of his own (it is best to give a name with a B character to make it easier to remember). Just like the protagonist of the Legend of Wulin Banxia created the skill of dining, drinking and dew. After talking about physical skills, there are also spells. For example, the protagonist's enchantment skill is a very potential ability, and this ability is much more distinctive than physical skills. It can make the protagonist stand out from various protagonists and supporting characters (I have not seen many protagonists whose main abilities are related to enchantment skills in the novels I have read). This ability can trap enemies, protect or attack. And it can be strengthened by integrating aura, domain, summons, spells, Taoism, magical artifacts and other abilities to become an inherent enchantment (King's Military Power, Infinite Sword System), a portable cave (the universe in the sleeve, the world in the pot, the world in the palm), and a mobile kingdom (refer to the kingdom of god in dnd). And there are weak ways to use it, and there are strong ways to use it. It can be used throughout and has a variety of powerful moves. There are only so many that I can think of at the moment, I hope it will be helpful to the author.

Tell me what you think. How can I put it? There is too little to write now. I haven't been able to write much in this dungeon in my childhood. It looks like it's about halfway through. The reason is that I'm already pseudo-invincible: I'm basically invincible at the same level (summons at the same level can encircle, suppress and crush them), and the curator is not good at writing fights. , I can't write too much about it. Silver-level enemies have been crushed and can only be solved by teaming up. Even according to the settings of complete silver, it may not be solved by teaming up at all. This is very embarrassing, resulting in many things that can only be crushed over                                                                                                                              So this is why the progress will speed up, the same level will be crushed, high-level people will die, they can only grow and fight again, and then it will be a new cycle (so the curator's writing is not long, we can not see much, we can't make much money, the plot will be more boring later)  To solve this problem, we need to suppress the protagonist so that he is evenly matched with enemies and dungeons. Of course, it is not hard pressure, but there must be a reason for the pressure: For example, reasons such as the treacherous suppression experienced by my brother, (so playing more dungeons would be a better choice), or regular monsters and events, regardless of the strength gap, and requirements must be met to leave or conquer, or dreams. The game has evolved and has its own rules. It can absorb cognitive dreams and generate special dream copies. You must enter with the required strength to obtain the special rewards of the copy (settings are useful for pigs' feet: such as consumables that can jump through levels and damage enemies, blueprints that can build special buildings, experience that can be used to enhance inspiration and skills, etc.) At the same time, as compensation, you can (or better say) give the protagonist the ability to project dreams into the dungeon, which is a further gamification of immortality. At the same time, you can also use this reason to reduce the combat effectiveness of the protagonist: safe projection that does not harm spirituality, the combat effectiveness will naturally be reduced Finally, curator, you have omitted a lot of things in your writing: Like Ritian Wangqi, you write what you see, what color and shape you are angry about, and then write down the analysis process that prompts the eye. For example, the color is red, and the red blood disaster (or festive) shape knife is displayed next to it. It reminds you that it is affected by the knife, and it can also enhance the name or image (image) of the knife owner. You can also be angry without writing. Write down the prompts next to Ritian's guessing process What about the process of building a permanent barrier? For example, how to process materials, how to make them into rune blocks (the basis of the enchantment), how to integrate them into the enchantment, and the key improvement details of the enchantment (such as bending the wires that make up the enchantment to combine with each other to form runes, giving the enchantment special abilities) What about the enchantment notes of foreign monks (priests)? (Even if the protagonist has not used it, he has to wait for Bronze 5) What about the first dream communication of the Zanpakutō? (Do you know how much I look forward to this? I forced the protagonist to wait until night to communicate, and then ignored it. I looked for it for a long time before I found out that it was not there.) Also, the handling of the shallow attack was too simple and crude. It was synthesized directly, and then the Zanpakutō that needed to communicate with the soul was solved. Then it was not introduced, and I don't know if it can still grow. And even if it can, it will not fit the protagonist. The exclusive equipment that originally came with exclusive skills has become an ordinary equipment that needs to be strengthened to move forward! What about the random specialties of the treacherous realm? You didn't say a word from beginning to end!         ，，，        ，，？ ! ! ! 😡 The idea is very good and the writing is very good. Please write more and don't waste it. There is a serious shortage of books now.

I feel that the setting of Cardcaptors is better, with a grand background, reasonable logic, and a relatively large operating space.

Again, I would like to kindly remind you not to try to teach the author how to write a novel. Suggestions that are not important are fine. The author has his own ideas.

Dragon Tower If you have a guest appearance, you can leave your name and basic information here. They are just minor characters, they are all those little people. Just forget about destroying the world. I will pick some suitable ones to use and will mark everyone's ID. 🙏